Depth Of Love-MaanEet ff.part 27/pg137 - Page 9

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when geet waked up all of sudden and before she cud react ,maan closed her mouth with his palms.

And their eyes met...room had a dim light along with the light of moon coming frm a window...geet eyes were shocked while maan was looking at her all concerned ,lost, with a tinge of sadness...his geet was all the time waiting for him...and he was such a fool to think she wud have forgetten him...oh god... he thot "kis janam ka badla ley rahey ho..."

Geet had goosebumps with his touch on her lips...her big eyes looking at him...she can forget everything related to her,any damn thing... but not his eyes...she couldn't believe this...she looked scared with her thoughts ...maan slowly slowly removed his hand from her soft lips rubbing them making her shiver at her place.but dint dared to say anything...

Geet(st): its him...he is here...finally..he came...am i dreaming...o babaji...aaj mujhe ho kya gaya hai...she dint know what to do..she was speech less,dumbfounded...all she cud do was to check if she is dreaming or all this is for real...she somehow moved her freezed arms towards him and touched her palms to his face cupping them and maan moved her face toward her palm...as if slightly brushing his lips there...his eyes were wet...and that was it...a word escaped from geet's mouth...

"MAAN"

...hearing so...he closed his eyes...feeling his name from her was heaven...he felt ashamed of himself...he could kill himself now... so easily she recognized him...how could he think like this...before he cud plan his worst punishment...geet hugged him with all her emotions in a jerk...which maan was not prepared and he fell on bed taking geet with him on his chest...

She cried ,cried and cried...he kept soothing her moving her hands on her back...he really don't know what to say..his throat was paining with a lump...he was astonished with her confidence with which she hugged him knowing its maan...he wanted to say something...a sorry...but will it be worth her wait..NO MAAN...what have you done...

Guys i love this song...imagine on maaneet...must liste

Sajna de bajo mai-te, jee ke huur ki karna rabba.
Anjubi huun muuk gaye saare, huurte milaade rabba.


Kismat ka, ye khel hai, milna tha humne kabhi.
Hatho ki, lakiron mein, likkha thaa ye sabhi.
Koi jaane, naa maane,
ye saath hai kitna hasin

Kaash yeh pal tham jaaye
Aapke hum ban jaaye
Jannat bhulake hum teri aakhon ke ashq ban jaye

Janam janam ka, ye saath hai,
chhut-ta ye aise nahi.
Pyar tera aisa mila ke,
ab koi bhaataa nahi.

Bahjo mein, aake teri, sansao mei simat jaye.

Kaash yeh pal tham jaaye
Aapke hum ban jaaye
Jannat bhulake hum teri aakhon ke ashq ban jaye


Ashq ban jaye, pal tham jaye
Ashq ban jaye, yeh pal tham jaye
Ashq ban jaye, yeh pal tham jaye
Ashq ban jaye, pal tham jaye


Hatho ki, kismat ka,...
Koi jaane, naa maane...
ye saath hai kitna hasin
Kaash yeh ...
Aapke ...
Jannat bhulake hum teri aakhon ke ashq ban jaye

His tshirt was all wet...she was crushing his shirt coming closer and he was pressing her from the top as they were lying on bed and hiding her more and more into him..they were feeling each other now for more than hours...lying on each other...all emotional feelings...both were lost..Maan didn't know what to say..and geet was happily crying now he came,she knew he will come but like this all of sudden was too much to take...now her naive mind was lost in his words which he said when he was leaving her...

Geet(st) : babaji...inhone kaha tha ye aayenge aur shadi karkey mujhe yaha se le jayenge...aur maine ye soch liya ki ye hamesha aatey rahenge...matlab ye mujhe yaha se le jane aaye hai ...lekin maa baba ko to batana padega na..mai aise kaise chali jau...in all this she blurted out loud..

MAI ABHI SHADI NAHI KAR SAKTI

Maan had his eyes closed feeling her...soothing her,calming himself...Their heartbeats were not racing now..now it was beating relieved as if they got their right place to start their functioning now ...and when she said this ...maan opened his eyes suddenly...cudnt believe she even remembered his words he promised her when he was leaving...he cant take this anymore..it was hurting him extremely now...

In the mean time geet realized she was on top of him ...how much naive and innocent his angle was...she knew boy and gal relationship and they shud maintain a decent distance...thinking this she tried getting up...but maan was holding her strongly ,she cudnt move..she again tried but maan was all lost...

All scared she looked up moving her face in a way her chin was on his chest and slowly moved her eyes to look at him...

Maan who came out of his trance when he found a sweet pain which his geet's chin was causing as his hold was too tight that she adjusted her face with all difficulty to look up to him...and their eyes met again...

Geet: m..m..mujhe chodiye na...

He dint heard anything..he was too lost in her..her angelic face glaring at him with her innocent eyes...he felt something strange,he dint wanted to leave her...he could keep her like this till eternity...

Geet: mujhe uthna hai...(she dint know why but she was feeling ticklish and fluttery in her stomach)..she was too naive to understand her feeling..

Maan slowly removed his hand from her back and she got up from him and then maan adjusted himself...

Geet was wearing a white and pink nightsuit polka dots..with her hairs plated and few strands left loose...

Maan: abhi nahi to kab shaadi karni hai( he was smiling frm inside ,but a pain was there)

Geet was staring him...he was looking very strong and broad as compared to the child maan..had little stubble on face...sharp feature..a look to die for..she was all lost when maan disturbed her thoughts..

Maan: bolo na geet...

Geet: k.k..kya..bolu..

Maan: shaadi kab karey?

Geet: abhi ma baba ko kuch pata nahi hai aur daarji...

While mentioning darji her eyes went scared the same way she used to react in childhood

Maan cudnt see this and again hugged her...

Maan: geet ...abhi nahi karenge shaadi...daro mat...koi tumhe kuch nahi bolega

Geet: ummm...she never had this secured feeling before...though sachin and supriya loved her a lott,but her fear for darji was always there...

But before she could think right...her past gave her a feleing of insecurity...maan absence for such a long time..and now she refused him for getting married now...has he really come for marrying her or just to tell her he will not be coming now..she cudnt think right...

Maan breaking her thots which were on verge of again asking him something which he cudnt have handled...

Maan: hum abhi bhi chotey hai geet shaadi k liye..

Next: some more maaneet conversation:)

Part 10

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Originally posted by: Mishty.M.k

awesomse

plz one more part it was too short

ok ..I will try...thanks:)

amazing part

so sweet dear...haye Geet is so innocent...i totally loved it...I am so happy they atleast know each other now and understand taht they ahve been waiitng for each other

Awesome
Loved it
Update soon

Originally posted by: muraadlovesdd