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Great Part Please continue soon
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great update
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Part 9

Recap-Archita and Kanya challenge each other to see who gets Ranbir. Ranbir and Archie storm out to a nightclub.


That very day Shanta and Pooja arrive at the Nanda mansion after Chunnu explains the whole story to her briefly. They are fuming with anger and that Kanya is even thinking about Ranbir in such a manner. What has that Ghenda done to Kanya that she is so crazy enough to get into a fight that too for him. Shanta had many questions to ask Kanya but Pooja had a bad feeling she already knew the answer but was dreading to hear Kanya confirm her worst nightmare. Ranbir wasn't a bad guy its just Kanya and Ranbir were too different in the way they think and their personalities and family are just too crazy to even consider them to be a real family u unit.

K-D i am so happy ap ageye. You have no idea what i am going through.

P-I know kannu chunnu ne sab kucch humein kehdi hain. Teri sar kaha pe hain. What were you thinking? That too dragging yourself in this mess with Archie. Tu paagal hain kya?

Shanta-us ghende ne zaroor is pe khala jadoo ki hain tabhi to humara Kanya ek dum badly badly si hain. Tere bheje mein is ki bhoot sawar nikaal aur kucch achchi soch.

K-App dono kya keh rahi ho. Ranbir mujhpe jadoo kya karenge woh to mujhe avoid kar rahe hain and it's driving me crazy. Us Archie ke saath har waqt saya ki tara.

P-Kanya tujhe kisne kaha us London mem ke saath panga lagane keliye. They know how to fight.

K-So do i. Or have you not noticed I have the scars to prove it.

Shanta-To tu us saand ke liye yeh kar rahi hain.


K-Nahi yeh mare liye kar rahi hoon. How dare she challenge me in my house that she can take Ranbir from me. He is not a thing. Yaha aake mein ulljan mein pargayi.

Shanta-Kaise ulljan? Tu yaha akele mein thi isi liye bohut kuch soch ne lagi hain. Hum ageye hain sab kuch tikh hojayegi. Tu fikar mat karna hum hain tere liye. Us ghende aur uski chamiya teri kuch bhigar nahin sakthe. Aane de un dono ko esi sabakt sikaungi woh tujhe to kya kisike bhura nahin kar sakhenge. Ranbir ka kayal apne dimaak se hata de.

P- Kanya you really are worried i have never seen you like this. Come tell me. Shantu ap saamaan please upar lijiye mein bas paanch minute mein aarahi hoon.


Shanta goes upstairs completely riled up. They should have been here for Kanya poor girl. Shes so used to being with her family. Even after her wedding she never needed to worry but these four days have been really bad. Let Ranbir and that It girl come.

P-Kanya sach mein mujhe bata teri problem kya hain? I've never seen you so worked up. The last time was when you got married to Ranbir and the broken engagement to Ayaan.

K-D i know this sounds strange but i'm confused with my feeling. I don't know where they are coming from. It's driving me insane. Sochte sochte takh gayi. I can't sleep.

P-Bata. Shanta tai upaar hain so this is between the two of us. Kya huwa hain? Ranbir ne tere saath koi batameezi toh nahi ki hain? Did he do anything? Or say anything?

K-No Ranbir ne aisa kucch nahin ki hain wahi meri problem hain. He's always attached to that tramp. Mere taraf dekhta bhi nahin. When he does it's usually with Chunnu and he just shuts down and charges in like the bull that he is.

P-Go on mein sun rahi hoon.

K-Humara ghar mein jab reh raha tha i was dreading it. Kahi hamari family ki bezaati na karde lekin he did the opposite Mom, Dad, harpal, Adita and Jiju ko usne jeet liya apne personality aur baadlav ki saath. Mummy won't hear a bad word against him. Woh bus mein travel kiya, Competition ki aur upwas rakha jo isne kabhi ki nahi woh bhi humare liye. I guess it was a refreshing change D. I was amazed by all this. So many times i tried to get this nagging feeling and pulled Ranbir's leg with Shanta tai and Chunnu that i forgot to realise that Ranbir has feeling or developed them.

P-Yes. Kaho yeh hairani humain bhi hain but what has this got to do with your problem?

