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all of u guys appreciation is very much appreciated

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sorry guys, im really held up in my vacation so cant update regularly.

ill try and do it as soon as possible.

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okay guys here is the next part finally. sorry for taking so much time but to tell you the truth i was actually lost thinking about lost. That sounds funny but i was stuck. finally my brain opened and i could think further. well i hope you like this part.

20
WAY OUT


Naina and Alekh arrived at the hospital well aware of the fact that they were being watched constantly. They took each step carefully keeping their eyes open for anything unusual. Now they were not going to waste anytime but also weren't going to rush into anything.

"Here it is. Dr. Mathur's office." Naina pointed whilst Alekh looked around to see anyone was looking at them. Then when it was clear they stepped inside.

"Dr. Mathur?"

The Dr put his head up from the file he was engrossed in and became surprised to find two strangers in his office. "Yes, how can I help?"

"Dr. We're here to ask about a patient who had come here three to four weeks ago. You treated him. His name is Rajveer Singh Shekhawat."

The doctor's eyebrows shot up at hearing that and immediately got up to shut the door. Then he made both of them sit down and told them not to talk about it so loudly. "How do you guys know him?"

"Well I'm his…" Naina paused because she didn't know how exactly to introduce her relation with Rajveer. Should she say that she is his girlfriend but that wouldn't be true, then again if she told him she was only his protg then maybe they won't be able to get enough information about him.


"Tere ko yeh jaan ne kee kya zaroorat hai? We just need information." Alekh was very impatient for some reason because he knew someone was going to come in and interrupt.

"I'm sorry I can't pass you patient information without knowing the relation due to confidentiality reasons."

"Forget those rules. Dekh hum log bohat jaldi me hai, just give us what we need." Alekh got up and hovered the doctor as if he was going to attack him. The activities outside had given him an indication that something was definitely out of order.

"Are you threatening me?" The doctor pushed Alekh back whilst he got up from his seat.

"Please, stop all of this. We are really in a hurry. You want a relation then here, I'm his God damn wife. Now can you co operate." She didn't know what she was saying; the first thing that came was that so she blurted it out. She also had noticed many ward boys and nurses checking inside which didn't give her the right feeling. Who ever was looking for them was quite near. The sooner they got information then they could be on their way.

"If you're his wife then I suppose I can give you the information you want. Now tell me what it is you want to know, Miss?"

"We want to know what exactly happened to Rajveer. How did he come here?"

"Haven't you read the papers?" The doctor became curious whether they were saying the truth or not.

"We have but I want to know the truth." Naina pushed further.

The doctor sighed and then shut the file he was reading. Then he got up and faced the window. "When the patient was brought here he was in a bad state. Completely covered in bullets and blood. The head was terribly damaged." As he said all this he took out his mobile and typed something in it and pressed the sent button. He did it discretely so that Alekh and Naina didn't find out. "In the beginning it appeared as if he was not going to survive but…"

"Eh khali dimag ka dhai mat bana. Get to the point quickly" Alekh had lost his patience again because he knew something was not right and wanted to leave quickly. The way the doctor was taking time didn't look right at all.

"Do you want the information or not?"

"I'm sorry, doctor, my friend is just really upset. Please continue and can you give us the relevant information." Naina made Alekh calm and made him sit down again.

"I did manage to save him; unfortunately he slipped in a coma for three weeks. When he woke up everything seemed alright with him but he had lost his memory. He couldn't remember anything, not even his name. We had no choice but to believe he was a dangerous criminal who got shot whilst escaping the police."

Police sirens were heard from outside. Alekh became alert and ran to the window to check. He saw three to four police jeeps turning up with many officers. They were all coming inside the hospital. His blood became hot and he grabbed the doctor's collar and pushed him against the wall. "Saale, tune hamare saat dhoka kiya."

"Yeh kya karahe ho?" The doctor panicked.

"You thought that you can keep us occupied in your talks while you called the police and get us caught."

"Why would I do that? I mean you're not exactly criminals are you?"

"Shut up! Nahi hum gunde hai or nahi Rajveer Sir. You better give me the information or else."

The doctor became quite scared of Alekh' raged eyes. They were flaming. "Look I don't know much, I swear. The only thing I know is that the crime branch is after Rajveer because they think he is a deadly dangerous criminal on the loose."

"Why do they think that?"

"I don't know, you've got to ask ACP Rathod about that."

The police were approaching as he heard them giving orders to spread out and take positions. He grabbed Naina and made his way out of the office. They had got enough information they needed now the rest they had to get from ACP Rathod. They made their way out of the opposite corridor making sure they didn't bring attention towards them.

"Alekh, hum bhaag kyu rahe hai. When we haven't even done anything." Naina stopped mid way because she was not a runner. That is not what was taught in the army.

