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Posted: 17 years ago
#51

Tumse Milkey Jaana zindagi ka aur ek rang,

Positive vibes ke sath zindagi ko jeene ka dhang,

Tumhari sunderta tumhare chehre tak simit nahi hai,

Tumhare batonki sanjidgi ney mujhe apna bana liya hai…

Kitna pyaar hai, aur kitni khushi,

Do pal ka saath, aur halki si woh hassi,

Kitna mausam khubsurat, suhana aur yaadgar,

Phir milne ka, aur sath ka mujhe abse hai intezaar..

are yaar just loved these two poems every word was just perfectly written and really very expressive i am waitin to read that poem u were talkin abt in the next part.

as far as this part goes asusal mind blowing. i just loved the js romance and ashu's mischief 😈

ab jaldise next part post kardo na yaar

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Posted: 17 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: togepe30

Thodi si masti karun mann karta hai,😈😈

Inhe thoda jalne du mann karta hai,😉😉

Pyaar ki aag dono taraf sulagh rahi hai,😳

Haiiii meri moujudgi inko kitni khatak rahi hai…😆😆

Awesome.........I specially luvd this poem

Awesome part.......Luving Ashu's naughtiness😆

😳achaa so u liked this ..ehheh actually when i was writign i just couldnt resist to write few lines of poems here and when i read myself i was..readers may think kya bhoomi bhi😆but am happy it broguht a smile on ur face reading..chalo that make me happy....thanks for all the encouragment dear..😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

Tumse Milkey Jaana zindagi ka aur ek rang,

Positive vibes ke sath zindagi ko jeene ka dhang,

Tumhari sunderta tumhare chehre tak simit nahi hai,

Tumhare batonki sanjidgi ney mujhe apna bana liya hai…

Kitna pyaar hai, aur kitni khushi,

Do pal ka saath, aur halki si woh hassi,

Kitna mausam khubsurat, suhana aur yaadgar,

Phir milne ka, aur sath ka mujhe abse hai intezaar..

are yaar just loved these two poems every word was just perfectly written and really very expressive i am waitin to read that poem u were talkin abt in the next part.

as far as this part goes asusal mind blowing. i just loved the js romance and ashu's mischief 😈

ab jaldise next part post kardo na yaar

Hi jyothi, i always look forward to whether u liked any poem or not...nice ot know u did like them...opps sorry it just not 8th part but after 8th there are some serious lines of poems which i am waiting u to read and coment..woh kehtey ai na..ekdam sitaution sotry ke aht...so it was a bit difficutl... hey hope u r likign the sotry as wlel.....tc dear😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks for the encoruagment😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
#55

Episode 8

09-02-07

After that Ashu managed to get to know that there were two people in his office who were behind it. He knew about one person who worked at a senior level. The other person's details, was known but no proof so Ashu told Jeet to call them in his cabin and when they r with him, he will search their cabins.

10-02-07

So Jeet called his senior officer Mr.Verma and along with him a new guy whom they had appointed. While Ashu searched the cabin Jeet kept them busy disuccing some matter. Soon Ashu smsed him that he got his proof. Jeet and Ashu discussed what they conspired and got to know why they tried to put the blame on Atish. Jeet got in touch with the police now knowing this is a bigger matter.

14-02-07

Jeet called for a meeting with all the office people and board present in the room. Jeet later when all came called Atish to join, everyone was surprised, Masumi was standing in the corner. Jeet told Atish to come near and put his hand on his shoulder and said,

Jeet: Atish was, is our asset of the company and I apologise that I belived what I saw and not on his words. I would like to share with u all whats has been happening. Jeet called Ashu and Ashu told

Ashu: Mr. Verma plz come

Mr. Verma already was much stressed seeing Atish there and the police, they told the whole staff that Mr. Verma wanted to remove Atish from the office so that he can get to higher post. He observed this new guy's entry into our office, Nilesh, Nilesh always tried to get the information from all corners as he was here doing a job for our rivals. When Mr.Verma got to know about him he asked him to help him remove Atish from here than he will not tell anyone about him. Nilesh helped him and in the course Mr. Verma took those keys made a duplicate and kept that amount and gave those papers to Nilesh. In the rival company they spread that Atish had given those papers to them.

Atish got angry at Nilesh and Mr.Verma and tried to give them some punches taking out his frustrated self. Jeet controlled him and told him that police will take good care of them. All left saying how jealous and greedy Mr.Verma is, and saying good things about Atish. Atish felt a sigh of relief, Masumi came near and hugged Atish. They both thanked Jeet, while Jeet told them he feels guilty of judging things wrongly and feels really sad that these days how upset Atish must have been due to him He said sorry again and Atish told him that, there is no need to say sorry he always admire him and today as he also made it possible to get to the truth or else he could have never make everyone know who was behind this. Jeet said, its Ashu and especially Saachi who has to be thanked. Saachi had so much faith in him that even he got back his trust on him. They thanked Ashu. Ashu and Jeet felt happy looking at Atish n Mausmi relaxed n relived…

Jo galti mujhse hue usey sambhal liya,

Ek sachey insaan ko jhuth ke jaal se nikal liya,

Ab unaka gunhegaar main na raha,

Mera dil kitna itminaan ab paa raha…

When Saachi got a call from Atish and Masumi

They told her what all happened today and they were so happy and Saachi felt like her work was done.

