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Posted: 18 years ago
#51
wonderful ff just read it. its awesome. Will wait for the next part.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#52
wonderful ff just read it. its awesome. Will wait for the next part.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#53
kon hai ye do jo mere RANJHE nu dekhe ker has rahe hai
vaise awsoem part 👏
main ek scen imagine ker rahji thi aur mujhe usk liye koi mahnat nahin kerni padi and when i am reading your ff you ff mede me blush 😳 😳 first time 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#54
awwwwwwwwwweesome... that horse riding scene was perfect.. so nice yaar.. i know i'm saying this again.. but i'm so happy that u update regularly.. if possible.. can u make them a bit longer plzzzz.. i know i'm being greedy.. but wat to do.. cant help it.. the story's so good.. thanks.. continue soon dipika..
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Posted: 18 years ago
#55
where are u?

please dont break ur continuity in updation
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Posted: 18 years ago
#56
oye teri......maar daalaa...thodi to dayaa karti.....next part ke liye comments kaise karungi main 👏

hey awesome & rocking as usual....luved it....do continue soon 😛

Luv,

Akanksha 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#57
naina avoided raj for the entire day...
she busied herself in all kinds of work ....
she was embarassed as hell and didn't hv the courage to face him...

she went shopping for pooja's marriage gift which was to take place d followin day...
& selected a ravishing outfit for herself to wear ....

in d evening:

"aalekh ..yaar i need ur help...mujhe kahin jaana hai aur ek decision leni hai jo main akele nahi le paaoongi...tu mera saath chal..."

"arrey naina...kahaan jaana hai..aur tu satak rahi hai kya...aisi kaun si cheez hai jisme apun teri madad kar sakta hai...agar itni imp. decision leni hai to navin ke paas jaa..." he said sleepily

"tu bas chal main tujhe raaste mein batati hun...yahaan kisi ne sun liye to gadbad ho jaayegi"

"accha chal..."
............................................................ ........

the followin day dawned...yet again naina did d disappearing act....

"yaar agar yeh mujh se aise hi bhaagti rahi...uff!
sumtimes to i feel she gets on my nerves..
she's d first person in dis world jis mein mujhe nervous karne ki taakat hai....
she's been treatin me as if i was dirt!!no eye-contact, no hellos...not even a smile..
i don't even know if i guessed her feelings correctly..d way she's behavin abhi is as if maine koi gunaah kara ho....
kaash main kisi se yeh sab keh paata...i really want sumone to guide me...
kitni ajeeb baat hai raj..hamesha tu auron kon lead karta tha...aur aaj...NAINA....wat hv u doin to me ?,woh bhi do din mein!! " he was thinking hard...& d centre of all her thoughts..well u guessed it!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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" yeh to hadh ho gayi....mujhe to pata hi nahi tha ki pooja ki shaadi aapke hi batchmate se ho rahi hai...
i knew ali was in d army par ur batchmate?...dat sure came as a shock! infact bhaai pooja aur meri to is baat ko lekar ladaai ho rahi thi ki aap sab ladke waalon ki taraf se honge ya ladki...maine kahaan ki hum dono to uski taraf se honge...but she wanted everyone to b by her side..."

"arrey naina...mujhe tujhe bataane ka mauka hi nahi mila...ali ne shaadi ka faisla itni jaldi kar liya ki kya bataoon...waise yeh humaari pooja ki wajah se hi hain...ussi ne jaldi kari hogi...
warna ali aur kuch bole!!"

"naina..woh bura mat maana...hum sab ali ki taraf se hi aayenge..he's been one of our closest pals..tum aur navin pooja ki side se jao...aur haan shaalu..tu dekh le tujhe kya karna hai?"
yudi winked at her...

"main...."

"shaalu tum bhi baaki sabke saath aana...main aur bhaai kaafi hain..waise bhi mujhe bhaai se akele mein kuch baat karni hain.." naina had sumthing goin on in her mind & aalekh knew exactly wat....

"well kisiki side se bhi jao...ghar se to time se nikalna hai naa so plz ladies aap to shuru ho jaaye...5 ghante to aapko lagenge hi...watsay guys?"

"SHUT UP !!" naina, shaalu & ritu spoke aloud ...punching navin together

"sorry!! we leave at 7...naina jaldi kariyo yaar...nahi to main lekar nahi jaaoonga

"let me remind u bro...MUJHE DRIVE KARNA AATA HAI...AUR MAIN KHUD CHALI JAAOONGI...THNX 4 D TROUBLE...BYE!!"
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"its already 7;15 aur naina abhi tak nahi aayi...i could strangle her...
yeh to aise ready ho rahi hai jaise iski shaadi ho!!" shaalu go check up on her yaar...we're late....

shaalu came smiling down from d stairs

"navin tum jis par chilla rahe the woh ek ghante pehle ja chuki hai...
she left dis letter sayin she'd meet u at d marriage directly...usse pooja ko ready karna hai.."

"oh!!" navin blushed...embarassed at his outburst

"navin agar tera chillaana band ho gaya hai to chal..." raj said a little irritated
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Posted: 18 years ago
#59
everybody was thinkin...

yeh kal se raj ko hua kya hai ..na seede mu baat kar raha hai...
choti-choti baaton par irritate ho raha hai...jab aaya tha tab to bahut khush tha...

only two people knew his problem..& dey were enjoyin his sultry mood...dey had a perfect cure for it..par jaldi kya hai!!
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d marriage lawns had been beautifully decorated...navin ne sabko ali ke pass drop kiya aur naina ko dhoondne chala gaya..

ali's parents had agreed on a punjabi style weddin today...
nikaah was to b next day...pooja was super excited to b gettin married in 2 different styles...
.................
baaraat aa chuki thi... pooja & ali were seated together ..the couple looked beautiful...made for each other...the atmosphere was charging...bahut masti ho rahi thi...amidst all dis
raj's eyes were searching for dat face...kahaan ho tum naina??

he wanted to apologise to her..tell her dat usse embarass hone ki koi zaroorat nahi thi
...thank god naina tum us time wahaan se bhaag gayi ...i had lost control over my actions..
u were so close to me ki mera ..mind blank ho gaya tha...all i could feel was dis magnetic pull towards u....shit raj!...
he cursed himself...for all i know...i was..would have...k..kissed
u naina...!
(frustrated he moved his hand thru his hair, unaware ki uske is chote se action se wahaan khadi ladkiyon ka kya haal ho raha tha..dey blushed at his sight)

aur shaayad uske baad main apni nazron mein hi gir jaata..
i was about to use u without knowin ur intention...i know yeh sach nahi hai..par navin to yahi sochta na!
thnx naina...for stayin away from me...u don't realise ur irresistible!

he heard a lot of giggling & suddenly turned back to see many girls staring at him & smiling..
he passed on a nervous smile to dem...raj stop talkin to urself ...
u don't want 2 b called a fool...do you?

"yaar raj...?"

"kya hua navin ..u sound anxious?"

"yaar naina ko dhoon-dhoond kar thak gaya hun...i can't find her...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#60
pooja se milne ke baad woh gaayab hi ho gayi..."

"don't worry navin...yahin-kahin hogi...chal lets both go find her.."

............................

"ladies & gentlemen...can i have ur attention plz...." a voice came from somewhere...
"NAINA!!" both raj & navin looked at each other...
" par where is she...? " all dey heard was a voice...no one could see where dat voice came from......heads turned all over d place but naina nazar nahin aayi...

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