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Posted: 13 years ago
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Finally exams r over so here's an update ...hope it meets ur expectations !!!

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Part 14


Maan-Chalo'i gotta go for lunch

Geet-Bye '.chalo ache hain 'kuch der hi sahi par meri kissi se baath hi huyi na '.


Khurana Mansion


Dinning Table


Mr Khurana-Beta tumhara din kaisa tha'

Maan-Theek tha

After Lunch

Maan was on his way 2 his room when a servant bumped to him and all the water fell on his shirt


Servant -Sorry Sir

Maan-Theek hai 'tum jaao



Maan reached his room and took of his shirt n vest 'he forgot to close the curtain'.[oops] unknown to the fact that geet was at him '.she was just looking here n there when her eyes fell on the shirtless man'.She looked at his perfect body with abs


Geey[thought]-He is so hot'par vale ne banaya hain bari frusat se'tabhi toh itna handsome hain '.ek minute yeh mein kya sock rah hewn'geet man is ur frnd and plus he's in a relationship'..he's not vacante'she turned around '.


Maan-i need to rest 'i'll go to sleep


Geet on the other hand also went to sleep 'bt in her dreams that she's touching a shirtless man '..She just sat up


Geet-Uff sapne 'mein bhi maan 'main kya karoon ..TV dekti hoon


She opened the television n the some serial was coming


Herione-Pls 'maan' jaao na '.

Hero-nahi

phir maan

She called Jay

Geet-Hi

Jay-Hi 'sup

Geet-nothing u

Jay 2 his gf-Pls mein yeh boquet bhi le aya 'maan' jaao na

Geet-Kya

Jay -Voh kumse nahi ..mein piya se keh raha tha'voh upset ho gayi hain

Geet-Kyun

Jay-couz i fought with her 'for some stupid reason 'aur ab mien uses manane ki koshish kar rah hewn 'par voh nahi 'maan' rah

Geet-Theek hai bye

Jay-bye


Yahan bhi maan 'me pagal ho jaongi

Chaddo gane sunti hoon


She opened her ipod and listened 2 some songs n went 2 sleep...


At 6:00 '.Outside Geet's room


Kabir-Geet darvaza kholo

No response

Kabir-Geet

No response

Kabir called one of the servant

Kabir-Sunno yahan aao

Servant-Ji sir

Kabir - Geet ke kamre ki spare key do jaldi

Servant-Ji

Servant came back with the key after some time '

Kabir opened the door 2 see geet sleeping with the earphones'

Kabir very carefully took out the earplugs n said -Geet utho

No response

Kabir-Geet

NO response

Kabir in a higher voice-Geet

Geet woke up with a jerk said-Chilaya kyun me uth sati

Kabir-Tum dehire se jgaya toh i got no response '.

Geet-Tum andar kaisai aaye '

Kabir-Spare key

Geet-Oh 'Jay kahan hai 'kahi nazar nahi aa raha

Kabir-Girlfriend ke paas'

Jay while making entery-gf nazi tum donna ke saath

Geet-Chalo

The trio talked for a while when kabob said

Kabir-Chalo bro'fresh ho jaate'hain

Jay-Ok

Kabir-we'll be back

Geet-okay


Kabir&Jay left n Geet's phone beeped ..it was man


Maan -look up

Geet-yes sir

Geet looked up 'maan wrote kya kar rah ho

Geet wrote - i was taking 2 kabir n jay'.now they went n with u

Maan-Yes 'so how's ur foot??

Geet-better 'kal office jaaongi

Maan-k


Before they could continue further Dadimaa came inside


Dadi-Maan bete

Maan-Dadi ma 'he took her blessings

Dadi maa-Kya kar rahe ho

Maan-Voh kuch nahi

Bt dadimaa saw geet with a board in her hand

Dadimaa-Mujhe pata hain '.tumhare kuch nahi ka kya matlab hain

Maan-Dadimaa

Dadima-Maan bete '

Dadimaa left the room n maan wrote


Maan -sorry dadimaa came thats why

Geet-No thats okay

Maan-So u tell .when will the project finish

Geet-Project'.oh ya project ..1 week

Maan-okay

Suddenly Servant interrupted in man's room [kabab mien haddi]



precap-Mahi '.Mahi


Edited by zunaiba5 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
lovely update so geet saw maan shirtless 😳
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: roopsie

Please continue and give it a title.If you are sending PM's please send me as we!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!ll

I agree with you .😃 same here
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
wow..amazing update.
thx for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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pls give time to read all parts after that i will comment.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
Fab update! thanks 4 pm please incl direct link to ur dis in ur pm. Just read all parts nw! Loving this FF!Please update soon n pm wen u do!
Edited by khwaishfan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice update
Poor Geet, thinking about maan is very addictive
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 15


Servant-Sir 'aapko neeche bula rahe hain'dinner ke liye

Maan-Theek hain '.main aa raha hoon ..

