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Originally posted by: princes939

Hey likes increase hoe na!!!60 hogae!!! 😊
Btw ven u updatin next part?????!


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m writing the update now...:)
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Part 15

Geet making an innocent face...

Geet:lekin maan fevicol se ...

Maan: geet ...bus aaj ke liye ho gaya na...ye sab to mai kabhi bhi bata saka hu ...acha batao how was ur day??

Geet listening to him carefully and smiled...

Geet(drowsly): ummm...acha tha...

She had mixed feelings...she was bit upset coz she missed him and much happy coz he is there for her now...but she dint want to make him feel that she is missing him badly or else he ll be worried...

Maan: geet tum soyi nahi na...school se 3 baje aane k baad sey tum ab tak soyi nahi...

Geet looking at ceiling..talking to her babaji...phirr se chilla rahey hai ...babaji..but she thought to give him a piece of her mind now...

geet : k..k..kaise nend aati mujhe...haaan...

geet in loud.. worried voice, frustrated and angry

maan closed his eyes took the phone away from his ears...looking at it...and again placing it at the right place adjusting to her voice

geet: ek to aapne inform bhi nahi kiya ki aap pahuch gaye ho theek se ...isliye mai aapke msg ka wait kar rahi thi...so kaise jaati ...

maan was loving her concern and her authority on him...oh god he wanted to see her red nose with anger and kiss his innocent princess...

maan: geet itna gussa...aisa bhi to kya bol diya maine..mai to bus chahta hu ki tum aaram karo...raat ko bhi theek sey nahi so saki...

geet rolled her eyes...

geet: mai gussa nahi kar rahi hu...aur haan mai nahi soungi...nahi sona mujhe...

maan: kyu?

geet widened her eyes...

geet: mujhe nahi baat karni aapse

maan: kyu

get: kya kyu kyu ...?

geet was fuming...

maan: kyu nahi sona...?

geet: mujhe aapse baat karni hai...isliye...

maan: geet abhi to tum keh rahi thi ki tumhe mujhse baat nahi karni

geet: maan ...aap na...aap mujhe sata rahey hai...

maan grinned...he was so njoying her cribbings making him craving for her like hell...geet laid on bed flat with a thud voice..call still on... making voices as if she is letting him know she is going to sleep now...and don't want to talk anymore...putting the blanket on her jerking it with a voice again...maan was muffling his laughs..

she remained quiet...crbbing to her babaji which was audible to maan..he cudnt take her sweetness..he was overflowing with love which he was waiting to give to his angel...

geet:hunnnh...sach me baat nahi kar rahey ...babaji

maan: meeshti...

geet: nahi baat karni

maan: meeshti..suno to

geet: geet looked everywhere inside the blanket rolling her eyeballs..as if waiting for him to say something

maan: meeshti...sorr...y

before he cud complete his sorry

geet:maan...

maan: mai yaha late pahucha...tab tak tum school chali gayi houngi...to mai kaise inform karta ...haan.??..kitna gussa kiya apne maan pe...

geet curling her hairs with her finger

geet: to phirr aapne sone k liye kyu kaha...

maan shook his head...he was dying for his sweetheart...he was going numb thinking what wud have happen if she was not with him...all for him...

Kis tarah..
Cheenega..
Mujhse yeh jahan
Tumhe..
Tum..bhi ho main
Kya fikar
Ab hume.
.


Tum ho mere liye
Mere liye ho tum yun
Khud ko main haar gaya
Tum ko, Tumko main jeeta hoon

maan: acha nahi soyenge...dher sari baatein karenge...acha meeshti mujhe brij ke photos bhejna aaj yaad sey aur wo bhi jo maine wallpaper set kiya tha..

he said resting on his chair...closing his eyes...

geet looked down inside the blanket and nodded..

maan: aise baat karogi ab...phone pe dikhta nahi hai meeshti...

geet smiled...

geet: haan bhej dungi...aur aap doosri payal bhi leke gaye...ab mai kya pehnungi

maan: hmmm...waise to i wanted u to come with me but then...managing with ur anklet...he said looking at his hands holding her anklet..

geet: maan 7 bajne waley hai...aapko jana hai na blue movie dekhne frens ke sath...

😆

maan(smiling):dekha...pehle rok ke ..ab bhaga rahi ho...

geet making a big O shape mouth

geet: maan ek to mai aapko yaad dila rahi hu upar se...aur haan maan aapke frens ke bahut sarey miscals hai...

maan: geet ek kaam kartey hai...tum sarey calls for time being is number pe call forward kar dena,... theek hai...

geet(yawning): ummm

maan: nend aa rahi hai na...ab soye...

geet: ummm

maan: good gal...ab tum so jao aur mai raat ko cal karta hu...aur haan jyada mat sona...nahi to raat ko nend nahi aayegi...

it was already 6:45 pm when the call disconnected...

