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Posted: 18 years ago
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"Ziddi, dheet...idiot...batameez......"

"abbey bas kar...kiski taarif kar raha hai??"

"apni behen ki....silly girl's not even givin me a chance 2 explain myself...banged d door on my face"

"chalo tujhe seeda karne waala koi to hai...shaalu ki to bas ki baat hai nahi...& after wat v did 2 her surely u weren't expecting a bouquet??..raj smiled..

"it is quite futile talkin 2 u isn't it?? saale tu mera dost hai yaan uska??
jab se aaya hai uski side le raha hai??

"bcoz she's right ...& u mr. perfect r for a change galat!!

"humph!! only shaalu understands me...jaa raha hoon uske paas..."

"jaa na, roka kisne hain?? saale aaj to woh bhi teri class legi..."


"watever!!!'..., accha sun..hum walk pe jaa rahe hain...aate hue late ho sakta hain...u take ur medicines & go to sleep...nd for heaven's sake aaj guitar mat play kariyo..
u really do need to rest...bye.."

"bye" but d moment raj sees navin step out he picks up his guitar...

"pata tha mujhe...music ke bina sir ko neend kahaan aayegi...sab ziddi hain!!! so jaa naa yaar raj...nahi to sar dukhega!!"

"theeeeeek hain...i'm not a two year old kid navin...i know how to handle myself..jaake apna gussa shaalu par nikaal...mujhe kyon chaat raha hain??!!! pata nahi kaise jhelti hain tujhe...OUT!!"

"YAAR KAMAAL HAIN, AAJ JISSE DEKHO MUJHE MERE HI GHAR SE GET OUT KAR RAHA HAI!!"
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Posted: 18 years ago
#22
wow..awsome yaar..plz continue as soon as possible 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#23
I must say its marvellous...luv ur work....Keep it up 👏

Agar kam lage to boliyo..I'll give lots more....U really deserve it


Luv,
Akanksha 😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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cont soonhey amazing, marvellous, fabulous, fantabulous, excellent, mind blowin,breath taking, i have no more wrds. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#25
THANX A LOT GUYS!!!PLZ KEEP DIS ENCOURAGEMENT COMING...I REALLY APPRECIATE IT 😊

AAKANKSHA...THNX YAAR...AUR CHAHIYE.. 😉 😉

D MORE D BETTER 😉 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey... jus read ur ff.. gr8 storyline.. i'm so glad navin is alive.. n not a bhoot.. i like the way u've
made huda alekh yudi shalini raj n navin batchmates.. its seems like a nice concept.. plz continue soon tho.. its awful to hv to wait really long for updates..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey.. its Awesome.. as of now you are the only one updating very regularly.. please apni ye aadat banye rakhna.. its really boring if you have to wait for a months to get the next update..

P.S.: Sorry dont know your name!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#28
guys i'm dipika....and i'd update as soon as possible...thnx 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#29
"jab isse pata hai ki main music ko lekar kitna passionate hun...
to pata nahi mujhe tokta kyun hain?...khair lagta hain chala gaya..."...

he picks up his guitar...closes his eyes nd begins humming sum of his favourite songs:

(THIS ONE'S BY ROBBIE WILLIAMS)

I JUST WANNA FEEL...RELOVE...
FEEL D HOME DAT I LIVE IN
COZ I GOT TOO MUCH LOVE..
RUNNIN THRU MY VEINS...GOIN TO WASTE
I DON'T WANNA DIE...
BUT I'M NOT KEEN ON LIVIN EITHER....

COME ON HOLD MY HAND
I WANNA CONTACT D LIVING
NOT SURE I UNDERSTAND
DIS ROAD I'VE BEEN TAKIN...........

Suddenly he opens his eyes..."yeh mujhe ho kya raha hai...y is it becoming so difficult for me to get dat face out of my mind...to forget d moment wen i first saw her...those eyes..