"I know we haven't done anything but these people don't think that. Wo doctor saala bara shaana nikla. Whilst he was talking to us he secretly took our photos and sent them to the police. Now they know us so we've to hide."

"Agar yeh sach hai so how will we meet ACP Rathod?"

"We'll think about that later, but right now we need to get out of here." They began running again as the police had come their way. When they stopped to catch their breath Alekh saw a fire alarm. He got the idea. He pressed it and a loud siren began running. Everyone became alert in the hospital and began running around creating a chaos. It was perfect for them to get out. Alekh held Naina's hand whilst they rushed around avoiding crashing into other people. They were lucky that they soon arrived at the Way Out.

end of part.

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welcome back, awsome update, plz continue soon
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that was super but pls update soon
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thanyou guys for your comments.

i will try and update regularly.
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sorry guys for the delay but i was really held up with things. But here is the next part finally. Thanx for your patience. &nb sp; &nb sp; &nb sp;

21
REACHING DELHI


"What have you guys done?" Abhimanyu was displeased with Naina's and Alekh's stupidity. He specifically told them to be as discrete as possible but now the Mumbai police were after them.

"Apun kya karta, wo saala doctor hamare saat dhoka karaha tha to kya ose aise hee chore dete." Alekh came in front of Abhimanyu and justified himself.

"Cadet Alekh, don't forget you're in the process of becoming an army officer or army me patience seekhai jaatee hai, violence nahi."

"Abhimanyu, that doctor had already got us in the trap when he found out we were related to Raj…I mean captain Rajveer."

"Naina why did you guys say you were related to him."

"There was no other way. Why would the doctor give out confidential information to strangers? Or yahape to ek criminal kee baat horahee thee."

"Alekh! Don't say that." Naina had a sudden out burst. She couldn't tolerate anything against Rajveer. Not before, not now and not ever.

"Sorry, per oske liye to yaheej baat hai na. Anyways, I did whatever I felt was right."

"Don't make yourself so big that when you fall you loose everything." Abhimanyu spoke with grinding teeth. He was talking about patience when he himself was sometimes ill tempered. That's why he used music to soothe him down again.

"Why are we arguing about this? Abhimanyu the important thing is that the doctor told us who the officer in charge is. Now we just need to go and talk with this ACP Rathod."

"It's not easy Naina. Yaha kee police ko aap nahi jaantee. Anyways now whatever we're going to do is going to be done by me." He explained the plan to everyone and made sure everyone understood him perfectly, especially Alekh. He made sure Naina and Alekh were put into hiding immediately until he returned.

Abhimanyu drove off to the crime branch headquarters charging himself up as if getting himself ready for what was going to come. He had heard about ACP Rathod but hadn't seen him yet. "Come on Raj, now you've got to come out of the hiding." He drove around the city for nearly two hours until he reached the headquarters. As he got out he grabbed his army uniform and changed his top into it. If he had to go inside then he needed his identity.

"Excuse me officer", he addressed one constable standing on guard. "Where can I meet ACP Rathod?"

"Sahab to zaroori kaam ke liye bahar gaye hai but you can wait in his office."

Abhimanyu made his way inside the crowded and noisy crime branch offices where officers were busy handling something or other. He walked around and people just looked at him and moved on to doing their stuff. Perhaps he was an officer too so they didn't ask many questions. He continued walking when an officer stopped him.

"Yes can I help you?" The officer prevented him to going further. Why was an army officer in the crime branch? It could be related with Rajveer Shekhawat's case.

"ACP Rathod?"

"Nahi. I'm Kamle, his assistant. What do you want with ACP Rathod?"

"I have some important work with him." Abhimanyu knew very well that he had to say the right amount other wise it could be used against him. The position in which they were in was very sensitive and they had to be careful.

"Zaroori kaam? Yahape jo bhi zaroori kaam hota hai wo hame pata hai. So just tell me what you want."

"You can't violent my rights of keeping confidentiality. Don't forget your standing in front of an army officer. Now just tell me where I can find ACP Rathod."

Kamle became a bit worried with the threat and decided to let Abhimanyu pass because at that moment he needed to talk with ACP Rathod before making any rash decisions. "You can wait in his office. Wese naam kya bataya?"

"Captain Abhimanyu Chauhaan." He walked off to ACP Rathod's room. Now this was the gold mine he was looking for. If Rathod was as Abhimanyu thought then his confidential files would be stored in his computer which he can easily access without getting caught. It was high time he found out what was going on with Rajveer and where exactly he was hidden or was kept hidden.

Once inside he peeked outside the window to see if anyone was coming his way or if that Kamle was keeping an eye on him. Then he discretely made his way to the computer and began searching through the files. This had to be done quickly otherwise anyone would walk in any moment. There were too many files and less time.

