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Posted: 17 years ago
#61
hey to good

pl continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I aprreciate the writer in you. Exciting episodes.thank you for this.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey you all. thanx for reading this fan fic and actually appreciating it.

its because of that i'm able to continue.

well i hope you still continue reading and enjoying!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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too good, cant wait, plz continue soon

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Posted: 17 years ago
#65

jaldi se RAJ & NAINA ko milvao

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Posted: 17 years ago
#66
patience wo bhi karwadenge. abhi to pehle pure cadets ko Rajveer tak pohoch na hai oske baad Naina or oska to apne aap reunion hoga.

kahani me to ab maza aaehga

thanx for reading it till now and i hope i can still keep u hooked to reading further 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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WRONG PATH


The journey to Mumbai was not easy for anyone. They all were thinking about the same thing that how will they find Rajveer and if they do find him, in what situation will they find him in?

Naina was the most worried out of all because she had so many questions which needed to be answered and she knew that only Rajveer will be able to answer them. she could feel time passing away like sand passes through fingers. Every two minutes she kept on checking her watch as if by looking at it she would be be able to race time.

"Tu faltu me itna tention lerahee hai. baar baar yu ghari ko dekh kar tu waqt ko aage karnahee sakhegee" Alekh comforted her.

"You're right Alekh, but i can't help it. i'm so eager to meet Captain Rajveer that i can't wait any longer."

Alekh smiled to see Naina behaving in such a way like she had never behaved before. for a change she was showing her true feelings which was a relief.

"What are you smiling about?" She became quite curious with his sudden emotion.

"I'm smiling about how you've turned out to be recently. jabse tere dil kee ghantee bajee hai tu asal me ek larki ke jese lagne lagee hai"

She laughed and gave him a playful smack on his chest. he also joied in. "Jokes apart Naina, apun bohat khush hai tujhe aise dekhke aaj. now we just need to find Captain sir and end all this."

"You're right"

KMA, Ambala

BC was in his office talking with his official again. "Sir, they've reached exactly where we wanted them to."

"Yes. now they would be going around in circles and they wont even realise it. I told you that i will do everything in my power to divert them".

"You certainly have done it but Sir we still need to be careful. as soon as Captain Rajveer reaches Delhi we have to seize the moment and capture him".

"You're very impulsive Brigadier. you need to get a brain like me then only will you be able to succeed. aise kaamo ke liye well planned strategy or inteligence kee zaroorat hotee hai jo tumharare paas nahi hai. ab aage ka plan hum tumhe batate hai" The official continues with explaining the plan to BC and after the phone is cut, he calls Major Nair.

"Sir, wo log raaste me hai". Nair reported.

"I know. now listen to what you've to do. when they reach Mumbai you've got to make sure they dont leave. not until our plan has been fulfiled."

"YOu dont worry sir. Wo log aisee bhool bhulaiya me ghus jaenge that they wont be able to get out. we've done that with Captain Rajveer so what is new this time?" Nair sneered whist checking on the road with his binoculars. he saw Abhimanyu's van driving away in the direction they had planned for them.

"Good. now reach Delhi and then contact me again." BC cut the phone really pleased as if he had just won an award.

Nair felt proud of himself and was confident that now nothing would stop them from getting what they had wanted for so many years. "Ab dekh ta hu kese bachte ho tum sab" he gave an evil grin and continued monitoring the van through his binoculars.

Abhimnanyu was confident that getting a lead was a good sign of going in the right direction, but little did he know that all of them were on their way towards the wrong path.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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excellent really excellent awra..keep it up.. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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guys im out of station for a few days so wont be able to do the update, although i wud try and do it

im sorry that all of u wud have to wait.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Mystery guide


The first destination in Mumbai was the fish market where Rajveer was found. Again they had split up and this time it was Yudi and Pooja who did the investigation. They looked around the place and didn't appreciate the atmosphere at all. Yudi found it very irritating because he hated fish and couldnt tolerate the smell.

"tu apna sim card mere mobile me daal de or phir tera network phirse chalu hojaehga". Pooja teased him as they looked around.

"Very funny. Gosh how could these people do such a job?"

"Ab apna talk time aise waste mat kar warna minutes hee baakee nahi rahenge."

they walked on further until they reached the boat on which Rajveer was brought. They checked the paper again to see if the name was correct and it was. After reaching to it they stepped on it and looked around but no one was seen. "I can't see anyone around, is this the right boat?" A worried Yudi asked.

