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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
it's awesome dear...
itni jaldi kyu end kar dia yaar...😭
i want an epilouge dear
...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Okay guys ...since u want so the epilogue is here ...


i hope u'll like it ...


epilogue


Maan and geet got married very grandly ,media , business were present 2 see the wedding of the most eligible bachelor and the most attractive business girl..and before their marriage jay and piya and t and kabir also got married as geet wanted that when she goes 2 maan someone should look after her brothers



After 1 year


Maaneet were snuggled up to each other ''they were in each others embrace 'It was Geet was woke up 1st 'today is the day when they got married 'everyone witnessed their marriage which was no less than a fairytale '..


Geet looked around and she soon had a red blush she remembered how maan had tortured her the whole night '..she looked at her husband who was sleeping peacefully with a smile on his face 'she quietly got out of his hold n went to take a shower .. she came out of the shower n wore a churidaar in red 'she then went 2 wake maan up '


Geet-Maan

Maan-hmm

Geet-Uthiye na

Maan-hmm

Geet-kya hmm laga rakha hai'Maan

Maan-hmmm

Geet-bus hmm karenge aur kuch nahi karenge

Maan just held her held n she landed on his chest

Geet-Yeh aap kya kar rahe hain

Maan-Tum hi nai toh kaha tha kuch karte hai nahi toh kuch kar rah hoon 'he said this while playing wid her hair ..

Geet-Mera matlab tha uthene ka

Maan-Lo uth toh gay hoon he said this while rubbing his nose wid her

Geet-very good 'ab jay fresh ho jaiye

Maan-Geet this is very bad

Geet-Kya

Maan-sara mood kharab kar diya '

Geet just laughed - jaiye

Maan came out of the shower while geet was waiting 4 him '

they're abt 2leave when maan hugged her from behind n said

Maan-kya geet anniversary ke din ek kiss bhi nahi

Geet-aapko yaad tha

Maan-haan yaad hoga na

Maan's phone rang 'after sometime he held geet n said

Maan-Geet i hav 2 go 4 an imp meeting in the office

Geet-okay [disappointed]

Maan-I'll come home early okay n then we'll go out okay

Geet[excited]-okay

Maan got ready to go office

Maan-Chalein

Geet-Maan ek min

Geet just kissed him on the lips slowly it became a passionate one n they broke off 4 air 'they just had a look 2 see whether everything was fine or not

They both proceeded downstairs


Mr&Mrs Khurana-Good morning maan geet

Maaneet-good morning ma papa'

Anjali-Goood morning bro bhabhi

Maaneet-Good morning anjali


Both had just started their breakfast when Anjali said


Anjali-Subah subah 'hmm lage raho

Maan-Kya matblab

Anjali-Matlab mein aapke kamre mein aai thi jab aap dono ahem ahem

Geet just turned as red as a tomato '.

Mr& Mrs Khurana-Beta here's our gift 4 u '.

Maaneet-Thnk u


After breakfast :


Maan-Geet chalo tumhare ghar chalte hain '.

Geet-Theek hai

Both went to Geets house where everyone was present

The were wished by everyone present over there 'geet got a call from her friend n she just excused herself'.


Maan-Jay,Piya,Kabir,T edhar aao

The four gathered around man

Maan-Plan yaad hain na'tum logon ko pata hai tumhe kya karna hai

The four of them-Haan

Maan-Aur haan geet ko yeh baat nahi pata chalni chahiye '..

Four-Ok


The four separated n gets called ended '..


Kabir n jay also left 4 office ...


Maan-Okay i shd go 4 office

Geet-bye

After maan went


Piya-Di aaj ke din bhi office

Geet-haan he has some imp meeting 'he'll return soon

T-Oh



The girls got busy in their own things

Geet received many calls '.for congratulating her


Geet got a call frm Mrs Khurana


Geet-Ji maa

Mrs khurana-beta we'll be going out 'ur papa,me n anjali so u stay at ur house okay otherwise u'll get bored

Geet-Okay

Mrs khurana-bye

It was time 4 lunch

The girls had lunch


Later in Geets room the three talked

Piya-I think di u shod rest after all u have 2 go wid jeej

T-n we knw watt happens when we wives go out wid husband n she winks

The girls recollected all the times said wid their husbands

All of them came back from their world


Geet goes 2 sleep



She woke up at 6:00 '.She wondered y maan hadn't come '.she called up the servant of km 2 find out


Geet-Hello 'Maan aaye

Servant-Nahi madam '

Geet-Acha ma ,papa aur anjali

SeRVANT-Ji voh bhi nahi aaye


She wondered watt was taking so long


She heard a knock on her door '.It was the servant informing her that Kabir n Jay have come '.She got freshened up n went downstairs 'All of them talked :

Slowly each one of them left geet by making some excuses ''.