"Sir, Kamle here sir. Wo...koi aap ko dhoondhta huwa aaya hai yaha….Ha wo…he calls himself Captain Abhimanyu Chauhaan."

"Kya? What is he doing there? Kamle, go and stop him before he gets any information." Rathod was outraged to know Abhimanyu had reached his office. He knew very well that his information would easily be leaked.

Kamle dropped the phone and went quickly to Rathod's office. Abhimanyu could sense someone approaching so he quickened up the search and finally he got into the Rajveer's file. But due to less time the only information he could gather was something about a meeting in Red Fort in Delhi and catching the target." He heard Kamle shuffling around and making his way towards the office so he quickly shut the window and then the folder. He got up and ran to the bathroom. Here he desperately searched for something when he saw the window. He removed the glass tiles and climbed out.

When Kamle barged in to catch Abhimanyu he was disappointed to see he had escaped. He opened up the bathroom door thinking he would still be in there but he had already gone. His cell phone went off again.

"Kya huwa Kamle?" Rathod asked.

"Sir wo nikal gaya."

"What? I told you to catch him earlier. This guy is very important for us. He will take us straight to Rajveer. Forun kuch officers lagado oske peeche. If he has escaped then he definitely has got information." Rathod seemed to know Abhimanyu quite well because he had studied everything on Rajveer and Abhimanyu seemed to come in very much. If he would be able to catch Abhimanyu then Rajveer will easily come under his trap.

As Abhimanyu drove back he knew he was being followed. Now he was also in the police radar. Why didn't he realize this before hand? "I was telling Alekh and Naina, what did I do?" He kept checking his rear view mirror on his trail and just drove on as casual as possible. He needed some kind of diversion but what could be possible. He began speeding now and kept changing lanes but the police stayed on his tracks. He took his cell out. "Hello…Cadet Yudi, get everyone ready now. We have to leave immediately…Police mere peeche hai…yes…find another car as soon as possible." He dropped the cell and looked over at the police cars behind him. He made a sharp right turn which made one police car topple up. That would hold the traffic up for sometime he thought.

"Kya kaha Abhimanyu sir ne?" Ali came over to a confused Yudi.

"He said that the police are after him and we have to leave immediately. He said something about finding another car."

"Kamaal hai. Apun ko samjha raha tha ke responsibility kya hai and he himself got trapped." Alekh shrugged his shoulders with disbelief. "I'm telling you guys, this Abhimanyu is definitely keeping things away from us. The way things have been handled so far I can't help but to think whether he really is on our side or not."
"Guys right now he's the best thing we've got. So let's not argue and do as he has told us." Yudi seemed to be the only one thinking practically.

"Ha per yeh puarana network choreke naya plan kahase dhoondenge?" A desperate Pooja got up from the ground.

"I think it won't be hard." Yudi stared at Alekh. Then Ali and Pooja did the same followed by Naina.

Alekh couldn't believe they were asking him to go around and steal a car. "Come on Alekh bhai, hum jaante hai ke yeh galat hoga per right now we don't have another choice." Ali tried convincing him.

"Wese bhi apun police ke liye ek mujrim hai to or gunaah sahi." They all got up and left the old building in which they were hiding, together onto the main road. Now they had to find a silent street where there weren't many people. Whilst Alekh checked the cars out the others kept an eye out for any passer bys. This was a piece of cake for Alekh but it had been a long time since he had robbed a car so it took him some time to remember the technique.

"Alekh hurry up, I think someone is coming." Naina rushed over him.

"I think it's done. Call all the others."

Alekh opened the door and hotwired the car. All of them sat whilst Alekh drove the car out of there really rough.

"Why are you speeding, how will we get Abhimanyu sir?" Yudi sat in the front and was displeased with the way Alekh took them around curves and narrow lanes.

"Abhe agar wo saala gaari ka malik agaya na to phir tu sirf Abhimanyu sir se jail me milega."

No one said anything anymore and let Alekh just drive them out of there. Now they were on the main road and were just driving casually when out of nowhere a jeep came in front of them and Alekh screeched on the breaks. They looked up and saw that it was Abhimanyu. Without saying or wasting any more time, he got out of the jeep and sat in the car, pushing Yudi to the back. Then he ordered Alekh to just drive off and he would explain the details later.

"Sir wo phirse hamare haath se nikal gaya." A worried Kamle reported to Rathod over the phone.

"Hmmm. Don't worry right now. Let them go. Ab aage me dekhloonga." When he shut the phone he called someone again. "Ha sir wo log nikal gaye. Ab manzil dhoor nahi hai." He smiled and shut the phone. He thought, "good that you got the information you needed Abhimanyu Chauhaan. Now you'll reach Rajveer and make our work easy. Now I'm just waiting for your reaching Delhi".

end of part.
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its awesome too good waiting eagerly for more asap.

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