FF Pyar ka ehsaas Maan and Geet.Part 48..pg190

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After reading so many FF...i thought of trying one...
guys please let me know if u even like this FF..should i continue

Part 1 - page 1 Part 15 - page 32 Part 29 - page 90 Part 43 - page 160
Part 2 - page 2 Part 16 - page 36 Part 30 - page 93 Part 44 - page 169
Part 3 - page 3 Part 17 - page 39 Part 31 - page 98 Part 45 - page 173
Part 4 - page 4 Part 18 - page 41 Part 32 - page 102 Part 46 - page 178
Part 5 - page 7 Part 19 - page 47 Part 33 - page 107 Part 47 - page 185
Part 6 - page 8 Part 20 - page 50 Part 34 - page 112 Part 48 - page 190
Part 7 - page 10 Part 21 - page 54 Part 35 - page 117
Part 8 - page 12 Part 22 - page 57 Part 36 - page 123
Part 9 - page 13 Part 23 - page 62 Part 37 - page 128
Part 10 - page 16 Part 24 - page 67 Part 38 - page 134
Part 11 - page 21 Part 25 - page 71 Part 39 - page 137
Part 12 - page 24 Part 26 - page 74 Part 40 - page 144
Part 13 - page 26 Part 27 - page 80 Part 41 - page 151
Part 14 - page 28 Part 28 - page 84 Part 42 - page 155
LINK to thread 2
LINK to thread 3
Part 1
I have changed my script... little bit...
Background...
Daadi ma and Geets family are freinds..no past of geet...

Daadi maa comes to visit hosiyarpur...to meet geets family..
daadi maa has a very private talk with Darji..saying how she is very upset about maan
and his not coming out of his past..she is looking for girl for him again.. who can really
take care of him and family...darji and daadi maa talk for quite a while ...

Brij over hears their talk and tells darji that we could get Geet married to Maan..
but darji says..u don't know...and stops!!!!
the whole family is excited about the wedding.. Geet is not at all intrested..
she goes and speaks to dadi ma.. and says I am just 18..I have not even completed my studies..
dadi ma.. wonders..thinks for a while.. this girl will be able to face maan and his temperment..
if she can stand up against the whole family and tells me wat she wants...

Daadi..promises that she will let her complte her studies after marriage..geet is still not very sure about all this geet has just entered college..she was very intested in making a simple carrier ...she had not even thought about guys..as such..
she did fascinate..but all girly friends talks only..


daadi maa..tells darji..that when maan comes to know about it...he will surely not agree..
i am trying to get him here first...one of the sweet little pranks of daadi maa... I am not feeling well
maan rushes to geets havali...
every body tells geet see..maan is here... she is least intrested..
daadi ma in the bedroom..Maan walks in with concern.. seeing her on the bed..really gets worried
looking at her he knew wat she was upto...
geet is forced to interupt them with lassi...maan says no thanks.. does'nt even look at her..

Daadi maa - maan this is geet..
Maan - continues excuse me.. i have to take this call..now..
daadi maa - maan maan..

geet stands there wondering wat to do.. she is feeling odd about the situation b/w maan and daadi..
this is was the first time..maan and geet where undersame roof.. but they have'nt even seen each other..geet gives the lassi to daadi maa..and leaves the room..

latter in the evening..daadi..walks to maan and says..u have to agree to this..
hum aap ki man marzi nahi chalne denge!!! maan gets very angry and yells at daadi ma..don't u know I hate girls.. geet was just entering the room with a glass of milk for daadi ma.. she really gets scared and drops it down..Maan turns..and snaps!!
they are good for nothing but breaking things!!
this was the first time..maan actually saw a glims of Geet..scared..litterly ..sahme sahme se .with her hand cluctching her dupatta
and looking down..maan could not see her face...does't even care to..😔
geet runs away!!!

