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Posted: 18 years ago
#31
"IMPOSSIBLE TO UNDERSTAND...Well filhaal to yeh words meri feelings bayaan kar rahe hain...main nahi jaanta mujhe kya ho raha hai..
there's sumthing about u naina, dat's different...i don't know wat it is ...but its dere..its goin to b very difficult 4 me to restrain myself frm u..& as of now my emotions r takin a
roller coaster ride...inhe to sirf ek hi insaan control kar sakta hai...u naina...u!!"

takin a deep breath he keeps his guitar at his side...closes his eyes and falls in a deep sleep...his dreams being invaded by dat face which has tumbled his life in d timespan of dose few hrs
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in d meantime...naina was tryin very hard to sleep..par usse neend nahi aa rahi thi...too much had happened in dose last few hrs...

"Wat a day!!! ek ke baad ek jhatke lag rahe hain!!...bhaai bhi naa...unse accha to raj hi hai"

raj she thought...well bhaai ka yeh friend to kuch zyaada hi attractive hain...he's handsome...seems intelligent...gentle...sexy...and immediately stopped ,ashamed at d direction her thoughts had taken....
"naina...he's ur brother's best friend...nd apart frm dat tu uske baare mein kuch nahi jaanti,
he's out of bounds...itni charming personality hai...10-12 girlfriends to hongi..."

STOP!! she shouted at herself...i must stop my thoughts right here b4 its too late...aur iska ek hi tarika hai...henceforth i'll hv to ignore him...stay away frm him....

chalo accha hai pooja ki shaadi aa rahi hai...i'll keep myself busy & get over dis infatuation

she kept a pillow on her face..as if dat could crush her thoughts...nd began to doze off...
doubting her determination 4 d first time in her life!!
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& thus ended a day dat was to change their lives for years to come...

a day dat changed d way many looked at life...

a day dat altered d definition of relationships...strengthening dem...so dat dey would last forever....

a day dat 2 unknown strangers sealed wid love although not aware of it demselves....
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Posted: 18 years ago
#32
my god...............awesome update
👏

so I kept my promise...is baar jyaadaa diye hain...lub u ...............do cont. soon 😛

Luv,

Akanksha 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
wow wat lines to end with.. so romantic.. gr8 update dipika.. n i really appreciate that u update regularly... plz continue doin this.. its terrible to hv to wait for updates for ages.. story hi bhool jati hai.. hehe.. nice update.. continue soon.. thanks..
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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
hey dipika

great going

keep it up

Pl continue
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35
"Arrey kaun hai?? stop banging d door!! aa rahi hun..." yawning naina approaches her door...
hello????? kaun hai??...strange!!"

"naina khol!! main navin...d other door sleepyhead!!"..

"oh!!ab is waqt inhe kya hua?? bhaai subah baat karte hain...gudnight..."

"NAINA!! dumb woman u hv raj's pain killers...he's in pain...jaldi khol..."

"raj's in pain!! give me a sec laa rahi hun!! "
she fumbles thru her closet & finally finds it....

"bhaai main aa jaaoon room mein??"

"ya cum on quick!!"

as she enters d room...."kam se kam light to jalaao ,its so dark i can't see a thing..."

"helloooo? were's d damn light??" she tries to find d switch &
after groping in d dark finally light on karti hai

"SURPRISE!!!"
" NAINA ALL OF US R VERYYYYYY SORRYYYY...PLZ FORGIVE US!!...."

"Aap sab ek saath itni raat ko?? arrey yaar accha bhala so rahi thi...aapne to mujhe dara hi diya
..waise yeh koi nayi baat kahaan rahi...anyway aap sab kyon apologise kar rahein hain??
u know i just blame 1 person 4 all dis ...thnx 4 d trouble guys...gudnight!!"

"hey raj...guitar de..." navin whispers to him...

"naina....my dear sis,
(& he breaks into a song...changing d words to suit him)

maana mujh se ho gayi...
ek chotti si khatta...
has do na tum zarra ..
yun na mujhko do sazaa..
tum jo has pade to..
dil yeh dil muskuraaye
aage kya hum gaaye
koi humme toh bataaye...."
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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
"bhaai bas!!" she says while simultaneously giggling...
"tujhse bada nautanki maine nahi dekha!! jaa maaf kiya...tu bhi kya yaad rakhega...

aur haan bhaai...plz...don't try to attempt singing in d future ...not even in ur dreams...!!"

everybody joins in as dey enjoy a hearty laugh...

"waise wat's d time?? nd raj were u seriously in pain??"

"nahi naina..dis was navin's idea..dat was d only way 2 call u in..wasn't it??"

as their eyes meet..although only for a fraction of a second...naina finds her resolve to stay away frm him already weakening!!

and as 4 raj ...his thoughts took a weird turn d moment d lights were switched on ...
seeing naina in her night attire was quite a distraction!!
hmmmmmmmm she looked .....delicious !!

"aur naina subah ho chuki hai... 4:30... hum sabko to is waqt uthne ki aadat hai hi...par tu ...jaa so jaa...apun tujhe utha dega..." aalekh tells her wen he sees her tryin to avoid a yawn

"hmmmmmm..."

"naina ..kaha kho gayi??"navin enquires

"nahi...kuch nahi...koi faayda nahi ,tere gaane se meri neend to waise hi ud gayi hain...
i was thinkin of takin a walk to freshen up..."

here i am lying to my own brother!! how shud i tell u ki mujhe neend naa aane ki wajah to kuch aur hi hai!!