K-D hum jab Nanda house aye the tab Archita Ranbir ko dekh ne aye thi. At first i thought she's a very forward friend Ranbir ko kiss kiya hoto pe. I got angry but each day Ranbir has been spending more time with Archita and no time with me. Almost like he can't bare to be near me. I can't blame him i have been merciless to him with all the pranks and every time i've demeaned him in front of everyone. I can't stand him with Archie. My blood boils every time he looks at her with those eyes. How can he do that? Archie keeps kissing him and he lets her. Now its gone so bad that she's challenged me that she will take him away from me.What makes it worse is Aditya bhaiya and Ranbir have told her about the contract marriage so she knows he doesn't love me and that we have nothing between us. She'll succeed in taking Ranbir away from me. Nobody has the right to take Ranbir from me.

P-That's a good thing Kanya now you can get divorce on the grounds of adultery. Your jobs made easy. This contract marriage will be over in 3 months than 1 year. Tub hi na hume dara di thi.

K-D i don't want him to go with Archie or anyone. Koi ladki uski taraf jab dekhta hain to mujhe dard hoti hain. (Starts crying) I don't understand why?

P-Shit Kanya. Tujhe yeh bhimari ki assar akhir lag gayi. Yaad hain i kept telling you Ranbir has feelings for you and you kept brushing it aside and we just made Chunnu even closer to you and at one point you told him point blank that tu Chunnu ko shaadi karna chati hain divorce ke baad well i think we hurt Ranbir's feelings and to block it out he stays away from you and with Archie he is probably contemplating her as a partner.

K-I can' have feelings for Ranbir ists just attachment. I don't know what to think. Pehle Ayaan turned out that was just a dream and the guy was a jerk. Chunnu my best friend but he's interested in Archie and girls that seem to wear so little clothes and Now Ranbir jo un dono se kitna alag hain. I can't trust my feelings. That's why i need you.

P-I hate to admit it Kanya but you've fallen for Ranbir. That too very deep. I bet you've been struggling eating and your moods have been everywhere. Looks like it's true what they say jealousy, jealousy ko kaat thi hain. I guess better late than never. Tujhe to ab mehsoos hain what Ranbir went through with all of us on his back. Tujhe to sirf Rewa aur Archie sate te hain.

K-I just can't control my anger at ranbir. Hamesha uski side leta hain. He doesn't see the bad side to Archie. Instead he called me a jangli billi for slapping Archie and blamed me for getting in a fight.

P-no more cat fights now. jaise tu Chunnu ke sifarish karthi thi waise woh apne friend ke side leh raha hain.

K-Haan D a ap kucch ki je na. I have to get that trash away from Ranbir kisi halaat pe. If he becomes hers mein jhi nahi paongi. I don't think i can take another heartbreak.

P-Don't tell Shanta all this she thinks tu waise bhi paagal hain even thinking about Ranbir. I'll explain things to her in her own basha tapori style.

K-What about Archie? Kaise khtto ki naam hain. Na jaane woh ranbir ke saath kya kar rahi hain?

P-Tu uski bare mein soch nab hi nahin. Concentrate on patching up with Ranbir. Tum dono ki doori achi nahi hain especially if you love him. I'll take care of the rest. We need to follow Archie and Ranbir wherever they go. Mere soaps ki tara unko bhi maza chaka te hain.

K-Thank you D. You are the best. Dil thori halka hogayi. I REALLY DO Love him

P-Bahen hain meri aggar teri kaam na aou tho behen ki kaam kya.

Shanta comes down the stairs but her hearing Kanya confessing her love for Ranbirthe last sentence kept on playing like a broken record over and over again.

Shanta-Kya?kya? tu us ghende se kya karti hain?

K-Pyar! Mujhe in 3 mahine mein pehli baar yakeen se keh sakthi hoon. Mein sach mein use pyar karti hoon. I'm sure Ranbir ki dil mein kisi kone mein bhi mere liye thori bohut pyar ho sakti hain. Shanta tai app please zyada sawaal ya phir mere iraade ko nahin badal sakte. Mere aankhen khol chuke hain and i can say it loud and proud I LOVE HIM. MEIN PYAR KARTI HOON MERE SAAND SE.


