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Posted: 13 years ago
#91
awesome part dear ...loved it...😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: ritzy09

so sweet dear...haye Geet is so innocent...i totally loved it...I am so happy they atleast know each other now and understand taht they ahve been waiitng for each other

btw, I want to pass this link to some of my buddies. Iam sure they will enjoy this story as well...hope it's ok with you


thanks yaar...sure plss share it...its my pleasure...:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: tamanna1391

awsem update maneet meet geet recognise him and now abhi shadi nahin please do next soon





ok m trying to update now...actually thoda mood banana padta hai..;)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94
Awesome---Maan and Geets reactions were too cute.

Want some more...please update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Just started it .
Loving it ⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: varshr


ok m trying to update now...actually thoda mood banana padta hai..;)


will wait



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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
awesome
geet is so cute
hye i want more and more
plz i can't wait
plz update soon
Love it graphics
Edited by muraadlovesdd - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98

Frens please atleast like the first part of this ss so i can see who all are reading...Thanks...

Love u all<3

Varsh Rai

Part10

Maan: hum abhi bhi chotey hai geet shaadi k liye..

He cupped her face and rubbed her tears with his thumb...he cudnt see her getting scared of anyone...he will strangle the life out of him..even if it has to be her own daarji

Maan: geet kisi sey nahi darna ...hmm...nobody can stop me to take u away..u complete ur studies first...

Geet: ummm...to aap mera wait kar saktey ho jab tak meri studies complete ho jaye...

Maan: Haan geet...jab tak tum bolo tab tak wait kar sakta hu...

Geet was feeling bad ,he has come to take her..and she cudnt go...

Maan again touched her anklets...she was craving for his touch there...she was missing those shining eyes of maan which he used to have while touching them...

Maan: geet ye ab tak pehna hai...

Geet: w..wo aapki yaad aati thi to ...she looked down

Maan: itni yaad aati thi geet..?hmm..

Geet still looking down nodding her head in yes..

Maan: to pochogi nahi ki ab tak aya kyu nahi tumsey milne

Geet : aa to gaye...

It was getting more and more difficult for him to take her innocence ...can anyone be this selfless...he dint deserve her trustful eyes

Maan: Geet maine kaha tha tumsey ki mai tumsey har saal milne aonga..lekin mai nahi aa saka geet...i am sorry...i am sorry..

He took her hands and bowed his head on them..she realized he was in pain all the time..which she cud feel now and then in his absence...she cudnt see him breaking like this...she dint want to ask him y he cudnt come..he is here now and this was more than enough for her

Geet: maine aapko miss nahi kiya..aap to hamesha mere paas they...

She held his face and made him look up into her eyes

Geet: sachchi..she took out the krishna's idol from her drawer and said...ye aap ho...jab bhi aapki yaad aati hai mai insey baat karti hu...and u always made me smile...she looked at the idol and said smiling...To phirr aaj jab hum saath hai to aap aise baatein kyu kar rahey hai...mujhe nahi jaanna ki aap kyu nhai aaye pehle..

She answered with all her maturity..Maan felt so relaxed to listen to his mature angel now...She was happy that he is here and thats all matters to her...

Maan(St): kis mitti ki bani ho tum...

Maan thought its better not to discuss all these things now...let bygones be bygones,atleast for my angel...now i am here to live every single moment with geet and make up for for all the pain we have gone through these years...and all the lost times which we cud have spend together...

Maan: geet ek cheeze dikhau..

He took out her anklets from his pocket...Her eyes glistened seeing her anklet still with him.

Maan: jab mujhe tumhari yaad aati thi tab mai issey baat karta tha...

Geet: meri yaad...she said smiling and touching the anklet

Maan: hmm...bahut yaad...bahut sey bhi bahut jyada ...

Geet hugged him...he was feeling so calm when she was in his arms...She was so soft like a cotton..and her softness was making him more and more passionate...but not much to harm his princess ...

It was already half past three in the morning ...

Maan: geet tab tum so jao...mai thodi daer me phirr sey aata hu...

Geet hugged him tighter..she din want to leave him and let him go...

Maan: Geet thodi daer so jatey hai...else we ll feel sleepy all day

Geet: aap kaha ja rahey ho

Maan: mai ek lodge me ruka hu yaha...bus wahi

Geet: aap yahi so jao na plss..hugging him tighter

Maan : yaha tumharey saath...

Geet blushed and her cheeks went slight red.. ofcourse she knows gal and boy cudnt sleep together until they get married...

Maan cudnt help smiling ...his princess blushing..she was looking such a cutie pie...

Maan: acha theek hai...door lock hai na?

Geet : haan ...aur aaj to Sunday hai...maa uthane bhi nahi aayengi jaldi...

Maan: hmmm...theek hai ...so jao geet..

He tucked her in her duvet and slept on the sofa cum bed ...Geet eyes followed him until he lied flat their with his eyes closed...it was such a serene night...both together making themselves complete with their presence near each other...They went into a contended sleep .

It was 4:30 when power went out, load shedding was not common in hoshiarpur but sometimes it was done during nights...how much sleepy geet cud be ,but if her bedside lamp goes off ...she comes to know as she cudnt sleep in darkness..

Geet woke up all scared...moon light was not coming through her window now and it was all dark...she knew maan is here so instead of goin to her balcony today she tried being in the room feeling all safe...she cud feel maan was asleep ...even she was feeling sleepy but she cudnt in darkness...she went near him instead of waiting for the morning light...she adjusted herself in the sofa cum bed with maan ...


Next: Maaneet moments


Part 11

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2741747&TPN=24

Edited by varshr - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99
...now please come out of that

sorryyy😭now plss come out of that...
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful dear...i loved Geet's innocence and Maan's love...they both are so pure in their thinking
whole update was full of love, care, selflessness and understanding
I liked it when Maan said "don't be scared of your Daarji...i will always be there for you"
Hope they exchange numbers...if nothing else atleast Geet can contact him incase she is in some trouble
waiitng eagerly for next update

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