"breakfast at 7??"

"yaa we'll all cum down aaj ...except raj probably..arrey yeh to phir so gaya!!" ritu points out to everyone

"yeh to hona hi tha..iski pain killer mein sedatives bhi the..
i wonder how u guys managed to wake him up? naina tells dem
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
it was 7:30 and dey were all seated at d breakfast table...except raj & navin..
navin had gone to check on him...

"lagta hai...raj is still asleep...navin ko kaafi der lag gayi..."shaalu wonders

" raj utha hua hai guys ,but i think its better ki usse wahi serve kar de...naina jaa.."
navin tells her while comin down d stairs...

"m...main jaaoon...woh mujhe...a...kitchen mein kuch kaam hai...ritu could u plz??

"yaa naina..sure y not?...." and leaves to go upstairs

chalo bach gayi...i won't see him abhi...aur naa hi koi tension hogi!!

but it seemed god had other plans...
d moment she's about to eat she sees raj comin down wid ritu...

oh noooooooo!!! kahaan jaaoon??

"well guys sorry to disappoint u....tumhe mujhe jhelna padega...."

"yaar raj y did u cum neeche?? u shud b resting" yudi tells him

"bechaara , waise hi itna restless hai...ek kamre mein pada-pada pak raha hoga?? kyon hero??"

"waah yaar huda...tune to meri thoughts pad lee, it seems...bahut bore ho gaya tha yaar...."

his eyes were searching for her...kahaan gayi...abhi to yahin thi...lagta hai kitchen mein hain..jiske liye neeche aaya wohi gaayab ho gayi!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#38
raj & navin were sittin outside in d garden....while d others decided to play football...
due to their injury they could'nt join dere friends...

"kya hua..navin..u hv such a distressed look on ur face...haath mein dard hai kya..
waise honi bhi chahiye... toote hue haath ke saath guitar bajaayga to aur kya hoga..."

"nahin yaar..baat woh nahin hai...main naina ke baare mein soch raha tha..yaar woh itni impulsive hai ..
she doesn't seem to understand dat i'm in d army...
aur jo kal maine mazaak kiya..woh sach bhi to ho sakta tha raj...
i could hv really died..
.mujhe samajh nahi aa raha ki main kya karoon??
usse kaise aur kya samjhaaoon? mere baad uska kya hoga...i hv to secure her future yaar...
jaanta hoon alekh & shaalu will always b wid her...par??"

"par kuch nahi navin...itna mat soch...pata hai yaar problem kya hai?? naina tujhse bahut pyaar karti hai...aur apne parents ko khone ke baad perhaps u'r d only loved one she has..."

"r u suggesting ki i find her a guy to go around wid??" navin is a little shocked

"paagal hai kya!! dat's a weird idea nd ...scary...naina bahut attractive hai navin....
& d world's full of idiots..u can't link her up wid anyone!!...wat i'm suggesting is ki hum sab milkar usse thoda exposure provide karein...ghar se college aur phir ghar...dat's not life....
show her d world yaar...make her independent....so dat agar kal kuch hota bhi hai toh she doesn't fall down ...but stands up nd emerges a winner.."

"tu theek keh raha hai yaar...haan thoda zyada philosophical zaroor hai!!...par u'r right"
he smiles up at him "thnx raj..."

"thnx 4 wat bhaai?" naina asks...d 2 were so engrossed ki unhe pata hi nahi chala wen naina had cum upto dem...

"woh main coffee laayi thi...sorry if i disturbed u..."

"arrey nahi naina...we were jst talkin abt d weather here" raj situation sambhaalta hai
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Posted: 18 years ago
#39
god knows aaj maine jo navin ko bola hai...woh mujhe kis raah par chodega...
but i know dat dis is d best for naina...pata nahi kaise ...but ek din mein hi ,
I realised dat i care for dis woman...very deeply.....

"kahaan kho gaya raj...oh..wahi naa jisse kal tum zamaane se chupaane ki baat kar rahe the..
pata hai naina...kal janaab ne first time.."

"shut up navin!!...aage kuch mat boliyo!!" he said in a threatening voice...while blushing

"kyon nahin!!...kal to bade romantic gaane gaaye jaa rahe the woh bhi aadhi raat ko...
yaar raj tu mujhe to bata sakta hai na ki woh ladki kaun hai...
main to pehle hi booked hun to tujhe competition dene waala bhi koi nahin...
haan huda se chupaakar rakhna padega!!"

"NAVIN!!! ...RUK KAHAAN BHAAG RAHA HAI...AA KAR COMPETE!!
I SWEAR I WON'T LEAVE U!"
and d two ran away....chasing & screaming at each other ..leaving naina completely disturbed & disheartened...

"so i was right!! he does have sumone special in his life....mujhe kya?? mujhe isse koi farak nahi padta....
kisse jhoot bol rahi hai naina ,tujhe farak padta hai ...par kyon??
y can't i get him out of my mind!!?"

she walked away unaware of a pair of eyes following her....
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Posted: 18 years ago
#40
hey guys.....i bet dis is one of d longest updates in history...
likhte hue mujhe to kuch aisa hi laga...i do expect a lot of replies after dis update...nything guys...gud or bad....
it may b hard imagining a naive & dependant naina...but dat's how she can probably b imagined bfore navin died in d serial!!

guys thodi lambi replies dena plzzz...mujhe pata to chale wat u guys want??
& ya i promise a ROMANTIC RN SCENE in my next update....

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