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Posted: 18 years ago
#11
May 3(1 day ago) raj ghabra jaata hai..nd goes nd kicks navin's body...

"saale uth...get up ..u idiot...NAVIN STOP ACTING!!!...bahut ho gaya naatak..."!!!!!

aalekh too begins to yell at him...and pulls him up..."navin yeh tune theek nahi kiya
...huda aur tera yeh sada hua plan..apun sab ne tujhe kitna samjhaaya ke huda ki baaton mein mat aa...isse to sabko pareshaan karne mein waise hi bahut mazaa aata hai.."

"abey aalekh kyon bhadak raha hai...tum sab ne naina ki itni taarif ki...
mujhe laga zara is janaani ko test kar lun..."

navin started laughin bt grew serious wen he saw raj's angry face,

"NAVIN ...AGAR TU MUJHSE ISI TIME PITNA NAHI CHAHTA HAI...DEN GO STOP HER JISSE PEHLE WOH KUCH GALAT KARE..
NAVIN WOH BAHUT GUSSE SE GAYI HAI..
& I SWEAR I WON'T SPARE U AGAR USSE KUCH HUA...KHUD TO BEWAKOOFON JAISI HARKAT KARI HI HAI
PAR MUJHE BHI NAHI BAKSHAA AUR MAIN PAAGAL...GOD KNOWS TERI BAATON MEIN KAISE AA GAYA...GO B4 I KICK U!!!!!"

NAVIN TOO GREW SERIOUS...as if realising his mistake..
.he goes upto naina's door ...
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till now naina who had locked herself...unaware of all d conversation outside...
is becoming nervous, her thoughts take a wrong direction...

"theek hai bhai...it seems u want me to b close 2 u...aapke bina main kya karoongi
...i'm coming bhai...main aa rahi hun aapke paas "

she rushes towards d drawer & after a frantic search finds navin's fully loaded spare gun
...a smile is brought to her lips in remembrance of her brother as she keeps d gun on her temple
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"NAINA...NAINA...khol yaar main navin...naina it was jst a prank yaar...
mazaak tha....open up sis...fine yaar i'm veryyyyyyyyyyy sorry...chal ab come out...
itna bhav mat kha..."

but he's too late.....
.AS HE APPROACHES D DOOR TO BANG IT .......
A GUN SHOT HIS HEARD!!!!!!!!!!

ALL OF DEM SCREAM TOGETHER....
NAINAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#12
PART 3:

NAINAAAAAAAAAA!!!

"RA..RAJ..HUDA..AALEKH...GUYS JALDI ,HELP ME BREAK D DOOR!!!"

"Navin don't panic...woh bhi mazaak hi kar rahi hogi..."
raj tried to console navin...although not believin his own words...
he had seen a fire in those beautiful eyes wen she walked away

after a mighty push d door gave way...

"NAINAAAAA!! Thank God!!!"

dere in front of everyone stood a trembling naina with tear
strained eyes and a gun in her hand pointing towards d floor....
A second's difference had separated her frm her death...she had been abt to press d trigger par
navin ki voice sunte hi she had gone pale.....
her knees gave way beneath her as she fell on d floor....

shaalini nd aalekh rushed 2 her side 2 help her but she stopped dem wid an angry glare in her eyes....

naina stands up...approaches navin...nd..WHACK!!..
slaps him hard on his face...

a fresh tear rolls down her cheek ...and at d same time she pulls him in an embrace nd starts sobbing....

Suddenly as if reminded of her anger she shouts at navin wid renewed determination

"GET OUT....GET OUT OF MY SIGHT THIS INSTANT!!!...DON'T SHOW ME UR FACE AGAIN...
I HOPE I'VE MADE MYSELF CLEAR...I NEED SOME TIME ALONE...PLEASE LEAVE!!!!!!!"

"Naina...meri baat sun...i'm really sorry....." navin naina ko samjhaane ki koshish karta hai...
while abusing himself mentally for d hardship he imposed on her..

"SORRY!!!" she shouted back..."jis din tujhe is word ka meaning samajh aayega na bhaai us din i'll forgive u....
it's strange hum itne saalon se ek saath hai but u still don't
seem to understand ur importance in my heart & in my life...Y DO U ALWAYS TAKE ME 4 GRANTED???
I DON'T THINK U REALISE I WAS ABOUT 2 SHOOT MYSELF 4 U??? SAARI MASTI EK TARAF PAR TUMNE JO AAJ KIYA HAI NA BHAAI........
PLEASE LEAVE...I NEED TO STRAIGHTEN SUMTHINGS IN MY MIND...
GO!!!"
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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
GUN NAINA....GIVE IT TO ME..."