Maan 2 geet-Sorry geet 'hav 2 gu 4 dinner

Geet-Its okay u go

Maan left '.

After sometime Geet got up from her bed n made her way 2 downstairs

When she was on the stairs 'Kabir asked


Kabir-geet tum yahan

Geet-Kyun nahi aa sakti

Kabir-Nahi aa sakti ho 'after all its ur house

Geet-Correction ..its our house

Jay who was came out of the room and saw geet held her n both of them came down

Kabir-Nahi 'voh mujhe laga ki tumhara pair abhi tak theek nahi hua

Geet-No its much better.infact mien kale office aa rah hoon

Kabir-Oh '

Jay-Chalo dinner karte hain mujhe bahot bhuk lagi hain '

Geet-ok


The trio had dinner


Khurana mansion


Mr Khurana to Dadimaa-Ma 'how was ur trip

Dadimaa-Pretty comfortable beta

Anajli-Chalo acha hain ki aap aa gayi nahi toh aaj maan bhai bahut derr se aaatai.

Maan-Anjaliii

Anjali-Haan bro

Dadimaa-Acha bahot hui ladai ab shanti se dinner kar lijye '.

Maan -Ji

They also had dinner '


Later Maan in his room


Maan[self thought]-shukar hain dadimaa ne geet ke bare mien kuch nahi kaha 'man u have 2 be more careful '

Maan went to his window


Geet in her room


Geet came back from the washroom in a nighty with little damp hair '.She was going to close her curtains when she saw maan'.She just smiled 'Maan also saw her n eyelock '.



Mahi Mahi ''..Mahi


It geet who comes of the eyelock first n says good night thru sms

Maan -2 u too :)

Maan n Geet both went to their beds n went to sleep 'lost in thoughts of each other


Next morning'Saturday morning[half day]


The alarm's constant ringing was troubling geet's sleep'finally she woke up and closed the arm'she changed into her clothes for playing basketball ..she walked along the path listening 2 her earphones'


meanwhile man's room


Here Maan got up and had a shower n went downstairs 2 play his game '..he walked out of the mansion n saw geet'.


Maan-Hi

Geet-Hi

Maan-How come so early' i thought ur foot hasn't recovered..

Geet-No my foot is now okay '.n i'll be going 2 the office '.actually i came 2 play basketball 'wbu

Maan-Footabll

Geet-oh ..okay see u around bye

Maan-bye


Maan left bt geet stood still n saw him till he disappeared '..

she felt as someone was snatching her soul'she slowly walked back 2 her house



Geet's house -8;00 am dining area


Jay-all set for office haan di '

Geet-Ya'.so how's college going on

Jay-awsum

Kabir-awsum toh isse lagaiga kyunki yeh aur piya sath rehte hain

Jay-Jaise to t ko dekhta bhi nahi hain

Kabir-u r so lucky 2 have a caring girlfriend '.t voh toh mujhse sare karma karvati hain '..kabir bring that for me '.bring this for me 'ache voh sab chod maine hain ki jab bhi geet ka boyfriend ho ta toh

Jay-Voh toh hamesha insecure feel karta

Geet-Voh kyun

Kabir-Geet shayad tumhe pata nahi ki jab tum office aati ho toh sare male employees tumhe ghoorte hain''ghoorte hain tumhe 'even if u wear indian clothes 'sab kehe hain geet mamis so beautiful

Geet just smiled

Kabir-Chalo 'we'll be late 4 office 'get ready '

Geet-Yes i'll be back n she went 2 her room

Jay-Main bhi college ke liye nikalta hoon

Kabir-ok be dude

Jay-Bye

After 5 mins geet came down and kabob and geet left 4 office..


