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Posted: 17 years ago
PART 19:


WEDDING DAY:


The Malhotra sister weddings were of course the talk of the town. A large shamiana had been erected behind the Malhotra house to accommodate all the guests and well wishers. The weddings were held in the day time and were conducted with full Punjabi customs and traditions.


Both brides looked ethereal on that auspicious day.


Mahi wore a pink and blue lehnga, while Soni wore a red and gold one. Their grooms looked equally savvy in their cream and gold sherwani (Shabd) and maroon sherwani (Jeet).


After the baraats were received at the gate by Mouni and Brij, the two grooms were led to the 'jai mala' area. Both men stood with their garlands, anxiously waiting for their brides. At last, the two gorgeous women were escorted into the shamiana by their older sister, Rajji.


Neither Shabd, nor Jeet were aware of what their brides would be wearing that day. The women had decided to tease the men and had their faces covered with their ghunghats.


"Arre Jeet…..kaun si dulhan kis ki hai yaar?" An edgy Shabd asked nervously, "teri waali kaun sa rang pehne huye hai?"



"Pata nahin Shabd…..mujhey Soni ne kuch bataaya nahin….waise Soni thodi lambi hai Mahi se….lekin…lekin aaj tho dono ek height ki hi lag rahi hain," Jeet answered nervously.


The women climbed the two steps to the jai mala stage and stood away from the men.



"Jiju….ab aap dono ko guess karna padhega ki kiski dulhan kaun hai?" Prince stood between his sisters. Rajji joined them too, "haan bhai Shabd aur Jeet….aaj aapke pyaar ka imtihaan hai….dekhein kaun apni dulhan ko door se hi pehchaan sakta hai…..jo pehle pehchaan lega….wo jai maala pehle karega!'



The guests and family members chuckled at the little prank being orchestrated by the bride's siblings.



"Saale saheb," Shabd coughed and whispered into Prince's ears, "iska kitna loge? Aaj mere paas bahut paise hain….joota churaayee ka paisa abhi se le lo…aur bata do Mahi kaun si hai…laal ya ghulabi?"



"Rajji didi…dekho Shabd jiju kitne beimaan hain…..mujhey rishwat de rahe hain!" Prince complained loudly.



"Arre Shabd saheb…..yeh tho cheating huyi na…..chaliye main pehle pehchaanta hoon," Jeet came forward and stared at the two ghunghat clad women with garlands in their hands.



"Ek chance hi milega Jeet babu!" Rajji teased him.



"Matlab?' a petrified Jeet swallowed hard.



"Matlab yeh ki agar aapne galat ladki ko chuna tho usee se shaadi karni padhegi," Rajji giggled.



"Arre arre…aisa laise ho sakta?" Shabd came forward, "main sirf Mahi se hi shaadi karoonga!"



Mahi and Soni tried their best to suppress their laughter and were amused by their groom's impatience.



"Sorry Shabd jiju…..aaj aapke pyaar ka imtihaan hai…..Majnu tho Laila ki khushboo se hi pehchaan jaata tha ki wo aas paas hai."



"Theek hai tho mujhey dono ko paas se soonghne do," a mischievous Shabd got closer to the women.



Mahi and Soni's hearts were pounding as Shabd came closer. Soni prayed, "hey vaahe guru…..Shabd jiju mujhey na chun lein…..aaj hum dono ne ek hi perfume bhi laga rakha hai!"



Mahi shut her eyes as she felt Shabd's presence and cursed her sister, "Soni ki bachchi…tujhey aaj hi mera perfume lagaana tha? Kahin Shabd usey na chun lein…..main tho barbaad ho jaaoongi…..yeh Rajji didi ne kaisi shart lagaa di hai? Chalo…waise mazaa tho aa raha hai in aadmiyon ko buddhu banaane mein."


Jeet came forward too. The two men circled the women and tried to identify their own bride. They looked at each other with confused expressions- except for the color of the lehnga, everything was identical- their heights, their frames, their fragrance…..



Shabd knew there was one way, he could identify Mahi. He cleared his throat and stuck his head between the two women, "Mahi…..wo kal raat waala daag tumhare chehre se hataa ya nahin?"



