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Part 5

Ranbir finds all this a little too weird and a sense of dj vu. At the Godbole house he suffered a lot of flak from Kanya's friend Chunnu and those stupid challenges. He couldn't understand Kanya's perspective. Why the hell is she giving him murderous looks? He didn't do anything. It made him remember when Kanya and Chunnu were together it was too painful. He liked Kanya and loved her but she was making it really hard. He did everything for her. All thoses challenges and for what nothing? She never even batted an eyelid and instead told him that maybe after the divorce she and Chunnu could hook up.How can she be so passive and leave him out at her Maayka but his friend comes from London and expects him to leave his friend for her. E couldn't bare anymore Chunnu is better than you because he's my best friend. Is she mad? If not he was getting to that point where the sane looked insane, Anybody would have thought she was jealous but he knew Kanya too well. She just liked being the centre of attention well too bad she ignored him now time to repay her with the same ignorance. She could do whatever she liked with Chunnu had enough of this and turned his attention to Archie. Time to move on with life somehow.

R-So Archie kaisa laga humara Nnada family?

A-Love it. Ranbir. I like Shanaya she is a total cracker. Nuts and her husband Ayaan is so cute they both suit each other. I ove everything that is linked with you Ranbir every family member.

R-What about Kanya? She is also a family member.

A-She's ok. Has a few screws loose. I thnk she has a mental problem doctor ko dikhaya hain?

R-Dikhana chahiye. Then maybe i can understand her. Lets not talk about her come on hum jaake dance karte hain?

A-Come on then. Is keliye to mujhe intezaar tha. We were great together if only tumhara shaadi na hoti tho mein tumhara saath shaadi kar leti.

R-I don't know Atchie. Shaadi karke mera halath dekha hain tumne shyad agar tum yaha hote to mein us chipkali se shaadi na karta tumse hojata. We already care for each other as friends.

A-Friends can be great lovers too. You know.

R-Well end mein we come back to the same thing shaadi ho gaye hain thats that agar mera divorce hojaye then i will consider you. (Gives a sly smile)

A-Sloppy seconds no thanks. Aggar meri saath jaana hai then i must come first. Stop teasing me Ranbir. Waise jokes apart tum kya sach mein doosre shaadi karoge. Then yaad rakhna mein pehle se line mein kadi hoon. I will always wait for you.

R-You stop flirting. Shameless flirt. (Laughs) Ek saal intezar karo. Ok sab kuch tikh hone ke baad i will get back to you. Kanya ko pehle shaadi karakar mein tumhara ho jaonga. (Laughs a little but looked a little hurt)

A-You look serious Ranbir. If you want i can talk to her. Afi bhaiya ne mujhe sabh keh di hain. You know tumhara contract marriage ke bare mein. You will get through this your strong. Ranbir Nnada. Woh Kanya kaunsi cheez hain jo tumhe dukh degha. Mein tumhara saath hoon.

R-Yes its all true. Akele mein you know. Adhi bhaiya aur mera alava koi aur madad dehne wala nahin hain. Kanya ko tho Shanta aur Pooja help kar rahe hain. I'm glad tum mere saath ho.

Kanya overhears the conversation and is deeply distressed with the way they were acting. She couldn't believe Ranbir was already planning his second wedding. Bloody Ranbir. Bedroom mein uski khabar loongi mein. How dare e and Aditya bhai tell her about the contract marriage. This was between me and ranbir. Miya aur biwi ke beech yeh kaha se agaya. Now she will be all over Ranbir like a rash.

Ranbir and Archita dance to 2 songs. In Krazzy 4 dance they were moving real fast holding each other Ranbir's arms around Archie's waist she couldn't bare looking at how much fun they were having. He was smiling away at her. Kanya couldn't remember the last time she and Ranbir were ever like this. They spent most of their time at each others throats. Chunnu came to dance with Kanya. She didn't feel like it but felt she might as well maybe her best friend could cheer her up.

