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Nickname : Zee

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Posted: 13 years ago

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yayyy! now maan and geet will have to work together!

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Part 4

Geet[thought]-Wah geet asa he karna isse baat baat par dhamki dena tabhi line par aega

Geet-Theek Mr.Khurana ..I'll take ur leave ...i hope this deal would help u in changing

Maan-Yeah

With this Geet left the conference room when suddenly she bumped to Mr.Adi.mr Adi was Maan's secretary and a friend...

Adi-I'm so sorry ...U aren't hurt

Geet-Oh its ok Mr Adi ...R u alright???

Adi-Ya..I'm fine

Since the door was open maan could here everything..he wondered y is she being nice 2 himwhen adi came n gave his laugh

Adi--hahaha

Maan-Adi

Adi-Yes sir

Maan-Ye bataoo tumhe yeh Ms.Geet kaisi lagti hain...I mean generally ..

Ad-Sir ...M/s eet bahut dedicated hain,confident hain , hardworking n sweet aur frinedly hain...

Maan-Ok

Maan [thought]-Sweet Friendly...arre yeh toh sweet ki s bhi nahi hain aur frinedly nahi hain...

Geet went to her house ...She changed n went 2 play basketball...she loved basketball it was favourite

Maan did some work in KC and then went hme ..changed n went 2 play football..football was his passion after work ...like in football one must goal then Maan also realized for his goal..buissness

okay the reason for both playing is that they both love it n whenever they r happy,sad etc they come in play n they get relaxed...

Both played n were returning towards their home when they bumped into each other :

Maan:Tum dekh kai nahi chal sakti

Geet:ekh toh main sedhai par side se loog kabhi bhi aa jataye hain ..

Maan-Tum

Geet-Ha main

Maan-Arre tum chup nahi reh sakti

Geet-Kyun merai bolne se tumhe problem hai

Maan-Haan

Geet-To theek hain aaj se main..[maan cut her off]

Maan-arre vah itni aasani se maan gayi..main yeh pehle kyun nahi try kiya

Geet-Puri baat toh suno...aaj se main zyada bolongi gi..

Maan-Pls excuse me ..mujhe jana hai

Geet-excused..

Maan-Oh God

Geet-Ab isme god kya kare

Geet left...

When Geet reached home Jay n Kabir were waiting 4 her

Geet-Kya hua Jay Kabir kyun asai sad baitha ho

Kabir-Vh kya hai na Geet ..kal Piya ka B'day hai aur Jay na usse kuch nahi socha ki voh usse gift de

Geet-Hmm

Jay-Kya hmm di..kuch socho nahi toh Piya mujhse naraz ho jayegi..

Geet-Listen ...Kal uske sare family members ko bolo ki usse vish na karai n jab voh hint de toh bhi respond karai..aur tum bhi yahi karna ...

Phir raath ko uske liye part throw karna ...bas

Jay-Thnx di ...yeh acha idea hai par yeh to Bro ne kiya tha T ki liye ..kuch different socho na

Geet-Okay ..usse kahin door log drive par le jao and then setup dinner 4 her then ...near a beach or something

Jay-thnx di

Geet-Aur Kabir tumhe kya hua

Kabir-Geet ...woh t hain na ..voh meri baat hi nahi sun rahi

Geet-KABIR ...MAKE HER Jealous...

Kabir-Thats great

Geet-ab mein chalti hoon

Meanwhile Khurana house

Maan's parents were waiting for him

Mr Khurana-Maan beta ...How was ur day??

Maan-Good dad..Deal final ...

Mrs Khurana-Very good beta..

Maan-Mom Dad Anjali kahan hai

Anjali-Mei yahan hoon bhaiya..

Maan-Bhaiya ...

Anjali-Haan

Maan-Usually tum mujhe hai bolti hoo par jab tumhe kuch chahiye hota hai ya upset ya angry hoti ho to mujhe bhaiya kehti ho...kya chaihye tumhe

Anjali-Nahi aisa kuch nahi hain

Maan-Anjali

Anjali-Okay !!Bhaiya. mujhe na ek car chahiye

Mr Khurana-Par beta ..ghar mein kitni cars hain ...

Anjali-dad pls

Maan-dad kya aap puri raat ghar mein a shanti chahte hain hain..nahin na toh iske baat sunne mein hi humara chain hain...lekin anjali ...i have one condition

Anjali-Haan

Maan-No late night driving without driver ..din mein tum chalana ...raat main driver ok

Anjali-Okay

Maan reached his room ...