Mahi blushed inside her ghunghat as she recalled their kiss in her room; she tensed up at his statement but remained silent. Shabd was hoping for some visible reaction but unfortunately, Mahi concealed it well.


"Daag?" Rajji asked but the smiled, "NO questions allowed jiju!"



'SUHANI! MERI JAAN!" Shabd suddenly yelled to everyone's shock, "KAHAN THI TUM? AA JAO MANDAP MEIN CHALTE HAIN…..MAHI BAHUT NAKHRE DIKHA RAHI HAI!"



Mahi was mortified; she turned red with anger and yelled back, "FITTEH MOOH TERA SUHANI!" and pulled her ghunghat away.



Shabd's plan had worked! There was Mahi in her full form; ghunghat off her face- red as a beetroot.



The guests and family members were shocked initially but when they saw the victorious grin of Shabd's face, everyone relaxed and cheered for him, "CHAK DE PHATTE PUTTAR!" someone yelled.



Mahi was embarrassed at what she had just blurted out inadvertently and hid herself in her ghunghat again.



"Hip hip hurray for Shabd bhaiyya!" Kamya clapped and hugged Mahi from behind, "iska matla mera bhai pehle jai maala karega!"



Rajji helped Mahi step forward as Shabd placed the garland around Mahi's neck. The crowd cheered for them and asked Mahi to follow suit. Shabd played hard and stood tall so Mahi could not reach him.



"Jiju….ab tho Mahi ko na sataaiye," Rajji exclaimed as Shabd played hardball.



Veer came forward and was about to lift Mahi in his arms so she could place the jaimaala around Shabd, but Shabd swiftly intervened and lifted Mahi in his own arms to everyone's surprise.


Mahi yelled for help as she was lifted in the air by her tall and handsome groom. They were face to face now as he peeked under her ghunghat, "zaraa chaeck kar raha tha….kahin dulhan badal na gayi ho," he chuckled as Mahi garlanded his neck shyly.



"Wah wah….kya mard da puttar hai apna Shabd!" Yash Sareen marveled at his son's gallantry, "yaad hai Savitri…..hamari shaadi huyi thi tho main bhi aise hi," he paused as he looked at his ex wife, but to his surprise, he saw her blushing just like a new bride instead of her usual scornful looks. Yash smiled and placed his arm around her, "kaho tho ek jaimaala aur mangwaa loon…..lage haath ek shaadi aur ho jaaye."



"Chaliye bhi….aapki puraani aadat wapas aa rahi hain lagta," Savitri smiled.


"Kuch din business naam ke safe mein bandh thi meri aadatein…..par aaj lagta hai bahar aana chaahti hain….aur hamesha hamesha ke liye," he squeezed her shoulder and to his surprise she did not protest either.



The two handsome couples completed the rituals of the wedding after the playful jai maala. After the pheras and kanyaadan, they received the blessings from all the elders. Mahi and Soni's maang glowed with the sindoor placed by their respective grooms. Their mangal sutras around their necks were the pure and eternal symbol of their sacred alliance with their husbands.



The couples were then escorted to the luncheon tables. Both couples were served food in one plate each.



Soni and Jeet teased and fed each other from their plate as the photographers captured those endearing moments.



Mahi sat shyly and let Shabd dig into the plate.


"Kya hua…tum nahin khaaogi kya?" he asked softly.


"Bhookh nahin hai," she replied shyly.



"Tumhein bhookh nahin hai?" he was surprised, "tum tho marne se pehle bhi khaali pait nahin rehna chaahti…aaj kya hua?"



"Aaj zinda huyi hoon…..marein hamare dushman!" she rested her head gently on his shoulder.



"Tho zinda rehne ke liye khaana bhi tho zaroori hai," he squeezed her hand under the table.


"Aapka pyaar hi kaafi hai," she squeezed his hand back.



"Mar jaawaan Mahi…..lagta hai tumhein kisi aur cheez ki bhookh hai abhi…kaho tho andar chalein?' he asked naughtily.



"Shabd!" she glared at him, "mera matlab wo nahin tha!"



