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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 11

Guys ...I'll be having my exams from the 17th so updates would be little difficult ...I'll try to update bt if i wouldn't then i'm sorry ...

Maan-Geet mujhe nahi pata tha ki tum itni bhari ho
Geet-Ho!!Main bhari hoon ...
Maan-Haan
Geet-To theek hai ...mujhe neeche utaro...main chal loongi
Maan-Get main mazak kar raha tha
Geet-Theek hai
Maan reached Geet's car ...He slowly kept Geet down and went to the driving seat to drive ...
Geet-Maan
Maan-hmmm
Geet-Thank u
Maan-Geet we r frnds n wat r friends for helping na ...so no sorry or thank u
Geet-Theek hain

After some time

Geet-Maan
Maan-hmmm
Geet-i'm hungry
Maan-Me too
Geet -Dekho aage restaurant hain ...vahan chalte hain ...vaise bhi mera ghar bas thodi door hain
Maan-ok
He parked the car and once again picked geet in his arms
They sat down and ordered food

Meanwhile Outside geet's house
Jay-Di ab tak kyun nahi aayin...mujhe bahot tension ho rahi...Its 12 at night
Kabir-Geet ka number try karta hoon
Jay-Haan
Kabir called on Geet's phone bt it was unreachable
Jay-Kya hua
Kabir - Uska phone unreachable hain
After dinner they went back in the car n geet in maan's arms
They reached geet's house
Kabir saw geet's car
Kabir-Jay...Geet ki car
They rushed towards geet and were shocked 2 see maan
Jay-Geet ko kya hua
Maan-Moch aa gayi ...she can't walk
Kabir-Thnx buddy...for bringing geet home
Maan just smiledn said-its okay bro
Both of the brothers held geet
Geet-Thnx maan bye


Precap-Geet's sleepless night


pms later

Edited by zunaiba5 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
wow just loved it !!! all the best for ur exams ..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
thanxs for the pms..enjoyed reading it..havent read all as yet...wil;l comment more once i read all
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
awesome part dear waiting for the next part update soon before ur xams😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
ha i loved it...i completely forgot that he has a gf...hmmm precap sounds interesting...thanks for the pm...will be waitinggg for the updates...

all the best for ur exams...👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
Part 12

Maan is his room

Flashback

Geet-Ouch
He saw geet wincing in pain ...he's heart was bleeding in pain
he rushed to her ...after some time when he saw her smiling ...his heart was at peace

At the restaurant

They had just finsihed their food when Geet's phone rang

Geet-Hello
Voice-Hi Geet ...pechana
Geet-Armaan
Armaan-Right so where r u ???
Geet-I'm at xyz restaurant ...tum
Armaan-Tumhare peeche
Geet-Nahi ho
Armaan-Seriously ...ek bar dekho to
Geet turned n saw Armaan
He came to her and gave her a hg and a slight peck on the cheek
Maan's blood boiled seeing someone else touching geet
Armaan saw the bandage in geet's foot n said -Yeh kya hua
Geet-voh moch aa gayi
Armaan-Oh
Geet-Armaan meet my frnd Maan
Armaan-Hi dude ...ok geet i have 2 rush ...i have date bye
Geet-Bye and armaan gave her a hug
Armaan went
Geet-Chalein
Maan-Haan

end of flashback

Maan-[thought]Kyun aisa hota hai ki geet ko takleef hoti hain aur mujhe dard ...Kyun aisa hota hain ki ja main uski aankhon main dekhta hoon toh kho jaata hoon... kyon uska chehra dekhne kiliye main taras jaata hoon ...kyon kisi aur aur ko geet ke saath me dekh nahi sakta ..

Maan's mirror image came came infront of him

Maan's image -Kyunki tumhe Geet se pyaar ho gaya hai
Maan-Nahi
Maan's Image-Yeh sare signs pyaar ki tarah indicate karte hain ...
Maan-Voh bas meri friend hain
Maan's image -Friend maan ...friends
Maan-haan
Maan's Image-U love her
Maan-Nahi
Maan's Image -Haan
Maan -Nahi
Maan 's Image -Haan
Maan-Nahi
Maan's image -haan
Maan-haan ..haan mein pyaar kata hoon geet se ...nahi dekh sata geet ko kisi aur ke saath ...nahi dekh sakata usse dukh ya takleef main ...maan pyaar karta hoon geet se
Maan's image smiled and vanished
Maan-par geet mujhse pyaar karti hain ya nahi ...yeh mujhe pata lagna hoga

Maan then went to sleep dreaming of geet

Geet's room

Kabir -Geet tum so jaao
Jay-U need rest
Geet-Good night jay ...good night kabir
Jay&Kabir -Good night
Geet tried to sleep but couldn't
Flashback

When she fell Maan immediately picked her up and took her to manager's cabin
The doctor gave a spray to geet for her to apply on her foot ...she couldn't ...Maan slowly took it from her and applied it on her foot and then slowly massaged her foot ...and then put a bandage on her foot

Geet-Maan is so caring ...


