DESTINY + ATTRACTION (NEW RN FIC) - Page 7

hey great

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good story line very well presented 👏

keep it up

waiting anxiously for the next update

i'm dipika...thnx for replyin...
helloooooooo guys? where r d others?

its wonderful deepu plz continue soon 👏

"guys mujhe dhoondhna itna aasaan nahi hai...maine socha yeh shaadi thodi boring ho rahi hai.....to kyon na iss mein thode rang bharoon..."

"arrey shaabaash puttar...tu jahaan bhi hai bas chak -de-phatte"!

"thnx bhuaji...naach-gaana to hoga par usse pehle kyon na yeh jaan le ki hamaare pyaare dulha-dulhan ke mann mein kya hai...ek alag andaaz mein.."
her voice carried her laughter...

"to pooja..kya chal raha hai mann mein..main batati hun..she started singing

bindiya, mehendi ,kangana
choodi, jhumke, gehna
pyaase-pyaase naina,
soone pade tere bina..
nahi lagda tere bina...dil mera
haay..nahi lagda tere bina dil mera...
sajnaa aa bhi jaa(2).."

"arrey naina ki bacchi baahar aa tera connection naa kaat diya na to mera naam..'

before she could complete navin swiftly added.."mobile ki dukaan nahi"
which was followed by a roar of laughter

" naina...ali ke dil ka haal bhi to bayaan karo..
yeh janaab to apni lifetime service ke saamne ek shabd bhi nahi bolenge..."

ali blushed..
"chaliye phir...haan to dulhe miyaan urf jijaji...gaana aage badaate hain..

palkon pe khaab sajaana,
ankhiyon se neend churaana,
roothe piya ko haske manaana,
yeh haqueeqat hai, ya ke fasaana(2)
sajnaa aa bhi ja(2)...

gaate-gaate naina starts giggling..sochlo jiju..abhi bhi time hain...
kahin yeh recharge mehenga na pad jaaye.....

so guys ready for some dancing!!"

"yeah!!" all d youngsters at d wedding roared loudly

"maan gaya navin teri behen ko...mehfil jamaa di...kya cheez hai yaar" huda whispered to him..

"huda sahi keh raha hai navin..naina has dis energy & enthusiasm in her dat refreshes everyone around...being with her stirs d senses
.."raj added..
embarrased thinking ki kahin usne kuch zyaada to nahi bol diya...

"woh sab to theek hai par madam hai kahaan...lets call her out together" yudi pointed out..

"NAINA!! BAAHAR TO AA..." dey all shouted together...
in 3 days naina had become special for each one of dem...
..................

suddenly d lights went off...there was pitch darkness in d lawns...
"arrey kya ho raha hai?"

slowly d lights came on....focussing first on d beautiful valleys & mountains...d backdrop of d resort where d marriage was held..., den on ali & pooja...& finally ...

"WOW!!" d guys held their breadths...a whisper started in d lawns especially among all d good-lookin guys..."yeh kaun hai yaar?"

"pata nahin man..apne nainital mein itni sundar ladki aur hum dudes ko koi idea nahin?"

"wat a figure yaar!!"...
"figure chod..kya aankhen hai!!..main to doob raha hun"

raj hadn't looked at her yet...

it was at dat time dat naina's bhua announces...abhi aapne inki aawaaz suni thi aur ab aap inka dance dekhenge...come on naina puttar!!

it was at dat time dat raj turns around....& is lost in d sight dat beholds him..

dressed in a turquoise & pink halter neck lehenga...with matching chandeleir earings & bangles..
.naina steps out lookin absolutely gorgeous...her mascara & kaajal highlighting her beautiful eyes..& her shining black hair giving her a regal & elegant look....

naina danced on a medley of songs...be it songs like ITS ROCKING, OR SAR SE SARKA JAAYE DUPATTA & she pulled in aalekh , winking at him...the two danced on saiyaan re..& salaam-e-ishq....
later everyone joined dem...& all of dem had a blast...

"kya hua naina?"

"kuch nahi yaar bahut thak gayi hun...never danced so much in my life..."

"to apun hai na...pehle bolna tha..chal tu baith apun tere liye peene ko kuch laata hai.."
"hmmm"

people were coming to her & telling her dat she had been brilliant....she was tired of
thanking dem...
"thanks.." she offered without noticing who had come up...

"thanx kyon...? maine to kuch kiya hi nahi"

she blushed ...fully aware of dat voice..

"oh raj...tum ho...woh actually.."

"i understand...bahut der se dekh raha hun ...u were rocking"

she smiled .."no more thanx haan!"

"naina le juice pee..."aalekh handed it to her...

"oye raj!! idhar aa..."huda called him..."i'll c u around...aur naina kal jo hua...?"

"i'll never forget it .."she muttered

"wat?"raj was a little taken aback

"mera matlab hai..i'll never forget wat u did to me..i mean did for me..
i got my confidence back..for horse riding.."

"oh dat! no problem.." he flashed a smile at her & was gone..
..............
"bol huda?"
"arrey yaar tu paagal hai kya...kyon kabaab mein haddi ban raha hai?"

