JAB WE MET (MS-Maayka ff) ENDpg 36 - Page 27

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: namelesssr

Face masks and shaadis and women/girls at a disadvantage and being the butt of jokes... they seem to share a close relationship... I've been witness to one at my sis-in-law's wedding too 😆😆
This story is soooo sweet - and I'm enjoying it because you'll be taking a hiatus from writing for a while
Thanks, Bheegi! 👍🏼



thanks namelesser...yes women have to go through more pains in preparation for their special night for sure 😆 😆

U know...i might not be off for too long as i have an idea for a new story cooking in my head...i just have to start writing it 😉 but i have to complete JWM first
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: bheegi



thanks namelesser...yes women have to go through more pains in preparation for their special night for sure 😆 😆

U know...i might not be off for too long as i have an idea for a new story cooking in my head...i just have to start writing it 😉 but i have to complete JWM first



haila... 😲 is that true... wow... so soon an idea cooked.. i mean concept cooked... seems ur brain is always working... 😉
much gud for the readers 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
wonderfull part!

loved it when shabd was listening what mahi was saying continously regarding her face!!!

continue soon

Waiting!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
bheegiiiiiiiiiii
awwwwwwwwwwwww
such a romantic part!
start ur new ff....ab aur intezaar nahi hota:(
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: abhilashasharma


haila... 😲 is that true... wow... so soon an idea cooked.. i mean concept cooked... seems ur brain is always working... 😉 much gud for the readers 😆



idea tho hai par abhi likha nahin hai kuch...i think i have writer's block 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: cheeky_pari

wonderfull part!

loved it when shabd was listening what mahi was saying continously regarding her face!!!

continue soon

Waiting!!!



thanks cheeky pari 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: MrsRanbirKapoor

bheegiiiiiiiiiii
awwwwwwwwwwwww
such a romantic part!
start ur new ff....ab aur intezaar nahi hota:(




thanks hinna....i do have an idea but just can't bring myself to pen it down....writer's block? 😕
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Posted: 17 years ago
hawww well have a writers unblock then:P
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Posted: 17 years ago
Aww....on one side Shabd is getting teh biggest happiness of his life...and on the other hand his own family is so distinct from eachother....

It was nice to see that atleast shabd'd mom has been on gaurd about her kids where abouts...after all she is a mother....And shabd's father...well what can I say about him...its really sad to know that he considered profit in business more important than relationships...no wonder he's not with his wife...

Well atleast Shabd's marriage might be an excuse for Mr and Mrs. Sareen to come together gain...and let go if their differances....

It was realy nice seeing that even today their relationship consists of love...even though with time...their thoughts and belives might have been differant...but one thing that still holds them together is the love they have for eachother...they might not have showed it to one another...but they sure might have felt it....

omg Shabd baught a house in Bhatinda??...kya irada hai shabd ka 😉 😆

Well I am so glad taht Shabd doesnt think like hsi dad...he belives that there are certain decisions in life which should be made from the heart....I agree with him 100%.....you shouldnt look for profit on everything in life....certain things should be considered from the heart....

Shabd's mom seems liek a really great human being...She will definatly make a great mother-in-law...as she already is a great mother...and now will fulfill her duty as a wife as well...

I am so glad that finally Mr. Sareen got some brains...and set aside his ego and took the first step in mending his relationships with his family...Hopefully by the end of the wedding time the Sareen faily will come together....and actually be considered a true family in every right ful way...

Oh wow...so mahi actually had contacted the sareen family about shabd ahead of time...and even promised them to look after Shabd...how sweet...Mahi truley is a darling...she certainly has fulfilled her promise...she has not only looked after shabd...but has taught him how to live life...and the true meaning of love

Awww...shabd is soo considerate....and slick as well...he not only thought about mahi feeling home sick but also came up with a way to stay close to her by buying a house 😆

Awww...Kamya teasing shabd was soo cute

And yes it certainly does feel great to see Shabd's parents actually behaving like a true married couple

It was nice seeing the two families meeting eachother so humbly...even the sareen family...

Its really typical for a middle class girl's father to worry about not being able to do enough for their daughter's marriage....specially when the girl is getting married to such rich people...but it wwa since to know that the sareen's were so understanding

haha...omg I loved the part when Shabd was soo eager to see Mahi and Mouni was like han beta tumhe tho patha hi hoga kamra kaha hai 😆 ...halarious...and shabd acting as if he was unaware of the where Mahi's room was located...haha

Omgg no wayy....poor mahi unaware of teh fact that it was actually Shabd in the room...let out her inner feelings...

