“Echoes of the past”(PartIX) last part :) - Page 8

Originally posted by: monikaseth

I must say bhoomi supriya ke ghar jane se pehle helmet pehnni hogi 😆 jaan nikal di thi . 😉


Mindblowing ending they blessed with daughter sooo sweeet . bhoomi this is for you. 👏

hahaha helmet ..😆😆😆Monika main tumhari aor se unhe yehi gift unkey anniversary pe dedungi..😉

awww sweety ....itna applause main to faitn hi hogayi thi😳... Am so happy that I have such sweet and wonderful readers, friends who have encouraged me so mcuh... that helps me to survive in this section... aur tumne itna pyaar and pyaare comments diye hain.... a hugur way...🤗

hey bhoomi..........i just read the whole story n it was just too good 😃
i liked vinay;s n supriya;s character a lot.....and the linings of te poems which u used in between were awesome...write another story fast...i m waiting😳 😳 😳

hey bhoomi i have read all ur ff but i must say this is the most beautiful one . it well described how a person can handel their past with grace rather than cribbing over it and how they can keep it awayfrm their present and future making life more beautiful. a gr8 job and a big jappi 4 u 4 this amazing ff. 🤗

ahaaaaaaaaaaan...first of all.... 100 jadoo ki jhappis coming to ur way Bhoomi ... now let me write my comment. it was suuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuperb .. i was like..kash real life mein aise situations hote aur lgo aise react karte....chalo, finally Vinay ne mera dil jeet liya hai... awwwwww i likes so much whn he said, mujeh apni intror ko sab plastic ka bananeko bolna padega.. hehe... n party mein toh wah...kya baat hai... too gud ...

oye Bhoomi, i was blushing whn the song came, tu mera janu hai..tu mera dilbar hai..i always felt yeh song teenagr love pe fit baitha ta but yahan bhi accha laga ..lol.. baki sare gane toh were so apt ...

Had a grt time reading this story yaar. short n simple yet very meaningful..the party scene is soemthing..the way u wrote anyone can actualy visualised it...n hatts of to ur calibr...

keep up the fab work dear ...it's always a fantastic feeling to read something like this n written by such creative people like u..

Originally posted by: seasplash

hey bhoomi..........i just read the whole story n it was just too good 😃
i liked vinay;s n supriya;s character a lot.....and the linings of te poems which u used in between were awesome...write another story fast...i m waiting😳 😳 😳

Hi Khubu.... Loveed to know u like the lead charcters of the story.. Viany and Supriay have their own charm na.. The poetic lines.. 😉chalo now that makes me to use them more often in my story as i feel u all loveit...😳 Another story.. abtak havnt thought of anyidea...and am such amoddy... lets see. what happens... givign u all soem break till then..😉

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

hey bhoomi i have read all ur ff but i must say this is the most beautiful one . it well described how a person can handel their past with grace rather than cribbing over it and how they can keep it awayfrm their present and future making life more beautiful. a gr8 job and a big jappi 4 u 4 this amazing ff. 🤗

Hi Jyothi dear.... U foudn this one so nice among the fanfics.. oh god thats making me feel i still can write.. many of my ff r written logn time bakc.. but this one was new and written just a week back.. so feels good that still i can write a ok shoky fanfic... past is past.. always we shoudl take the postive and try to feel it had some positive to give us only then we can survive with it... as we can never chnge the past... ur jahppi was full of love yaar.. ekdam sukun mila... a tight jhappi ur way.....🤗

Originally posted by: nisisanjh

ahaaaaaaaaaaan...first of all.... 100 jadoo ki jhappis coming to ur way Bhoomi ... now let me write my comment. it was suuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuperb .. i was like..kash real life mein aise situations hote aur lgo aise react karte....chalo, finally Vinay ne mera dil jeet liya hai... awwwwww i likes so much whn he said, mujeh apni intror ko sab plastic ka bananeko bolna padega.. hehe... n party mein toh wah...kya baat hai... too gud ...

oye Bhoomi, i was blushing whn the song came, tu mera janu hai..tu mera dilbar hai..i always felt yeh song teenagr love pe fit baitha ta but yahan bhi accha laga ..lol.. baki sare gane toh were so apt ...

Had a grt time reading this story yaar. short n simple yet very meaningful..the party scene is soemthing..the way u wrote anyone can actualy visualised it...n hatts of to ur calibr...

keep up the fab work dear ...it's always a fantastic feeling to read something like this n written by such creative people like u..

Hi Sara.... hmmm gettign ur comment is like I will to know a deep briefing abt the little soft thign sinto the story which u liked.. and it always feels glad ot get it.... u always say 100 jahppi magar countign kartey kartey me get tired.... isliye 5-6 extra jhappi bhi haan..😆

Real life.. it can happen.. actualy a lot o fmy short storie sr wirten wiht a fact that it shoudl look and have a realisti cfeel ..ki yeh bhi hosakt ahai.. not much of romance over the top situation whcih r unbelivale.. less of fantacy more more realistic feel... SO may be soemthignliek this may have happend..though i havnt seen such in my life.. for me its my imagination...

