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punjabi.princes

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Posted: 17 years ago

#31

great update
plz make ranbir and kanya together soon!
continue soon 😊

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Fatemah

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Posted: 17 years ago

#32

i loved it... pls continue soon

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Aysha

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Part 7

Kanya didn't sleep all night waiting for Ranbir. She was too scared to even think what Archie and Ranbir were upto. How dare he do this to her again? Another sleepless night. Before he was drunk but this time he was in rage. God knew what was in Ranbir's mind. Kanya went downstairs and tried to act normal. Only Aditya bhai was giving her knowing glances. She was quiet and all the family members were bust doing their own thing either getting ready for work or college. Malika was busy trying to get in touch with Ranbir in the office but he wasn't there.

Chunnu came to visit Kanya wanting to see if she was ok and hopefully catch a glimpse of the beautiful Archie. He found Archie quite a refreshing change to the normal girls he met in America. This girl was on fire and unfortunately only had eyes for Ranbir but not for long not if he had something to do with it.

Chunnu asked Malika if it was ok if he saw his friend upstairs and she told him he was welcome anytime. Chunnu approached Kanya's room where he knocked several times before she answered. She looked really bad as if she had been crying. He'd only ever seen Chutki this bad when something really hurt her. He went and gave her a hug.

C-Chutki! Are you ok? Why are you crying? Did Ranbir say anything to you? Did he hurt you? Batana mein uska khabar leta hoon?

K-Ranbir saari raat ghar nahin aye hain aur woh office pe bhi nahin. I'm scared Chunnu. This time it is really serious. I've never seen him this mad. Na jaane us churail ki saath kya ghul kila raha hain woh ghenda. Muje har waqt satata rehta hain.

C-Don't worry Ranbir tere liye fida hain trust me. I can tell. Don't think about it too seriously he's not worth it. Gusse mein aadmi apne hosh ko bet tha hain. Ranbir tujhe chod ke kahi nahi jayega. He probably saw both of us together and came up with 5. Waise bhi we have been spending a lot of time together. Tujhe usko asie chirana nahin chahiye tha. Ab dekh Ranbir thinks hum uske peeche affair kar rahe hain.

K-Woh jaye baar mein. I don't care if he thinks theres something going on between us. Right now i'm worried about what Archita is going to do with my man. I feel so helpless.

C-Agli baar be careful with Ranbir. He's a very emotional guy as we saw yesterday. Archie ke bare main bhi soch rahi hoon. She really does want Ranbir for herself and she won't care ki tum dono ke shaadi ho chuki hain. But you didn't help matters Chutki. You made it look like you don't love Ranbir.

K-I....(How can i tell you we don't love each other we are just compromising with circumstances for 1 year and then a divorce) I care about Ranbir and if i lost him. Maybe more than i thought i would. (Starts crying)

Chunnu holds Kanya's face and reassures her not to worry and gives her a big hug. He wipes her tears and tells her to be brave and not let Ranbir get to her when Ranbir enter's the room with Archie at hand seeing both Kanya and Chunnu in a compromising state. Ranbir was thinking of apologizing to Kanya for the harsh words he had said to her. Archie had tried to calm him down and made him see that he needed some space to calm down and then go talk to Kanya in a civilised manner. She had also told him that he deserved better. Looks like unfinished business between Chunnu and Kanya. Why did he decide to come home now. He was completely fuming and this time there was no controlling the rage that was within him.

R-I see lover boy abhi bi yaha hain. I guess we should give these two space. If you really wanted to be with each other book a hotel room like normal people do. Don't use my bedroom for your romance.

A-I told you didn't i Ranbir. You deserve better. Give them a chance to explain and if there isn't a reason then just leave don't waste your breath.

C-Ranbir dude it's not what it looks like. She was upset and needed someone here for you.

K-Don't bother explaining. Its him that needs to tell me why he was gone all night with this tramp. I was out of my mind. Please Ranbir itni kator mat bano. Where the hell were you?I have a right to know. Biwi hoon tumhari.

R-I need to get out of here. Same bashan. Biwi, biwi. Kaisi biwi kiski biwi. Mujhe yeh bhi pata nahin uski yaar se woh naraaz hain ya phir mujhse. Pati hoon jab tumhe suit kare. Come on Archie I can't deal with this. Sawaal par sawaal kar jarahi hain. Yeh bhi nahi are you ok?Or i'm sorry.