Daadi - Maan why is it always about u?? off late u don't seem to think about any one else..
Maan - wat do u mean
Daadi - wat about us, wat about krishna??
Maan - is spechless..does't say word more

next day they have the wedding cermony..
Geet crying about the fact she has to leave her family and studies..she was just not prepared for all this
Maan totally not intrsted.. just very furious...

maan and geet walk towards each other..

jay mala..
Maan just bows his head.. does'nt even resist.. the whole gathering starts saying..geet..maan abhi se aap ka gulaam bangaya..
geet is suprised..shies a bit..this is the first time she felt some thing..somthing she never knew ..ther was stange tickle in her stomach
she wanted to see his face...while putting the mala..his face got covred with mala in his hand which was approaching her neck..
she had to bow..down..she cried to have a glims of him..

they both are taken to the mundap..all the while maan was burning with anger.. she could feel his restlessness..but was not sure ..wat was that whole thing about!!!
immediatly after the cermony..maan says he needs to leave..
brij tries to stop him.. tum ase kaise ja sakte hoo
maans face fuming ..darji holds brij back..
Maan - aap log doosri gaadi mein ajana.. i have to visit a site on my way..
Daadi - maan ur insulting us!!
Maan - i have had enough of all this..and just rushes away..
Daadi - left alone to face the gathering
geet holds the dupatta along with the knot of his part of dupatta..which slipped away as maan walked away..she picks up the dupataa..and holds it close to her
daadi ma..was impressed..with geets gesture..
geet and daadi drive to delhi in a car!!!

bidaai song and crying!! geet is very upset and alone..

Precap

Maan and Geet unusal SR

please let me know if to continue!!
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shaz94 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Interesting beginning!! hmmm..... will be fun to watch how they fall in
love with each other eventually šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜›
Continue soon!!! 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: shaz94

Interesting beginning!! hmmm..... will be fun to watch how they fall in
love with each other eventually šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜›
Continue soon!!! 😊

thanxs for motivating!!! really feels good
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This was interesting! It's too good! Hope Krishna is not Maan's son or something........lolz......anyways.......do continue soon and please add me to your PM list.
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Originally posted by: Starry_night

This was interesting! It's too good! Hope Krishna is not Maan's son or something........lolz......anyways.......do continue soon and please add me to your PM list.

thanxs..
feeling nice..shall add u to PM
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very interesting
cant wait..... plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do continue😊
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i really lyk it.. 😊 i think u'r doin a good job & u shud write more... update soon & can u add me to ur PM list šŸ˜• once again update soon... 😃
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Originally posted by: rockin_gal

i really lyk it.. 😊 i think u'r doin a good job & u shud write more... update soon & can u add me to ur PM list šŸ˜• once again update soon... 😃

thanxs a lot!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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different... but same angry maan ..😊, it sounds interesting.. continue please....
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Part 2


Daadi ma and geet on their way to delhi..
geet is very upset and weeping..
daadi ma..tries to explain her that maan is not bad at heart.. he is just short tempered..
geet just nodes...
Mid way they stop by for lunch.. daadi ma notices that geet is very uncomfartable with all that
she is wear..
daadi ma - please change if you want to..
geet - just jumps up to the option and changes into her suit..

their drive continues..its almost evening..
they reach the mansion..every one is suprised to see geet dressd simple not in her wedding dress..
Daadi maa - invites in geet in with full grand cermony


they both walk into the house..geet is still not able to accept the volume of the house and place
daadi introduces her to Naintara and Dev.. NT says hi..dev just smiles at her..like a brat devar
then daadi shows her the house.. Geet is wondering all the while where is Maan's room??
daadi kind of reading her question.. no no..
ur room is not here.. Geet shies..looks down..
I mean Maan lives in the out house..so untill he decides to come here..mmmm!!
it will be better u stay with him there..u could probably talk him into coming back to the mansion!!!
Geet - mein!!! her eyes pops out..with fear!!
dev smile and says babhi ji ..aab bro ko sirf aap hi sambal sakte hain..
woo kyu ki aap se bro nein shaadi ki..hain na..then he givs a smile to NT..
juru ka gulam types..