Ya the story is hsort n simple.. simple like my thoughts.... 😃 and when u say they r meangingful it makes me smile.. thats what i want.. it should make some sense... and in apositive way.. i try to add atleast a little where a good thoguht or issue is spoken abt.. am glad friends liek u have always got it and encouarged me with that... luv u dear....

My calibre.. i dont know.. i always feel i am not very good...just my thoguhts .. r good..and creative i try that .. with every story not in the same line. btu with differnet situation and diferent set of people.. thoguht my hero or heroine.. lead hcarcter have tobe postiive.. i cant bear them do mistake and not feel guilty abt it.. they need to improve then only i can make them look good...😃luv u dear for all ur wonderful coment sand the wya u always make me feel special.... Onek Onek rasgulla in ur mouth.. two at one tiem...😆

Hi Bhoomy dear. It was an amazing part. Loved all the poems. Its just very fantastic. 👏 👏 👏
Wow Vinni staring at Priya was soo cute. Oho so Vinni wants to get married soooon. Thats shweet na. 😆
I hate this Shekhar. Idiot. 😡 I dont know what he thinks of himself. But Vinni was sooo shweet. The way he supported and helped Priya was just very cute. And Shekhars face - man I was imagining and laughing. 😆 😆
So Shekhar didnt get her he didnt want to others to get her. The way Vinni handled everything instead of getting angry and Shekhar just reacted in the opposite way. It was awesome. 😳 👏
That was really dirty when he said Ms. Saujanya ur saut and all that to Priya. 🤢 But thank god Vinni is there to suport her. 😃
Loved the game and song selection. It was just fabouluos. 👏 The situations given by Shekhar were just dirty. 🤢 Some people never change. The best part was that though Shekhar was angry and trying to insult them, they both were calm and went through the situations and gave an answer to every sitution given to them in a nice and pleasant manner.
Wow so they get married and have construted the hospital. That was really good. Dhwani is a really cute name. A cute kid, i must say.
The poem in the last was just superb. It really was well described.This story was realyy superb. Specially the way u descriebed that past shouldnet affect the present and future. And it should be a present. That makes the story the best.
👏

Originally posted by: aksksara

Hi Bhoomy dear. It was an amazing part. Loved all the poems. Its just very fantastic. 👏 👏 👏
Wow Vinni staring at Priya was soo cute. Oho so Vinni wants to get married soooon. Thats shweet na. 😆
I hate this Shekhar. Idiot. 😡 I dont know what he thinks of himself. But Vinni was sooo shweet. The way he supported and helped Priya was just very cute. And Shekhars face - man I was imagining and laughing. 😆 😆
So Shekhar didnt get her he didnt want to others to get her. The way Vinni handled everything instead of getting angry and Shekhar just reacted in the opposite way. It was awesome. 😳 👏
That was really dirty when he said Ms. Saujanya ur saut and all that to Priya. 🤢 But thank god Vinni is there to suport her. 😃
Loved the game and song selection. It was just fabouluos. 👏 The situations given by Shekhar were just dirty. 🤢 Some people never change. The best part was that though Shekhar was angry and trying to insult them, they both were calm and went through the situations and gave an answer to every sitution given to them in a nice and pleasant manner.
Wow so they get married and have construted the hospital. That was really good. Dhwani is a really cute name. A cute kid, i must say.
The poem in the last was just superb. It really was well described.This story was realyy superb. Specially the way u descriebed that past shouldnet affect the present and future. And it should be a present. That makes the story the best.
👏

Hi Sara... wow!! ur comments just make me realise how much u liked this one...Yup Vinni is sweet in certain parts and ya he is simple and soft and thats what i wanted to hsow..only when his past coems he becomes very emotional... Ya am glad u took note of that saut wali thing.. it just showed the low Shekhar can get too.. ya even the situation he gave..just shows his charcter graph where he is an A grade IDiot..😆 am glad u enjoyed the situation ongs part.and also the poeic liens.. hope it added fun elemetn 😃

Yup in the end.. as people get mature their love dedication goes beyond family and they want to give somethign to the society and this lovely couple did brign that.. ehheh u liekd the name dhwani... echoes of the past.... janedo..ab melody agayi.. heheh .. Am happy that u liked that lines int he end.. it does brign abotu the essence of the story out...

Hey Sara lovely comments i flet whatever i wanted to project came out by ur comments and it touched u the way i wanted.. especially few scene or line which r the higlight for me.. u have disccused htem and so it feels nice... ur appreication just touched me.. luv it.. a hug ur way🤗😃

Originally posted by: ssh57

Fantabulous story. The feelings very beautifully protrayed. U showed how people don't mind boys having affairs but a girl just can't. but just one question, do u think there could really be such a mature and understanding girl like Supriya??? One more thing I wanted to ask u, u wrote one story witha muslim background, this one a typical south indian background, how come????? But the best part of all are your poetic lines. They rhyme perfectly at the same time they express the thought exactly.

Hi ,