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sorry guys for posting after some time but i was really tied up with some important stuff. well ive posted today and i hope you guys like it.

?15?
LOST HUDA


All the cadets were dispersed, busy in searching for clues. It was a test for them to use ?their own initiative and intelligence and each of them knew that they had to pass it. ?

Ali and Pooja browsed around the woods trying to find something but nothing was found. ??"Oi, Ali chal na thoree dair bethe hai".?

?"We must continue searching as every minute is precious to us". ?

?"I know but a few minutes resting are not going to harm anything. The trees and the ?wood is not going to run away anywhere". Both of them sit down and just chat about here ?and there. ?

Something very interesting was found by Alekh. He picked it up and went to show ?Abhimanyu who instantly recognized it to being Rajveer's watch. There was something ?special about the watch because he knew that Rajveer wore it all the time. "Something is ?special about this watch and I think we should hold on it very carefully. Cadet Alekh hum ?chahte hai ke aap ise sambhaal ke rakhe." ?

?"Sir, I've found something very interesting." Yudi came back with some bullets in his ?hand. "These were fired towards the North West of this area because I found them buried ?in the tree trunk." ?

Abhimanyu examined them and thought that it can't be certain whether these bullets were ?the ones fired on Rajveer until they got them sent to the lab and then found Rajveer's ?bullets. "Good work Cadet Yudi." ?

Naina just walked around and she reached the exact spot where Rajveer was shot and ?how she was brutally beaten up. She froze and everything came back to her as if it all was ?happening all over again in front of her. She found herself lying there helpless with blood ?flowing out of her head and nose. Then she saw herself trying to lift her head to see ?where Captain Rajveer was and finding him lying nearly dead under Dr. Ritu's tall frame. ?Ritu had towered on him and for the first time Naina comprehended something new. ?There was something that Dr. Ritu had told Rajveer which she also heard but because of ?the trauma she had forgotten it. Now her mind was getting clearer so she remembered ?Ritu telling Rajveer something about being a traitor and how crossing their lines hadn't ?given him any benefit. Ritu had also mentioned to Rajveer that when he couldn't fight ?the people in his own system how he would be able to fight the enemies of the country. ?Then there was a gun shot and Naina jumped with shock as if the gun shot had just ?happened. She came back to her senses and saw that there was no one there anymore. She ?broke down into tears and just dropped to the floor. She couldn't stop. ?

A hand came around her and hugged her. She leaned on the hand and wept her eyes out. ??"What has happened? I really can't forget it!" she continued crying. "I really love him ?Alekh! I really love him!" ?

The hand began getting loose on her and the person had begun backing off a bit. Naina ?became surprised and turned around and she froze as if a thunder bolt had just hit her. ?The person wasn't Alekh but it was Huda. After hearing her confession Huda was ?awestruck. He didn't know how to react; it was too much information for him. Even ?though he had come to terms with Naina not being in love with him, but her falling in ?love with Captain Rajveer was too much for him. He had reacted quite harshly before as ?well when Bharghav had instigated him about Rajveer and Naina's relationship even ?when both of them had denied it. But this time Naina had admitted it herself. ?

?"Huda, just listen to me." ?

He didn't listen to anything just got up and began walking off briskly. ?

She followed him desperately to stop him from doing anything stupid. "Rukja Huda! At ?least listen to me…Huda please…" ?

Alekh came and stopped Naina from running after Huda like that. "Kya hogoya tujhe?" ?

?"Alekh, Huda ko sab kuch pata chalgaya mere or Captain Rajveer ke bare me, or ab wo ?pata nahi kaha jaaraha hai." ?

?"Jaane de ose. Dekh abhi os ka dimag seedhee tarhase kaam nahi karaha so he won't be ?of any use to this mission. He needs to sort his differences out by himself." ?

Abhimanyu called all of them together and began training them again. He taught them ?some basic principles and then noticed that Huda was missing. "Where has Cadet Huda ?gone?" ?

?"Abhimnayu, he has decided to abandon this mission for some personal reasons." Naina ?hesitated to tell him but she had to save her friend. ?

?"This is not a game where you join and leave as you please. Hum aap sabko yaad dilade ?ke yeh ek bohat hee khatarnaak mission hai jo hame har halat me khatam karna hai. I've ?told you before but I'm reinforcing again that in this mission there is no guarantee of ?anything because we don't know who our enemy is. We can trust no one but ourselves to ?make the right move. Nobody knows who's going to stay alive and who is not. To faisla ?abhi hojaye. Jo bhi is mission ko chore ke jaana chahta hai wo abhi isee waqt jaasakta ?hai. Iske baad agar kisee ne aisa kiya to majboorun hame osko goli maarnee paregee." ?