Geet's cabin


Nitya-Good morning mam

Geet-Good morning..any appointments 4 day???

Nitya-No mam 'bt u have to go an orphanage

Geet-Yes'..when is it scheduled

Nitya-Mam after lunch 'mam aapko khurana constructions jana hain koi problem aa gayi hain

Geet-okay '

Nitya left ''


Geet called up Kabir 2 tell him that she'll be leaving for kc '


Geet-Kabir 'where r u ??

Kabir-Voh

Geet-Voh kya

Kabir-Geet voh mein t ke liye bouquet lene gaya tha 'n i have shop for her

Geet-wat ''r u her slave??

Kabir didn't say anything

Geet-Kabir just come back

Kabir-T naraz ho jayegi

Geet-I'll speak 2 her


Geet called T in her cabin



Geet-T

T-Yes Geet

Geet-Mam 2 u 'mujhe geet sirf mere bhai bulate hain'i am your senior

T-Yes

Geet-Where hav u sent my brother???

T-Voh actually i have 2 go for a party so i sent kabir to buy clothes for me

Geet-why can't u go'

T-Eww kitna tact lagger t shopping karne eww rah hain 'thats not my standard

Geet-Listen t Kabir is not ur slave that u can ask him anything to do '.He has a line of girls waiting for him 'n just because he loves that doesn't mean u'll treat him like this '

T-I also love him

Geet-Wat have done for him uptill now ?

T had no answer

Geet-well u r just after his money

Kabir came inside -Yes Geet u r right '.ice sir paisa chahiye

T-Pls kabir give me one chance 'i'll prove it 2 u that i love u

Geet-K


Geet left


Outside maan's cabin maan , aparna and the receptionist were standing n apart was busy shouting at her n man tried 2 stop bt no use


Aparna-How dare u ??Mujhe mere bf se nahi milne diya

Receptionist-Par mamma 'sir ne kaha tha ki agar kissi ko unse milna hain toh appointment lene paregi

Aparna-Oh 'toh mujhe maan se milne ki liye tum jaisi receptionist se appointment lene paregi '

Receptionis-Mam voh aaj sir ke assistant nazi aye hain issliye sir ne mujhe kaha tha

Maan-Aparna leave it 'chalo andar chalte[he had decided 2 brake up with her ]

Aparna-No i am not going 2 leave it 'aaj take kiss ne Aparna Singhania ko aane se mana nahi kiya 'aur tum u r fired

Voice-U r hired

Everyone turned around to see who said it n that voice belonged 2 Geet

Geet-If u fire her then i hire her

Aparna -Who r u????

Geet-I am Geet Handa'owner of Handa company'

Aparna just gave an annoyed look

Geet turned 2 maan-Maan mujhe yahan kyun bulaya hain

Maan-Voh actually hume kuch problem aa rah thi

Geet-Haan bolo

Maan-[just wanted 2 see her so the problem was an excuse]-Yeah chalo mien tumhe dekata hoon

Geet-Okay 'one minute '.she turned towards the receptionist

Geet-wats ur name ??

Receptionist-Priyanka

Geet-Priyanka u wait 4 me 'n i'll take u the office n she left with man


Maan's cabin-


Maan-Geet actually the thing is that'.

Geet-That

Maan-Geet 'look at the error in the blueprint

Geet just looked in the blueprint

Geet-No man 'it is not the error 'actually i want it like this

Maan-Why

Geet-Becouz i don't want the house 2 be small n squeezed up

Maan-Yeah

Geet-Okay thats it 'btw who was that who was shouting on Priyanka

Maan-That is Aparna 'gf

Geet-Poor u

Maan-Yeah '

Geet-Okay thats it 'i'll go now

Maan-Okay [little sadly]

Geet-Kya hua ..

Maan-Kuch nahi ab mujhe bhi apne saath le chalo

Geet-Kyun

Maan-Kyunki aparna phir shuru jo jayegi '.

Geet just laughed n left with Priyanka




Precap-She was leaving n he was entering the house'both bumped into each other 'n she was bat 2 fall when he caught her'.eyes met and watt she saw n his eyes was love only for her ...


Edited by zunaiba5 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update dear loved it
😡 aparna good that maan has decided to break up
precap is dreamy geet seeing love for her in maan's eyes
plz update the next part soon dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
Awesome love it..continue soon
and thank for the pm.

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