C-Kanya enjoy yaar. It's a party. Not a funeral. (Looks over at what Kanya was looking at Ranbir)

K-Sorry i'm not much company but Ranbir and i had an argument. Ab woh mere taraf dekhta bhi nahin. Woh us Archi ke saath itna close dance kar raha hain.

C-So Kanya tum jalte ho. Ranbir loves you any fool can see that. Woh shayad badla le raha hain tumse. You know jaise hum dono ne waqt bitaya aise ab woh ussi technique leke tumhe jalaraha hain. Tum accept karlo. Tumne uska dil dhookaya hain.

K-Chunnu. Mein jati nahin woh bhi us bandariya se. Khabre pehnbi nahin hain usne lagta hain kisi khote se bag ke aye hain. Ranbir jaake us ladki ko leke kisi pahari se ghir jaye. I hate that woman.

C-Chutki tum bohut ziddi ho. Kabhi kisi ke samne apni galti nahin maano ge. Your too proud.

Now a romantic song is on Zaara zaara touch me touch me and both couples are dancing away. Archie grabs Ranbir real tight and really touching him. Ranbir looks at her knowing full well she's totally flirting shamelessly. He understands her felings as he had been there and needs to get out of that hole maybe she could help him get over Kanya.

Kanya's eyes were burning a hole in Ranbir. She held onto Chunnu around his neck and her grip was getting tight. She was on the verge of strangling Chunnu. Ranbir was holding Archie even closer as he could see that Kanya was dancing with Chunnu. He couldn't bare that look she was giving Chunnu like she was going to pounce him. He felt like his heart had been ripped out and trample on by a thousand horses. He closed his eyes and just tries to think clear. Kanya was hating the fact that not once had Ranbir come to her even to call her names. At least he was speaking to her now she couldn't stand the blanks he was giving her. His eyes were only on one person Archie.She saw some glances her gave towards her and Chunnu. She also knew that he hated Chunnu but she hated Archie with every core in her body. Damn that woman. Ranbir looked like he was going to kiss her. He better not? I will kill him. The first time was bad enough. She didn't know what she would do the second time. Why is she touching my husband like that. Does she not have any shame. How dare she touch him so intimately. I will tear her eyes out. I will cut her limbs off. Oh 🤬 She has one hand on his bum.

C-Kanya. I want to dance with Archie tum mind to nahin karoge.

K-No tum jao. (She was thinking finally. That mad cow will be away from Ranbir. The sooner the better.)

Chunnu went over and asked politely if Archie would dance with him. Ranbir told her she might as well so she did. Only they weren't dancing as close as Ranbir and Archie had. Ranbir was just glad Chunnu had his hands off Kanya.

I-Chachu apne Kanya chichi ke saath abhi dance nahi kiya? Go she is looking pretty mad. Jao dance karo. Ya phir mein kisi doosre ladke ko bejh deti hoon. If thats what you want.

R-Fine i will go. Tum bacche aaj kal zyada pushy ho.


I-Apke neice hoon to appe thori gayi hoon. Jaate ho ya?

E-Chachi app Chachu ke saath nacho na. He is looking so glum without you.

K-Eva tumhara chacu jaye baar mein. Woh uski saath all night hain.

E-He only has eyes for you. Now go before woh dobara Archie ke paas chale jaye.

Eva takes Kanya to Ranbir and tells them both for being childish and makes them dance to Zara sa dil mein from Jannat. Ira and Eva feel so much happier now as they can see both their Chachu and Kanya's face softening.

E-They are so immature. So stubborn.

I-They are made for each other.

Kanya and Ranbir dance with one another. At first Ranbir's grip is hard and full of force and Kanya digs her nails into Ranbir.

R-Kanya look at me. Tum ko aaj kya hogaya hain. Why are you like this?

K-Why are you? Uske saath aise chipak chipak se naach rahe te. You completely blanked me point blank. You have never done that.

R-Kanya tum bhi to us Chunnu ke saath bara maza aarahatha. I haven't said anything as i know tum use chahte ho.

K-Ofcourse as my friend but for someone whose supposed to be your friend she is awfully close. Why did you tell her everything?