All of them were shocked to hear that from him. The look in his eyes told them that he ?was serious. They were also serious and knew that they weren't there to play games. ?None of them moved an inch which gave Abhimanyu satisfaction that the cadets were ?still focused on their mission rather than other less valued things. However there still was ?regret that they had lost Huda. ?

end of part
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Posted: 17 years ago
#52
hey too good

pl continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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that was so cool . plsssssssss update 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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really nice ff...enjoy reading it...but u no am feeling bad 4 the cadets yar..even 4 huda...chalo ab jaldi se wapas lao usko..he cant leve his mission..ny ways plzz update soon
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Originally posted by: varallika

really nice ff...enjoy reading it...but u no am feeling bad 4 the cadets yar..even 4 huda...chalo ab jaldi se wapas lao usko..he cant leve his mission..ny ways plzz update soon

oh dont feel bad for them. dont worry he would certainly return after all our hero has to be saved rite? without everyone's effort that wont happen nah.

im glad ur enjoying reading this and i hope u continue reading.

thanx for ur sweet comments.

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thanx everyone for ur comments. ill try and update soon
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16
MOVING AHEAD


"Okay I want all of you to concentrate and focus. Remember these basic things." Abhimanyu made all of them stand in one line. He decided that the cadets first needed some lessons on discipline and needed to be completely focused. "First of all always remember that you need confidence. You need confidence that yes you're stronger than the enemy, you can bring him down. Let me warn though that when I mean confidence I don't mean over confidence. Let me show you an example. Cadet Yudi step forward."

Yudi went forward and Abhimanyu ordered him to attack him. Yudi followed and attacked without much thought thinking that Abhimanyu is just demonstrating and won't really defend himself. He was wrong because Abhimanyu grabbed Yudi's hand and he turned him up side down within seconds. Yudi was left lying on the floor awestruck.

"Never underestimate your opponent" Abhimanyu gave his hand out to pull Yudi up. "kabhi bhi apne aapko itna strong mat samjhna ke ye lage ke dushman saamne kuch bhi nahi."

All the cadets remembered Rajveer because he also had told them the similar thing. He had told them to never think that the enemy in front of them is weaker than them because then they would not be able to overcome them. If they would believe that the enemy is equally strong than there would be more motivation in fighting. It would make them work even harder to become stronger.

"Cadet Naina, why don't you come forward and let's attempt this again,"

Naina went forward and when she looked at Abhimnayu she saw Rajveer standing there instead. He had this smile on his face and the sparkle in his eyes was the same one he always had whenever he had encouraged Naina and had supported her. He was teaching her to concentrate and always be ready for the enemy's move. Don't underestimate their strength and always be alert. When he moved in to attack her, she ducked down and grabbed his hand from behind and turned him upside down. She had this big grin on her face but it soon faded when she saw that Rajveer had disappeared and there was Abhimanyu lying on the ground instead.

All the rest clapped whilst Naina helped Abhimnayu up. "Good Cadet. I must say I'm impressed."

"Captain Rajveer had taught me that." Naina retorted

"I'm glad ke aapne apne Captain kee laj rakhee. Ab humne aap sabka josh or himmat to dekhee hai, per is mission pe sabse ziada zaroorat dimag kee hai. I've to see whether you guys can use your intelligence and initiative. That was the main aim of this task of finding clues. Hum jaante the ke kuch khaas nahi milega per you guys seemed to have gathered some useful information."

"Abhimnayu, I think I might have a lead." Yudi spoke in his usual theoretic tone. "Since the bullets were fired in the North West direction and no where else so that means that Captain Rajveer must've been going in that direction."

"Good work, Yudi. But I must tell you that it can't be confirmed that these bullets are the same ones fired on Raj, but for the time being we would assume that." Then they all walked in that direction and came to some woods and as they came to the end of it, they found themselves standing at a cliff. "hosakta hai ke iske aage wo pohocha hee na ho."

"Ek to hai, if he was shot brutally then they wouldn't have left him here to rot. They must've taken him somewhere, or there could be a possibility that perhaps he was left here by them because they thought he was dead but Captain Rajveer could've been found by the police and taken to the hospital." Alekh tried to fill in the blanks. He didn't want to think that captain Rajveer could have fallen in the sea although the odds were directing to that. He wanted to appear more optimistic.

"Dimag lagane kee baaree aayee to kaafi achee tarha se istemaal karahai hai sab. Now listen to what the further plan is. First of all, the police records need to be checked on whether any abandoned body was found by them in this area or a heavily injured man. Then we need to search all the hospitals and their records to get more leads. We would need teams. Cadet Alekh and Cadet Naina, I want you to enquire in all the police stations. Cadet Ali and Pooja, I want you guys to search the hospitals."

"What will you do Abhimnayu?" the trust had still not become strong between him and Naina yet so she wanted to make sure everything was still safe.

"Hum or Cadet Yudi kuch special enquiry karenge. Now everyone let's get this done and let's get results."

