FF Pyar ka ehsaas Maan and Geet.Part 48..pg190 - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey really very nice plz continue ......anu
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pls continue... n pls add me to the pm list...
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PART 4

geet really very upset and stressed goes to daadi ma..
daadi- geet wat happened.. maan ne kuch kaha kya
geet- yeh le..aab woh kya khenge(to herself)
daadi-kya , kya baat hain ??
geet- nahi daadi..woh..
then she explains about her friends smriti,kavya and pooja..and their partying, combined studies plan...etc..she says i am not able to balance.. i am finding it very difficlut..
Daadi-pauses for a while..and says did u speak to maan?? does he have any problem
Geet-unhe kya problem ho sakthi hain??
daadi-then why are so worried??
plan ur day ..after college with krish!! then after he sleeps if ur free
join ur friends..provided maan is fine with that!! any way u have ur driver..so you are safe
geet-har baat mein maan kahan se bechmein aajathe hain??? why will he ever have a problem with me?

geet is very happy and feels better!!

Next day seem to be very important for Maan..
he is won the award!! geet while she was coming back home... sees a lot of crowd at the mansion she wonders wat??? she quickly walks into the outhouse and closes the door
geet is with krish studying... geets phone rings..daadi was calling her to join the party
she refuses.. she says both of them have homework to do!!
geet has never attended a single party since they have got married..
she preffered avoiding media!! she was not sure how comfortable maan will be with her presence
daadi- its been a big day for maan.. u must atleast congratulate him..
geet-woh mein..ghar mein to wish kar donghi..
maan-comes to his room..changes..watching some news
geet is wondering wat to do... she tells krish to wish him...
krish goes in to maans room..geet walks in slowly..this was first time after their SR in last 2 1/2yrs that they are standing so close..maan sees krish and starts talking to him about his school and tells him that he is planning to arrange a good boarding school for him after he finishes 8th
Geet gets wild and walks out the room...
Maan wonders wat was that???
geet was all very disturbed with maan idea of putting krish in boarding school
krish understands geets mode and tells her we have like a year for all that now..
so don't think so much about it...we will be fine!! and winks at her..

next day in college..geet friends are all having business magazine ..with Maans photo on it
all her friends just drooling over maan and start sayig all about him..
Kavya - he is the most eligable bachelor
smriti-no no he is married and has a kid too..I think his name is K Karthik
Geet-Krishna!!!
smriti-yah yah krishna
Pooja-no way he is divorced!!! so technically he is still single and ready to mingle!!
Geet-no no ...but he is married!!
Kavya, smriti and pooja-geeeeet shut up!!! we don't have a problem..why are u so worried??
Pooja shows one of his photos where he is looking really HOT!!!


and she goes how i wish i was there with him!! right there!!!
Geet-looks at the pic.. stops for a while and turns her face..
this was the first she realzied she was married to the MAAN SINGH KHURANA!!
she knew Maan was successful..but never had a clue how big a name he was...in real world
Geet could not concentrate in class.. every one had that magazine..
after college...!!!
smriti-pointed out..u know girls my sister was priya's classmate
Pooja-u mean priya khurana???
smriti-yes the priya !!!
Geet was very intresred..wantd to know whole thing about Maan and priya!!
they all went to smriti's house..this was the first time geet did't rush
back home after college..she was very keen on joining them..
smriti - Maan and priya where like mad for each other..showed her the college
snaps of her sister with maan and priya
Geet - dekhne se hi lagtha hain!!
they caught up with smriti's sister..
she told them.. the whole love saga of priya and Maan..
they clicked at first look on first day of college..Maan was very possessive, passionate,
Obsessed about her.. how the whole college used to drool over him..and he would not give a
second look to any one else..
Geet-wat happened why did they break up??
smriti's sister-priya wanted her free space, she was not ready for the marriage yet,
then krishna..was also quite unexpected..priya wanted to continue with her research
maan was not agaisnt but you know such things create drifts..finally priya decided to leave..
geet- where is priya di now?
smriti's sister-she is london working for a research company
geet - is she married?
smriti's sister - no no..
geet - could u please give me her number please
kavya, pooja, smriti- geet wait why do u need all that now!!!!
Geet - nahi, woh! woh! mujhe aise , just wanted to talk to her....
geet took her number!!!
geet comes back home all lost in Maans thought.. she has never thought about him so much
since their marriage..
that night
Geet actually waits for maan to return..she was so desperate to have one look of him..
it was 2am.. maan walked in straight to his room without noticing Geet who was waiting for his one glims...
Maan gets up early..like 5.30 am..
geet keeps multiple alarm to get up that early
some how she manages to gets up at 6.00am..she runs to his room.. he was not there.. she asks the maid
aaj maan jaldi nikal gaye kya??
maid explains this is his workout time..so either will be in the pool or gym
geet slowly looks down at the pool.. from her rooms balcony..
she sees maan swiming .. she could not take her eyes off his body..