Geet is now alone in her room '


7:00-Maan didn't come

8:00-Maan didn't come

9:00-Maan finally come


Maan in his room

lagta hai mera plan kaam kar raha hain

he opened the window 2 see an agry geet sitting ...


He immediately texted her saying her 2 look at him '


She raised her eyes n saw a board which said


'I am sorry Jaan'


Geet took out her file n wrote its okay n kept her hand in d middle


Maan was happy bt his happiness vanished when she removed the finger it said'its not okay'


He wrote 'Pls'

She wrote 'no'

Then maan disappered


Maan ran to Geets house n switched off the lights of Geet's house


Geet wondered where has maan gone


and then lights went off



Geet got scared

And then she couldn't see any thing'some one blindfolded her

Next was she was against a strong chest'she knew it was maan


Geet-Maan mujhe neeche utariye aur mere blindfold kholiye

Maan-Nahi

Maan-Geet


Maan pushed the door of km and he put geet down removed her blindfold ..all of sudden red roses were falling 'then there was a carpet of roses 'she raised her eyes n saw all here veryone she knew were standing there 'they stood in such a way that they formed 'Happy Anniversary 2 Maaneet'Next 2 them was a picture of them fighting,them working together,talking,then there was a confession pic , then there was there wedding picture ..

Geet was shocked n overwhelmed 'she couldn't express her happiness n just hugged maan who was standing next 2 her admiring her 'when they hugged voices of whistles,clapping etc could be heard'they had 2 end the hug 'the party began 'both of them danced , they cut the cake


After the party all the guess had left ..only geet's brothers and their wives n the people of km were they


Jay-Di'.Did u like it

Geet-Haan

Piya-Our leaving u was an excuse

Geet-Oh

Kabir-N this mastermind was

T-Jeej

Maan-N 4 this they also helped me '.

Mrs Khuarana-Aur beta hamra mandir jana 'yeh bhi ek idea tha

Mr Khurana -Jao maan aur geet '.apne farmhouse jaao

Anjali-Akele

Mrs Khurana-Haan

Anjali 2 Maan-Bhai chance mil gaya


Both left 4 farmhouse'Geet took the gift n then went wid maan


Farmhouse -Bedroom


Maan was busy in reading a magazine when a wet & hot geet came out of the bath room wrapped in a red towel'maan kept the book aside n whistled n then said -hi sexy 'He then came close 2 her n touched her arm n acted as if he got burnt


Maan-Geet'u r so hot'u burnt me

Geet-Arre 'bechare mr dashing ,handsome,attractive


Then suddenly man attacked on geet's lips and his hands went towards her towel he unwrapped the towel 'then he broke the kiss 'held her in his arms n pounced on her '.


After 1 hour


1 satin sheet was covering Maaneet 'Geet's head was on Maan's chest '.


Maan -Geet mera gift

Geet-Haan yeh lijye 'she handed the gift 2 him


Maan opened it n found a cd of rhymes n an ipod


Maan-Geet 'yeh sab kiya

Geet-Maan ab bache ko lori toh aapko sunana hoga 'mein kitni baar sunaongi..aur yeh earplugs ab use kariye ga jab bache ke rone ki avaaz aaygi

Maan[not realising]-U r pregnant

Geet noded

Maan then realized n jumped wide joy-omg 'geet u r pregnant 'thats gr8 news 'i love u

Geet-I love u too

Maan was unto some naughtiness '.he came closer 2 geet

Geet understood his intentions

Geet-Yeh aap kya kar rahe hain

Maan-Tumhe pata hain

Geet-Haan lekin 'kis khushi mein

Maan-1 for giving baby gift '2 u look eatable '.3 i am in the mood


And once again the session began


Anjali was right-Maan ko chance mil gaya


Edited by zunaiba5 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
it's awesome dear...😊
loved i
t..😊...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
awesome epilogue. wish to read more. plz begin with some new ff.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
Hi thanks 4 d apm n awesum epilogue! Loved it n dis FF1 Sad it has ended! Wen u write something new...do pm me !thanks !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
awesome one...
loved it...looking forward 4r more works for u😊😊😊😊😊😊😊...
thz ff was really good👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏...
Edited by geetsweet - 13 years ago

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