Shanta-Ya to phir tu pagal hain ya phir duniya aise ki waise ho gayi hain. Kanya yeh tu kya bak rahi hain.Kuch sikhi hain ya phir us ghadde ne tujhe kucch kiya waise jaanwar ke saath rehte rehte to bhi jangli horahi hain.

K-Dekhiye mere ghadde ke bare mein jho kehna hain keh doh par mein apne feelings ko badal nahin sakhti. Ap ya to mere saath hain ya nahin. Pooja d aur mein kafi hain is jung ko ladne keliye.

Shanta-Aggar Ranbir tere kushi hain then mein bhi tere saath hoon. Bata kya karni hain hum karenge. Mein sirf yeh soch thi hoon yeh ghenda aggar hume dekh ke tere insult kardi to.

K-Ranbir ko mujhpe adhikar hain. Une mere saath narrazgi hain to mujhe maafi lene hi paregi. Chahe mujhe us Archita ko maafi maang ne bhi pare mein maang loongi. But i will not allow her to take my man.


Shanta-Shabash. Hum tere saath hain. Godbole khabie haar nahin maante. Us pardesan ko hum pardes bhej denge. Woh hain kaha?

K-Ranbir to phine lage hain aur us tramp jaan bhujke yeh philadeti hain. Zaroor koi club mein geye honge. Archita's always on about some Club Zero or was it Vipers.

P-We need to get there and spoil there fun. Maza ayegi.

Will they be successful in winning Ranbir back or is it too late and has Archita got her claws into Ranbir? Stay tuned!!!

Edited by matwamango - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow love the part i like pooja and shanta in ur ff..
i wish kanay realized dat rannu loves ehr for reaal..!
but anyhow ..plz update soon!!
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hmm great update
continue soon 😊
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wow i loved it...
ab uss archie ki band bajegi...
pls continue soon
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great update. atleast she has shanta and pooja to help her now!
continue soon
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Part 10

Recap-Kanya has finally realised her Love for Ranbir with the help of Pooja. They make a plan to gatecrash Ranbir and Archies night out.

Ranbir is feeling down in the dumps and feels like he's lost himself and in this crowd he didn't need to worry about his troubles. Drinking helped him ease the growing pain of seeing Kanya everyday and feeling guilty that he had bound her to him for 1 year and for being the cause of her unhappiness. She makes him mad and has a way of getting under his skin. He jus couldn't bear to see her with Chunnu especially after her confession which is why he thought he'd better get himself ready for someone new in his life and Archie was perfect always there for him. She held no grudges for their broken engagement of over 10 years ago and knew she loved him a lot maybe i should think out of the box. Kanya is a lost cause and many times has repeated told me she feels nothing but pity and hatred for me for causing her and her family pain. If she can't see the new me after everything i've done for her then i guess nothing will change her views of me. It will take a miracle. There's no reason why i can't let her be with Chunnu if she wants. Why stop the inevitable? I should move on.

A-Rambo what are you thinking of? Enjoy karo. Kamse kam tum us ghar mein tho nahin jaha per oz tumhe insult sunni pare. Aur us kamini Kanya se kuch pal keliye chutkara tho mili.

R-No i was just thinking mere life kya se kya hogaya. I feel like Devdas but at least he was loved but in my case what the hell pyar se bhagte bhagte mein hairaan ho chuki hoon aur ab i don't know even know why people put themselves through so much pain. Why? I was right about marriage it has nothing but pain. Plus in my case there was no love, trust anything but hatred so no wonder i'm in a mess which was caused by myself and my mom.

A-Ranbir in baato ko chodo. Enjoy yourself kyunki jab hum wapas ghar jayenge tab dekhena phir Kanya wahi pe ek naya musibat daalegi humare upar.

R-I don't think i can stand to go home today. Ghar jaake Mom mere peeche parenge, Kanya aur aaj for some reason i am thinking of her pooch Shanta. Plus i think i'm kinda drunk you know i probably won't hear half the things they say to me but i'll get it when i'm hungover.