"It is the right one, maybe the owner has gone out somewhere". Pooja dropped the paper on the boat floor and walked on further to see if the owner was inside somewhere, but the boat was not that big that it would have another cabin.

Yudi stared at the newspaper that was thrown and saw something which was not noticed before. he bent down and picked it up. then he looked at it very carefully. "I think we should go back to the other guys."

"You're right"

They made their way back and Yudi hurried to Abhimanyu as if there was no time left. "Abhimnayu you've got to see this." He layed the paper on the car bonnet and then showed him what he had noticed. "Look at the story carefully and then look at these indiviudal words which are highlighted."

Abhimanyu looked closely and then told Yudi to bring a paper and pen. Then he wrote down all the highlighted words and then all of them gathered together and discussed it.

"I don't understand, what could these individual words mean?" Naina examined the list. She knew it was some kind of code but couldnt figure it out.

"Yeh ek code hai jo kisee ne baree chalakee se hame diya hai. When Ali took the paper i guess it was preplanned. they knew that we were going there so they passed a message. now we have to figure out whether this message is going to take us to the right direction or not." Abhimanyu took back the list and remebered his academy days where he, Navin and Rajveer always challenged their brains in cracking codes and in the end it was always Rajveer who got to crack it first.

Ali interuppted his thoughts. "Abhimanyu aap yeh kese kehsakte hai?"

"As I told you all before that one has to look beyond what the eye can see. once you all get in the habit of that then you will all be able to recognise things with the snap of your fingers. now concentrate and think what this code can be."

They all got busy. Naina immediately remembered Huda because he had cracked Rajveer's code in the past and again today he would have been able to do it. she studied the list again and tried to think. She thought, "Everytime i had a difficult time you were always there with me Rajveer sir. i again need you, please help me" She closed her eyes and saw Rajveer smiling at her and comforting her. then he spoke those special words which always gave her strength.

"Belive in yourself cadet because i belive in cadet Naina ah Singh".

She opened her eyes and scanned the list once more. The words seemed a bit clear now. she thought of figuring it out by herself first before rushing off to Abhimanyu but there was one person who she wanted to discuss with it first. "Alekh mujhe lagta hai ke mujhe kuch samjh me aaraha hai".

Both of them sat down on the grass and then Naina began explaining it to him. "Look here first of all the name of the boat is highlighted which shows that Rajveer was found on this boat. then 'bird is trapped' is highlighted which could refer to him being captured or being held somewhere."

"Ab do jage hosaktee hai, ek to saala police station ya to phir haspataal." Alekh joined in.

"It can be. then 'distance' is highlighted which refers to him being distanced from everyone he knows. so he is being kept somewhere away from everyone. Phir yaha pe hai 'Black fog' jiska matlab yeh hai ke kuch dhoondla hai ya to phir kuch nazar hee nahi aata."

"Either he is blind or his memory has some default."
alekh jumped in as soon as he got an idea.

"Yes but loosing his memory is more of a chance. so far we have come up with that he is being held somewhere away from everyone and he has no idea where he is. then there is the last word 'God'. Now this could mean many things. It could mean that God is the only one who can save him or he is being kept some Godly place."

"Ek minute. just think if Rajveer sir was found in an unconscious state with so many bullets then he must have been reported to the police who must have taken him to the hospital. Yehi to likha hai na os newspaper me?

"Ha per os hospital ka koi naaam nahi likha or nahi oska pata hai kuch"

Alekh began pacing and thinking about it. "Akhee Mumbai me sirf kuch hee hospitals hai and if i'm guessing right then this God could be reffering to a name. God yaanee bhagwaan or Bhagwaan yaani Shri Bala Hanuman or oske naam ka hospital hai yaha."

"So you think that could be where Rajveer sir is?"

"That could be our first step."

Both of them rushed to Abhimanyu and the others and told them their thoery. they all found it quite convincing and decided to check out the hospital. Just as they were approaching their car someone attacked them and broke the wind shield. all of them dropped down on the ground. Then Abhimanyu steped up to find a paper wrapped in a stone sitting on the front seat. he picked it up and was amazed.

"What happened?" Naina rushed to his side.

"mera shak sahee nikla. koi hampe nazar rakh raha hai or hame yeh raasta dekha raha hai." He gave her the note and she saw that it said:

"You all seem much clever then you look. now that you've figured out where you've got to go then hurry up. i'll be waiting."

All of them stood there wondering. now they had a mystery guide.

end of part. i hope u all enjoy this part which came after a long time

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