DESTINY + ATTRACTION (NEW RN FIC) - Page 5

Gosh Dipika.. ab kya bolu.. LOVED IT yaar.. infact I love the fact that Naina is such a simple, everyday girl in your FF.. you're right... that's probably how she was when Navin was around.. I just love the way you portray the characters.. you've really put life into them..

I could actually see the scene in front of me as if watching a drama unfold.. looking forward to your next update.. keep it up! 'coz we Looooooooooove it!! 😉

hey dipika 😛

very well written and Presented. 😊

you have really potraied the charecters very nicely in your FF 😛


it is awsome 👏 👏 👏
please continue soon and dont make us wait 😃

dipika just read the ff its really wonderful. i am loving it. Pls cont cont soon.

just amzing deepika cool, fun love romance amazing 😳 👏 👏

another gr8 one dipika.. thanks for updating regularly..

"navin...tujhe pata hai naa ki mujhe khaali baithne ki aadat nahi hai...
i saw horses in d farm tere room se..i'm goin for a ride...chal show me d way..."

"kya hai raj!! dikhta nahin hai main teri hone waali bhabhi ke saath kuch romantic baatein
kar raha hoon...( a sentence at which he gets a light slap on his back frm shaalu)
naina'll show u d way...plzzzzzzz sis" he adds dese words after he sees naina glaring at him

"well..i guess dat's fine...issi bahaane naina bhi ride kar legi..."

"naina aur horseriding!! teen saal pehle madam ride karte hue giri kya...dobaara try karne
ki himmat hi nahi hui...waise 2 weeks hospitalised to rahi thi..."

"no problem!! she can atleast enjoy a walk at d farm...wat say naina chalein??"

"hmmm"

....d sky was a beautiful shade of pink & purple..
& dey found demselves surrounded by d view of glistening peaks

"naina u sure u don't wanna ride??"

"haan...u go ahead..i'll b right here..." avoiding any eye-contact wid him

"alright.." he climbs on an absolutely stunning black stallion...wondering why naina seemed so subdued ..she wasn't her usual cheerful self...

naina saw him riding away....wat a great rider...instead of tryin to master d horse...he's completely gelled wid it...as if they were one!

she couldn't get enough of his sight...d way his muscles flexed...
d way his black sleeveless shirt stuck to him...d way his hair flew...& d way his strong arms held at d horse's reins...she felt a helpless surge of emotions rise in her

wen she saw him nearing...she had to force herself to look away...

raj came & stopped next to her & held out his hand..

"wat?? no way!! u must b out of ur mind!!"

"cum on naina...kuch nahi hoga..i'll b dere wid u ....dis is d only way to get ur confidence back..."

he tries again wen he sees her about to refuse..

"besides if u'r about to fall , to main hoon na...i'm not askin u to handle d horse on ur own..
dis horse is big enough for two....cum on naina ..age aake baitho ...trust me..."

after hearing d last 2 words ,she gave him her hand as if guided by an inner force...
to her it seemed as if he had simply penetrated her emotional walls...
all barriers she had constructed seemed to have broken down....despite reservations their passion
only seemed to deepen...

but d moment she got seated in front of raj..she became panicky..

"raj...i'm not sure about dis...i better get down..."

"just close ur eyes ..& relax"

she did as she was told...raj slid his arms tightly around her waist ..holding her protectively.

now dat certainly did sumthing to her ...!!!

slowly but steadily she felt d horse moving..she calmed down...but d moment it took its first gallop..

naina couldn't control her urge to hold onto sumthing...and without realising...she
turned and hugged raj tightly..clinging to him as if he was her life...
it brought a smile to his face...
how i wish i could do dis more frequently...

not willing to break d moment...he rode on for a few minutes....

"naina...naina...open ur eyes ...u'r fine!!..."

she opened her eyes slowly only to find herself staring in those large, beautiful ..black eyes..
although riding at a gud pace..naina found hrself being lost in those depths...in dat face..
looking intimately at each other...
her arms still around his neck....& his hands around her waist...he was pulling her closer to himself as if lost ..they could hear each others breathing..coming in gasps

and den as if shaken out of her reverie she suddenly pulled away..embarassed..
only to find herself thrusted into dose steady arms again due to d horse's sudden jerk..
their bodies gently brushing against each others..

"raj stop! please stop! i...i'm not feelin well...mujhe jaana hai..."

"naina..kya hua? "he asked innocently

"kuch nahin...just get me down!!"

dey stopped ..raj picked her up like a kid...& put her down..

"bye...i'll c u around" nd she ran away not wanting to face him ever again...

raj was shocked....isse suddenly kya ho gaya...y is she running away??

den realization dawned upon him....

"ahhh!! so naina...d attraction is mutual ..isn't it??"

he smiled...overjoyed at d fact dat she probably reciprocated his feelings...
dat he was not d only one having sleepless nights....he wasn't d only one in....LOVE!!!!

"AM I IN LOVE?? WAT RUBBISH!! one doesn't fall in love in a day...

dat's sumthing reserved for romantic novels , not real life!! yet how can i explain our attraction for each other...its lot more dan just casual friendship..god help me...!
.....................
a little furthur off two people seemed to notice the dilemma in the minds of this stunning couple

...they looked at each other and grinned vowing to do eveything to get dis couple together!!

kya jodi hai ,they thought...kis ne socha tha ki raj ke liye yeh trip itni special hogi!!
d two laughed & went away.....

hey good story. 😛

to be very true considering the current story line of LRL your FF comes a s a soothening Things. 😊

as we can have RN together 👏

great going 👏 👏

please continue with the same pace. 👏

thanks for updating regularly 👏