JAB WE MET (MS-Maayka ff) ENDpg 36 - Page 30

Originally posted by: ~Ouma*n*Ranbir~

🤗Di, this is truly one of my fav ff's on Shahi, beautifully written and the story is even better, i still haven't seen the film yet, but i know for sure, that if it is anything like this fan fic then i will really enjoy it! It was short and simple ff, but really sweet and i will always remember it! Its too cute, the scene where she gets on the stool to tye his tie was cute and reminded me JA in k3g.😆 Shab's cheekyness is cute and him comparing Mahi to food, ras malai, that was adorable. But their cutes are the best bit, hehe bless lil twins and i love the names you chose. The train scene was cute and i really injoyed it, perfect family! Great ending di!! Hope you back soon with another new great ff di!!😃xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

thanks ouma for ur lovely comments as always 👏 👏 👏

Hey, congratulations on winning the VM of the week award on DMG...looks like ur a Karan fan too now 😳 😳 i will check ur VM out and comment

^ hehe always welcome di!

~ hehe and yes ThankU, I hope you liked it😊 I found out tho, that 3 other members have made a vm with the same song😆 Will go chk your comment😛

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Mahi needs a stool to reach Shabd's neck... 😆
Shorat, but sweet story, Bheegi. While you're on a break from storytelling, I've gone back to reading your earlier stories at leisure 😊
Thanks, Bheegi!

Originally posted by: namelesssr

Mahi needs a stool to reach Shabd's neck... 😆
Shorat, but sweet story, Bheegi. While you're on a break from storytelling, I've gone back to reading your earlier stories at leisure 😊
Thanks, Bheegi!

thanks namelesser...I am touched by the fact that ur reading my old stories....thanks again 😊 😊 😊

THE END 😲 😲 oh god!!! whenever i got for out of station and come back... i find THE END in some or other ffs... *sigh*

oh by the way... less punjabi in this part 😉 😆

Originally posted by: abhilashasharma

THE END 😲 😲 oh god!!! whenever i got for out of station and come back... i find THE END in some or other ffs... *sigh*

oh by the way... less punjabi in this part 😉 😆

sorry abhi....may be u should stop going out of station 😉

"kithe chali"....he said something like that....love it...lolz!
awwww love the name sunehri....twins....toooo cuteeeee
loved how u brought the title and the movie into it lol
waitin for ur next ff

Originally posted by: MrsRanbirKapoor

"kithe chali"....he said something like that....love it...lolz!
awwww love the name sunehri....twins....toooo cuteeeee
loved how u brought the title and the movie into it lol
waitin for ur next ff

thanks Hinna...nice to 'see' u again. Hope ur exams went well. I will start my new ff soon. Will post preview in a few days. Actually, my daughter is having surgery in 2 days, so will try to distract myself by writing my new ff 😉

i just love the whole story.........i mean it was perfect..........the writing is so good........i just loved it.......i wish you to start a new ff.........i want to request you to start a new ff with shabd and mahi as i am dying to read on them.........ple ple make a new one..........good luck for your's surgery......i hope she will get well soon........i prey for her......thanks for this wonderful story.......excellent writer..........just amazing.......

love

kashish

Originally posted by: goodkashish

i just love the whole story.........i mean it was perfect..........the writing is so good........i just loved it.......i wish you to start a new ff.........i want to request you to start a new ff with shabd and mahi as i am dying to read on them.........ple ple make a new one..........good luck for your's surgery......i hope she will get well soon........i prey for her......thanks for this wonderful story.......excellent writer..........just amazing.......

love

kashish

thanks 4 ur wonderful compliments and best wishes Kashish. My next ff will be a KYPH+DMG combo with AK and AR. I have written another MS ff called Tumhari amaanat, if ur interested. Thanks again 😊