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Posted: 11 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: gurti30

beautiful update dear

maan is hurting himself and geet is angry with him


thanks for commenting dear really means alot
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
Was here to update but really upset to see the less comments and likes
I don't think so my story is good enough for you all
I am not continuing it now
Edited by Inertia14 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23


Beautiful update.
Maan's father hates Geet... but y?? Wat has she done that he is cursing her.

Maan very much angry on him. Hurting both of them in process.
Geet trying to cool him down. But Maan is furious.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
I am really sad with the likes and comments
they are not even descent enough
so this is my last update since I typed it earlier already
I am not gonna update now atleast
not till the time I get descent enough like and comments

A very thank you to those who took time and liked and commented on the last update though


Chapter-5

I smirked as I felt her shying even after the long hours of our love making few hours ago...
You are beautiful Geet I murmured as I traced her body with my eyes and hands
My hands admired her breasts as my mouth suckled on the heavenly nectar of her feminine self
Maan she almost screamed as she reached the peak of her ecstasy
Geet jaan I moaned and closed my lips on her and entered her
I bucked my hips and pushed myself in to her again and again enjoying every bit of our togetherness
I looked at her eyes that were so drowned in passion and my love.
I collapsed on Geet gently as we hit the peak of our passions together.
I heard her heavy breaths that were relaxing ever second now, Geet I am sorry I murmured to her as I felt her relaxing completely
She held my head near my chest and just hummed silently
Promise me you will never hurt yourself Maan she murmured after a long silence
I won't Jaan
Promise me Maan
I promise Geet
Thank you Maan remember one thing maan nothing hurts me more than your pain if you are in pain maan I am equally suffering with it
So please Maan promise me you will never harm yourself and will share everything with me so that we can talk about it together and we will find a solution.
But if you won't do it Maan I promise you I will never talk to you again never ever.
Ohh Geet I am sorry Jaan I murmured and took her in my embrace again promising not to hurt her in any case.
Next morning
I opened my eyes as the rays of sun touched my eyelids I fluttered open my eyes trying to adjust to the morning sunshine.
I looked at the clock that indicated it was 8 A.M
I was surprised I looked at Maan who held me near his chest his hands tightened around my waist, his eyes closed in the contentment and his lips shining with the traces of our passion
I kissed his nose gently and tried getting out of his grip but he tightened his hold unconsciously
I looked at him and tried again but he groaned in irritation sleep Geet
I whispered Maan its morning let me go please we haven't got out of the bed since yesterday.
Ahmm I heard him murmur and pull me back in his embrace
Maaannn I yelled little louder but he didn't budge
I started hitting him lightly on his chest and arm trying to get out of his hold clearly knowing he won't let me out so easily
Geet he yelled and held mine hand making me more annoyed and angry
What is the hurry Jaan he said as he dipped his head in my curls inhaling deeply into it
Heaven I heard him murmur as he started placing feather kisses on my neck making me lose my senses again
Maan no I moaned as his teeth nipped the skin of my breast pulling the covers down
Yess he whispered so slowly and gently and cupped my breast in his palms
Maaan please I am really hungry and tired I whispered as I felt bending down took take my nipples in his mouth
Hmm he whispered and laid his head on my chest kissing me right over my heart
I am sorry I whispered and caressed his head
Nope I heard him whisper as he pecked my heart once again
My princess is hungry and I can understand he whispered and rested his weight on me I hugged him dearly
Did I hurt you Geet he asked me as he looked on the blue marks on my chest
No Maan you didn't I looked in his eyes which only had concern for me Maan I whispered and held him tight in my embrace assuring him he can't hurt me ever
Ohh how I love my Maan I thought as I laid on my bed
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Beautiful update.

Maan can't stop loving her.
It was hot n passionate.

Wat will happen next,???
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Nice ... Will geet go away frm maan cuz of his father???
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: crazydream

Beautiful update.

Maan can't stop loving her.
It was hot n passionate.

Wat will happen next,???


Well few more updates and u will be cleared abt the happenings 😊
Thanks for the commenting
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

Nice ... Will geet go away frm maan cuz of his father???

Hmm that is something I have not decided yet but yes the life won't be easy for these two
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
Hot and passionate update...
Loved it so much...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
nice n passionate update
maan cant stop himself from loving her...

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