'Tumsey Milkey'(ff with RK&AS)Ep:35Ending - Page 4

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

hey lovely part jaldi se ek aur part lik do and write some more poems yaar waitin to read them

awww Jyothi u like reading my poems... lovely...but hey next part mey poems to hain it will be always but not many...but hope still u like...will be postign soon... if i get my friends read this eepisdoe soon the next one is ready will post it...automatically...tc jyothi😃

Originally posted by: harpy

👏👏👏bhoomi the one who was full of hmuor Wrote such a gr8 ff...gr8 and cont soon..i loved reading ur ff...

Hi HArpy, its feels so nice to write to u after such a long time...its been ages we discussed anything... yup Bhoomi writign those writeups and makign evryone laugh..😆 woh kya aajkal thoda Rajeev is out of work on screen...so thought usko kaam dedu in my Fanfic😆woh bhi Amna ke saath.😉... I felt I can nevr write a ff with him in mind..though i write a lost of short stories...but this is an exp..lets see kitna u can enjoy it..

Harpy thanks dear so much for ur encouraging words..😳

Episode 5:

03-02-07

Jeet was in his office room and the operator informed him a female named Ms. Saachi wants to meet him and she doesn't have an appointment. She said she met u before; Jeet was surprised and thought why she had come to meet him. He told to let her in. Saachi opened the office cabin and came inside. Jeet was sitting in the chair working and as he saw her,

he just first looked into those eyes which were captured in his heart. He closed his eyes again

and soon he opened his eyes, she said,

Saachi: May I take the seat Jeet.

Jeet: Yes, sure,

Saachi: Sorry I mean JK.

Jeet: U can call me Jeet. (He thought in mind why he immediately told her to call him Jeet and just thinking what's happening to him he held his hand on to his head and trying to make himself compose into a tough person, he brushed her hair)

Saachi was a bit happy that she can call him Jeet: Jeet I came here to talk about Atish who worked in ur office.

On hearing Atish's name Jeet became very angry and he sat with a more attitude now and raised his head trying to concentrate what she has to say on it.

Saachi realized he is upset to hear Atish's name, she continued: Jeet I know u don't turst him I know whatever things were put in front of u, u thought Atish had done all that. But whether u believe it or not but Atish is innocent, and there is someone who planted this whole thing. If u get hold of that person only than u can save ur company, already u r in loss with the asset of the company Atish out of here.

Jeet heard this line and somehow he was too impressed, he knew he always pushed Atish to grow in this company because he knew Atish was an asset and he contributed a lot to the company's net profit.

Jeet: It can happen this way too that he was an asset until he got my trust on him and as soon as I trusted him he used it to his advantage.

Saachi: I have not come here to tell u to take Atish back into the company I am glad u have not reported this matter to the police and Atish would be behind bars if u had done that., somewhere u have a soft corner for him.

Jeet: No, I did only to save my company's reputation, with these things my shares can fluctuate and yes I wanted him out of sight where ever he goes that doesn't make a difference. Behind bars or in hell I don't care. ( He said with a harsh tone, inside in his heart he did felt cheated by Atish and was hurt)

Saachi now got to know his tough side where emotions were not the reason he wanted to portray in front.

Saachi: I just wanted to tell u Atish is innocent. He is so depressed that he lost ur trust but he has not done anything wrong. If u think he is the culprit and ur shares ur company everything is safe so let me tell u that's not the case, till the real culprit is not known. Now if u believe me ur company will be saved or else Best of luck. I shall take ur leave thank u Jeet for ur precious time.

Jeet was totally zapped by her quick answer, whatever she said with such gentle ease. Jeet smiled the way she had spoken.

Saachi turned to say, and saw him smiling and Saachi smiled but Jeet immediately turned his expression as he is working on the laptop and is busy,

Saachi: Jeet if u change ur mind, u can call me here is my number (she gave him her card and kept it on the table)

Jab tum ayi, Unhi ankho mey main tubb gaya,

Jab baatein ki to vishvas tumpar aur badhaa,

Koshish maine ki Main apne dil ko roklun,

Dil nadaan, tumhe dekhkar paaleta hai sukun…

She went and Jeet took the card and looked at it with a smile and kept it in his wallet. He thought about what Saachi had said. It made sense to him that if Atish isn't than who? He thought how to know what the truth is he didn't want to involve police in this so soon.

He called up his friend 'Ashutosh whom he called 'Aashu' who had a detective agency.

Aashu was Jeet's school friend and was the naughtiest. He was the only one who played pranks on Jeet even now and Jeet didn't mind. Aashu was like a brother to Jeet and Jeet shared his sorrows and happiness with Aashu but not with anyone else. Aashu was a family for Jeet. Aashu had so many affairs that every month his girlfriend would change. Aashu was the one who had known the dark secrets of Jeet. Aashu's family lived in Pune and his father was in Army. Aashu never had a good equation with his dad and he lived as a free bird. He wanted to do everything that his father disliked.

