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Mitu

@Mituag

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Posted: 12 years ago

#241

Whole update is so good
but last part ka suspense kya hai

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Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#242

OMG Geet got pain in stomach because of keeping silence for half an hour...but her talking is very cute...she now don't think Maan is animal...thank God she realized he is human...

Maan gave good punishment to manager...he should think that if a girl came there to meet Maan then she must be knowing him...how can he tried to behave indecently...

who was the man Geet is staring...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...

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lively-piia

@lively-piia

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#243

dis geet is hopeless...

i mean c hv butterfly in her stomach bcz c cant kept quiet...

seriously maan is heading 2wards danger wid big D...

lol

lvd it

cont

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#244

i somehow missed PM for part 8 so read both parts together...

Geet is such a cutie pie...loved her innocence and most importantly her clean heart...

Maan is falling for her little by little...

mystery at the end...

great going...loved the updates a lot

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#245

I was waiting to c how covienently she is going to put blame on maan and finally she did so . enjoyed her blabbering and last line is quite a mysterious .continue soon .

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Tyro

@Tyro

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#246

y was geet looking t him...is he following her ??

continue soon...

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Sonia KN

@Sonia.KN

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#247

Today I was watching Geeet ur first part make me remember that...this things seems like part of real play...U r style is different I love ur work .No mixing of lines .Clearly able to understand what a person want to say.Lovin it.Keep on rocking friend

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Jass Nagra😃

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Basilisk

@Basilisk

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#248

Hey dear just read all the parts today.

This is an awesome FF!

Can you pls add me to your pm list

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#249

okay this girl gets me confused why was she staring at some random man if she doesnt know him
man she is so funny when she said maine zor ke nahin maara tha and says she is scared of him when maan says which animal she aint scared of
maan true what you said its better to be vary of geet god knows what she will do and when
chalo at least geet has said sorry to maan
kya punishment milli uss manager ko waah
thanx for pm

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#250

geet is sooo sweet...chalo maan ko geet ki asar hone lage...dekhte hai maan kab tak bhagte hai...

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it to d core...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n also fr d pm...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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