"kya matlab? main kuch samjha nahin?"
"dekh uddhar.. naina aur aalekh...kya jodi hai yaar! "

"wat?? r u crazy...dey're jst friends..!" raj was shocked...he felt sumthing dying away in him

"tu kya jaane pyaar kya hota hai...dekh dono kitna care karte hain ek doosre ke liye...
apna kaidi to us par latoo hai...yeh aur baat hai ki unhe bhi nahi pata ki yeh sab kab
aur kaise hua...dekh kaise ek doosre ke kaan mein secret baatein kar rahein hai ...
navin bhi kitna khush hoga na...uska dost aur uski behen..."

"bakwaas mat kar huda...faaltu bolta rehta hai...jaa raha hun main!"
he felt himself boiling in jealousy...

"arrey par tu kyon itna irritate ho raha hai..kya kharaabi hai jodi mein...?"

raj glared at him & walked off...depressed...thinking all along dat he didn't care about who naina attached herself with...but he knew dat since d moment dey had met naina had played havoc with his heart!...

shaayad huda theek keh raha tha..d way d two had danced earlier..arms around each other...
oooooooh...main tumse mila he kyon? u were right...i curse d day i met u...
.......................

shaadi ho chuki thi...ali & pooja looked really happy with each other...

"ahem..ahem...i know aap sab bahut tired hai...but well i have a surprise for all of u...aaj ke is shubh mauke par i wanna announce sumthing dat's very special for me...
meri life mein dere's a guy who i can't live without aur maine uske liya aaj ek surprise plan kiya hai jo ab main aapke saath share karne jaa rahi hun..."
she looked at aalekh and smiled

no naina...don't do dis to me..plz...main mar jaaoonga...I ...I LOVE..U...yes i do...immensely & passionately...
...main aalekh aur tumhe ek hota nahi dekh paaoonga..i want u to be mine ..
i want to hold u..
be close to u...
share ur happiness & sorrow...
don't go away from me...
i'm a soldier...even if i force myself to live...my life will b empty..
I WANT U ...BUT MY DESIRE ISN'T ONLY PHYSICAL NAINA...ALL I WANT IS TO BE A PART OF YOUR SPIRIT & SOUL.....
he was shocked at the intensity of his feelings..
maine kabhi kisi ke baare mein itna deeply feel nahi kiya..
& its surprising how my feelings took d shape of words ..

its often difficult for me to express my emotions...par aaj suddenly...
ruk jao naina..plz stop...
he was furthur surprised wen a tear trickled down his cheek..

omggggggggggg.. i luuuuuuuv raj.. kya emotions hain.. ur too good yaar.. plz aage likho.. who's the guy.. hope navin ke bare mein nahin hai.. we already know he's special to naina.. update soon yaar.. another long one hopefully.. thanks so much..

hey ddipika

great story

well presented.

u have bought the emotion very beautifully.

keep up

and update soon 👏

naina continued.."aalekh idhar aa"...
the two held a tiny box in each other's hand...

"raj tum kahaan jaa rahe ho...wait ..dis is imp." naina stopped him...

important for u naina..but destructive for me...go ahead ..exchange those rings. he thought as if resigning himself to fate...

the two opened dese boxes to display two beautiful diamond rings...
raj looked away...his heart pained...he blinked away his tears...

" it gives me immense pleasure to announce d engagement of my brother navin to my hone waali bhabhi shaalini..give dem a round of applause guys!!"

WAAAAAAAAAAT!! his head was reeling...navin aur shaalu...maine socha....shit yaar!
..i was going beserk for no reason..tujhse bada duffer nahin hai raj....THANK GOD!!..
ab to mujhe apni feelings par bhi sharam aa rahi hai...i'm a god-damn soldier & i acted like d biggest jerk in town....
he recalled his thoughts...
naina..I REALLY LOVE U!
AUR YEH BAAT MUJHE TUMHE JALDI BATAANI PADEGI...lest i go crazy..
coz as much as i love aalekh as a friend..utna hi i
hate to see him around u!!

his thoughts were cut by d roar of applause dat sounded at d resort....

"congrats guys...come up here..." naina winked at the two...
shaalu shyed away lookin down ..smiling..

"naina ki bacchi...! itna bada decision..i'll kill u ..but on second thought...nahi.. i won't strangle u..."
he went upto her & the two gave each other a long bear hug...
followed my a peck dat navin planted on naina's cheek

"thnx sis...love u.!"

"love u too bhaai...ab tum to itne lazy ho ki bhaabhi ko poochne tak buddhe ho jaate..
& i wanted ki shaalu officially meri bhabhi ban hi jaaye...wat say bhabhi...stop blushing & come up here..."

"navin jaa naa..lekar aa usse" aalekh pushes him..

"soch lo shaalu...mujh jaise paagal ka saath manzoor hain.." navin whispered in her ear while holding her hand..

"well....um....i don't hv an option do i?? " she blushed

everyone crowded around dem as dey exchanged their rings...