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Posted: 17 years ago
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great yaar!!!!!!!!!jeet in love....
jeet and saachi sitting on a tree
K I S S I N G 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey lovely part just loved every bit of and their excitment was very well described and ofcourse my fav part the poems were just awsome
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: ami_princess

great yaar!!!!!!!!!jeet in love....
jeet and saachi sitting on a tree
K I S S I N G 😆

ehehheeh Jeet in love to theek hai..whats this they both on tree??😆oh my God maine to sirf Baagh likha yehan garden ke upar ke tree tak..wow!! but that wil be cute as well... 😳 kissing..hmm ab tak to aisa kuch nahi dikhraha hai... waise falshback khatm nah huaaa hai... lets see..agey kya ho... next episode will be a bit lighter only..

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

hey lovely part just loved every bit of and their excitment was very well described and ofcourse my fav part the poems were just awsome

Hi jyothi... am so happy that u liked htis epsidoe as well... and liked the poems ba...waise there will a poem in the 8th episode and i really am waiting to know whow to will like that one... i mean thats something i woudl like u to read..so just few days an dit will be in frotn.. thanks for all ur encoruaging words😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow!!! awesome part !! loved all those cute lil poems!!
ashu-jeet ki dosti is gr88 😛 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: togepe30

wow!!! awesome part !! loved all those cute lil poems!!
ashu-jeet ki dosti is gr88 😛 👏

Hi Vandu😃..thank u so much for l;ikign this part and encouragign me such nice words... aww u liked the poems adn when i read cute...i was like lagata hai u really smield readign them.😳..u r likign Ashu and Jeet's friendship..aww next episode mey dekho yeh dosti ka asar..😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
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bhoomi its awesome. Its wonderful to read a fic by u. U are an amazing writer.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: golu_1677

bhoomi its awesome. Its wonderful to read a fic by u. U are an amazing writer.

hi Golu, its actually a great feelign to get a compliment by u...i am not a very good writer but i think my thoughts r ok shoky for people to love it😳...so glad that u r enjying readin git...

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Episode 7

08-02-07

Jeet and Ashu were waiting for Saachi at the restaurant and Jeet was drinking glasses of water one after another in the anxiety of meeting her. Ashu asked him, why he is so nervous, its not as if he has to propose her. Jeet got a little more nervous and soon Saachi came, she was wearing a beautiful salwar kammez looking pretty and walked smiling towards them. Jeet saw her and all his nervousness had gone; he felt only he and Saachi existed now. He went towards her greeted her, she shook hands and he gave her the seat to sit and asked her what she will have. Saachi also at the other hand was not nervous until she reached the place, but as she saw him she became nervous and her hands were sweating she saw a lot of love in his eyes,

she could go on just looking into his eyes but she felt shy to look into his eyes with love.

Jab tumhari in Gehri Ankhon mey

Apne aapko dekhti hun,

Mano lagta hai tumne baho mey thama Mujhko,

Aur Mann hi Mann muskura, sharma jati hun,

Ye kya ho raha hai dil dhadaka jaa raha hai

Tumhare kareeb Hokar tumhara hona cha raha hai…

She smiled looking at his gentle care for her and the way he lovingly asked. She hadn't seen this side.

Soon as they were conversing and fondly looking at each other Ashu interrupted,

Ashu: Hi Saachi I am Ashutosh, Jeet's friend and I will find the person behind all that happened.

Saachi saw the seriousness in which he asked her. Jeet realized he had forgotten Ashu was with them…

Jeet: Sorry I forgot to introduce u, Saachi, he is Ashutosh ..

Ashu: I have introduced myself and..

Jeet: I call him Ashu, u can also call him Ashu. I am sure he willl not mind.

Ashu raised his eyebrow: Ya!

Saachi: Hi Ashu, am glad that u r trying to help us in this matter. I have to say Atish is innocent for sure. I still feel someone who must have got the keys should be the person behind this. How he got Atish keys am not able to know.

Jeet: Yes, Keys r always with Atish, along with his car keys…

Ashu: I have taken info to know who gave documents to the rival firm and my source is really good, till tomorrow I will have the details for sure. What I want to know is which postion is Atish I mean if he goes who takes his position Jeet?

Jeet: I am handling at present, he was made incharge, he actually would be the key person to this branch, and from grass root level he is handling this branch. Mr. Verma is the other senior person working here. And Mr. Rustom is working with us even before Atish joined us. Few of projects made by Rustom were given to Atish as they were not properly done and the deadline was close. Mr. Verma is very cool headed and if I find it appropriate I may have Mr. Verma to take over that responsibility. Other people working here r new.

(The waiter comes)

Jeet asks Saachi what she will have. Ashu interrupts: Saachi u should have the capsicum pizza with cheese here, it's really too good. He ordered the pizza even before she could say anything. Jeet realized it and asked her again, 'and something else u would like to have'.Ashu was again about to say something, before Ashu said anything, Jeet stamped on his leg and told him softely Shut up…

Saachi: No its ok, I will have the capsicum Pizza… nothing more..(they ordered the pizza and Ashu ordered for Jeet as he knew what Jeet likes, Chicken tandoori with a glass of lemon juice his usual)

Jeet felt sad that Saachi has to eat what Ashu ordered.

Jeet: Even I will have capsicum pizaa today…

Saachi smiled with his answer and Ashu was shocked.

Ashu: Dekha mujhe to pehle se hi pata tha capsicum pizaa ab hit item hoga

(he winkled and laughed looking at Jeet). Waise Tumhe …. Aap kehna jaroori to nahi na..Saachi..

Saachi: ya its fine…

Ashu: Haan Saachi waise kaunsa actor tumhe achaa lagta hai… kal ek bahut achi film lagi hai..dekhne chalogi… 'Bhoot bangla'..