R-I told you to tell Chunnu but you wouldn't. Tum use shaadi karna chati ho so i thought i might as well find a bride for myself and Archie loves me a lot. Actually loves me. Now that i know what love is mein use pyaar kar sakthi hoon. I am starting to enjoy married life. Not the arguements but the thought of loving someone is not scary for me now.

Kanya looks sad and ranbir doesn't want to make her upset. Why did he have to change? I can't believe woh us curail ki saath shaadi karna chahta hain.

R-Mein tumhe dookhi nahi dekhna chahti hoon. I will go.

K-Don't go. Mere saath raho. Please at least for the family. Just to show them.

Both dance so romantically and just get lost in one another and forget that they are surrounded by people. Family members. They stay like that for the next 8 songs not moving away. Lost in each other as if time stood still.

Edited by matwamango - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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just started reading
thank god u made thiss ff
atleast they reach to the nanda house!!!
cont soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i loved the update... pls continue soon
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great update
continue soon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Great story!!
Keep going its really interesting!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 6

Ranbir and Kanya finish their dance and all the family just can't take their eyes off the couple. They can all see that ranbir and Kanya are made for each other. Its time for Antakshri and there are 2 teams formed the Nanda's versus the Godboles. Chunnu went with Kanya and sat beside her and Archie sat next to Ranbir real close. Kanya was fuming at Ranbir. Every member was there and they are sitting like that. Bardasht ki bi had hothi hain. Ranbir just looked on icily as he too couldn't stand Kanya with Chunnu even though they weren't flirting with each other like they did at the Godbole house. But then again Chunnu's eyes were focused on Archie. That guy just can't focus on one girl he has to focus on all things linked to me. Bloody Chunnu.

I-Ok family members to make the numbers fair we have jointly decided that me, Eva, Big D and Mummy are not participating in the game and from the Godbole family Pooja so that it is all fair and square.


Pooja-Besides we are too good in this game and felt that tum novices ko hum tori bohut madad karenge pointers dekhe. Jokes apart it's only fair that this event is not fixed.

E-Let the games commence. I always wanted to say that. (Laughing away with Ira.)

I-Ok So lets start with the Nanda's kaun ayega pehle. Aur yaha se unki paper lekhe sing karenge.

First malika gets up and sings and dances, then from the Godbole family Anand sang Roop tera mastana for Pammi. Arth comes next followed by Harpal with his funny act Dhoom and his funny dance but couldn't remember the words. Shlok was out as time ran out for him as he couldn't think of a song. Pammi sang Aja aja mein hoon pyar tera inkaar tera.Ayaan sang All hot girls but he got distracted by Shanaya's provocative moods and that put him off. Shanta does Chali chali isq ki hawa chali. Aditya bhai come in does Ek taraf hain ghar wali ek taraf hain bhar wali looking at Kanya in the eye and then joining Ranbir and Archie together which is driving Kanya beyond insanity. Kanya instantly knew what that song represented leading Archie to go even closer to Ranbir. Chunnu gets up and Yeh pyaar diwana hota hain Looking at Archie.

Archie sings in a bad tone Devdas's Mardala allah mardala. Ranbir sings Dard-e-disco looking at kanya but then shifts his gaze to Archie. Kanya starts to get up and sings the song Lambhie Judai and involuntarily gets up and gets Ranbir up from his seat away from Archie and just stares at him. She grabs his face and just sings with tears flowing. Ranbir is totally lost not knowing where Kanya is coming from. All the family just get up clapping and cheering. The Godbole family won the task but two people are left shaken with their performance. Archie rakes Ranbir away from Kanya. Chunnu comes after Kanya to see if she's ok. Kanya is too busy looking at Ranbir going away aand not looking back. Ranbir just wants to get away. Totally feeling suffocated. At this point he doesn't know what to feel anymore. He knew he had deep feelings for Kanya but he'd resigned to the fact tha Kanya is lost to him and she is Chunnu's. He would never get in her way.

C-kanya!Are you ok. Tum roh kyun rahi ho. Ranbir ne kuch kiya kya?

K-Why would Ranbir do anything?I hate him. Stupid ghada us kutti ki saath chalagaya itni aasanise.