she was just watching how the water flashed over is abs..every time he took a stroke she was breathless...she was admiring every inch of his bare body!!!
suddenly maan rose out of the water!!! Geet was standing with her jaws open!!
Maan grabbed a towel and dried him..geet was still looking at the water droplet that was

flowing from his hair touching his nose, and then chin, then slowly falling ..
Geet was so lost in her thoughts..she could not hear krish calling out..
maa balcony ka curtain bant karo..mere ankhen main light paad raha hain!!!
she says umm.. Maan just turns up to see some one standing there and looking at him
he looks back with his strange amused look?? geet still does'nt seem to move....
maan starts walking closer..to the house...krish pulls her hand in and says maa abhi to sirf
7.00 bhaje hain!! why are you up so early...
Geet realizes that she is been watching Maan for an hr now..
then she tells krish chalo get up now.. it is 7.00
they go out the gyming and get ready
Geet just supervises the breakfast..
joins krish in the room...
Maan comes to the room.. geet can feel him near the door..she rushes to the washroom..
but today..she could not control herself she wanted see him.. she slowly peeps through the door..
Maan kisses krish on his forehead and walks away!! geet just comes and kisses krish on the same place krish was suprised wat is wrong with mom today??

in college again the topic of discussion was MAAN SINGH KHURANA
today the case study given to them was on Khurana Empire..
Geet was so disorientd all she could do was look at Maan's pic
professor notices geet lost asks her a question
geet - maan woh mein maan..no sorry maam I was saying!!
the whole class starts laughing at her...
geet say sorry and walks out of the class..
she is not able to understand wat is happening to her..why should i think of him all day
she tells the driver to take her to tajmahal!! driver is all shockd??
she calls daadi and tells her that.. she is going out and tells her to take care of krish for today
for her luck or bad luck..it was full moon day..and tajmahal was just glowing
she stood there looking at the beautifull..sight and things...
woh to mujh se pyar nahi karthe.. phir yeh mujhe kya hora ha... kyu mein uunhe mein itna interest lein rahi hoon..our relation ship definitly doesn't have any future... he loves priya di
more over i don't actually love him..it is just attraction..all this hipe about MAAN SINGH KHURANA
i guess it is playng on me.. let me just relax i will be fine
she closes her eyes all she can see is him in that swiming costume coming out dripping in water
she gets frustrated and starts running back to car...
she does'nt realize and bumps into Maan and he just catches her from her waist nearly falling

she was like inches away from the ground..Maan slowly lifts her..she is looking deep into his eyes.. full moon light falling on geets face..and Maan for the first time sees her...
they both keep on starring at each other,,Maan is not able to stop looking at her..he wonders why are those eyes so deep..why am i able to see myself in them...now both of them are standing straight.. maan still has his hand on Geet waist..maan could feel geets heart beat..
geet suddenly snaps back.. and says..its a dream its dream!!! just a dream!!!
she says i have gone mad!!! Maan is standing there and wodering wat exactly happened!!

Precap

GEET calls priya

hope u all liking it
please let me know ur feedback
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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just loved ur update... all i can say is plsss pls... update soon............

the update ws too good...
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she sees maan swiming .. she could not take her eyes off his body..
she was just watching how th water flashed over is abs..every time he took a stroke she was breathless...she was admiring every inch of his bare body!!!



lol chalo in real story staring section is maan's hear u did viceversa i loved this aprt
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Posted: 15 years ago
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kya di MSK ko ek dam shaadi karwa diya??????????
its awesome.....
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Originally posted by: lyfwidluv

she sees maan swiming .. she could not take her eyes off his body..
she was just watching how th water flashed over is abs..every time he took a stroke she was breathless...she was admiring every inch of his bare body!!!



lol chalo in real story staring section is maan's hear u did viceversa i loved this aprt


Thanxs dear.. Just can't resist maan fever!!
Looks like..we are having a intreseting week ahead
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: jhinki143

kya di MSK ko ek dam shaadi karwa diya??????????

its awesome.....


Just thought ..should be different!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29
Nice FF .Please continue soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
Thnx for the PM 😊
Another great update! 👍🏼
sooo.....krishna is maan's son- nice to see geet and him getting on
soo well though 😛 !! Hope things go well between maan and geet
and that he doesnt treat her badly 😕 !! Looking forward to the next update! 😛

EDIT!

oops- I've still got the other 2 parts to read😆

Ok- read them!! Wow- could totally imagine wat Geet went through seeing
Maan swimming 😆
Loved the updates again!! 😛
Edited by shaz94 - 15 years ago

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