Jeet knew Ashu is in his masti mood, he interrupted…

Jeet: Hum baat kar rahe they Office ke logon ki…

Saachi: waise aur ek baat batani thi, office mey ek ladka hai Nilesh , Masumi told me she finds that guy always trying to hear what she is speaking from the time this happened..even before that he was very observant about her movments in the office.

Jeet: Oh, I see..

Ashu: Achaa I will enquire about him, and tell Masumi to not let him know that she has observed this…

Saachi: Ya sure.

Ashu: I assure u Saachi, main sab kuch pata lagalunga, this matter isn't that complex,

Jeet: Ya, I have to think how Atish will be feeling if he is innocent...it's not easy to digest when someone accuses wrongly ….

(suddenly Jeet Was back to his serious side, feeling restless and Ashu had observed it, he felt what he should do by which Jeet forgets those memories which make him to disbelief anyone)

Saachi: Jeet, Atish will be fine as soon as he gets to know u believe him. And it may be hard to digest that u r wrongly accused but when u stand firm and get to know the real people who stand for u, u feel much stronger. In life it's important to learn a lesson but its more important that take the positive side of the things and not the negative. As goodness is hard to find but looking long at the bad is a pessimist view not an optimist view. She smiled and soon her mobile rang, her dad had called….

As Saachi was talking on her mobile…Jeet was looking at her, his eyes had some sadness but her words kept echoing and he had a smile on his face.

Ashu observed and felt Saachi's looks rnt the only thing which is helping Jeet but also her thoughtfulness is working to make him feel good abut the world around.

Tumse Milkey Jaana zindagi ka aur ek rang,

Positive vibes ke sath zindagi ko jeene ka dhang,

Tumhari sunderta tumhare chehre tak simit nahi hai,

Tumhare batonki sanjidgi ney mujhe apna bana liya hai…

After a while Jeet and Ashu were chatting about their friendship, their school days. Saachi also felt nice talking with them, seeing how wonderful and close their friendship is. Saachi spoke about her and Masumi their friendship and shared few instances.

After their dinner, they were walking towards the car. Jeet told her he will drop her, Jeet opened the front door of the car for her and immediately Ashu sat and started checking the cd rack, wishtling. Jeet was getting irritated and Ashu was enjoying pulling his leg. Saachi could sense it and she went and sat behind. Jeet just smiled at her. Jeet was driving the car in btw trying to take a glimpse at her, while Saachi was looking outside, the wind blowing her hair and she trying to settle the hair.

Even Saachi tried to look at him and felt how nice as a person he is. She remembered his face when he had opened the front door and Ashu sat, she slightly laughed at the way Jeet was taken aback.. She remembering those moments smiled fondly and looked outside.

Saachi: 'Jee' tumey ek baachey jaisi chaah hai,

Dil mey sachey jazbaat aur pyaar hai,

Jeet: 'Saachi' tumse milney ka yeh jo ehsaas hai,

Zindagi ko nayi dhang se jeeney ki ab pyaas hai..

Ashu was observing these secret glances and he said,

Ashu: Arey Jeet yaar teri woh achhi dost kahan hai..kya naam tha uska, woh jiske kale lambe baal the, neeli gehri ankhen… areey yaad aeey kaisi hai woh…

Saachi heard and was feelgin a little bit upset and was keen to hear…

Jeet heard and took a look at Saachi and said.

Jeet: Kaun,..mujhe to koi dost yaad nahi… Teri hi dost hogi..

Ashu: Achaa…ab yaad nahi hogi…yaad ajayegi..

Saachi heard and felt a bit jealous....her happiness from her face vanished and she kept talking in her mind,

Saachi: Kaun hogi, Jeet ke zindagi mey koi aur hogi to…

Jeet feeling a bit tensed that Saachi may think otherwise and may be not talk with him. He didn't knew what to do but got angry at Ashu… while he loked and stared at Ashu.. Ashu just smiled and raising his eyebrows symbolized so what?…and started whistling..

Thodi si masti karun mann karta hai,

Inhe thoda jalne du mann karta hai,

Pyaar ki aag dono taraf sulagh rahi hai,

Haiiii meri moujudgi inko kitni khatak rahi hai…

As the car stopped near Saachi's house, Saachi got down thanked Jeet and thanked Ashu for helping them in the matter. She said she will try and ask one more time Atish about more details and get in touch. Saachi was walking a distance and she looked behind, Ashu had already got into the car while Jeet was standing there waiting to see her one more time… As her eyes met his eyes, both felt the same magic… Both were in the same thoughts as if they know what's going in each others heart. The breeze near by as if touched one and spoke the feeling to the other and both smiling with that unsaid words… sometime Saachi blushed, at some time Jeet and both were about to come near and say something, Ashu made loud horn of the car and their romantic moment was broken…. Saachi realized and was shy and went inside while her smile stayed on even as she entered her house. Jeet too was in smile but as he turned towards the car, he started hitting Ashu, who was enjoying his irritated look. Jeet hit him but he was just in thoughts of the good time he had and left him saying'Bacchu humse shaitani, just let me get one chance aur iska badla leke dikhaunga….(smiling and winkled)

Kitna pyaar hai, aur kitni khushi,

Do pal ka saath, aur halki si woh hassi,

Kitna mausam khubsurat, suhana aur yaadgar,

Phir milne ka, aur sath ka mujhe abse hai intezaar..

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thodi si masti karun mann karta hai,😈😈

Inhe thoda jalne du mann karta hai,😉😉

Pyaar ki aag dono taraf sulagh rahi hai,😳

Haiiii meri moujudgi inko kitni khatak rahi hai…😆😆

Awesome.........I specially luvd this poem

Awesome part.......Luving Ashu's naughtiness😆

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