Apni har pasand ko

Aapne meri pasand maana,

Aapki ummed pe

khara na uturu to maaraa,

Ab to ziddi banhi gaya

maar ka koi asar nahi,

Aapki hukumat taley rehna,

Ab meri fitrat mey jamta nahi…

Yay ! Shabbo.........i sumhiw thought new entry Chaitanya hoga......But anyways....Shaboo is cool enough.......hehehehe!!

Luved the part......!! Sachi has already made an impression and her card gets to be in Jeet's wallet.....Ummm 😉 .........Im jealous 😳 😳 ....! 😉

hey fab part just loved both the poems very beutifully written uske liye a big jappi for u 🤗 jaldi se cont karo na yaar

Originally posted by: ami_princess

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hey Ami glad u liked it ..and thanks for appreiciating..😃

Originally posted by: togepe30

Yay ! Shabbo.........i sumhiw thought new entry Chaitanya hoga......But anyways....Shaboo is cool enough.......hehehehe!!

Luved the part......!! Sachi has already made an impression and her card gets to be in Jeet's wallet.....Ummm 😉 .........Im jealous 😳 😳 ....! 😉

YUp ..that magic in KTh with these two was rockign so i had to included him ..u see...and the way Ashu will turn furthur am sure u will feel he fits in ...😃..chaitanya has a bit senti side and i didnt want that😆 ....Saachi ka sirf card hai aur yeh asar...agey phir na jane..jalan kahan tak chali jaye..jiya jale...jaan jale..😆..am happy u liked it..

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

hey fab part just loved both the poems very beutifully written uske liye a big jappi for u 🤗 jaldi se cont karo na yaar

Hi jyothi....nowadysa whenever i post i think kitne poems likhe hain is episdoe mey...which i never use to see..just as now u r askign me..i am lookign at htat,😆..feels really ncie that u lookforward to reading hemmm and like it...sure will conitnue soon..btu yaar thode poem next episode mey kamm hongey kyunki baatein jyada thi ...😳

Episode 6

05-02-07

Jeet met Ashu and told him all that happened, he needs his help to solve this and find the culprit.

Ashu: Yeh Atish kaisa tha, I mean itna bharosa tune kyun kiya, sirf 5 saal hue join karke..

Jeet: Woh bahut hi mehnati hai, agar maine usko promotion diya to isliye kyunki uske presentation, uske ideas se hame crores ka phayda hua hai. I think he was doing a very good job, thoda encouragement deta to woh aur josh se kaam karta very dedicated in his work I felt.

Ashu: Aur jis din yeh pata chala documents agayb hai ..usdin.

Jeet: Documents hamare rival ke pass hain, jab mujhe yeh khabar hue , main office ke logon pe chilaya aur Atish ke cabin ki aur gaya aur dekh ke ekdam haraan hua sath hi , tu janta hai koi dhokha de to main ussey apni zindagi mey nafrat layak bhi nahi samjhta,(looked disturbed after saying this line and Ashu understood his past memory has disturbed him) bas usey naukari se nikala.

Ashu: Police mey kyun nahi diya

Jeet: Kuch hadh tak thoda vishvas nahi ho paraha tha, aur uski abhi abhi shaddi hue hai, to..o..

Ashu: Come on Jeet, tu emotional ho gaya..(feeling happy inside)

Jeet: Pata nahi..woh emotional ya phir… U know I just don't want it… I am not understanding mere sath kya ho raha hai…aaj kal emotions haavii ho rahe hain…Mujhe kahin apne aap se nafrat na hojaye…(his intense eyes r still and feeling extremely guilty)

Ashu: Ismey koi guilt feel karne ki baat nahi hai.. Emotional hona itna bada jurm nahi hai. Jeet..Mere dost, ab yeh matt soch kyun kya…yeh bata tune ussey naukri se nikala phirse uspar tera vishvas kaise honey lagaa....

Jeet: Woh Atish ki dost Saachi milney ayi , usne kaha Atish innocent hai aur jo culprit hai woh shayad office mey hi ho..to nuksaan jyada ho sakta hai..

Ashu: (was wondering) Saachi..Oh…waise dikhne mey kaisi thi… (With a naughty smile)

Jeet (looking at the candles floating in the water, touching the water and saying…

Very beautiful ... (as if he can see Saachi's face in it. He smiled and said with much depth in his voice..

Ashu was very surprised and understood that the girl's beauty has touched Jeet's heart.

