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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi thanks 4 d apm! Love dteh update! finally Maan decided to leave Aparna! He loves Geet! Hate Aparna! 😡 Geet also loves Maan! Maan wants to go wid Geet lol. Maan wants to spend more tym wid her! Please incl direct link in ur update! So much easier to access update!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 16



After droping Priyanka to the office



She left 4 d orphanage


Geet had always love children 'She wanted 2 do something 4 the poor and orphan children

She reached the orphanage n played with the children ...She also bought some gifts ...


After playing with the children she went 2 the caretaker of the orphanage n said


Geet-Pls take this cheque'.its for the bright future of the children

Man-Bt i can't

Geet-Pls as I told u its for the children


Geet left the orphanage n was going home as it was a saturday ..n saturdays were half days


She decided 2 go for shopping


After 4 hours 6:00pm


Geet's yellow beetle's back seat was full of bags


Geet was just driving when she saw a girl standing outside 'she parked her car n went to her


Geet-Need any help

Girl-Um yeah actually my car has broke down n its getting quite late n i have to reach home

Geet-I'll drop u

Girl-R u sure

Geet-Yes come

Geet and the girl sat n the car

Girl-Looks like u have come from shopping

Geet-Yeah 'So where do u live

Girl-Khurana Mansion 'do u know where it is

Geet-Yeah ofcourse 'i am ur neighbour'Hi I am Geet..

Girl-I am Anjali Khurana '

Geet-U r man's sister

Anjali-Yes

Geet-So watt were u doing

Anjali-Well i had come 2 meet my frnd n then the car broke down and i met u '.[thought]-oh toh yeh vahi hain jiske car main man bah aye the'she's beautiful'bhai ke liye perfect hain

Finally Anjali reached her house

Anjali got down

Anjali-Thnx 4 lift

Geet-No problem

Anjali-See u arpound

Geet-Yeah u 2

Anjali left 'Geet saw that she has left her purse behind 'she called out but Anjali had gone inside'Geet parked her car n went 2 Khurana Mansion


Inside there was an old lady sitting


Geet-Namaste

Lady-Namaste beta 'aap kon

Geet-Ji main Geet hoon 'voh Anjali mere saath ayi thi aur ghadi[car] mein apna purse bhool gayi toh maine socha main deti hoon

Lady-Aap beithye mein Anjali ko bulati hoon


She told one of the servants 2 call Anjali-


Anjali came down


Anjali-Hi Geet

Geet-Hi'.voh tum aapna purse car mein bhool gayi toh maine socha ki main tumhe de doon

Anjali-Oh thak u mein abhi apna purse hi dhoond rahi thi

Geet-Theek hain 'mein chalti hoon

Lady-Arre aise kaise chalti hoon abi toh aayi ho 'kuch der baitho

Geet-Ji



The three of them talked and Geet discovered that she's anjali's dadimaa n dadimaa discovered that she was the same girl who was maan talking to .she was quite impressed '.


Geet-Theek hai Anjali i think i should leave now 'bye dadimaa bye Anjali

Dadimaa-Bye beta

Anjali-Bye Geet


Geet was leaving n Maan was entering the house '.Both bUmped to each other and geet lost balance and was going 2 fall when man caught her '.Geet looked into his eyes very carefully'His eyes showed love for her 'Wat he saw in her eyes was new feelings for him..



Dadimaa and Anjali were looking at them carefully


Anjali-Dadimaa aap ko nahi lagta ki yeh dono ek dusre ke liye perfect hain

Dadimaa-Haan beta '.Dekhye kaise maan geet ko dekh rahe hain '.

Anjali-Yeh dono ek dusre mein itna khoye hue hain ki unhe hamri aavas[voice] hi nahi sunai de rahi '[little louder]dadimaa


Dadimaa-Koi fark nahi pada ..inn dono ko

Anjali-Kya jodi mein ek photo leti hoon

Dadimaa-Haan lijeye


Anjali captured bt the flashlight didn't affect them 'bt when the servant drop the glass both came back n man straightened geet n she left


Maan went to his room without saying a word 'bt stopped when he heard Dadimaa and Anjali's convo


Anjali-Dadimaa '.ab yeh Aparna ka kya hoga'

Dadimaa-Kya hoa matlab'breakup hoga'..

