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Posted: 13 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: miss_giggles

Do continue

Love reading it
the precap was shocking

Don't worry maan n geet will be togther
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 8

Coming up soon
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Edited by zunaiba5 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
awesome update!
can't wait to read the next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
nice concept...love how they interact through window...please continue soon and add me to ur PM list.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 8

Maan drove to his office ...He was greeted by the staff members ...He went straight to his cabin ...He called Adi...Adi came up in moments

Maan-Adi ...Aaj koi meetings hai
Adi-Yes sir...Voh Mr Sharma ki meeting 30 minutes mein hain
Maan-Okay...tum jao jake dekho ki sab kuch theek hai ki nahi
Adi-Yes sir and he diappered
Maan's phone rang
Maan-Hi Apz
Voice-Maan Apz nahi Aparna ...Apz doesn't suit me...pls don't me call that
Maan-Acha ok ...
Aparna-Dinner at 8 sharp...u'll be there na
Maan-Ha
Aparna-So wat r doing
Maan-Talking to my gf
Aparna-Oh
Maan-Aparna I have to go ...I have a meeting
Aparna-Bye

Maan cut the call and relaxed on his chair while geet's image flashed in his mind...He opened his eyes and started doing some work

Meanwhile Handa Haveli

Geet woke up late ...She loked at the time in her phone 9:00

Freak ...main itna late kaisai so sakti hoon -She thought

She hurriedly got up and changed went downstairs only to find servants

She left office and to her bad luck there was a traffic jam on the way...
Finally she reached her office ..
She was greeted by the staff
She went to her cabin and Nitya came and told her appointments for the day

Meanwhile Khurana Constructions

After some time Adi came and Maan n Adi went 4 the meeting
The whole presentation was given By Maan ...Mr.Sharma was impressed ...Very happily they agreed they left
Adi also left
Maan was in his conference room when he saw Geet
Maan-Geet tum yahan
Geet-Ha maan ...
Maan-Tum yahan kyun ayi ho
Geet-Tumhe dekhne

Suddenly Geet vanished...Maan only realized it was his hallucination
Maan made way to his cabin ...inside his cabin he saw geet again on the sofa

Geet-Main kabse aap ka wait kar rahi hoon kaha hain aap
Maan-Voh Main meeting ke liye gaya tha

Geet vanished

Meanwhile Geet's office
Geet called Kabir in

Kabir-Good morning
Geet-Good morning ...voh Khuarana's ka project shuru ho gaya na
Kabir-haan aur 2 weeks main complete bhi ho jaega ...
Geet-okay kabir
Kabir went as t came to look for him

At 7:30 pm

Maan-Main chalta hoon nahi toh Aparna phir shuru ho jaegi
Maan reached the restaurant
Aparna and Maan hugged bt somewhere in his heart he maan didn't like it ...
Aparna-Maan on time haan
Maan-Kya karen ...kisko marna hain
Aparna-Voh to hain
Lets order

Meanwhile Geet left for her house and her car broke down
Geet-Dam ...ab main kya karoon
Maan left for his house wid aparna ...he dropped her home and was pasing by when he saw Geet ...
He thought he was hallucinating
Geet saw him and called him and he answered
Geet-Hi Maan
Maan-[ thought Maan its musical from her mouth ...its sound so sweet ]Hi Geet
Geet-Kahan ho
Maan-CP
Geet-Main bhi
Maan-Kahan
Geet-Apni car reverse caro
Maan did as geet sid and saw geet
Maan-Sorry main dekha nahin
Geet-Its okay ...uss din maine tumhe lift di ...kya tum mujhe aaj lift doge
Maan-Hop in

thnx 4 reading








Edited by zunaiba5 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
awesome update...👏
eagerly waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37

part 9



Geet inside the car-thnx

Maan-Its okay ...

Geet-So how was ur day???

Maan-pretty good urs...

Geet-It was just fine

Geet reached her house

Geet-Thnx 4 lift Maan

Maan-Its okay

Geet-Bye

Maan-Bye

Geet went inside while Maan parked his car..

Inside Geet's Mansion

Geet-Kabir,Jay kahan gai sab

Kabir&Jay-yahan

Geet-Acha

Geet to Ramu[servant]-Ramu Khana lagao ...

Ramu-Ji madam

Geet to her brothers-Aur tum dono..bhi fresh ho jao

Jay&Kabir-Ji...

Jay-Vaise Geet aj hum film dekhe..

Geet-Kyun...kal college nahi hain

Jay-Oh ho di Kal Sunday hai ..

Kabir-Mene T aur Piya ko bhi bulaya hai

Geet-Oh ho ...planning pehle se

Kabir-Haan

Geet-Ok

Get-Theek hain...film dekhte hain ...

Geet went upstairs got freshned up when Maan wrote ...

Maan-So abhi kya kar rahi ho

Geet wrote-Dinner

Maan-Phir

Geet-Movie...ghar pe

Maan-oh

Geet-Why don't u join us ...

Maan-No

Geet-Arre Maan mere dono bhai ki gfs bhi aa rahi hain ...mein bore ho jaaongi

Maan-Okay

Geet smiled and then left for dinner

Meanwhile Khurana Mansion

Dinning Table

Maan wasn't having anything as he ate wid Aparna...

Mrs Khurana-Maan beta why arent u eating

Anjali-Wo kya hai na ma ...bhai dinner kar chuke hain...Aparna ke saath

Mrs Khurana-Oh

Maan-Anjali Tumhe kaisa pata ..