Ashu : Jeet phir to hame milna chahiye, Lets meet Saachi and than I will proceed with my findings…

Jeet: Saachi se, haan miltey hain..

Ashu smiled and looked into his eyes, he knew Ashu understood what's there in his heart and he blushed away with his head down and Ashu hugged him saying, "Zindagi itni bhi buri nahi, jyada matt soch jo dil dimaag ko achaa mahsus karaye ussey apnalo".

Usko dekhun to Zindagi pe pyaar ajaye,

Dil ko kitna bhi rook dil kabu mey na aye,

Uski baatein Dil pe kaisa yeh marham lagaye,

Beetein jakhm ka dard kam aaj hota nazar aye…

06-02-07

Jeet called up Saachi and as she heard his voice, 'Jeet!' aapne kaise phone kiya, Jeet was surprised to know he had called her for the first time and how she got to know he was on the phone.

Jeet: How did u know it's me on the line?

Saachi: By ur voice!..u may have called up the first time but I have heard ur voice before as well, and ur voice is strong with depth and whenever I hear my name Saachi..(she smiled thinking how he had called her name in the party)

Jeet: When I call ur name….??

Saachi now felt what is she saying..she was shy and she said,

Saachi: ah..I mean…a.. My name sounds different when u call..

Jeet understood what she meant and Saachi couldn't hide the fact that she loved whenever he said Saachi…with so much feel…

Jab tum mera naam letey ho dil muskurata hai,

Tumhari awaaz mey jadu kaisa dil thamsa jata hai,

Jeet jab tum kahetey ho …SAACHI…

Lagey pyaar ki hai ghataa chaiee…

Jeet: U have a nice name..Saachi!…I called up to tell u my friend is a detective and I talked about Atish and the way things turned he wants to meet u as well to get to the findings..

Saachi: U will be with him right?..

Jeet: Ya… Don't worry he is a nice person and am also there..I will try and sort this out soon and get to the truth faster. When shall we meet?

Saachi: Ok, tomorrow my dad is going to Canada so I will meet u day after tomorrow.

Jeet: Ok .

Saachi: Where to meet?

Jeet: At the DizBiz restaurant in the evening at 8pm.

Saachi: Ok ..

Jeet and Saachi Switched off the phone, but they were getting excited to meet each other soon.

Tumse milney ka intezaar hai,

Dono taraf yeh chahat ka izhaar hai,

Pyaar hai shayad yeh jaan paa rahein hain,

Ekdusre ki taraf bas khichey jaarahe hain…

Jeet immediately informed Ashu about the meeting,

Ashu: Yeh meeting hi hai na, ya phir koi date, (he laughed) jo itna excited hokar bata rahai hai, yaad rakhna main bhi tum dono ke beech rahunga to tera baatein karne ka chance nahi rahega, itna excite hone ki jaroorat nahi hai. (He smiled naughtily).

Jeet said: Ashu, tu baatein kar teri baatein kaun sunega aur kaun jawaab dega… (he smiled cheekily)

Ashu thought for a while what he meant and realized: Jeet, let see. Main bhi ab iss Saachi se milne ka intezaar kar raha hun, jisne Iss Business bhakt ko bhi pyaar ka pujari bana diya.

Jeet was a bit taken back by his filmy statement: Ashu wahan aisi koi baat ki , to tu janta hai.

Ashu: Achaa tune hi to kaha, kaun sunega kaun jawab dega..(he winkled)

Jeet: Mere yaar, tujhe bhi yehi mauka mila, …. Ashu…he kept his head down….. Smiling…

Ashu: samjha samjha yeh apni dosti mujhe pighladeti hain… tu janta hai.. . He patted Jeet and said Yaar tujhe kisike liye chahat hui, mujhe iski bahut khushi hai. Main chahta tha, tu apni zindagi ko khushi se jeeye aur aaj mahsus kar raha hun woh khushi. Jeet ab apne ko rokna matt… just flow with it.

Jeet thought for a while about his thoughts about keeping emotions away and realizing that things changed and he felt he changed just unknowingly, he felt better and happy and people around him also were glad with his change. Jeet saw the Love Ashu had for him, the friendship which told without saying that he is so happy for him. Jeet didn't want to think if things r changing for better but felt he never was so happy as he is starting to feel now. And there has to be some force which is giving that happiness and as Ashu said he wanted to just go with the flow.

Tumhara ehsaas kitna meetha hai,

Is ehsaas ka Naam Pyaar shayad hai,

Dil Ko mehsus kuch na ho pathar bana rakha tha,

Dil mey dard, kadwi yaadon ko chupa rakha tha,

Tumse Milkey dil Baagh ban gaya,

Nayi jasbaaton ki lehrese dil ujhal gaya…

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