Anjali-Par dadimaa maan bhai toh aparna se pyaar karte hain

Dadimaa-Arre budho'dekha nahi maan kaise dekh rahe the geet ko... '

Anjali-Par kyun


Maan from upstairs -Because i love her

Anjali was shocked bt dadimaa wasn't

Dadimaa-Aap ko geet se pyaar he ..yeh hum pehle se jaante the'did u confess 2 her??

Maan-No

Dadimaa-did she confess to you ????

Maan-no 'bt i saw feelings for me in her eyes

Dadimaa-Beta in that case use aparna as a way to confess from geet..

Anjali-How

Maan-very simple when geet will see me with aparna she'll have a fear of losing me '.n jealousy ofcourse

Daimaa-n she'll confess in this insecurity

Anjali-Nice idea '.

Dadimaa-Mera hain'.acha baate bahout hui jaiye maan beta fresh ho jayiye '

Maan-ji



Meanwhile Geet in her room


Geet was pacing in her room thinking abt maaan


Geet[st]-Kya hai aise maan mein ki voh sabse alag hain '..uski aankoon mein dekh kar lagta hai ki mein unme kho jaaon''


Flashback ---


When geet was at maan's office 'she was very happy bt the moment she saw aparna holding man's hand n is close to him'her happiness faded n anger raised n thats why when aparna fired priyanka she hired him'.when she was with maan was holding her she felt secure 'she didn't have any fear'.



Flaashback ends


She recollected all the time spend with maan '.how he smiles ..how he helped her despite having date 'how he lifted her etc'''



all her thoughts were disturbed by the servant


Ramu-Madam aapko neeche bula rahe hain

Geet-Theek hain


She left the room after looking at the window where she could see maan talking 2 someone ..she waved him bt he gave no response ...


Dinner Table


After dinner Geet was busy in her thoughts abt man n kabir n jay were talking 'when kabir 's phone rang


Kabir-T again

Jay-Hear her out

Kabir answered the call n T said

T-Kabir ..pls don't hang up 'listen 2 me once

Kabir-Speak

T-I am sorry 4 my behavior ..pls 'maan' jaao na

The word 'maan' brought geet back 2 reality .

Geet[thought]-Yeh kya man ke naam se mein kho jaati hoon aur maan ke naam se'.


Kabir-Oh ..so just a sorry 4 how u treated me 'u know watt i always the last tie we spend together was when we watched the movie at my place '

It again stroked geet n she remberred how afraid she was n she held man's arm ..she had a smile on her face

Jay got worried seeing geet smile for no reason

Jay-Geet r u ok???

Geet-Yeah i'm fine

T-Baby pls

Kabir-No bye

T-Kabir Kabir'..


Geet-Good night jay

Jay-Good night di

Geet-Goodnight Kabir

Kabir-Goodnight Geet

Geet went upstairs when Jay said

Jay-Di ko kya hua
Geet-Kuch may be she's tired ...chal sona nahi hain
Jay-Haan chaliye

Both went to their rooms

Geet just went straight 2 her room n just threw herself on the bed '.



Meanwhile Khurana Mansion


Dining Table


After dinner '.


Dadimaa-Ridhima beta '.

Ridhima/Mrs Khuarana-Ji maa ji

Dadimaa-Beta mujhe Siddhant ne bataya ki aap bahut acha gana gaati hain

Ridhima-Ji

Anjali-OMG Ma'hidden talent ..chaliye hume ek 'geet' sunaiye

Maan was alert after by hearing the name 'geet''.he knew that his dadi and sister were teasing him indirectly '.anjali also winked at him '.


He didn't even hear his mother's song '.he was too busy in his dreamworld with geet '.



In the end of the song when he hear praises 4 his mother he came out of his world '.

Dadimaa-Beta aapne apni ma ka gana suna ???