C-Then go to him. Itni jalan achcha nahin sari ghar jala dogi tum.

K-Jalan aur mujhe my foot. Aggar kisi ko jalana hain woh us Archita. Everything was fine until she came. Ranbir ab sirf us kamini ki saath rehta hain aur dost kya agaya hume bhool gaya.

C-Tum bhi uska saath aise kuch kiya mujhe leke aur Ranbir ko bohut dukh laga. Par you didn't care. You are just getting what you sowed. Tumne uski feelings hurt ki. Waise bhi woh proud aadmi hain apne feelings kisi ke saath share karne se woh comfortable nahin. Hum mard hain hi aise. Mujhe pehle se maloom tha but i wanted to see your reaction Chutki. You do love him na. Because tumhe competition hain Archita ke saath. Whether you like it or not.

K(Mein tumhe kaise bataoon i don't have feelings for Ranbir we don't see each other that way. I can't even tell you the truth for fear of you telling Dad. There might be some truth in the fact that i am use to having Ranbir's full attention.)-Chunnu she is no competition to me. If she can do sexy so can i. But i want my husband to notice me for me. We might not seem like we are in love but right now we are going through a rough patch.

C-Then deal with the problem Chutki. Tumhara husband Saand jaisa shreer hain par he's quite attractive to it girls because of his status trust me i know. I had the same problem back in America. But that girl is rich anyway she already loves Ranbir and will go to any lengths as i've heard girls from England are mostly go getters woh action mein believe karte hain and they take nobody for granted jo cheez unne pasand ajathi hain they go for it.

K-Chunnu tumne kisise pyar kiya?

C-I thought i did. But woh pyar nahin ho saktha agar mein doosrie ladkiyo ko aise nazaar daal thi hoon. If i'm honest i thought America se yaha aake mein tumhe urake le jao but you belong to Ranbir. I can see it. I don't think you realise it yet as tum bohut stubborn like your husband. Mujhe sirf Archie pe Nazaar hain but she's engaged to Ranbir and i hate the fact that woh ek shaadi shuda aadmi ke saath aisi hain.

K-I am disappointed Chunnu i thought you liked me more than a friend aur tum Ranbir ke thara us ladki ko chahti ho. Jao aur us London wali khutti ko mere pat se hatao.

C-Kanya trust me. Andhar jhaank ke dekho tumhe. Tumhari saari sawaalo ki jawab mil jayegi. Kisses her forhead.
Ranbir see's all this and now grabs hold of Archie quite tight. That Chunnu usne meri Kanya ko kiss kiya sab ke saamne. How dare he. Mein yaha kuch nahin kar sakhta. It would cause a bad atmosphere. Archita takes Ranbir upstairs and Kanya follows them with Chunnu.

A-Ranbir you know i love you. A lot. I know the truth but tell me what is in your heart do you love your wife? Face the truth. If yes i get it. I won't get in the way but if no or maybe then i will do what i can to win your heart.

R-Mera dil mein kya hain i don't know. I am confused. I told myself didn't but i get so emotional when i think of her. But nobody understands in her family. Only Aditya bhaia explained my feeling. I do care for her and i think i love her but she confuses me all the time. Now you're here and i care for you too but this is where main tumhe ke sakhti hoon. I honestly don't know mein kaha hoon is mor pe. I know Kanya is just jealous of seeing you thats it. She just wants to see me hurt. Us Godbole house mein Chunnu ke saath gulchariya urah rahi thi. My best friend. I got sick of it. I'm her husband dammit. Always comparing us. Mujhe bohut bura laga.

Archie-Thats a maybe then. Ranbir that is more than i expected. You were a closed off guy but you really have changed. Hate guru aur ishq. Now tum sach much ke love guru ban gaye.

R-Actually tumhari baat mein dum hain. I am glad tum mere zindagi mein wapas agayi. I needed a good friend
Kanya was listening to the conversation se knew it was wrong but she didn't know why she was being the snoopy wife. She had to see what the competition had on her. Chunnu had stopped her from going in and she was glad but sad that Ranbir cared about er but thought so low of her. She couldn't blame him.