K-Sorry my foot. You aren't going anywhere with her. Sari raat us kuttiya ke saat the aur tum mujhpe ilzaam lagarahiho. This is between you and me. Doosro ko kyun taang larane layi ho.

C-I think we should leave Archie.

A-I am not leaving without Rannu. (She grabs Ranbir's arm and tries to walk away.)

K-You are not going with my husband anywhere? Tu jahanam mein ja ya phir kisi kone mein jaake chup par meri pati teri saath kahi nahi jayenge. (Pulls Ranbir to her direction)

R-I am not you're husband. We don't have a marriage. Chunnu i wish you all the luck with her. You are going to need it. She's all yours. To hell with this marr. (Kanya stops Ranbir from saying anything else and just breaks to pieces.) Come on Archita

C-Seriously. Ranbir hum dono ko man to man ek chat karna chahiye. Archie and Kanya can speak to one another. What say brother?

Kanya and Archie go to the next room glaring at one another like 2 lionesses fighting for thier man. Ranbir and Chunnu remain in the bedroom too look like they were gearing up for a punch up.

A-Kanya i just want to say one thing to you. I want Ranbir and i will use everything i have to get him. I can tell tum use chahte nahin. So why are you being all possessive about him. Just give in and let me have him. I can give him everything you can't love. He already has everything in his life. He is only lacking in someone loving him.

K-You keep your hands off of my husband you bloody 🤬

A-Aggar rokh sakhte ho to rook mujhe. You just don't want anyone else to have him.Ranbir can't stand you. Mere kaam easy banadiya uskeliye Thanx. Chunnu ke saath aur chipakna. That way mujhe itna kuch karne ki zaroori nahin. Tum chote log so cheap and easy. Paise wala se shaadi ki but you can't hang onto your man. Kaisi aurat hain.Mujhe dekh aggar mein chahti to mein Ranbir ko yu yu pa sakti. But tujhpe taras kake ek moka to dena chahiye.

K-What the hell are you on crazy woman. He is not a thing. I am not going along with your sick games.

A-If you want him come get him because once i get my claws in him trust me you won't know what hit you. He won't go to you woh mere paas rahega.

K-Mere pati ko aggar chuwa tho mein thera aankhen noch lungi aur teri haat kaat lungi. I am not weak. Mujhe kamzor mat samaj sab ke ankhon mein patti banda hain tune aggar teri bhol na khar di to mein bhi Ranbhir Nanda ki biwi nahin.

A-Mujhe damkiya sunne ki aadat nahin. I'm telling you by the end of this week your husband will be all mine. Us thappar ka jawab tumhe miljayegi soot samet. Only thing is I get something in return meri pyar. (Laughs in her face)

K-Tu mere pati ko mujhse cheen nahin sakhti because he's mine. Only mine got that. Rahi us chaate ki jawab yeh leh doosrie ghaal pe meine mara. (Gives a loud slap across the left chhek with her finger mark printed on them.) Kya karegi ab?

R-What the hell do you want monkey? Tera chucha sunne ki mera waqt nahin barbad karna chahta.

C-All i am going to say man is that i expected more from you. I thought tum Kanya ko kiss karoge and then i'll be off but mein tho rokh rahi hoon ussi keliye.

R-What kind of a guy are you. Abhi bhi bet ke peeche. Kanya is all yours to usse kiss kar mein jaa rahi hoon.

C-Mr Ghambhir tum mere kaam bohut ahsaan kar rahe ho. Koi maza nahin is mein. There is nothing between me and Chutki. Tere bheje mein daal. I can't stand Chutki in pain bechari rohte rohte reh gayi aur tune kha makha usko insult dedi.

R-You two losers are good i'm telling you. Mind to mere pehle se bhi blow ho chuki hain ab mera bheja urane ki baath kar rahe ho.