A-Ranbir hum ghar nahin jayenge. Wewill book ourself a room yeh and like old times enjoy karenge. Ranbir you know that i came from England tumhare liye but you don't know mujhe bhulya kisne.

R-Kisne?
(Gulping down his Vodka shots neat.)

A-Aditya bhaiyane. He said you needed help and that you were in trouble and i can see what trouble he was on about. I can't see you like this. So i will help and not help at the same time. Tumhe tumhara pyar mille gi but mujhe bhi kucch chahiye jho tumne dus saal pehle mujhe nahin di thi. But Today mein us cheez khabhie haasil nahin kar sakhti. Nujhe kuch aaur chahiye.


R-Tum aise riddles mein baat kar rahe ho. I am not understandin at all.

A-Tum mere dil ki baat khabie nahin samjho ge. Aur mujhe meri bare mein sochna hain and i will get what i came for. Even if i have to go the wrong way for it Ranbir. Tum mujhe khabhie maaf nahin karoge if you knew why i came here.

R-Ladkiya sach much is duniya ke nahin. Tumhare dil ki paas itne secrets hain aur hum mardo ko hamesha second guess karna partha hain.

A-Ranbir speak for yourself. Tum mardo par koi vishwas nahin ek din yaha ek din waha.

R- Archie i really have missed your company. I know i messed you about in the past. For that mein dil se.............

A-Leave the old times humein sirf is pal ko jeena hain right. Besides when you love someone you forgive them for past mistakes that are beyond their control. What is important is how you change yourself for the better


R-Archie tum abhi bhi mujhse pyar karti ho na?


A-Come on humain nachna hain ki nahin but yeh lo aur piyo. You are really going to need it.

With that they both head to the dance floor and just sway to the music that plays by now Ranbir has nearly lost all his common sense and is not at all aware of what is going on around him. He starts to see double of nearly everything and everything around him is fuzzy but he continues on dancing.

Pooja and Kanya arrive in the Viper Club after going to the Club Zero looking for Ranbir. Pooja asks around for Ranbir as does Kanya. Pooja spots Ranbir dancing with Archita and that is when Archie spots Kanya and immediately makes her way for the backdoor way out to avoid them spoiling her plans with Ranbir. Ranbir thought he saw Kanya and then just started thinking everyone was her wherever he looked. Damn drink even this make me see triple. I am so never going to drink again.

Archita manages to get away and find the room that she had pre booked before she came out with Ranbir. She knew he would never forgive her for her deceit but he was the one she loved and she would make him hers by hook or by crook. There was no way he would have come here willingly come here and even if he did there was no gurantee he would go through what she wanted. She knew that she was ready and one by one she started removing his clothes as fast as possible as she did hers. Ranbir was too drunk to even get hers off so she did it as quickly as she could. Ranbir just started to think of warmth and how much he needed to forget. Archie went upto him and started kissing him. Ranbir at first didn't respond but the more she did it the more he started to reciprocate but only problem was he was thinking of Kanya the whole time and how much he ached for her to love him and that he was nothing but weak she had weakened all his defences. For one day he wanted to forget and drift into a place where he could sleep peacefully. Archie promises that Ranbir will be with the one he loves and soon

Kanya went home feeling upset and hurt that she couldn't get Ranbir and that Archie was succeeding in keeping her away from her. Ranbir hated her so much. Pooja had told her how he confessed his feeling to her but nobody believed him thinking it was another game he was playing. Ranbir is probably more confused with the way he feels than i am. On top he's probably given up on me. I can't even blame him. It has taken one woman to really wake me up. If she so much as does anything to him i will kill her and then Ranbir. That Archita doesn't know who she is messing with mera Ranbir ki saath aisa naach raha tha. Mein jaanti hoon usne mujhe dekha par Ranbir nashe mein tha aur ussine usko philaya hogi. Again Ranbir isn't with me and i need him to come back to me before it's too late. But soon Ranbir we will be together this is what i can promise. This time i will believe you if you say you love me.

Edited by matwamango - 17 years ago
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thats an amazing update....
poor rannu
and that archie.... grrr uski to mei... lol
pls continue soon
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wow awesome part

plz continue!

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