A-I feel like doing something. Tum gussa to nahin hoge. Tuhare saath.

R-Gussa aur tumse never. Karo jo karna chahti ho.

A-baad mein mat kehna ke meine warn nahin kiya. It might take you for six. Promise.

R-Ok. Just don't hurt me. I can't take anymore hurt. Logo ko hurt karte karte mein sach much bohut hurt ho chuki ho.

A-Trust me i can never hurt you. Aanken band karo.
Archie gave a big kiss and made sure Kanya and Chunnu saw it. She knew they were there. She had to do this for Ranbir. She knew he needed help and if she could help him anyway she would even if she had to hurt herself in the process. Seeing this Kanya got out of hiding went straight for Archie. Pulled her towards her and gave a big slap across Archie's face
. Her cheek was red.

K-You cheap British bimbo. Mere pati se door hat. Tere itne majaal mere pati ko chummy deti hain aur woh bho dobara aur meri ghar mein. Bardasht ke bhi ek limit hoti hain. Koi Biwi apne pati ke saath doosri aurat ke saat nahin dekh sakhti. Shameless the pair of you.

A-Badi aye shameless. Tu apne is yaar ke saath sari raath guzaari sabke saamne. Koi yeh nahin kahegi ke tum Ranbir se pyar karti ho but that tumhari chakkar Chunnu ke saath. Aur you Chunnu look all you like at the end of the day agar Ranbir ko aitraaz nahin to tumhe kya. (Starts crying)

R-Kanya get out of my sight. I can't bare to look at you. Archie is right tum dono ne mera saath bohut Zulm ki. You have no idea how much you've hurt me. I won't give you the satisfaction of any details but you have no right ke mere dist se aise bartaav karo. I can't say or do anything. Maa aur pariwar ke samne. Chunnu tumhe Kanya chahiye na. Dus mahine ke intezaar ke baad she's all yours. Take her to America and teach her Love. Is ke maine(meaning) woh bhool chuki hain. Mujhe nafrat karte karte ab uski dil kaali ho chuki hain. Mara dil me jo hain mein daba doonga.

K-Ranbir why are you speaking in this tone. In this manner? Tum mujhe dara rahe ho. Mein sorry nahin bolungi. I feel the way i feel woh tumhe jab chooti hain to mujhe aag lagti hain. That kiss you didn't even move her.

C-Ranbir, Kanya does have a point. It was not so innocent.

R-The pair of you get lost. Archie ko kiss nahin karna chahiye tha but she knows the truth. If Kanya had the nerve she'd tell you but she doesn't have the bottle.Na jaane mera dimaak kaha tha jab mein is psycho ko dil deneki soch mein raha tha. Time is a healer aur samay ki saath i'll learn to get rid of you from every corner of my life. Mein is party se chala jaraha hoon. Come on Archie. Leave these two losers. I'll wait for you downstairs. We will go out had enough of this hell.

A-I will never forgive you. Is chaate ko yaad karungi mein and i will never forgive for what you did to Rannu. Woh dil ki saaf hain. Tum ne usko kya kiya. Dard mein hain aur tum andhi hoke bet gaye. Pathar ke paas bhidil hain tumse zyada. Lagtha hain nafrat karte karte tum apne pehchaan ko chuki ho. Look niche sab yeh dekhna chahte hain ke upar kya huwa. You can do the explanation. I will tend to ranbir.

Kanya is left speechless and looking at Ranbir leave. Kanya's family leave without Ranbir present there as Kanya tells them all that he had to go on an emergency call.

The whole night Ranbir doesn't come home and Archie is with him causing Kanya even more stress.

What will happen?Will Ranbir turn to Archie?Will kanya ever confess what she is hiding in her heart?Stay tuned!

Edited by matwamango - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awww that was so sad plz wtire more sooon
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lol kanya slapped archie!
update soon!
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wow ..kya part tha yaar great
pls update soon!!!
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Great Part!
Loved Ranbir's outburst.
Please update soon.

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