He rembered his conversation with Geet through the window n thought jaldi se window band kar deta hoon nahi toh phir shuru ho jaygi

Maan freshend up n went 4 dinner

Handa Mansion

Geet reached her room

Geet-Shukar ha baba ji ka ...uski khekhi[window] band hain nahi toh phir shuru ho jata

Geet freshned up n went 4 dinner

After Dinner-Geet in her room

was reading her room when her phone rang

Voice-Can i speak 2 Geet Handa..this is Maan Singh Kurana

Geet-Tum ..tumhe mera number kaisai mila

Maan-mIL gaya

Geet-bolo kyun phone kiya

Maan-???

Geet-Oh hello ...muhmein laddo liya hai kya

Maan-Apni window kholo

Geet -Kyun

Maan-Kholo

Geet-Theek hai

As soon as she opened she got scared ...She saw a hand on her window

Geet-Kon hai

Maan on the line-Kya hua[it was actually his hand]

Geet-Koi hai meri window pe

Maan-Oh toh tum Darr gayi

Geet-Tum ho voh

Maan -Haan

Geet-Intna bura mazak ...u will pay for it...[she was very scared.. as it was dark she was scared of darkness n only seeing person's hand scared her more]

she ended the call n went to sleep mean while maan was busy laughing

Maan-Yeh tha Maan Singh Khurana ke sath panga lena kanatheja

He went2 his roomn went 2 sleep

Precap-Tumne meri gayi[car] thok di..u

Edited by zunaiba5 - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Part 5

Next Morning

Geet woke up at 8:00 pm ...She was half an hour late

Geet-Oh that Khurana !!!Aaj mein usse badla lungi ...

Geet freshned up and went downstairs

Jay-Good morning Di

Geet-Good morning Jay ...Kabir kahan haye???

Jay-Mat pucho di... voh apni t ke saat hain

Geet-Itni subah????

Jay-Kabir bata raha tha ki T morning walk pe jati hain aur aaj voh use apne saath le gayi hai...

Geet-Chalo choddo

Geet & Jay had breakfast

Geet got ready n Kabir still not arrive

Geet-Uff yeh Kabir...Mein khud hi chali jaoongi

Geet went and pick up her key for her yellow beetle ...It was her favourite ...

Geet[thought]-Aaj mein kya karoon usse sabak sikhane ki liye

Meanwhile KM

Breakfast table-

Maan came down

Mr Khurana-Arre Maan beta ...aao breakfast kar lo

Maan-Nahi ...mujhe meeting ke liye jana hain...Bye mom ..bye dad n bye Anjali

Maan went in his Audi tt

Geet was going to her office

MAAN was going to Geet's office

Maan-Uff aaj phir use jhelna padega ...

Maan reached the parking lot ..he parked the car

Meanwhile geet reached

She saw maan getting down from his car and in full speed she crashed into his car ..

Maan-U ..tumne meri gayi thok di ...bahar aao ...gayi chalini aati nahi

Geet while coming out-Aati hai aur yeh maine jaan ke kiya hain ...kal raat ka badla ...samjhe khurana

Maan-Tum ...tum na

Geet-Haan me

Maan -Geeet

Geet -Na na Maan gusse se dekho tumhara kya ho gaya hai ...tum khud ko geet bula rahai ho...tumhare nam maan ...mein geet hoon

and she left

Precap-Mujhe so dosti Karogi

Since i get very less comments ...here's a short part

Edited by zunaiba5 - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

awesome job! I read all the parts! please continue!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Thnx 4 comments

Part 6

Maan-Geet main tumhe dekh loonga

Geet-Toh dekho and she went

Maan[thought]-Meri car !!

Maan called his driver n told him 2 take the car 4 repair

Maan reached the office

As he was going and geet also was coming out and she was abt 2 fall when maan caught by her waist

Mahi...

Both came out of their eye-lock world and straighten themselves

The budget was finalized ..Maan had to say for some designs whereas Adi left

7:00 pm

The whole staff of geet's company left ..only maan and geet were there...They left at 10;30

They finished there work n were abt to leave when maan was realized that his car still hadn't come ...

Maan-mein ghar kaisai jaunga

Geet-Mujhe kya pata

Maan-Oh hello tumhari wajah se meri car thok gayi ...

Geet-Yeh badla tha...badla mein sab chalta hain ...vaise tum chao to mein tumhe chor sakta hoon

Maan-Jee nahi...Maan Singh Khurana lift wo bhi ladki se aur voh bhi tumse never...

Geet-Thik hai

Geet left

After sometime Maan also ...

Geet was going when she saw maan and said

Geet-Ek baar phir soch lo ab yahan tumhai na cab , na rickshaw na cycle ...kuch nahi milega ...raat har yahan rukna padega

Maan-Fine...I'll come with u ...