Vipul's place

Saurav: yaar ye maan ko ho kya gaya hai...na phone utha raha hai ...na msg ka reply...

Vipul came inside with popcorns ...bacardi breezers...and snacks...

Rex: abey mera to ho gaya intezaar khatam...pet puja karne chala mai to...

Vipul: maan aayega bhi ya nahi

Saurav: taangey na tod du uski mai

Rex: abey aunty ...chal lights off kar ...music on kar...mai dance karne ke mood me hu

Saurav: ye mota ab pekey naachega...

Rex switched off the lights ...taking Breezer bottle and rasing his hand ...a toast to my frend vipul for his new girl frend...cheers...

Vipul and saurav shook their heads...

Rex started singing...moving towards saurav and vipul...

Gul batti kamre ki ho jaye toh toh...

toh pyaar do pyaar lo

Arey bechain dil tharki ho jaye toh pyaar do pyaar lo

Rex was dancing ...touching saurav and vipul in a way ...as if he is seducing them...😆

Ho jang lag na jaaye jawani isse

yaaro thodi rawa toh karo


Laddoo jo phootey kabhi sabr tootey

toh tum na kisi se daro
Seenay ke andhar jo armaan hai unko yun

qaid rehne na do
Aankhein waqt sek dena raho usske

aagey bhi tum kuch karo
Ho Gul batti kamre ki ho jaaye toh toh,

toh pyaar do pyaar lo
Arrey bechain dil tharki ho jaaye toh

pyaar do pyaar lo

Ho saavan me dil mor ho jaye to...

pyaar do pyaar lo

Vipul and saurav joined him...and they were dancing like maniacs...

Saurav switched off the music system and started singing

saurav:


Humko kehte superman
On karlo handy cam
From AM to PM
Bande at your service mamTu mera hero..


vipul looking at rex :

Tenu main love karda,

Bematlab karda
Baahon mein aa soniye


Bus aaj raat ke liye,Saadi taa desi hai adaa

Saade te hojaa ni fidaa,Baahon mein aa soniye


Bus aaj raat ke liye,Subha hone na de

Saath khone na de,Ek dusre ko


Hum sone na de


Tu mera hero..


rex:

Make some noise for the desi boyz


Kudiyan de dil utte rule karange, ehi bazaaran vich phaili hai hawa
Todange Romeo de love da record vi, likhange ishqe da paath nawa
Hum yaaron bigde hain, dil apna hai shareef bada
Make some noise for the desi boyz
One, two, three Go

English thumke, dil ki rhythm pe


Maare jamm jamm ke, desi boyz


Sohne mohne bannke, chhaati dole tann ke


Naache jamm jamm ke, desi boyz


English thumke, dil ki rhythm pe


Maare jamm jamm ke, desi boyz


Sohne mohne bannke, chhaati dole tann ke


Naache jamm jamm ke, desi boyz

They made a queue...raising one hand in air and waving their waist ...copying the signature step of desi boyz..and their back was facing the doors...


They finished all the bacardi's and were dancing like lunatics singing in their besura voices when maan entered vipul's room ...

He opened the door...he was already fuming on rex...and here this thurkey was dancing and njoying taking maan's breath away few hours ago...only he knows how he handled his meeshti.



Rex was standing last in the row...and maan kicked his butt with such a force...he lost his balance falling on vipul...vipul on saurav...and all on floor...like a stack of books..

Next: mere dil ki rani tum...meri khushiyo ka mausam (will update today again...)

will post pictures og maan's three frens in next update..:)

Thanks for the like guys...keep commenting...love u a lottt..special thanks to princes939 and tamanna1391...<3


part 16

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Edited by varshr - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awsome!!!!!
Aww ur welcome dear!!
Awww i luv dis inocent geet!!!But maan kere ga kya un pics ka??
Vil b waitin 4 ur next update!!!!
Update soon!!!
Edited by princes939 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
aww..i loved her cute cribbings..
poor rex..!ab uska kya hoga?
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Posted: 13 years ago
OSSUM DEAR
loved it but dear
we knew someday or other geet ll come to delhi
but pls dear
at that time make them to recongnise eachother
and dear
we want geet to be as gud student as maan
even we wann geet to do architect dear
pls dear

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