Rajveer Naina - Sirf Tere Liye - LRL FF Pg 53

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EPILOGUE

The corpse of a young man was lying on the floor. A middle aged couple was sitting next to it and crying. A young woman was standing at distance, holding herself together with great effort
Mrs. Ahluwalia: When Naveen joined the army, I had prepared myself for the possibility that our son might die before us. But I had never imagined that day would look like this. Instead of getting a 21 gun salute he has been labelled a traitor. Not a single person has shown up from the army. Not even his friends. Not even Rajveer.

Just then there was a knock on the door. Naina opened the door and her stiff face showed some faint signs of relief. She moved aside and Rajveer walked inside. He made his way to Mr. and Mrs Ahluwalia and supported them as they started crying loudly.

Mr. Ahluwalia: You came?

Raj: How could I have not come?

Mrs. Ahluwalia: You know thaT Naveen wasn't a traitor. You know that, don't you?

Raj: Of course aunty! Aunty I need to tell you something.

Mrs Ahluwalia: Not now Raj, We have to make our way to the cremation ground.

Mr Ahluwalia noticed the hesitation on Raj's face.

Mr. Ahluwalia: Sudha it's probably not a good idea to come with his. He is still a member of the army and..

Raj: Of course not uncle. That's not the point... I'll come.

Naina stared at Raj. She saw something else in his face - guilt or shame? But why?

AT THE CREMATION GROUND
Naina stared at the fire. Her brother was in flames. Her brother who had always been so full of life, was gone forever. She was having a hard time holding herself together. She had been strong for her parents, her Naveen bhaiya for the last 6 months. But she couldn't hold it any more.

She felt a hand on her shoulder. She turned to see Raj standing next to her, his hands forming a strong embrace around her.

Raj: You can cry Naina.

The next moment she had burried herself in Raj's arms and was crying all her unshed tears. His arms held her together.

AT THE AHLUWALIA HOUSE
Mrs Ahluwalia had to be given a sedative once she got back. She woke up after 5 hours.
Mrs. Ahluwalia: Raj I'll remember this gesture forever. You are a God send for us. You have shown what true friendship stands for.

Raj: aunty you need to stop. I need to tell you something.

Raj walked away and turned his face away from the Ahluwalias

Raj: As you know I was on a mission when Naveen was arrested and kept in Delhi Jail. When I returned I heard that he had run away..

Mrs. Ahluwalia: Beta he had no choice. He was being tortured and he had no way of proving his innocence from the jail..

Raj: Aunty I found out about that. But at the time I didn't know. I was determined to help Naveen. I went to Lalal Gehlot and asked for his advice. He said that Naveen had to get back to prison and follow due process if he wanted to save his career and his life.

A few weeks later Naveen was arrested and taking to Jammu jail.

Mr. Ahluwalia: And he died a after a month. Suicide they called it. But we know it wasn't that.

Raj: Aunty, uncle there is something you don't know.

Mrs. Ahluwalia: What Raj? RAJ SAY SOMETHING.

After a long pause Raj turned around. His eyes were bloodshot. His voice quivered.

Raj: Aunty, Uncle, Naina. I wanted to help Naveen and I was convinced that he couldn't be saved if he remained a fugitive. I had faith in the army system.

I WAS THE ONE WHO ARRESTED HIM AND TOOK HIM TO JAMMU JAIL.

Mrs. Ahluwalia: You what?!

Raj: I WAS THE ONE WHO ARRESTED HIM AND TOOK HIM TO JAMMU JAIL.
I am so sorry, I thought I was helping..

Before he could finish Mrs Ahluwalia slapped him across his face and started hitting him mercilessly.

Mrs. Ahluwalia: ll these years we treating you like a son. and you are responsible for our son's death! How could you?

Mr. Ahluwalia: Stop Sudha! We have no rights to question Raj. No rights at all. He is one of THEM. In fact he's worse than all of them. He had the audacity to come to our son's cremation after having his blood on his hands.

GET OUT RAJ AND NEVER SHOW US YOUR FACE AGAIN.

Raj stumbled outside, his eyes pleading for forgiveness. Naina followed him. He hoped Naina would listen to him.

Raj: Naina, I...

Naina: Get out Captain Shekhawat. Today along with Naveen bhaiya, you are dead for us too. One more thing. This is a curse on behalf of a grieving family. You will never find love in your life. You will crave for love and family. But you'll always remain the lonely orphan you were before Naveen Bhaiya came into your life.

And she banged the door,

6 MONTHS LATER
Rajveer was sitting and working in his office at the Delhi HQ. He was getting ready to go to KMA for his next mission. Just then there was a loud knock.

Raj; Come in!

Raj was shocked to see Naina walk inside. She looked different. Her face had lost its innocence and had becoming hardened

Raj: Naina! You? Come in please.. How are aunty uncle?

Naina: I don't have time for this Captain Shekhawat. I need a favor from you.

I NEED YOU TO MAKE ME YOUR WIFE.