Anjali-bhai mein aur meri friends bhi vahan the

Maan-Ok

Maan-Mom,dad aur Anjali me bahar jaa raha hoon

Mrs Khuarana-Kahan

Maan-Vo geet hain na ..meri friend uske ghar me movie dekhne

Mrs Khuarana-Theek hai


Meanwhiel Handa's Mansion

Dining Table

After dinner

Geet-Kabir ...Jay...tumhari gfs kahan hain

Jay&Kabir-Aa rahi hain

Geet-Vaise mera bhi ek friend aa raha hain

Kabir&Jay-Kon

Geet-Maan

Kabir-Par geet ...tum toh usse kitna naraz hote the

Geet-Yeah bt now we r frnds

Kabir-Okay

Precap-Mahi !!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
awww why did u end it at that part...
me can't wait for the next part...
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39

Part 10


Geet's dress


http://pic.tradeage.com/lady-homewear-ladies-night-suit-gowns-night-robe-a-set-nightwear-lingerie-sleepwear-117541.jpeg


Suddenly the bell rang


Geet-I'll see it

She opened the door to find Maan

Geet-Hi

Maan-Hi

Geet-Come in

Maan came inside and she introduced Maan to Jay


Geet to Jay-Jay meet my friend and my client Maan

Geet to Maan-And maan this is my younger brother Jay n Kabir u have met before

Jay-Hi dude

Maan-Hi


After some time the bell rang ...It was T and Piya


T's dress-http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/198/madhf.jpg/

Piya's dresshttp://2.bp.blogspot.com/-SXVqJFBqamo/Te7y6_bevRI/AAAOk/6RCgfv_USiU/s1600/Sukirti+Kandpal+at+Meethi+Chhoorii.jpg



T and Piya came n were shocked to see maan


Geet-T and piya meet my client n frined Maan singh Khurana


T-OMG !!!Maan Singh Khurana...He's so hot

Kabir was jealous

Jay to Kabir-Dekh dekh teri gf ...use kaisai dekh rahi hain

Piya-T I can't belive ...he's the most elgible bachleor ...He is dreammy

Kabir to Jay-Ab to dekh kya ho raha hai

Geet-Chalo chalo film dekhte hain


On a sofa maan and geet t and kabir and piya and jay were sitting...t and piya sat in such a way so that they can also talk

They were watching a movie with dim lights popcorn n soft drinks [sorry couldn't think of one ]

Suddenly a horror scene came n geet held maan very tightly and hid her face n chest while maan was happy...Geet released hereself from Maan when her and Maan's eyes met onece again ...Mahi Mahi


They came out of they're world


Maan[thought]-Pls ek baar aur horror scene aa jai...phir geet...wait wait to kya soch raha hai maan


After a few hours the movie finished


Jay-Movie finished ...

After some time Maan,Piya and T left

Geet went straight to her bed and went to sleep

Next Day

Geet woke up at 7:00and went to play Basketball

At 8:00 she came back to her room took a bath

She took a out skinny jeans a white tshirt and a waistcoat and wore it…..

Breakfast Table

Geet - Good morning

Jay-Good morning

Kabir-Good morning


Meanwhile Khurana Mansion


Mr Khurana -Suno ….Maan kahan hai

Servant-Sir ….Maan sir abhor so rah hain

Mr.Khurana-Theek hai …tum jao

Servant-Ji

Mr Khurana-Aaj kya hogaya Maan ko abhi tak so raha hai

Anjali-Voh kya hai na dad …Bhai ne bahot der se ghar aaye ….isliye so raha hain

Mr.Khuarana -Ok

At 9:00

Maan's room

Mrs Khuarana-Maan beta …utho

Maan-Mom bas 2 minute aur

Mrs Khurana-Beta 9 baj rahe hain

Maan-Kya ….suddenly he woke up

Mrs Khurana -Chalo beta …jaldi se fresh ho jao …neche nashte ki liye aa jao

Maan-Theek hai

At 9:30 Maan came down

Mr Khurana-Morning beta

Maan -Morning dad


Handa's Mansion

Geet-Kabir jaldi karo ….office ke liye late ho raha

Kabir-Haan Geet aa raho hoon

Geet-Pichle aadhe ghante se sun rahi hoon jaldi aao

Kabir-Geet ….finally he came

They both left for the office

Geet and Kabir entered the office and they were greeted by the office people

Geet called Nitya

Geet-Nitya …watt r my appointments for the day

Nitya-Ma'am aapko aaj site pe jana hai

Geet-Oh haan

At around 5:00 Geet left for the site ….

The site was a three hour drive ….she finally reached there at 8:00…Maan was also there

During the site inspection everything was fine ….Both were bat 2 leave when Geet's foot got twisted and she fell

Geet-Aah mera pair[foot]

Maan-Kahan chot lagi hain

Geet-Yahan

Maan-Someone called the doctor

The manager called the doctor…doctor came n examined geet's foot

Dr-Ibke pair me moch aa gay hain …she won't be able to walk for a few days

Maan-Thank u doc

Dr left ...

Geet-Main ghar kasai jaaongi

Maan-I'll drop u ….U give me ur car keys n i'll drive

Geet -okay

Suddenly Maan's phone rang…it was aprana

Aparna-Hi baby ….we're meeting today na

Maan -no …apart …actually i'm bit busy ….

Aparna-Ok bye

Maan-bye

Geet-Its okay Maan …u go i'll call Kabir or Jay

Maan-Geet …it will take them three hours …it'll be very late …and u r more important

Geet was touched by Maan's words

For a moment she was lost in him

Maan-Lets go

Geet -okay

Geet tried to get up bt ended falling down …

Maan saw it and pick Geet in his arms ….


Precap-

Edited by zunaiba5 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hayye luved the update...
can't wait for the next part!

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