Maan-Haan sunna

Anjali-Kaisa laga

Maan-Bahut acha laga

Anjali-bas ..i thought it was fab

Maan-Okay ..bye everyone me sleepy ..


He went to his room very fast 2 avoid more questions


He looked through his window ..geet has already slept


Back to Geet's Room


Geet could slept for a while '.Midnight she woke up to have water'Water was kept near her bed'she tried 2 sleep bt sleep had gone away'she began 2 think abt man the way he looks at er,his talks,his smile etc


First she thought its nothing


But if its nothing hen why does he affect her so much'.he has a gf n y is it affecting her so much


Second-Crush


Crush'.no way


Last option Love


Do i love maan 'she joined all the pieces together he being wid someone else makes me jealous'i always think abt him'.i always smile when he is wid me'my heart beats fasts when he is near me'Yes yes I love Maan n its the best feeling 'bt does he love me '.


Precap-Party !!!




Edited by zunaiba5 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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luvly luvlly luvly update!!!

hayyeee they have feelings for each other 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi thanks 4 da pm n superb update! Geet meets Anjali n den Dadi! Dadi n Anjali witness Maaneet lost in each other! Maan admits to dadi n ANjali dat he loves Geet bt has nt told her! Maan decides to make Geet jealous using Aparna! Dadi's plan too lol! Dadi is sweet! Geet restless n jealous! Geet in love! Update soon n please post direct link 2 update in ur pm! Easier to access update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 17


The alarm ringed at 6:00 pm sharp and geet woke up with a smile on her face '.she decided 2 go 4 basketball'bt then she changed her mind 'an idea struck her 'she decided that she won't go n maan will wonder y didn't i go'.she went 2 sleep again'


Here in the court man was getting restless 'maan wondered-aaj geet kyun nahi aayi 'kahin voh mujhse naraz toh nahi ''geet ek baar aajo pls'.


Here at 7:30 Geet again woke up '..


She was confused


Geet-Shall i tell man that i love him'par agar use mana kar diya toh 'mana kar diya toh kar diya ' haan i should tell him that i love him'ho sakta hain that he also loves me ''par mien use kab batao '.haan aaj rat ke party mein '

Right now its ur test maan


it was time 4 her love 2 come'she opened her curtains n got sat on her bed eagerly waiting 4 man 'maan came in his room opened his curtains n saw him smiling 'he immediately picked his phone n called up geet


Maan-Geet tum aaj kyun nahi aayi 'wat happened

Geet-Relax maan

Maan-Kya relax 'i was so worried 'aur tum yahan has rahi ho

Geet-Kyun were u missing me '..

Maan-Haan '[he then realized watt he said]

Geet-Oh so u miss me

Maan-Voh mein '..


Geet-Its okay man 'i'm sure u're think bat aparna

Maan mumered -Ab yeh Aparna kahan se aa gayi-Nahi i wan't think abt u


Geet-Its okay man 'even i was thinking abt u n se winked whim through the window'chalo it gotta go bye

Maan-Bye '


Maan thought geet must be joking so texted her 2 find out '


Maan-U r joking ???

Geet-abt wat'

Maan-That u were thinking abt me '

Geet-No i am serious

Geet -Vaise man u know that today is the party

Maan-wat party '

Geet-Project party ..

Maan -Oh haan thnx 4 reminding 'i'll be there


Maan read the message a number of times 2 check that it is reality '..


Maan was happy-She missed me ..she missed me '


Geet closed her curtains n after she closed her curtains man was on cloud nine 'geet slightly peeped n saw man happy '.She too smiled n then closed her sustains n went 2 take her shower



Maan took a shower n came down in a very happy mood '


Maan-Good morning mom n have her a kiss on the cheek-

Mrs Khurana-Good morning beta '..kya hua aaj aap bahut kush hain

Maan-Haan ma aaj mein bahut khush hoon '

Mrs Khurana-Chalo nasta karte hain

Maan-Ji maa'.



Soon Anjali,Mr Khurana , Dadimaa also joined them '.Maan finished his breakfast 'went to his room n changed n went 4 office '.