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Part 5 - Pg 9
Part 25
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey,
Great Start
So the entire Ahluwalia family holds Raj Guilty
Poor Raj and now Naina wants Raj to marry her...why?
I am extremely intrigued
Cont soon
Misha
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Great start
Liked it
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wow new rn fic ...


1 part woh bhi itne twist n turn ke saath...omg
naina ne raj ko chata mara ...I just hate her for this ...

oye yeh kya hua shaadi ???? woh bhi raj se ... suspense ...
jaldi update karo yr next chapter I m waiting ...
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Part 1
Raj: Make you my wife? Naina do you know what you are saying?

Naina: Of course I do, Captain Shekhawat. Oops sorry, Major Shekhawat! They gave you a promotion for capturing and arresting my brother, didn't they?

CONGRATULATIONS!

Raj; Naina,, I mean.. You know I..

Naina: Save your breath Major. And hear me out. As you may or may not know I had completed my military training from NDA just before Bhai was arrested. Over the last year I have been fighting before military boards to allow me to serve in the army. Dealing with YOUR dear army has been an absolute delight as you can imagine.

But just last week I got my rank as Lieutenant. But I still need to appear before committees to be assessed psychologically before being assigned a posting

Raj: That's great..I am so..

Naina: Major please I have no interest in your fake niceties. I know that's going to take at least a year. And I don't have time. I heard that you are being posted in KMA. And that's exactly where I want to go. The place where Bhaiya was posted.
I am certain that even after a year assessing my likelihood of being a traitor they will never send me to KMA. Which is why I want you to make me your wife and take me to KMA!

Raj: That is insane Naina! If the military finds out that you are investigating Naveen;s death behind their back, they will...

Naina: Court Martial me? Kill me? I'd prefer that to staying quiet about my brother's death. And don't worry I am trained and skilled enough to ensure that if there is trouble it will only effect me. Your record will remain unblemished.

Raj: You really think that matters to me? Even if I agree to this crazy idea do you know what you are suggesting? Marriage? marriage is a sacred institution. I can see hatred in your eyes for me. How can you marry me?

Naina: Who said anything about a wedding or a marriage? I asked you to make me your wife. Doesn't take much effort to get fake marriage certificate. We will pretend to be husband and wife without getting married.

Raj: Naina you have lost your mind. Do you know what pretending to be married entails? We will be living in the same room..

Naina: Should I feel unsafe in the same room with you Raj? oops sorry Major? Will you force yourself on me.

Raj; NAINA!! HOLD YOUR TONGUE. Do you know what people will say about us, about you when the truth comes out? What will we get..

Naina: Oh sorry Major. You finally got to the real agenda. What will you get from doing all this? I am afraid I can't give you medals or promotions. Neither do I have any money to offer. But I can give you one thing.

Naina closed the blinds of Raj's office. She then walked close to Raj

Naina: It even makes sense. Since we are pretending to be husband and wife, i can give some of the pleasures associated with it.How many nights a week do you want? Two? Three? Five? Or every night?

Raj was too shocked to respond. Naina leaned into him and began opening the buttons of her shirt.

Naina: We can begin from today!

Raj came back to his senses and pushed her away.

Raj: NAINA! WHAT HAS GONE WRONG WITH YOU? YOU ARE NAVEEN'S SISTER. A LIEUTENANT IN THE ARMY! AND YOU ARE BEHAVING LIKE A ...

Naina: A prostitute? that's what your army, your government and your justice system has made me feel like? Do you know how many officials have propositioned me? Tried touching me inappropriately over the last 6 months? Do you have any idea how I felt Raj?

Naina broke down and began crying. For the first time that day, Raj saw Naveen's sister Naina. His NAINA.

Raj: Naina,,Why didn't you come to me? Did you ever.. I mean.. did someone ever succeed.

Naina: NO. I am strong enough to fight back and anyhow they didn't have anything valuable enough to offer me. But you do. As for why I didn't come to you, do you really want me to answer that question.

But I am hear today. So tell me Major Shekhawat, will you help me?

WILL YOU MAKE ME YOUR WIFE?




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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks! Updated part 1.

Originally posted by: RNgirl

Hey,

Great Start
So the entire Ahluwalia family holds Raj Guilty
Poor Raj and now Naina wants Raj to marry her...why?
I am extremely intrigued
Cont soon
Misha

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Thanks! Updated part 1.

Originally posted by: prerna1

Great start
Liked it
Continue soon...

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Thanks! Updated part 1.

Originally posted by: rajeeviansonai

Nice story dear.plz update

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Originally posted by: RNforever

wow new rn fic ...


1 part woh bhi itne twist n turn ke saath...omg
naina ne raj ko chata mara ...I just hate her for this ...

oye yeh kya hua shaadi ???? woh bhi raj se ... suspense ...
jaldi update karo yr next chapter I m waiting ...


Thanks! Updated part 1. Btw Naina didn't slap Raj. Her mother did.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely start... I am already hooked to this one.. And I am loving this bold and no nonsense Naina... It's obvious that Rajveer will agree to fake this marriage thing... Waiting to know how they will come close while faking it...
Waiting for the next update
Continue soon

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