daadi says let me show u ur place..when they walk out.. there is a small boy running towards them runns and hugs daadi!! he is panting!! to catch some breath!!! geet gives him a glass of water..daadi looks at geet ..and says.. this is Krishna..darji ji kaha hoga tumse!!!
Geet looked confused!!! krishna is busy looking at geet, (krishna is very sensitive kid)and loves geets plats.. starts playing a with her dupatta..touching her..getting the feel of her..kind of connects to her..geet still being a child at heart..really playfull nature..amuses him..with small actions daadi feels little let down!! by darji....Geet could see that ..
daadi- this ismaans son!
geet-just can't belive wat she heard.. she just hugs krishna !! close to her..
she was still not sure of any thing.. every thing looked so unclear..
geet does't say word.. really not sure of wat is happeneing with her life
daadi takes her to the outhouse...shows her around...all the while krishna is just clinging on to her ....daadi takes her to krishna's room..
he starts playing with his toys..


geet is still not recovred from the whole thing!!!
disbelive that her family did't tell her anything about Maan
finally daadi takes her to Maans room...she says this is ur room..she looks around..
there is a huge picture his wife.. she looks so beautifull and angelic..geet can't stop looking at her
she looks at the pic and looks at daadi ma with question written all over her face..
daadi-she is priya..maans life.. they where in love in college..but things where not so smooth between them..u know maans temprment
then krishna was born..things started getting worse.. they split.. but maan still can't get over all that its been six yrs now
i was wanting maan to get a life so that they can be happy..it is not him ..Krishna too..
krishna really needs a mother and maan need a life..
he is the best father..really done a great job alone..but can't fit in mothers shoe..right..



daadi decides to leave geet alone in the room..
geet looks around!! she can feel priya's presnce evry where..she opens the cupbard just to see how..maan has left all her things
exactly the same way she left.. Geet really out of place..
she can see a pair of earings on the dressing table.. looks like some one has just removed it..
priyas dupatta was lying is the study..she was totally amused...that how much Maan loves her even after 6yrs
she starts feeling suffocated in the room..she opens the door to balcony to see her self standing next to a glass table there was a glass with a lipstick mark on it!!!
like someone has just had water from that glass and left there!!

Geet really finds it difficult to take all that ..and runs into krishnas room..
Krishna - maa mera saat kheloo na..
Geet - did'nt know wat to say
they started playing..for a while..then thy set out for dinner..
krishna really takes care of her..geet kind a reciprocates to his sweetness..


daadi ma - sorry geet, maan just called to say that he is returning late
geet - actually feels comfortable...without his presense


daadi a gets the bedroom decorated.. and tells geet to dress up!!
NT comes to help geet in dressing up...she advices keep it simple..it will be easy!!and winks
geet is feeling scared..she is just not prepared for all this..
the whole room is decorated with simple white flowers..
geet is wearing a white saree..with a simple pearl set..
krishna had gone to sleep..early..Nt and daadi waitd for a while and left geet alone...
suddenly she hears krishna crying... she sees him and comforts him..takes him in her lap and comforts him..its about 1 am ..geet is standing near the balcony..
she really does'nt know wat to expect ??? she is bit excited the look of the bed really tickles
her thought...in the mid of all this she suddenly hears maan talking over the phone and walking into the room he is on a call..really fogotten of wat happened in hossiyarpur..
he starts losening his tie and walks into th study..picks up some file..
removes his waist coat..geet is silently watching all this from the balcony..
he just hangs up th call and removes his shirt..
Maan goes to the dressing table and looks at himself.. and removes his vest...
Geet start feeling really uncomfartable...really not sure wat to say or feel
suddenly maan notices the change in his room ...decoration.. flowers..and


his face changes..he looks around and spots a person standing in white saree..
not enough light to see her face..
Maan walks closer to her..

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Precap

Geet back to college


Love

Muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago

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