Ranbir and Chunnu hear some screaming from the room next door to them and see both women in a cat fight. Kanya and Archita in a brawl. Chunnu tries to remove Kanya from Archita and Ranbir tries to do the same with Archita. Both women are busy swearing and cursing eachother. Ranbir thought thank goodness mom was out. Ranbir tries to tend to Kanya but Chunnu had already beaten him to it leaving Ranbir out in the cold. He just didn't know what to do anymore. Kanya looked at Ranbir and was hurt by the fact that he was tending to the enemy. The woman that had just vowed to take Ranbir from her. Archita just mouthed 1 week and smiled.

Will Archita be successful in her mission to seperate Rankan?

Edited by matwamango - 17 years ago

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Maninder

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Posted: 17 years ago

#34

OMG...goOoOoO KANYA!!! haha...what drama dude..plz plz continue soon..I really want to know what happens next!

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-Min

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salma

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Posted: 17 years ago

#35

omg.!!!!
wow wat a apart!!! loved it
u go kanya...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
update soon..i'll be waiting...

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punjabi.princes

@punjabi.princes

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Posted: 17 years ago

#36

lol great update!
continue soon 😊

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Zaara

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Posted: 17 years ago

#37

👏 nope u deserve this 😡 😡 😡 GOD! just jokin continue soon 😉

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Aysha

@matwamango

Stunner

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Posted: 17 years ago

#38

Part 8

Chunnu calls Pooja to help Kanya deal with this mess that he felt guilty for causing. He hadn't realised all this would get so out of hand. Some people sure didn't know how to take a joke. He'd never seen Kanya this mad you could literally see her veins popping. Poor thing had scratch marks on her arms but she sure gave as good as she got. He'd better remember not to get on the wrong side of Kanya. Chunnu really wanted to see what Archie was doing as he wanted her away from the gorilla that is Ranbir.

C-Chutki what was all that about. You looked like two kids fighting over a candy and trust me Ranbir is no candy. That was what you were fighting about.

K-I will teach that 🤬 a lesson. If she thinks she can mess with me and those i love she has another thing coming. I am not going to let her win without a fight. Why did you stop me i could have had her?

C-Ok but i think you should watch her every move as she will not let go of Ranbir and the more this distance between the both of you exists the more she has over you. I think Pooja aur Shanta ko aggar yaha bhula de toh woh tumhari madad kar sakhte hain.

K-Mein uskeliye akele hi kafi hoon!

C-I know but she knows how to wind you up. This makes Ranbir see only you attacking his friend.

K-I can't believe he is so blind.

C-I can say the same about you Chutki. Tum bhi kam nahin ho. Jab hum teeno ney Ranbir ke saath mazaak kar rahe te tumne ek baar hume toka nahin. Ranbir bhi aisa karega kyun ki uska loyalty uska friend ki saath hain aur waise bhi humare badmashi woh achi tarah se dekha hain so he knows what we are capable of.

K-Phir bhi I am his wife. Is ne ek baar mere haal ki bare mein poocha nahin. That hurts. I don't know why but it does. Mein un dono ko dekhloongi.

Ranbir is with Archie. He is still trying to calm her down. What had gotten into Kanya he knew she was a malicious person when she was being influenced by Shanta or Chunnu but he'd never seen her so violent. What the hell was her problem she had her friend he had problems with that but knew he had to deal with it but why did she have to mess with his friend. Archie was normally not into brawls with anyone unless it came to him. Archie looked like she could murder someone. He was disappointed in both of them.

R-Gussa tanda huwi kya? Tum dono bache ki tarah kyun lad rahe te?

A-Ranbir usne mujhe gaali di and implied all things under the sun aur i know shes your wife but i will not stand it from anyone. She treats you so badly and you take it. I love the new Ranbir but the old one was better. The one that didn't have a care in the world. I want him back. Ranbir stand up for yourself. Show them that they can't break you. I have noticed that you are not eating normally. Your appetite is totally gone. Tum ab phi ne bhi lage ho. Why?

R-Look you steer clear of Kanya. I don't want to see you hurt at all. I know you can handle yourself i've seen it myself by how much you've hurt Kanya but she has her family that are more evil minded than anything we could ever come up with trust me i've had firsthand experience from their sadistic ways and i've always ended up looking bad. I am not getting in between your fued with one another. She's my wife and your my best friend.

A-Ranbir i won't get in too deep. Someone needs to teach her that she is not the queen bee.

