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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: varshr

...now please come out of that


sorryyy😭now plss come out of that...


mein baahar aa gayi



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Posted: 13 years ago
awsem update love it so pure and innocemt geet didn't ask him why he didn't came and maan love her so much and now they are together
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsem just love this concept
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Posted: 13 years ago

wow!! awesome part dear...

loved it...😃

continue soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome
loved it
geet sleep with maan
geet is realy a cute angel
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

beautiful dear...i loved Geet's innocence and Maan's love...they both are so pure in their thinking

whole update was full of love, care, selflessness and understanding
I liked it when Maan said "don't be scared of your Daarji...i will always be there for you"
Hope they exchange numbers...if nothing else atleast Geet can contact him incase she is in some trouble
waiitng eagerly for next update


u know what...i love phone romance...;)
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful ff..
full of innocence and lov...
pls add me to ur pm list..
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Depth of love-Part11

she adjusted herself in the same sofa cum bed where maan was sleeping ...

Chilly wind was flowing outside...she was feeling cold and hugged him frm his back to get the required heat adjusting herself in the limited place she was getting,the moment she hugged him,maan opened his eyes feeling a ring of current rounding him...he saw a small little hand on his chest in front covering him ...he held her hands and turned himself facing her...

Geet: aap uth gaye..wo light nahi hai to mujhe darr lag raha hai andhere me..mai aapke sath so jau?

Maan smiling, took her in his arms and covered her with himself in his duvet...she snuggled closer to him feeling his warmth and they slept together their most peaceful sleep in last 5yrs...

It was 10 in the morning...

Sachin: supriya geet kaha hai

Supriya: wo so rahi hai...aaj sunday hai na

Sachin: arey uthao usey.. ek he to din milta hai mujhe uskey sath...aur ismey bhi wo aadha din sone me nikal deti hai

Supriya (making her eyes big like geet):usey sone k liye bhi to ek he din milta hai na ...

Sachin: tum maa beti se koi nahi jeet sakta...sach me..ab dekho 10 baj gaye hai...bahut so li hamari pari..ab uthao usey

Supriya: smiling...aapke samney kisi ki chali hai..uthati hu..She went towards her room and knocked her door...

Maan jolted in his sleep hearing someone knocking the door...

Supriya: geeet...beta uth ja...10 baj gaye hai..

Maan whispered geet moving closer to her ears...

Maan: geet uthoo...geet...

Geet: umhmm umhmm ..aur sona hai...

Oh god ...she was looking heavenly while saying this...making it all so difficult for him...he sighed and tried again..

Maan : geet maa hai darwaze pe...utho na...

As soon as she heard this..she got up all of sudden

Geet:maa ..kaha hai maa...she held his hands tight all scared..

Maan: aaram sey shona ...bahar darwazey pe hai ..

Maan was not liking her getting frightened with the people of her house.He dint want a tinge of scare in her eyes ,she was unknowingly provoking his anger .

Geet: maan aap ek kaam kariye aap darwazey ke peche chup jaiye...nahi aap curtains ke peeche chup jao...nahi aap..bed ke neeche chup jao...

She was again scared...first she was sleeping with him and secondly her mother on door ...Maan wud have left early but with geet sleeping with him he dint realized it was too late in the morning

he cupped her face moving her strands behind her ears...

Maan: geet daro mat...tum jao darwaza kholo..saying this he picked the duvets throwing them on her bed

..

Geet: maan maa andar aa gayi to

Mana: mujhpe bharosa hai na geet...

She immediately nodded in affirmative .

Maan: jao darwaza kholo..

She got up frm the bed slowly to open the door..she looked back to maan before she opens the door...she was surprised to see maan was not there

Geet: kaha gaye...jaadugar hai kya...

She opened the door reluctantly to find supriya standing there...she entered her room...and geet's heart started beating faster...

Supriya: bte jaldi sey fresh ho ja ...baba tere jagne ka intezaar kar rahe hai...aur ye kya do do rajai leke soyi...tabiyat to theek hai na..

Geet: haan maa... wo meri tabiyat kharab hai ...bahut thand lagi raat me...she sneezed deliberately...

*naughty Geet...;))...doing nautanki for her maan

Supriya: waise kal tu itni parehsan kyu dikh rahi thi...sab theek to hai na ...daarji ne to kuch nahi kaha na?

Geet: nahi maa..bus wo kal se he tabiyat kharab thi...isliye thoda pareshan thi..

Supriya was confused..what has happened to her daughter ..yesterday she was lost and today she is unusually chirpy even when she is not feeling well.

Supriya: theek hai tu aaram kar mai breakfast yahi bhijwati hu ...

Geet had always shared things with her mom..but this is the only thing she cudnt...she still remember her maa-baba's worried face when she use to cry for maan when he left...she cud never see them helpless but then she can never even forget maan..this was somthing which was not in her control..so she decided to never let them feel her longing for him and will keep her desire safe in her heart ..for their love was meant to bring happiness and not pain in anyone's life...

Geet freshened up and was sitting with sachin in her room cribbing and looking everywhere but sachin.She was not ready to have her breakfast neither she was ready to go to the doctor.sachin was having tough time convincing her. But then she said she'll be fine taking some rest.

Geet: pata nahi kaha chaley gaye..aise bhi koi bina bataye jata hai kya..pata nahi kaha sey aaye they aur kaha sey chaley gaye..babaji...

kaha gaye aap maan...

She covered herself fully in her duvet and kept murmuring words abt maan...

Ye bhi koi baat hui

Maine jane ke liye thodi nahi kaha tha...chupne ke liye kaha tha

Maine kaha to ki mujhe unpey bharosa hai...par iska matlab ye nahi ki wo aise chup jaye ki mujhe he na miley

Maan came inside her room and locked the door...he couldn't stop smiling listening her complains...she was so busy in her own world..she dint realized door was locked..Maan sat besides her and she immediately removed the duvet and sat staright..she was lost in his looks ..he looked so handsome in his navyblue shirt with top two buttons open and black jeans with navy blue ankle length canvas fabric shoes which was resting on her bed the way he was sitting...

Here maan was lost to see her long light brown hairs left loose and a green elegant Kurti. She was loking out of this world...his geet ..only his.. Maan could see himself in her hazel eyes . he moved her strand falling on her face to the back of her ears with his free hand...and she came out of trance feeling his warmth...

Geet: maan aap kaha gayab ho gaye they

Maan winked at her...smirking

Geet: iska matlab...aap sach me jadugar ho kya

Maan was lost in her innocence...she looked edible when she enquires things with her child like innocence...

Maan: geet mai tumhare liye ye lene gaya tha...he gave her the packet which he was hiding behind

She opened it with excitement to find choclates, jelly candies ,candy floss and numerous such things which he could find in hoshiarpur she liked .he bought all of them...he was not knowing he will be meeting his princess else he would have bought her the best of everything she likes.Geet hugged him like a baby.

Geet: Maan aapko bhookh lagi hogi na

Maan was really famished...he dint had anuyhing since yesterday...he cudnt believe how she comes to know what he needs at the moment ...he nodded sweetly...


Next: Cham Cham Jani raatein..(promotional song)

Part12:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2741747/depth-of-love-maaneet-ff-part-27-pg137?pn=26

Edited by varshr - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice prt desr
waiting fr next

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