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Posted: 13 years ago
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hello

this is my first attempt for an os pls excuse mistakes n if u read something like this somewhere then its okay ...

Thnx 4 reading

As she entered the room she threw her herself on the bed and was about to sleep when she heard a banging voice from the neighbouring house.Now whose this morone she thought .She saw a tall huge handsome man picking up things and banging them ...


Now tell me is it worth continuing ????



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Index
Part 1 -page 1
Part 2-Page 2
Part 3- page 4
Part 4-page5
Part 5-page 5
Part 6-page 6
Part 7-Page 6
Part 8-Page 7
Part 9-Page 7
Part 10-Page 8
Part 11-Page 8
Part 12 -Page 9
Part 13-Page 10
Part 14-Page 10
Part 15-Page 11
Part 16-Page 12
Part 17-Page 13
Part 18-Page 14
Epilogue-Page 15
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Please continue and give it a title.If you are sending PM's please send me as we!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!ll
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey!

maybe do continue...

maybe if you add more details and a title than ppl would be more intrigued to read more 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sure. u shld continue... nd dn't 4gt to pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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continue soon...do add me to ur pm list..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Okay so here's the next part

Part 2

As she went near her window she noticed that the neighbouring window was also open...She said

Oye Khote ,Ullu ,Idoit,Morone

And then she realized that she was very loud as the people walking down the path were staring at her ...

So she took a huge book whch was more like an artfile an wrote

R u deaf ????

At first he didnt reply but her constent noises were disturbing him ...He took a piece of paper n said

No bt I heard wat u said but I'm not interested ...

She read n became more angry n said wrote

Tumhari wajah se meri neend kharab ho gayi hain sorry kahanai ke bajai tum mujhe attitude dekha rahe ho .Ullu

He also wrote

Tum janti ho tumne kisse ullu kaha hai

She wrote
Nahi with i don't care attitude

Tumne Maan Singh Khurana ko kaha hai...Vaise bhi tum kasai jana gi sara din soti rehti ho...mujhe tumse baat karne ka koi shok nahi hain u dumb girl

She wrote

Dumb ??U calle d me dumb...Mjhe bhi tum jaise logon se baat karne ka koi shok nahi hain..Aur main Geet Handa hoon ...

Maan wrote :

whatever n with that he closed his window

Geet thought

Chaddo Ise logon se baat karni bekar hai...


She went 2 sleep



Next Update Tomorrow


Edited by zunaiba5 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOWWW yaar!

really awesome one!

but why u stop there...me greedy for more...and it better be longer!!!! lol!


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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting..curious to know what happens next...thanxs for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Note -

If u want pms then pls buddy me ...its easier

promo


Tum yahan kya kar rahe hoo - asked Maan

main yahan nahi toh kashmir mein hoon...mein yahan voh karene aayi hoon joh mujhe karna chahiye



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