JAB WE MET (MS-Maayka ff) ENDpg 36

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Posted: 17 years ago
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JAB WE MET


Hi everyone, I just saw a cute romantic comedy 'Jab we met' and could not help thinking that a MS fan-fic would be a perfect fit with a similar theme. Let me know if u guys are interested or would it be boring as most of u have seen the movie.

I will continue if u guys are interested

PART 1:


"Mr Sareen…..yeh Shabd ko kya ho gaya hai? He is just not focused on his work these days…..he can't even run a meeting for heaven sakes," Mr Bhasin complained to Mr Yash Sareen. Yash Sareen was a successful businessman, whose company Sareen Enterprises had become quite successful over the past few years. His only son, Shabd had joined right after completing his MBA from Wharton University in the US.


Shabd's parents were divorced but were still joint owners of the business. Shabd had lived with his dad most of his growing years, and Yash ahd practically brainwashed Shabd against his mom. Shabd exchanged a few words with his mom, Radha Sareen here and there but basically depended on his dad for all major decisions in his life.



Shabd was now 26 years old and an eligible bachelor by all means. His photographs always made it to the page 3 section of all successful newspapers. He had been spotted lately with a famous model, Suhani on quite a few occasions. Gossip mongers had a field day trying to link the hot model to this tall, handsome rich bachelor.


There was an element of truth to the Suhani-Shabd rumors. Shabd had recently proposed to Suhani and she had happily accepted his proposal. Shabd had been in seventh heaven till a few days ago. His sister, Kamya, who had been happy about her brother's engagement to a famous model was now worried about her brother- something had happened recently.




"Haan main jaanta hoon…Shabd aaj kal kuch udaas lagta hai…..kahin yeh Suhani ke saath uski engagement tootne ki khabar sach tho nahin hai?" Yash, who had just returned from his 15 day trip to Europe, pondered.


He summoned his receptionist to call Shabd in.


"Shabd beta! Kya haal hai?" Yash asked


"Theek hai dad," A sullen Shabd replied


"Yeh kya sun raha hoon main? Suhani aur tumhari engagement….uh….is it true?" Yash asked


Shabd lowered his head, "Jee dad….we have broken up."


"Really? Hmm…don't worry my son…Suhani jaisi tujhey kai ladkiyan mil jaayengi," Yash reassured his son.


"Whatever dad," Shabd said softly and left his office. Shabd was in no mood to talk with anyone; Suhani had broken his heart into pieces. She had been two timing him all these months. After she accepted his proposal, she had said yes to a proposal from a famous movie star too. Shabd had not believed the story initially and dismissed it as rumors, but then he had caught her red handed with the movie star at a party.


This happened about a month ago, but Shabd had still not recovered from that jolt yet. He had lost interest in work, himself, his family…everything.


He roamed around like a dead person; his will to live had died with Suhani's betrayal.


One evening, he parked his BMW at Mumbai Central and walked into an unknown train…to an unknown destination.


He sat at a window seat; he had no baggage, no ticket, no destination……he was heartbroken, dejected and wanted to run away from it all.


Just as the train started to leave the platform, a young girl in her early twenties, hair braided, in a yellow salwaar kameez, bags hanging from both shoulders ran to board the train.


"Roko…roko…..meri train!" she yelled and finally boarded the moving train.

"Madam…..chalti huyi train se chadhna bahut khatarnaak hai," a fellow passenger commented.


The girl smiled, "fitteh mooh tera! Maine aaj tak koi train miss nahin ki hai….aur na hi karoongi!"


…to be contd…
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg i luved that movie jab we met....how abt adding AK also..liek kripa is a look alike of mahi....i luv ak lol mahi and shabd also luk gud togather
so ya the movie it was soooo cute...and simple daz y i liked it...awsome stry
cnt !!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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lmao bheegi i love you dear.....awesome ff this means i get to read two written by you....cant wait for you to continue soon and i agreee with her^^ sorry dont remember her name...i think you should ak in there somewhere tooo 👏

loads of love

annoying sukhi 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow... side by side another ff... inspired from the movie... interesting...
btw,,, are u by any chance a fan of neha bamb... 😳 just curious 😃
mahi and shabd... seems i will watch the movie after u finish the ff...

long time passed since i read two of ur ff's side by side... its a twin treat... both kripa's and mahi's character is fun... so double fun... 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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😆 😆 that was awsome yaar cont soon no wonder suhani broke her heart but we have mahi for him 😆 cont soon loved it 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏 👏 Yey MS..and my Vivan..hehe Can't wait to read more, Haven't seen the movie yet coz of exams..lol..I'll love to read through your fan fic and MS! 😳
Cont soon!

xxxxx
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks 4 all ur lovely comments. Abhi...do u have any doubts that i am a Neha Bamb fan...of course I am 😊

I might not be able to update this ff very regularly...as and when i get time i will. Yes JWM is an adorable movie...Kareena's character is fit for Mahi that is why i decided to write this 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great part...
ohh i luv MS... finally a fanfic on them
i havnt seen jwb so really excitedd conttt soonnnnnnnnnn 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wowww...double treat....awsome 😃....I havent seen the movie yet myself....so I think its a great idea to have the movie as a ff....seems really interesting....wonder how shabd will get over Suhani.....maybe after he meets mahi he'll change his mind 😉 ....great start...continue soon...and keep up the great work 👏
Edited by mita_mita01 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg omg omg a new ff by u
i dont watch maayka but i just have to read this ff coz its written by YOUUUU:P
and i loved da movie jab we met....but this ff isnt going 2 b exactly d same right....coz i wnt suspense....lol
nd yea i agree wid sahr....u no in jab we met, kareena has a sister called roop...n shez lyk "woh bilkul mere jaisi hai" u cud make that kripa:P nd anshuman...d guy kareena was SPOSED 2 marry....make him angad:D

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