"ab kyon itni tension ho rahi hai...i won't kill myself now...
TO HELL WID UR GUN & TO HELL WID U!!!" she throws d gun at his feet


"hadh ho gayi pehli baar i picked up dat dirty...sick thing in my hand" naina thought...
usse guns se ek repulsion sa ho gaya tha...angrier dan before...

"WAT LANGUAGE DO U UNDERSTAND....LEAVE BFORE I SLAM D DOOR IN UR FACE...JAO!!!"

except raj and navin everyone leaves d room...navin sighs
and is abt to leave wen his eyes land on raj...

"r..raj...raj...AALEKH ..SHAALU...GUYS JALDI AAO!!..dekho raj ko kya hua....??"

raj has fainted nd is lying on d floor...aalekh nd navin pick him up & put him on d bed

"naina dekh tera gussa to mujh se hai naa...plz do me a favour sis.... yaar marne ka to main mazaak kar raha tha par accident sach mein hua hai....i was about to fall from d cliff par raj
saved me & in d process injured himself on d head...chot bahut gehri lag rahi hai naina....
plz usse first aid de de yaar...and as u can probably see mere haath par bhi lagi hai...
& its paining quite a lot ...shaalu mujhe dekh legi...par tu plz raj ko dekh le...
immediately!!!"

he adds this word as he sees raj writhing in pain...

"MUJHE ORDER MAT DE BHAAI...i'll tend to him...shaalu ko bolna ek 1st aid box baahar hall ke first drawer mein hain...but dis doesn't mean dat i forgive u...
OUT before i change my mind!!"
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"p..paani..water plz naina..."

naina rushes to his side..."well it seems god ne tumhe kaafi jaldi punish kar diya 4 wat u did 2 me..." as she makes him drink some warm water

"u'll hv 2 sit if u want ur khaali head to b bandaged.." she makes light of d situation wen she realises ki chot itni gehri nahi hai

while flashing a cute smile raj gets up nd allows himself 2 b bandaged

"aahhh naina ...aaraam se , its hurting ..itna tight mat baandho!!"
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Posted: 18 years ago
#14
12:28 am(6 hours ago) "MY GOD...dese army men...absolutely weak huh...mere saath jo aapne aaj kiya...mera bas chale to itni zor se aapka gala dabaaoongi ki apni mundi hilaane ke kaabil nahi bachenge!!"

raj bursts into laughter "navin was right about u...u r a very interesting person naina...
aur plz no formality haan...all my friends address me as raj & so will u..."

"hmmmmmm quite a flurt huh...par apne yeh charms kisi aur ke liye bachaake rakho...
main itni aasaani se kisi ko forgive nahi karti...& WE R AT WAR!!"

DERE WAS SUMTHING ABT HER DAT INTIMIDATED RAJ COMPLETELY...SHE WAS DIFFERENT...& STUNNING!!

"HELLOOOOOOO?? kahaan kho gaye...well if u think u can walk den i'll show u to ur room"

"haan...chalo..I'm absolutely fine."

as raj gets up everything blacks out...bt bfore he could fall...naina lends him sum support....

"thnx" he looks at her wid a weak smile..

" ABSOLUTELY FINE...HUH!!" she smiles while mimicking him
"small steps at a time...ok"

"tum to mba kar rahi ho na...den doctor ki tarah baat kyon ??"

"small steps isliye keh rahi hun coz u r HEAVY!! aapko...
i mean tumhe ..sambhalna thoda mushkil hai...u see i'm quite delicate...
waise u'r forgettin i cum frm an army background isiliye basic first aid ke baare me sab pata hai....nd if dat appeases ur curiosity chalein bfore we both fall down"

raj just couldn't control his laughter....
every thing abt naina added a new dimension 2 her personality...KYA LADKI HAI!! he thought
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Posted: 18 years ago
#15
Oooohh la-la.. I LOVE IT!!! But one thing.. Plzzzzzzzzzz dont kill Navin in this one..
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Posted: 18 years ago
#16
Yay! I'm so glad that Navin is still alive, and it's a wonderful beginning between our lead couple, I can't wait for the next part!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#17
As the two of dem step outside all eyes turn towards dem..naina looks up to see navin's
arm bandaged....apne bhaai ko is haal mein dekh kar she's saddened nd looks up at shaalu who nods
her head telling her dat navin is fine...