Saachi called up Jeet and Jeet was happier than her. He kept on thanking Saachi. Saachi told him to thank Ashu for his support.

Jeet: We are friends and we don't say thanks to each other.

Saachi: So we r not friends it means, u can keep saying thanks to me.. Oh I c…

Jeet: Nahi aisi baat nahi, ok I take back my thanks. U r my special friend.

Saachi smiled: yes, I am also glad to have a friend like u. Special friend like u. She said in a soft sweet voice. Jeet could feel that sweetness and wanted to just keep hearing it again…

Hum Anjaane the ek dusre se kal tak,

Aaj dosti kuch aur hi mukaam pe hai,

Hum ek dusre ke khaas dost hain,

Hum jantey hain dil Holese Kya kah raha hai…

Jeet: By the way Happy Valentine's Day.

Saachi: Happy Valentines Day to u too Jeet.

Jeet: May all ur dreams get fulfilled and love always be filled in your life. My heart felt wish for u on this day.

Saachi thinking in her mind...her dreams have only him now.

Saachi: I wish the same for u. Jeet just keep ur smile on. U really look great when u smile and be urself.

Jeet: Ok

Both wanted to say something more, they didn't keep the receiver down. They felt like asking out for a date, to meet each other on this day. But both just couldn't ask each other. Saachi's mother called her,

Saachi: I have to go. Meet u soon.

Jeet: Ya. Bye and tc.

Saachi: U too..

Both had the smile on their face and hitting on their head for not asking out to meet today.

14 feb Aaj din kitna khaas hai,

Duniya kehti hai pyaar ka aaj sath hai,

Pyaar mera samne mere,

Dil to kehta hai lekin lavz ka nahi sath hai…

Tumse milkey kehna hai..

Tumse door ab na rehna hai…

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16-02-07

Ashu asked Jeet whether he met Saachi on Valentiens day and was laughing hearing he couldn't ask her out to meet him that day. He gave him an idea to call her up and arrange a meeting. Jeet was smiling and said, 'yeh hue na doston wali baat'. He called her up.

Jeet: Hi Saachi, hope I didn't disturb u.

Saachi: No Jeet, its fine. How r u doing? Sab theek hai.

Jeet: Haan

She told him she is very happy to see Atish, Masumi and him so happy. Jeet told her

Ashu has asked for a party in return of solving this case. So he has kept a small get together at home. He would be happy if she too joined them. Saachi thought for a while and said, 'ok'.

Mulakat to sirf bahana hai,

Tumhare sath waqt bitana hai,

Ek dusre ka sath khushi deta hai,

Ek dusre ke bina ab dil na lagta hai…

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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏 yay!! Valentines Day Party!! 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: togepe30

👏 yay!! Valentines Day Party!! 😳 😳 😳

😳let see agey kya hota hai...😆..waise romance side mey rakhna padega to..... 😭..heeeheheh ...ab main jyada nahi bolungi😉....hope u liked this episode...😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hila kya part hai they have fallen in love but not been able to confess it so cute ab jaldise cont karo just love the way this story is goin on and a big hug for those lovely poems
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

hila kya part hai they have fallen in love but not been able to confess it so cute ab jaldise cont karo just love the way this story is goin on and a big hug for those lovely poems

Hi jyothi, am glad u liked htis one..and yup they havnt yet told in words na...sirf ankhon hi ankhon mey..heee a big hug for me..awww🤗hug to u too dear....will continue the poems they will be there...just see there r some long ones comign soon....😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Episode 9

17-02-07

At his home near the lawn Jeet had kept the get together, he called Masumi, Atish, Ashu, his friends who helped and few other friends and senior officers along with Saachi. At home Jeet spoke with his mom about Saachi for the first time

Jeet: Maa, woh get together mey mere sare achey dost arahe hain, aap akey miliyega.

Aaradhna: Theek hai, main aungi..aur waise bhi guest ka khayal rakhne main rahungi hi.

Jeet smiled and with immense love kept his head on to her lap. His mom soon realized Jeet is happy about something and as she kept her hand on his forhead, Jeet said,

Jeet: Maa meri Zindagi mey bhi rang bhar rahe hain. Magar darr bhi lagta hai..aisa kyun.

Maa: Mere Jeet betey ko darr..?

Jeet: Haan Maa, taqdeer! jab dilki sunte hain to darr badh jata hai..