The whole journey both of them were silent..

At last they reached Maan's house

Maan-Geet kya mein tumse ek baat kahu

Geet-Kya

Maa-Mein janta hoon ki humari pehli mulakat mein jhadga hua tha ...kya tum mujhse dosti karogi???

Geet[shocked and then said ]-Theek hain

Maan-Bye

Geet-Bye

Geet parked her car was thinking maan ne mujhse dosti kar li..par kyun ...oh ho geet tum bhi ek dum jhalli hain...voh yeh baat janta hoga ke tum usse jeet..tumne jo aaj kiya hai ...voh koi nahi kar saka joagi issliye usne tumse dosti kar li..taki ladai khatam ho jai aur kisi ko patana chala ki voh mujhse haar gaya..par voh toh kabhi haar nahi maanta ...Chaddo meinu ki karna hai ...

Geet entered her mansion

Kabir-Geet ...yeh koi time hai ghar aanai ka ???

Geet-Kabir tum to mujhse baat mat karo

Kabir-Kyun ...

Geet-Subah se gayab ho ...na koi message ...na call aur na tum office aai aur nahi tumhari t???

Kabir-Sorry Geet

Geet-Bye

Kabir-Geet !!!!Geet!!!

Geet entered her room freshned up and went 4 food

Mean while Khuaran Mansion

Mr Khuran-Aa gai Maan beta ..kahan the

Maan-Kaam pe

Anjali came down running

Anjali-Mom dad ...aapko pata hai aaj mein kya dekha

Mr&Mrs Khurana-Kya

Anjai-Mom aapko pata hai aaj maine Maan bahai ko ek larki ki gayi mein aatai dekha ...aur boh usse baat bhi kar rahe the

Mr&Mrs Khurana-Maan kya yeh sach hai

Maan-Mom dad ...actually meri gayi kharab ho gayi thi isliye mein geet ke saath aya ...Voh mera project usi ke saath hai aur see the coincident dekho voh humare samne rehti hain

Anjali-OMG ...bhai aap uske barai me kasai jaantai ho

Maan-Kyunki voh meri friend hai ...

Anjali-Acha

Mrs Khurana-Acha bahot hua Maan ko pareshan karna ...Maan jao fresh ho jao

Maan went up

Meanwhile Geet's House

Geet-Jay how was ur day??

Jay-Di ..it was gud ...

Geet-How is Piya???

Jay-She is fine

Geet-Kabir this is the last time ...i'm forgiving u ...pls don't involve personal&proffessional life

Kabir-Ok

Geet finished her dinner and went to her room

Maan on the other her saw her n wrote on an art file

Maan-Hi

Geet-Hey

Promo-I have a girl frined

Edited by zunaiba5 - 13 years ago

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Nickname : Zee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

loved both updates!!!

totally awesome!

omg the precap???😲

plz continue soon.

i think you need to edit ur part 1 and have an index where people know what pages r each part...maybe that is why you are getting less comments because ppl don't know where ur updates r.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: zeynab111
loved both updates!!!
totally awesome!
omg the precap???😲
plz continue soon.

i think you need to edit ur part 1 and have an index where people know what pages r each part...maybe that is why you are getting less comments because ppl don't know where ur updates r.

Yes u r right ...

When do u want d update ????

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Ok ...There's a new twist coming up

But i assure u maan and geet will be together

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Part 7

Maan-so tell me wat do u like

Geet -i like chocolates,stuff toys,watching tv and listening 2 music and basketball

Maan-k

Geet -wat u do u like

Maan-I like cars and football

Geet-Oh

Suddenly Kabir and Jay entered GEET'S room thus conversation enterryupted

Jay & Kabir -Geet we came to say good night

Geet hugged them and said -goood nigt

Meanwhile Maan was staring at Geet

Suddenly he came out of world and thought- maan stop staring ...control

Geet-So maan why me as ur friend??

Maan-Geet..U knw wat when u gave me a lift ..i thought that u would scream at me or shout or trouble me bt u didn't ...infact it was very kind of u 2 give me a lift ...n i thought that if we continue fighting we won't be able 2 do our office works as there will be rivalry there aswelll..

Geet-Yes u r right

Maan-who were they???one i knw Kabir ...ur brother the other

Geet-He's also my brother

Maan-K

Maan's phone rang and before answering he wrote

Maan-I'll be back

Geet-Fine

After 5 minutes Maan came back '

Geet-So who was it ...

Maan-I have a gf

Geet-Who u n she started laughing

Maan could see her laughing through the window n Mahi !!!