PMS LATER



Edited by zunaiba5 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thnx 4 likes and comments guys

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Edited by zunaiba5 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 13

Geet -Maan is so caring'.Ussne kitni bar meri madam ki hain 'Par uskai jagha koi aur hota toh bhi yahi kartaa na...he's just a frnd 'haina ..haan

She kept reassuring herself and went to sleep


Next Morning


Maan went to court to play ...when he didn't see geet ...he knew she was hurt bt he was upset that he didn't see her ...


He played 4 an hour and then returned 2 his mansion n took a bath ... and went to have breakfast


Mr Khurana & Mrs Khurana -Good morning beta

Maan-Morning dad morning mom

Anjali-Hi bro

Maan-Hi

Anjali-Bhai kal raat aap itni der se kyun aaye

Maan- Lo enquiry commsion shuru

Anjali-Kya

Maan-Kuch nahi 'main kal site pe tha

Anjali-ok

Maan finished his breakfast and went to change for office

Maan when came down

Mrs Khurana-Maan beta aaj tum lunch ki time aa jana

Maan-Par kyun

Anjali-Aise hi'aaj main office ko half day diya hain

Maan-Anjali ji..main puch sakta hoon kis khusi main

Anjali-Aap bhul gaye

Maan-Kya

Anjali-Aaj dadi aangi

Maan-Oh haan main jaldi aa jaonga


Meanwhile Geet's room


Jay & Kabir-Hi Geet

Geet-Hi brothers 'ye kya tum log yahan kyun breakfast kar rahe ho

Jay-Kyunki aap neche nahi aa sakti

Kabir-Toh humne sochaa ki hum hi upar aa jaate hain '.breakfast saath me karenge

Geet-How sweet 'chalo breakfast karte hain


Geet and her brothers had their breakfast when geet looked at the time 'she was late for office


Geet-Oh my god 'mien office ke liye kitni late ho gayi hewn

Kabir-Tum office nazi jaaogi

Geet-Par'mere pair me moch hain fracture nahi

Kabir-Tum theek se chal bhi nahi sakti 'bed se hall tak nahi jaa sakti

Geet-Jaa skate hewn 'she tried to got up bt she fell

Jay- Dekha

Kabir - Its final that tum office nazi jaaogi

Geet-Thik hai


Jay left for college and Kabir for office leaving geet alone


Geet[thought]-dono chale gai '.mien bore ho jaungi 'office bhi nazi jaane diya '.kya karooon '.


After some time she decided that she'll read a book '.

The book was kept the side table next to Geet's bed


Geet finished the book and was again bored


Geet-Main kya karoon '. kitab bhi padh li

She decided to watch TV'..the film 'I hate luv stroys 'was coming 'she kept it on recording and began to flicker through the channels '.bt found nothing 'so she watched the film 4 sometime and then she became sleepy and went to sleep '.



Meanwhile in Maan's office


Here poor Maan couldn't concentrate as he was busy thinking abt geet'.

He just wanted to have a glimpse of geet '.

He was sad coup he didn't see her in the morning'..he wasn't happy


The lunch time came and man left his office


Geet' room


Around 3:00 she woke up


She saw the time


Geet-Hey babaji'.aabhi tak sirf 3 baje 'abhi to bahot time hain merai dono bhai ko aane main 'main khana khati hoon


Geet-Suni[servant] yahan aao

Sunil came-Ji madam

Geet-Mera khana laao

Sunil-Ji


Sunil came back with gets food..She finished her food '


Her blackberry beeped 'Message from Maan



She immediately smiled

Message-Gettin bored???

Geet replied-How did u know

Maan-I guess it '

Geet replied-Where r u '.

Maan-First ask ur servant 2 open the window'


she asked the servant to open the window

she saw man sitting in his office attire 'he had a notepad in his hand which said hi..Here man saw geet n was happy to see her ...

she also took out her artful or notepad n wrote '.kya hua office nazi gai

Maan wrote-gaya tha par'

geet wrote -par


Maan why he came back

Geet-Oh i see


Precap-Dadi-Kisse dekh rahe ho maan beta

Maan-Kisi ko nazi dadimaa


But dadimaa saw geet


A request 2 the silent readers...pls comment whether its critisim ...i want know ur views abt my story ...n suggestions as well





Edited by zunaiba5 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
loved it...
plz add me in...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hayye!!!

Daadiii gonna play cupid...i can feel it.
can't wait to see what she will plan.
continue soon!

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