"i'll show u to ur rooms guys"...

"aalekh tu apne room mein jaa...shaalu,ritu..u guys can take d 3rd room upar...huda ,yudi...
i hope i'm allowed to call u dat ...d room next to aalekh's on d ground floor...
mr. navin singh ahluwalia...u'll share ur room wid raj...& i'll b in d room next to urs
upstairs.....plz feel comfortable...i'll serve ur dinner in ur rooms today..
aap sab kaafi tired lag rahe hain"

"nd guys...plz stop staring at me like dat...main theek hun...aur aap..i mean raj tum..
stop smiling at me nahi to neeche gira doongi...upar chalte hain..."she says dese
words wen she sees raj trying hard to control his smile

she places him comfortably on his bed..nd is abt to leave..

"hey naina...thnx 4 all d trouble.."

"arrey trouble to tum logon ki ab shuru hui hai...
2 din mein main sab ke naak mein itna dam kar doongi ki u guys will curse d day u
decided to cum here...jst wait & watch!!" she winked at him

"nd bhai ko main upar bhej rahi hun...don't bother to get out of d bed...
jst shout if u need anything...ok??" she leaves after seeing him nod...

"hmmm kitni ajeeb baat hai...i shud hv been angry at raj too, par main
isse gussa reh hi nahi paai...guess its bcoz he got hurt...or maybe bcoz....??"
she left her thoughts hanging in mid-air
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Posted: 18 years ago
#18
"yaar kaidi tere liye special room kyon diya hai us janaani ne??"

"oye huda...pehli baat uska naam naina hai aur doosri yeh ki apun dono ki bahut pehle se jamti hai ...woh naina apun ko sabse acche se samajhti hai....pata hai ,jabse usse pata chala
ki apun jail mein tha woh apun ko ghar ka sabse bada aur mast kamra deti hai...
kehti hai ki yahaan se khuli waadiyaan dekhkar mujhe accha lagega..."

"how thougtfull yaar...kaash humaare baare mein bhi koi itna sochta" sighed yudi...

"yaar kuch baat to hai us janaa..i mean naina mein" he changes his words mid way after seeing aalekh's fist rolling up...

"hmm to think she could shoot herself...man ..dat requires guts!" yudi speaks aloud

"guts nahi saale navin ke liye uska pyar hai....naina ko to guns se nafrat hai specially jab se uske parents ek terrorist shoot out mein maare gaye...
isiliye to navin ne army join ki thi...."alekh tells dem

"chalo ab apne kamre mein jao ...apun ko apne kamre ki hawaa ka mazaa lena hai jo tum macchar rok rahe ho...satak lo yahaan se"

"jaate hai kaidi...kamra kya mila doston ko bhool gaya...kya din aa gaye hai..!!"
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Posted: 18 years ago
#19
"shaalu tu naina ko kabse jaanti hai??"

"bahut time se ritu ...humaare 1st year se.. jab se navin aur main ek doosre ko jaante hain.."

"but den how is it ki hum sab naina se pehle nahi mile...?"

"yaar holidays mein main aur aalekh yahaan aksar aate the..
but all u guys went back to ur families...ab mere parents to U.S. mein hain...
its not feasible to go wahaan frequently...

but its quite strange...naina to kma bhi aayi hai ek- do baar ??
par haan andar nahi aati thi...she just can't tolerate d sight of ammunition it seems,
so baahar se hi navin ko milkar chali jaati thi"

"hmmm waise she does come across as a lovely person...no wonder...navin usse academy se door rakhta tha...she would have easily attracted most of d cadets wahaan par..."
she smiled although dat smile didn't reach her eyes ...it seemed dere was a lot unsaid behind dem....

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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
naina had prepared a delicious meal...& after a hearty dinner in their rooms...
d guys r too tired to talk n decide to have a long sleep...with a promise in their hearts to
apologise to their gracious & loving hostess in d morning....

a tired naina is about 2 doze off wen dere is a knock on d door...

"hang on ...i'm coming!!"

"tum?? ab kya hai...ek baar pareshaan karke chain nahi aaya kya??"

"naina...i'm sorry yaar...give me 2 minutes to talk 2 u sis...."

"subah baat karte hain...abhi i'm sleepy & exhausted....bye"...nd she bangs d door on his face
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