AB AISA US SE JUD GAYA HAI SILSILA
WOH HI WOH NAZAR AAYE MUJHKO HAR JAGAH
DEEWANAGI KI YEH INTEHA HAI
HAR CHEHRE MEIN CHEHRA TERA HAI...

SHIT!! raj tu paagal ho raha hai!!"

"well i think d best i can do is concentrate on my music..."
he closes his eyes & tries once again:

(d one from life in a metro)

BERANG SI HAI BADI ZINDAGI
KUCH RANG TO BHAROO..
MAIN APNI TANHAI KE WAASTE
AB KUCH TO KAROO...
JAB MILE THODI FURSAT
KHUD SE KAR LE MOHABBAT
HAI TUJHE BHI IJAZZAT
KARLE TU BHI MOHABBAT

USKO CHUPAAKAR MAIN SABSE KABHI
LE CHALOO KAHIN DOOR...
AANKHON KE PYAALON SE PITA RAHOON
USKE CHEHRE KA NOOR
IS ZAMAANE SE CHUPKAR
PURI KAR LU MAIN HASRAT...
HAI TUJHE BHI IJAZZAT
KARLE TU BHI MOHABBAT

DIL BINA, DIL MERA
MUJH SE HAI KEH RAHA
TU KHAAB SAJAA
TU JEELE ZARRA....

He stops singing mid way wen he realises dat sumone was tryin very hard to suppress a laugh.

he opens his eyes to find navin standing at d doorway ...

"tu!! itni jaldi!...aur tu has kyon raha hai??" raj is a little embarassed at being caught
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Posted: 18 years ago
#30
" :)) lagta hai chot ka asar seeda tere bheje par hua hai...
tu aur romantic songs!!USKO CHUPAAKAR MAIN SABSE KABHI...LE CHALOO KAHIN DOOR...AANKHON KE PYAALON SE PITA RAHOON...USKE CHEHRE KA NOOR...My God raj!! kisse chupaana chahta hai?? aur kiski aankhon mein doob raha hai?? " navin ne hanste- hanste poocha

"SHUT-UP NAVIN!! It's just a song!! woh to aaj maine...a...a...woh .
haan aaj maine ye gaana radio par suna to mujhe accha laga...bas dat's all...tu bhi naa!! meri chod tu yahaan kya karne aaya hain??"

"KARLE-KARLE TOPIC CHANGE...nahin bataana hai to mat bata...par jhoot to mat bol...mere yaar tu sach bol raha hain to itna blush kyon kar raha hai? "

"NAVIN ...MAAR KHAYEGA!! SAALE ITNA PEETOONGA KI SHAALU BHI NAHI PEHCHAAN PAYEGI"

"Accha-accha sorry!! woh i just came to check on u...poori walk mein topic of discussion to aap janaab hi the...teri bhabhi ko teri kuch zyaada hi fikar ho rahi thi...
kahaan tha maine usse ki tu apna tuntuna baja raha hoga...par nahi ..sunta kaun hai meri...
ARREY NAVIN KAISE DOST HO TUM ...KYA PATA RAJ KO KISI CHEEZ KI ZAROORAT HO!!"
Navin mimicks shaalu

"jaa raha hun ...u'll b asleep by d time we cum back...i think ...to agar kuch chahiye ho to naina ko utha lena...she's in d next room...woh curtain ke peeche jo door hai dat opens into her room to wahi knock kar liyo...saves time & energy
aur haan mile usse to meri taraf se..."

"haan-haan sorry bol doonga..."

"hello!! sorry nahi keh raha..mile to meri taraf se 2 thapad maarna...khaana nahi khaaya usne...u know maine suna to tha dat elephants never forget par aaj dekh liya...ab chaar din tak mu phulaakar baithegi...aur tab tak mujhe shaalu ki gaaliyaan bhi suni padegi!!..dese women...its impossible 2 understand dem...bye!!"
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