Meanwhile Handa's home


Geet-Kabir & jay i want u 2 to be present in today's party

Jay&Kabir-Okay

Jay-Di 'can i bring Piya

Geet-Ya ..vaise kabir tumhara t ke saath patch up ho gaya

Kabir-Nahin

Geet-Very good 'uses mat batana ki aaj party hain

Kabir phone beeped -T again


Hi Kabir 'I just want 2 tell that i wont come today 'as we have a party in the evening '.bye love 'see u at party

Kabir-Geet isse toh pata hain aaj party hain

Geet-Zaror kiss nai bataya hog 'very good aaj voh office main nahi aaygi '

Kabir-haan

Geet-Leto go 4 office





KC


Maan[ in a happy tone ]-Good morning Adi

Adi-Good morning sir



Adi was outside talking 2 the staff bt man greeted him happily everyone was shocked .. The great msk who never smiled was smiling n was happy '..



Inside man's cabin


The moment he entered his smile faded ' Aparna was sitting in his cabin'.


Aparna came to him n hugged him-Hey Maan

Maan-Hi Aparna'How come u r here

Aparna-Actually i gotta know that there is party tonight so shall i come

Maan -Aparna ..ofcourse u can come [plan 2 make geet j n confess is still on]

Aparna-Okay then i'm going 4 shopping

Maan-bye

Aparna-bye


Aparna left


Maan [thought]- i know u love me geet bt u aren't confessing so when u'll se me n aparna together u will confess 'n then aparna is gone '..dadimaa u r gr8 '


Maan called Adi


Adi-Yes sir

Maan-Today is launch party with the Handas right ..

Adi-Yes sir '

Maan-U go

Adi-Yes sir 'sir u r coming ???

Maan-Yes

Another shock 4 Adi '.Maan never attended parties 'adi always use 2 go for parties n now suddenly he's attending one.. '


Adi[thought]-kuch toh garbar hain-Sir can i go

Maan-Yes


At 6:00


Maan is his room was going 2 get ready when he saw geet with a board which said getting reday??

He replied ya '.wbu

She replied -Ya just going 2

He replied -Chalo see u at the party bye

She replied-Bye


Maan closed the curtains n geet wrote 'I love u ''she kept it in her purse n went 2 get ready



At 8:00 pm

Party hall


Everyone reached


T's dresshttp://www.thefashionpolice.net/images/2008/09/08/jovani_black_dress.jpg


Kabir's -http://1.imimg.com/data/M/E/MY-1236285/men-27s-formal-shirts_10649208_250x250.jpg


Maan-http://www.jamesbondlifestyle.com/images/products/cl034-tuxedo.jpg


Priya's dress-http://www.omiru.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/08/sleeveless-origami-knit-dress_082208.jpg



Jay's -http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_TPwUKk-wZhE/TUMHtlCrRHI/AAAl0/Wh_Jlr5tHDs/s1600/fashin-in-india-mens-wear-the-formal-and-the-casual-pictures-4.jpg


Sameera's dress-http://cupcakesandcashmere.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/03/redwbelt1.jpg

Everyone was busy talking bt the moment she entered ...the people couldn't stop looking at her who adjust entered the hall


All eyes were on her 'she was GEET


Geet was wearing -http://2.bp.blogspot.com/__xXsCu8NDiw/S8JCa1kqGII/AAACII/DwW7prMllU4/s1600/Katrina-Anarkali-Churidar-P.jpg


Even though she put very less makeup her skin was glowing 'even in indian she looked very beautiful '..she had faded everyone in the party 'her looks attracted everyone single man in the party '


Maan walked towards her n Aparna was busy shouting bt she gained no attention from him ''.




Precap-Confession & more

Edited by zunaiba5 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update
loved it
waiting for confession
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ha loved it...eagerlyyy waiting for the next part...do continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome part yaar...
waiting for confession...
continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi thanks 4 da pm n lovely update! Wiating 4 confession! Update soon n please try to incl direct link 2 ur update in pm! Thanks
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Originally posted by: geetsweet

Kab milegi update...waiting...




u'll get the update very soon 😊

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