FF Pyar ka ehsaas Maan and Geet.Part 48..pg190 - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thx 4 da pm 😊 & ur doin a good job wid da story..but i feel sad 4 geet cuz maan iz still not over his past & doesnt even care 4 geet...she iz left 2 take care of krishna and maan.. well hope things turn out well 4 her & update soon 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: rockin_gal

Thx 4 da pm 😊 & ur doin a good job wid da story..but i feel sad 4 geet cuz maan iz still not over his past & doesnt even care 4 geet...she iz left 2 take care of krishna and maan.. well hope things turn out well 4 her & update soon 😃


Thanxs.. Since these are the intro part..they are little long and draggy..
Let me know if u have any suggestions
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Posted: 15 years ago
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omg i loveit..
plzz update the next part soonnn
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I am loving it.. pls cont. soooooooooooooooon :)

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loved it...new story!!!!👍🏼


add me to ur pm list!!!update soon!!
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Great Yaar!!! I really liked it 😃
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👏👏👏👏.. Nice track Muskan ... Waititing for the next update !!!
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Part 3

geet heart starts beating faster..and faster..!!! there was a cold breezs flowing across..she is feeling shy, scared, she was feeling too shy to look up and face his bare wide chest..what she confounded was the almost irresistible temptation..
maan eyes was filled with anger..he almost pressed her againt him...and there was silence...it was breezy out there..maan bare chest was just right warmth for geet..
but she was so scared to even open her eyes or mind to even feel any thing!!!
Maan - whom do u thing u are??? wat are u doing in my room?? wat have u done to my room..
maan trying hard to get a eye contact..but can barely see her face...her hair was covering her features..
Maan tried to get hold of her...while she just got scared and sat on the chair..with her head down
Geet - ji mein..ji...mein...woh!!! mein..
Maan - ek sentences to tum se teehke se bola jata nahien hain.. tum aise jeeti kasi ho?
Geet tears roll down her eyes..
Maan turns his back at her...says.. don't ever step into my life..


tum meri zindagi ka hisa benein ke koshish bhi mat karna...
never ever show me your face again
Geet - haiyo raba mein kanha jayogi?
Maan - shouts ..tumhe kahin jano ko nahin kaha mein ne.. tum yaha rehsakte ho..lakein make sure u presence is not felt!!!
Geet - aap itne zore se mat boliya ..krishna utjayaga..
Maan walks near the bed and sees that krishna is sleeping there..peacefull in mid of all flowers..
Maan was amused ..how he was here ...but just kissed his forehead and walked out to the study...seeing krishna..
maan was fine..and his temperment was all gone..

geet sleeps next to krishna..

next day geet wakes up with krishna wiating next to her ..saying mom..I am hungry...mom uttoo..
she gets up..half sleep walks to the kitchen ...
Maan is ready having his breakfast!!! she could feel him around.. just before entering!!! she just stops..
Geet - krishna..chalo phele ready hote hain then I will make some nice halwa for u...
they both turn and go back to krishna's room..start getting ready..
maan walks to krishnas room to say bye..
geet sees him coming and rushes to the bathroom.. she just avoiding to face him..after wat happened last night..

Maans checks krishnas timetable.. checks his bag..checks his homework..
geet just admires how maan is getting into each and every detail related to krish.
then he calls for the servant and tells her to drop him to school since he will be travelling
Geet-babji..travelling..yek kaha jah rehain???
krish and maan share a very cute little exchange of words..
and krish demands maan a list of things to get when he coming back..

as maan leaves ...daadi ma enters..
daadi asks geet..where is maan gone so early...
geet does'nt seem to know...
daadi walks into their room..looking at bed all being disturbed..she assumes that things are normal b/w them
Daadi and geet drop krish to school..and daadi helps geet admision in a college to finish her studies!! daadi also helps geet in getting indenpdent..
gets her an account, phone, car, also helps her with basic things in the city ...
so much happening in her life..she almost forgets that she married!!


Geet requests daadi if she can dress up simple to college since she does'nt want to be Mrs Geet ..among all her friends.. daadi agrees but requested to wear the ring at least!!

Maan is been quite busy travelling...
Geet kept herself very busy with her college and krish at home..

life is smooth..they don't seem to bump into each other..geet delibrately avoids any confrontation with him!! her bond with krish really becomes strong!! they are more like partners in crime..always upto some mischief
its been like 2 years now.. geet completes her graduation..
geet is very happy since she did well and got into a very good business school in delhi..
daadi always stands by her..since she has not changed a bit...
maan does'nt realize geet exsisted in his life...geet had slowly taken over every thing related to krish .. Geet started her business studies!!!
now that was very tuff.. and demanding... she was finding it difficult to keep up to the competition and the new lifestyle..she had met up with friends who were full of life and did't know anything about her..small things started bothering her..going out with friends, partying.. she never wanted to get involved with friends since she needed her time with krish!! she avoided them.. but it was difficult..leading to complication and misunderstanding..


Precap

Maan wins young entrepreneur award!!

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love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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please add me to your PM list! 😃
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waah kya story..hai..loved..it...

jaldi jaldi..update karna....

its refreshingly different....cant wait to see how things..unfold between...these two...

married strangers...

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