Maa: Beta kuch pane ke baad hi ussee khone ka darr lagtahai.. magar is ki wajah se har insaan pane ki chah jhode to zindagi nahi chal sakti na..

Jeet: Hmmm…Main ussey kabhi nahi khona chahta.

Maa: Kissey Jeet?

Jeet stumbled to say anything: Woh.. woh..kuch nahi..bas muh se nikala.. (he smiled and just going out of the room..Looked behind and came near her and said) Kal milvaunga aap ko ussey..he was too shy …

Maa smiled back and kissed his forehead feeling very happy that may be she is the one who has changed her son and brought so much happiness into their life. Jeet went back shy and very happy said Good night Maa..

Jeet beta aaj tumhe yunh khush dekhkar,

Karta hai vari vari jaun tumpar,

Har arzoo tumhari puri ho yehi dua hai,

Jissey milvaogey najane woh pari kaun hai?…

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18-02-07

It was the get together time, Saachi came in early. Jeet and Ashu were glad to meet her. Ashu at his naughty best told her that as she came early he knows she wants to taste the food before there is any rush; Saachi was laughing and knew he was pulling her leg. Jeet was enjoying and laughing. Saachi felt really nice to see Jeet so happy and she was mesmirised by his smile his joviale self.

Kahan chupaa rakhi thi yeh muskaan,

Dekhti hun to atii hai jaan mey jaan,

'Jeet' tumhari khushi ko dekh achaa lagta hai,

Tumhare ander ka baccha bahar anaa chahta hai…

Ashu went inside to call Jeet's mom to introduce Saachi to her. While Jeet stood along with her. Both were feeling some unsaid emotions looking towards each other and the happiness which was glowing on their face.

Jeet: Atish and Masumi have not come yet.

Saachi: Ya, Masumi told me there is some surprise she will give to me. May be that's why they r late.

Jeet: Oh surprise.. ok.

Saachi: Atish really admires u a lot ..

Jeet: Hmm ..I don't know what I have done to gain that. I am an ordinary person.

Saachi: No, u r not an ordinary person.

Jeet looked at her and thought and smiled: Really?

Saachi: Yes, when we met that first time, I could see a very sentimental, emotional person through those intense eyes and when u rudely holded me I felt u r a person who dislikes showing ur emotions.

Jeet tried to recollect and felt bad the way he had holded her arms tightly.

Jeet: I am so sorry, see am an ordinary person, I make mistakes, I apologise for that day. The mobile broke and there were so many of my memories.

Saachi: yes, I can slowly understand, u try to show u r not emotional, may be u feel emotions can affect ur decisions.but Jeet as I see u now, honest with urself about what as a person u r, emotional, a person who has immense love for all, a person who cares for all, and someone who has made it big in life with all his own effort and hardwork. U can be an inspiration for many. I have heard how this small company became so huge with a teenager sorry minor holding on to this company when it was on verge of shutting down. U kept those employees to work uptil now who were alogn with u, u had issued bonus and extra shares for those who stood with u in those times.

Bahot mushkil hoga

itni choti umra mey pita ko khona,

Sab kuch sambhalna

aur Apne ander saare Assuoo ko rokna,

Majboot ho tum

jo datkar agey badhtey rahey,

Unchayi ko Chukar

Sathdene walon ko sath letey chaley…

Jeet: I have kept my emotions out of my life for a long time and that made it possible for me in bringin up the company to this height.

Soon Maa came alogn with Ashu and Jeet went and hold his Maa lovingly and Saachi came forward, she first took her blessings, Jeet introduced she is Saachi, my friend.

Maa: Saachi, bahut pyaari lag rahi ho. Tum pehli dost ho jisje Jeet mujhe mila raha hai…

Saachi looked at Jeet and Jeet looked into her eyes, Saachi felt realy nice. Jeet introduced her with most of the guest. Maa and Ashu were observing him and his happiness. Soon Masumi and Atish joined and Masumi hugged tightly Saachi. Saachi knew she is happy for some very reason. Jeet was happy to see both friends having so much love. The way he and Ashu feel about each other. Saachi looked into her eyes and said,

Saachi: If am not wrong, I have understood the surprise. And she whispered in her ears.

Masumi smiled and nodded her head.

Jeet: Tell us also about the surprise.

Atish: Jeet, I and Masumi r soon going to become parents. Masumi is carrying.

Jeet congratulated both and Saachi too congratulated them. They took Maa's blessings. Ashu as well congratulated them. Masumi asked Saachi that she can get the feel that Jeet and she are in love. She told they look like a perfect pair. Atish was surprised to hear it and he said he never noticed this. He said but he has seen Jeet so happy and relaxed for the very first time.

Humare dil ki dastak ko,

Dost asaani se samjhliye ho,

Ab to manoo pyaar ka izhaar karliya jaye,

Kareeb hi nahi ek duje mey ab kho jane ko..

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