The teams set out to their own paths leaving a curious Abhimnayu behind wondering if they would receive anything useful which would help them in moving ahead.

end of part.

i know guys these parts are quite slow paced with no such action but i'm trying to set the plot out as im going along. im not sure how this would continue but i will try and put more action.

till then i hope u still enjoy reading.
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👏 👏 👏 pls continueeeee sooonnnnn
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thanx all of u for ur comments. ill try and updat as soon as possible.

continue reading!!!!!!!!!!
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17
MUMBAI CALLS


All the cadets were divided now into groups looking for different clues. They all were positive that they were getting closer and closer to going in the right direction.

Ali and Pooja had searched two to three local hospitals already but there were no records which showed any patient with the name of Rajveer.

"I'm really hungry Ali, come one na lets eat something" Pooja sat down on a roadside bench looking as if she had been worn out completely. It was really hot and they hadn't eaten since morning. It was nearing mid afternoon and they had been searching non – stop.

"Just a few more hospitals and then we can find something to eat" Ali was determined they would find something or the other.

"I can't walk anymore. I think I would faint any moment" she attempted to get up but nearly fell but Ali came and saved her. Then he supported her and took her to a nearby roadside caf. They ordered some snacks just to make Pooja feel better and also they can go quickly as well.

Whilst they were waiting Ali looked around and he noticed something. On a table next to them sat a guy reading a newspaper and on the front page was a headline which caught his eye. "Excuse me; can you please give me this paper for a minute?"

The guy gave it because he didn't care. Ali began reading the news with earnest as if he had realized something.

"What have you found?" she asked whilst busily munching on the nibbles which had just arrived. At that moment she didn't really care about other things.

He didn't answer immediately but continued scanning the columns to make sure he was on the right track. The headlines showed an escaped convict on lose in Mumbai. He didn't know why he thought it could be relevant just got an instinct. He read how the convict was found in the sea near the fish port in Mumbai a month ago. He thought that the time matched with when Rajveer disappeared. Then he read further of how the convict had been a patient at Lilavati hospital, Mumbai for three weeks where he was in a coma. When he had recovered the patient had no sense of being, as he had lost his memory. The police had kept tight security around him because they believed him to be a criminal even though an ID tag was found on him translating his identity as being Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat. When he read that, Ali paused. He was reading the right thing.

"Mujhe bhi bataiga ke tu apnee memory kis model me daal raha hai?"

"Pooja, humein lagta hai ke hamaree khoj yaha pe puree huwee." He showed her the story and how captain Rajveer was in Mumbai.

"Per yeh sab kya hai? Yeh kounsa missed call bhejrahe hai?" she was surprised to read all about Rajveer being a criminal and out on the loose.

"Pata nahi but we have to go and tell this to the others." They both left the caf with the newspaper.

Meanwhile Alekh and Naina had reached a police station and were inquiring. The officer on duty was very rude, lazy and just not bothered. He sat with his legs spread on the table and he was munching on tobacco. When Alekh and Naina approached him at first he just sat there scratching his ear and making faces. Then he noticed Naina and began giving her dirty looks.

"Dekhye inspector apun yaha pe ek enquiry karne ko aaya hai" Alekh didn't like the way inspector stared at Naina. He came in front of her so she won't be visible to him.

"kya inquiry karnee hai tujhe?" the officer spat something out and then leaned back again continuing with goggling over Naina.

"Was an abandoned body or an injured person found by the police in the past month or so?"

"There are thousands found day and night. How are we to keep a record of them all?"

"This particular person is an army officer. Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat" Alekh moved Naina more towards his back because he saw the inspector still giving her dirty looks.

"Dekh mera waqt barbaad mat kar. Is naam ka koun aaya or koun gaya, kya maloom."

"Please look it up, isn't that your job?"

He got up abruptly and grabbed Alekh's collar. "Mujhe mera kaam mat sikha. Ziada kaan me kijli keena to under daal dunga tujhe."

Alekh was fuming too and was going to attack but Naina intervened and made him relax and reminded him where they were and what they had come for. Then they both began leaving when they heard two constables talking and laughing.

"kahi yeh dono osee Captain kee baat to nahi karahe jo hospital se bhaag gaya hai?" one constable asked another.

The other spoke "lagta to yahi hai. Pata nahi kounsa jurm kiya tha saale ne jo puree Mumbai kee police oske peeche hai." They both continued making fun of him and the story in the newspaper.

Naina and Alekh were alarmed by what they just heard. If they were talking about Rajveer then why did they say he was being chased by the police? They had to find out about it. Both of them left the station and reached the others back at the same spot, where they found all of them tensed and waiting for them.

"We have some news" Naina blurted out.

"We have news too." Ali retorted.

Ali discussed about the newspaper story on Captain Rajveer and Alekh agreed with him saying he also heard something similar in the police station.

Abhimanyu digested the new information and began pacing to think about what to do next. He still hadn't got results on the bullets he had sent to the lab. But time was running out and they had to make a move sooner rather than later. The story said it loud and clear that Rajveer was in Mumbai so there was no point staying in Nagpur any longer. "I guess guys, Mumbai Calls."

end of part

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