And shabd idiot didnt was actually enjoying listening to mahi talk so openly 😆 ..

hahah...Mahi thought there was a chor in her room 😆 😆....Mahi is something...she's soo cute and funny

omg Mahi must have felt sooo embarressed....seeing that shabd had heard eveything she said...

And they were romancing even with Mahi's face half covered with the mask..lolll

Aww....but as usual love dthey teasing and playfulness with eachother...really really cute...

And shabd is so naughty acting as if something went in his eye...loll...and then getting all romantic...haha

Wonder what explanation they will give their parents 😆

Great part as usual...cant wait for the next one...oh its nice to knwo that you are atleast having some ideas for the next ff...hopefully everything works out fine...and you will soon start a new ff...but its ok you can take your time....we can wait for the writers block to get over...no rush...continue soon...and keep up the great work 👏



Edited by mita_mita01 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: mita_mita01

Aww....on one side Shabd is getting teh biggest happiness of his life...and on the other hand his own family is so distinct from eachother.... It was nice to see that atleast shabd'd mom has been on gaurd about her kids where abouts...after all she is a mother....And shabd's father...well what can I say about him...its really sad to know that he considered profit in business more important than relationships...no wonder he's not with his wife... Well atleast Shabd's marriage mightbe an excuse for Mr and Mrs. Sareen to come together gain...and let go if their differances.... It was realy nice seeing that even today their relationship consists of love...even though with time...their thoughts and belives might have been differant...but one thing that still holds them together is the love they have for eachother...they might not have showed it to one another...but they sure might have felt it.... omg Shabd baught a house in Bhatinda??...kya irada hai shabd ka 😉 😆 Well I am so glad taht Shabd doesnt think like hsi dad...he belives that there are certain decisions in life which should be made from the heart....I agree with him 100%.....you shouldnt look for profit on everything in life....certain things should be considered from the heart.... Shabd's mom seems liek a really great human being...She will definatly make a great mother-in-law...as she already is a great mother...and now will fulfill her duty as a wife as well... I am so glad that finally Mr. Sareen got some brains...and set aside his ego and took the first step in mending his relationships with his family...Hopefully by the end of the wedding time the Sareen faily will come together....and actually be considered a true family in every right ful way... Oh wow...so mahi actually had contacted the sareen family about shabd ahead of time...and even promised them to look after Shabd...how sweet...Mahi truley is a darling...she certainly has fulfilled her promise...she has not only looked after shabd...but has taught him how to live life...and the true meaning of love Awww...shabd is soo considerate....and slick as well...he not only thought about mahi feeling home sick but also came up with a way to stay close to her by buying a house 😆 Awww...Kamya teasing shabd was soo cute And yes it certainly does feel great to see Shabd's parents actually behaving like a true married couple It was nice seeing the two families meeting eachother so humbly...even the sareen family... Its really typical for a middle class girl's father to worry about not being able to do enough for their daughter's marriage....specially when the girl is getting married to such rich people...but it wwa since to know that the sareen's were so understanding haha...omg I loved the part when Shabd was soo eager to see Mahi and Mouni was like han beta tumhe tho patha hi hoga kamra kaha hai 😆 ...halarious...and shabd acting as if he was unaware of the where Mahi's room was located...haha Omgg no wayy....poor mahi unaware of teh fact that it was actually Shabd in the room...let out her inner feelings... And shabd idiot didnt was actually enjoying listening to mahi talk so openly 😆 .. hahah...Mahi thought there was a chor in her room 😆 😆....Mahi is something...she's soo cute and funny omg Mahi must have felt sooo embarressed....seeing that shabd had heard eveything she said... And they were romancing even with Mahi's face half covered with the mask..lolll Aww....but as usual love dthey teasing and playfulness with eachother...really really cute... And shabd is so naughty acting as if something went in his eye...loll...and then getting all romantic...haha Wonder what explanation they will give their parents 😆 Great part as usual...cant wait for the next one...oh its nice to knwo that you are atleast having some ideas for the next ff...hopefully everything works out fine...and you will soon start a new ff...but its ok you can take your time....we can wait for the writers block to get over...no rush...continue soon...and keep up the great work 👏



thanks for ur awesome comments mita...loved them as always 👏 👏

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