FF Pyar ka ehsaas Maan and Geet.Part 48..pg190 - Page 5

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Posted: 15 years ago
#41
jus caught wid all the parts well written plz can u ad to pm list
n awaiting 4r the next part
lub the part 4:))
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Posted: 15 years ago
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maan still has his hand on Geet waist..maan could feel geets heart beat..
geet suddenly snaps back.. and says..its a dram its dream!!! just a dream!!!
she says i have gone mad!! Maan is standing there and wodering wat exactly happened!!


PART 5

Maan - suno..suno..excuse me..hello!!!
Geet was already too far to hear him..

driver chaloo ghar chalthe hain...
driver - maam sir nahi ayenga...??
Geet was all shocked to realize that maan was actually there..
she got really scared and told the driver to leave...
geet suprised and start mummering..babaji woh yahen kyu aaya hogein..
unhe kaise pata ki main yanha hoo!! aaj yeh sab mera saat kyu ho raha tha...
suddenly drivers say..maam, saab to yanhaa aksar aate hain..
geet - realizes that she was too loud..
and talks to hersels...tu bhi na kya kya sochene laagjathi hai..woh mere liya nahi aaya the..

maan has never felt like this for any one else .. he wonders who it was??
he gets angry at himself for geeting lost like this..he drives furiously back home..
starts looking at priya's pic..he was glaring at priya's pic..he was looking at her face, hair,
when he looks at her eyes..
he starts thinking about geets eyes..he feels guilty that he is thinking about some one other
than priya.. suddenly there is a slight breez..and he can feel geet presence in the room..
he gets amused how is he feeling her here..he pushes his hair backwards...and looks really worried..geet watching all this thinks Maan is angry about wat happened tonight..she walks slowly to her room hugs krish and closes her eyes..

Maan can feel that she was there he turns..but there was no one......he gets furious..in anger he punches the mirror and breaks the it...he hurts himself..he walk to the study sits on the chair and closes his eyes..

Geet in her room is not able to sleep. she decides to confront him.. she slowly walks into maans room
geet-jada se jada kya kehenge..do batehen suna denge...babaji please help me!!
geet looks around ..can't find him..she turns back and was about to leave...and her eye falls on the mirror scatterd in the floor..she walks upto the mirror to have a closer look all she could see was her image on all the broken pieces of the mirror, tear roles down her eyes when she sees the blood on the floor ..she follows the blood drops which leads her to the study..she notices his hand was bleeding..she grabs the first aid, cleans his hand and ties a bandage on them..she could see the pain in his closed eyes
she could stand there and watch him the whole night..she grabs a bedspread and covers him..
he holds her hand , geet gets tickled..and bends down..to sit next to him slowly
Maan - please don't leave me please...aaj maat jaavoo...i can't stay away from u
i love u..i really do love u..
geet feels really amused and reluctant..
Maan continues..please don't leave..please priya !!!
geet is shocked... she waits for him to be comfartable..and pulls her hand awaya..

As if all her restlessness had come to an end she knew wat she had to do..

she goes to her room..picks up phone and calls priya
Priya - hellow..
Geet - hellow priya di??
Priya - hi!! who is this??
Geet - di wow mein, mein geet...and she pauses
Priya could feel the warmth in her voice..but was not sure whom she is talking to..
priya - hi geet, i am really not sure !!umm..do we know each other
Geet - hain bhi nahi bhi!!!
geet was just not sure how to go about explaining her anything..without knowing
anything about her feeling!!
Geet - di aap skype me aa sakthe ho kya?? i want to show u some thing
priya - but i am not sure?? who u are??
Geet - di please ..my id is geethanda..
and cuts the call ..Geet quickly turns on the comp..she quickly logs into skype and waiting for her..
priya actually calls her...geet takes a long breath and answeres the call..
Priya - hi geet..
looking at geet who is so nervous..
priya - i am sorry but still not able to recollect ur face
Geet - nahi di..wow..mujhe aap ko
priya - u look really nervous..kya baat hain..r u ok
geet turns the camera to krish..who was sleeping on the bed..
priya looks at krish..she cannot believe wat she was seeing ..something told her that
was krishna!! tears start rolling down her eyes..there was silence.. geet waited for priya to feel better..
Priya - hi geet..thanxs thanxs a lot..so tum krish ki mom ho right?
Geet was speechless.. she all the while knew that priya was very elegant, beautifull, smart, nice lady....but did'nt know that she was so understanding!!
geet - ji..is'nt he cute..
Priya - apne baap pe gaya hai..
there was silence again!!!!
priya - u know when i last saw him he was just 1 year.. and few months
geet - now he is 10
priya adds 10yrs and 3 months and 5 days!!
geet knew how much she loved them..
geet started explaining to priya.. how much Maan misses her.. how much he is still
in love with her..how he has not disturbed anything in the room since she has left..
geet goes on non-stop
Priya - how long have u been married geet?
Geet - ji wow ..2 1/2 yrs..lakein hamare bhiche aise kuch nahi hain jasi aap sooch rahin hain
Priya - looks into hers eyes and says.. I can see that..
geet - di aap ek bar please please come home..na
priya cuts the topic and says.. bahut raat hogayi hogi na India mein..
aab go and sleep..we shall chat tomorrow...

they decide on a time to chat!!
geet was very happy and went to sleep

Maan wakes up.. to see him self on the chair.. he wonders who put the spread on him..
then wonders who cleaned up and his wound bandage!!
Maan u are lossing it again.. focus..he goes to the gym..he was dripping wet in sweat..while boxing the pad..he was still trying to think about the bandage..he holds the pad..and again geets eyes start haunting him!!!
Geet was actually standing infront of him...

Precap
College presentation on Khurana Empire
please let me know how u are liking it..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43
i was actually gonna ask u to update..........lol thnk u 4r the update can i get moreeeeeee please........;) so she's all set to let go.............but i think maan has found sumthin..........which is gonna heal his wound..............well written!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
Wow simply awesome... Omg I'm goin crazy abt Ur ff it's soo interesting... I juz luv it 😃 plz plz update soon... Can't w8 4 da nxt part 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: 1kaarzoo

i was actually gonna ask u to update..........lol thnk u 4r the update can i get moreeeeeee please........;) so she's all set to let go.............but i think maan has found sumthin..........which is gonna heal his wound..............well written!!!

thanxs yaar
i am trying to get another update today..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
rockin_gal ..thanxs a lot
anufa.. thanxs again
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47
this is really interseting update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48
Beautiful!

So Maan hasn't forgotten Priya yet, but he finds Geet haunting him already after just one accidental meet. Geet is ready to get Priya back in Maan and Krish's life and Priya still loves Krish, so wat's keeping her from coming....

Do update soon. I loved it!

Tia
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
oh wow i am loving this
geet talked to priya
maan was so lost for geet
do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Kaval05 ..tia and sumi
thanxs a lot

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