"Tho kya tha?" he asked ignorantly.

"mera matlab tha ki aaj mera pait khushi se hi bhar gaya hai,' She leaned on him.


"Shaadi ke baad khaana banaaogi na?' he asked


"Kyun? Aisa kyun poonch rahe hain?" she pulled away and stared at him in confusion.



"Kahin sirf pyaar vyaar se hi tho pait nahin bhar dogi har shaam?" he chided with her.



"Theek hai…aapko aisi baatein pasand nahin hain….tho nahin karoongi," she pulled her hand away from his.


"Arre..arre main tho mazaak kar raha tha Mahi," he grabbed her hand again and was about to bring it close to his lips when they saw a cheerful Veer walking towards them.



Veer walked to their table and placed his arms on their shoulders from behind, "arre kya baat hai….yahan khaana kum…baatein zyaada ho rahi hain."



"Haan bhai Veer saheb……soch raha hoon jitni baatein karni hain…abhi kar loon…..ek baar poori tarah shaadi shuda ho jaaoonga tho baat karne ka mauka miley ya nahin miley?" Shabd chuckled and gave a high five to Veer.




"Yeh tho sahi kaha aapne Shabd…..Mahi jaisi ladki tho achhe achhon ki bolti bandh kar deti hai…..tho aap tho inke pati hain….good luck to you…and my sympathies with you," Veer laughed back. Mahi gave a dirty look to Veer, "jiju…..Rajji didi se aapki shikaayat lagaa doongi!"




"Kya keh rahe hain yeh mere baare mein?" Rajji walked to their table, "zaroor hum behno ka mazaak udhaa rahe honge."



"Nahin nahin meri jaan," Veer walked towards Rajji and placed his arm around her, "bhalaa itni kis mard mein himmat hai jo aap jaisi behno ka mazaak bhi udhaa sakein? Humein pagal kuttey na kaat rakha hai kya?"



"Chhodo bhi!" Rajji pulled away and grabbed Mahi's wrist, "chal Mahi…..in aadmiyon se door chalte hain…..yeh kisi kaam ke nahin hain!"



"Arre arre Rajji didi…aisa ghazab na kariye," Shabd pleaded with folded hands, "aap soniyon ke nakhre sar aankhon par…..meri dulhan ko mujhse door mat le jaaiye."


"Pehle in aadmiyon ko hum sab ke liye ek gaana gaana hoga phir!" Rajji grinned and pulled Soni up from the neighboring table.


"Gaana?" Veer and Shabd stared at each other in horror.


"Shabd bhaiyya…..Veer bhaiyya…tussi fikar na karo…..twaada Jeet kis din kaam aayega jee?" Jeet grinned and slapped their backs.


The three men folded their arms and stood in front of their wives. Brij, Mouni, Yash and Savitri joined the three couples in this wonderful dance and song sequence……


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xtUkNNICbBY


soni de nakhre sone lagade o meinu, soni de nakhre sone lagade - 2
oh keindie pump up the jame oh keinde
oh jannah jannah (4)
soni de nakhre soni lagde meinu…… (4)
oh keinde pump pump pump up (4)
oh jannah jannah
oh keindie pump up the jame oh keinde (4)
oh jannah jannah oh keinde
mainu bhi nakhre sone lagade tere, mainu bhi nakhre sone lagade - 2

(o char din ki jawaani aah aah
o bitein tanaha na raani aah aah) - 2
woh pyaar tera main rakhwaanga aah aah
ho sar aankhon pe deewaani aah aah
soni de nakhre sone lagade o meinu, soni de nakhre sone lagade - 2
(oy kudi naal mere nachle aah aah
ho mainu baahawich kas le aah aah) - 2
Aaaja ishq di kadi wich aah aah
ho thoda jile thoda marle aah aah
soni de nakhre sone lagade o mainu, soni de nakhre sone lagade - 2
soni de nakhire soni lagidae tainu (4)
oh keinde pump pump pump up (4)
oh jannah jannah
oh keindie pump up the jame oh keinde (4)
oh jannah jannah oh keinde