R-Tum khabie badloge nahin. I like that. Stay that way i have gone a little soft but i am working on getting my hate guru back. Just promise me there won't be any bloodshed. I don't like blood.

A-I promise but if anyone strike first i won't be held accountable for my actions.

R-Thats my fellow hate girl. I should take lessons from you.

Downstairs Aditya bhai was cooking up another one of his master plan to bring Kanya and Ranbir together not realising that his plan to bring Kanya was working but Ranbir was drifting away from Kanya. Aditya also was unaware that Archita had her sights on Ranbir and there was no stopping what lengths she would go to. Kanya had come out of her room and Chunnu was on his way out.

AB-Kanya tumhara yeh halat kisne ki?

K-Us Archie ne. I swear i would have floored the witch.

AB-Yep Archie ko gussa aathi hain and she uses her fists a lot. London mein paali bari hain and has been in some major fights back in the day all regarding Ranbir and some about her background. She can't bear anyone mistreated especially Ranbir.

K-What? Ranbir ko uska kya lena dena hain. He's taken.

AB-In her eyes no. She believes that nobody is anybodies but hers if theres been history. Plus she knows you've treated Ranbir very badly in your Godbole house and has seen Ranbir as never before she will never forgive you for that. Give her time she may get over it.

Kanya starts to get upset and feels bad. Had she really been a heartless person who made Ranbir's life a misery? She thought of it as a practical joke but forgot that Ranbir was a person. How culd i have been such an idiot. I'd been taught not to wish ill or do ill upon anyone but i did this to RAnbir. On top i kept putting him down. No Ranbir is not a weak guy. The guy's a hate guru. He has no feelings. Mein bhi na. Ranbir ke feelings hain to mein ur sakthi hoon. But what if. This guy sure knows how to mess with my emotions. I feel every emotion there is but so confused. He is just to complicated as a person. Now he's brought in another complication Archita. Everytime i think about her my blood boils. The way she calls Ranbir hers really annoys me to the core. Ranbir is his own person he is not any ones maybe mine by name. Ranbir has taken over my life practically. I can't get rid of this saand. For some reason Kanya's tears were not stopping

AB-Kanya are you ok? I didn't mean it that way Archie ka dil achcha hai sachchi. She won't be a pester you or hurt you.

K-I'm fine. I don't know why these tears are flowing? Rahi Archie i'm not scared of her.

AB-Darna nahin just beware. That girl is crazy. I can't believe she's come here after such a long time. You can't let Ranbir be with her too long. She has an eye for Ranbir that is all i am warning you.

K-I've noticed but don't worry if Ranbir will not stray. Malika Mom ko keh doongi if he steps out of line.

AB-You shouldn't rely too much on Malika Chachi. I've seen Ranbir and he by now has stopped caring about money. He can make all that amount all by himself trust me.

K-Mujhe araam karna hain. I'm tired.

Kanya see's Ranbir and Archie coming down arm in arm which makes her feel like going on a murderous rampage but what she saw in Ranbirs eyes had scared her. He looked almost like his hatred for her was getting to a point where she felt that the new Ranbir was going to get lost to her. She had to do something and fast. Was this love or just a deep state of caring for someone she needed somebody to help her to come to terms with what she was feeling. Surely she can't love Ranbir she already thought she loved Ayaan and then Chunnu but what is love?

R-Aditya bhaiya both of us are going out for the day Archie needs cheering up after the past two days she's had at this house. I'd invite you Kanya but you are the one person that is causing Archie so much grief and i doubt you can keep yourself from your best friend. Anyone would think she wasn't welcome.

K-When will you be back? (Felt like someone had slapped her. Can't believe he is being so hurtful)

R-None of your business. I will come and go as i wish. As you have so many times told me to butt out i ask you to do the same.

K-Mummyji aggar........

R-I have had enough of your blackmail. Do what you wish? This is all you know anyway come Archie lets go where we are welcome.

With that both leave and Kanya is just left standing and believing in Aditya bhai. Ranbir no longer cared for money. Her only thought was how can i let them get away. I can't trust my own feelings. I can't tell Mom as Ranbir is expecting me to do it. Chunnu is right i need Pooja D and Shanta tai.

Edited by matwamango - 17 years ago