…to be contd…
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Posted: 17 years ago
nahhhhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiin.. y u had to end there hun.. it was just getting interesting.. great part hun.. but plzz do continue soon..
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Posted: 17 years ago
ahh!! i loved it!!
and i love the song tooo!!!!
the marriage mischief was funny and cute!!
bechari mahi...she almost had a heart attack when she heard suhani's name! 😆 but that was a cruel but funny joke played by shabd!!
cute and adorable part!! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
👏 👏 👏 OMG Di, this is my fav part till date! I really enjoyed this part! I luved every single part, the shaadhi scenes are too good! Esp the lil prank, hehe really orignal, wish i could see that on any screen one day!! You need to start writing scripts and sending them off to Balaji or Yash Raj..hehe I luved it di! Seriously! Great work!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
heyy:)
i havent commented in A VERY long time but after reading this story of urs i was like FORCED to comment its the sweetest thing ever! ur very talented lol its a very cute part:)
i really look forward to reading the next part
i hope u continue ASAP cus i'll be waiting:)


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Posted: 17 years ago
Aww.....they got married..yeahhhh...loll

Omg the recognizing the dulhan's was soo cute and funny..

haha....shabd was trying to bribe Prince again...too bad he didnt suceed this time..

Prince is soo cute...he's like dekho shabd jiju kithne beiman hai...mujhe rishwat de rahe hai 😆

Shabd is sooo adorable...I loved the way he was like main sirf mahi se shaadi karoonga..haha.....

naughty naughty Shabd...he was like lemme smell both the girls form close up...and omg the poor girls were soo scared if he ended up choosing the wrong girl since they were wearing the same perfume..loll..

Aww...poor shabd was trying soo many tactics to figure out which one was mahi...cant belive he brought the daag thing up...loll...Awww....mahi was blushing how cutee..stupid shabd always making her feel embarressed..lol

Omg hahah....shabd pretended as if Suhani was there..and he was like lets get married....mahi bohoth nakhre dikha rahi hai... 🤣 🤣 ...omg that scene was just halarious...Mahi got all mad and ended up revealing herself...

Shabd is so besharam...he lifted mahi in front of everyone....he is certainly gone crazy in love...lol...who wouldnt and anyways...pyaar kiya tho darna kya 😆

Aww...its so nice to see shabd's parenst getting closer to eachother...finally they can all stay together like a true happy family

Aww...the conversation between mahi and shabd during eating luch was soo cute...Mahi must have certainly be feeling n top of the world...

stupid shabd...can never stay decent for too long..loll..

hah...it was so funny when he was like shaadi ke baad kana banaogi...lolll...or else they might just have to survive on love..lol

I agree on one thing...if someone has a wife like mahi they would definatly not get a chance to talk alot...

It was so cute how when Raji came Veer all of a sudden neglected what he was saying abotu women..lol..who wouldnt...he doesnt wanna risk getting Raji mad at him now does he 😆 ..

Awww....shabd is soo adorable...he was pleading to Raji to not take his dulhan away from him...he cant even live one moment without mahi...how cute

Really liked the song choice...it so fitte dwith the mood and the situation in the part..

Really sweet part...cant wait for the next one...continue soon...and keep up the great work 👏



Edited by mita_mita01 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
y did u end there... 😡 i was scrolling the page that i will see the sister's reaction... but it ended 😲 this is not done

mahi aur uski "FITTEH MOOH TERA" 🤣 🤣 that was so nice... emotional dialogues doesnt suit her... seems that y shabd is having a nice tease time... lage raho... lage raho... 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
funny part
can't wait for another part
thank you so much
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Posted: 17 years ago
cute part bheegiiii
yeh shabd to barashararti nikla ;)
im kinda mad at him cozzzz.....jo pyaar karte hain woh to ek doosre ki saansein pehchaan lete hain:$....nd he had 2 CHEAT 2 recognize ehr! ufff! yeh aadmi kabhi nahi sudhreinge
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Posted: 17 years ago
What a cute part di 👏 Loved the dhulan mix-up! Acha tareeka nikala shabd ne! Dialogue was too good also!

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