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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: senchaitali131

Hii

I think this part is not touch my heart.
This is some kind off unethical.
I really can't stand this!!

Naina is just out of mind.
I hope when she realised her true love
for Rajj
...
...


Anyway this is your writing style.lets see what next


I respect your opinion and agree that Naina made a huge mistake. But like in the show, Naina is a deeply flawed character in my story too. Far more impulsive and prone to hurting people she loves. Raj is definitely a better human being and in the course of my story she will make herself worthy of him.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sonamiglesias

Frankly speaking...this was not what I hoped for...if u love u can't cheat that person...Naina is acting like a wh**e now...sorry but this is acting like now...she said she was in pain but what about Raj he had been in more pain than her...every one around him seems to betray him...what if he cheats on her...if u love someone physical pleasure don't matter...so I Kanda of not satisfied with this update...but then its upto u...anyway story is amazing


I had the same apprehensions while writing the update. 😕 But it it critical to my storyline. Naina is a deeply flawed character and only in time she will become worthy of Raj. Just to clarify, Naina did not sleep with Abhimanyu for pleasure. If anything she is running away from her pain and her situation.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Oh my God... I don't want to think what's gonna happen now... I am sure abhimanyu will throw this fact on Rajveer's face that his wife slept with him... This is getting more complicated... I don't know how will Rajveer react...
One confusion... Is gehlot really a traitor in this or not???

Waiting for the next update
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: paradigm


I had the same apprehensions while writing the update. 😕 But it it critical to my storyline. Naina is a deeply flawed character and only in time she will become worthy of Raj. Just to clarify, Naina did not sleep with Abhimanyu for pleasure. If anything she is running away from her pain and her situation.

pain or pleasure...whatever it is...nothing can overshadow that she cheated on her husband😕😡
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Posted: 8 years ago
To be honest I don't like part
Plz make this part abhi imagination
I don't want to see Naina weak
How can Naina let abhi to take her advantage
Plz don't do this
Marriage is pure bond don't spoil it on the name of emotional breakdown
So plz make the part 13 as dream or imagination
Sorry if I said something wrong
Edited by Shona77 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Shona77

To be honest I don't like part
Plz make this part abhi imagination
I don't want to see Naina weak
How can Naina let abhi to take her advantage
Plz don't do this
Marriage is pure bond don't spoil it on the name of emotional breakdown
So plz make the part 13 as dream or imagination
Sorry if I said something wrong

i totally agree with u...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sonamiglesias


i totally agree with u...



And I agree with both of you!
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Posted: 8 years ago
riginally posted by sonamiglesias

Originally posted by Shona77

To be honest I don't like part
Plz make this part abhi imagination
I don't want to see Naina weak
How can Naina let abhi to take her advantage
Plz don't do this
Marriage is pure bond don't spoil it on the name of emotional breakdown
So plz make the part 13 as dream or imagination
Sorry if I said something wrong

i totally agree with u...


And I agree with both of you!

Guys beg to differ with all ur opinions. I think har bar life me idealistic situation nahi ati hai. Kabhi na kabhi everyone falls loose. That doesn't mean what Naina did is justifiable on her part.
NO
cheating on who Loves you is also not agreed at all. But it is finally a story. And the writer has herown thinking behind it. And the writer has promised that RN will be together finally. This is the Lowest point of their relationship. So let us see what is inspired for us in future. Moreover I think why should Raj just accept Naina like that. Let her prove herself worthy of him.

Just my opinion.no offence meant to anyone. Sorry if anyone is hurt.

Edited by yoginisahakari - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: yoginisahakari

riginally posted by sonamiglesias

Originally posted by Shona77

To be honest I don't like part
Plz make this part abhi imagination
I don't want to see Naina weak
How can Naina let abhi to take her advantage
Plz don't do this
Marriage is pure bond don't spoil it on the name of emotional breakdown
So plz make the part 13 as dream or imagination
Sorry if I said something wrong

i totally agree with u...


And I agree with both of you!

Guys beg to differ with all ur opinions. I think har bar life me idealistic situation nahi ati hai. Kabhi na kabhi everyone falls loose. That doesn't mean what Naina did is justifiable on her part.
NO
cheating on who Loves you is also not agreed at all. But it is finally a story. And the writer has herown thinking behind it. And the writer has promised that RN will be together finally. This is the Lowest point of their relationship. So let us see what is inspired for us in future. Moreover I think why should Raj just accept Naina like that. Let her prove herself worthy of him.

Just my opinion.no offence meant to anyone. Sorry if anyone is hurt.

hey...Naina's idea about sleeping with Abhi was that she was in pain after Raj left her...but what about raj...the amount of hurt he is he should be sleeping with every second women meet him...firstly naina says she is in love with Raj...in part 12 while wearing a dress that was reveling she wanted only Raj to see her like that...but now what happened...n instead of falling week she shouls fight for her love...but in the end it's just my idea...n also writer must have thought something...n plzzz no offence to nayone
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey guys relax chill
Story Hai yaar
And if u see Raj's character from the beginning even in Series Is very strong and rational.
And opposite Is Naina's character a little weak in Series also where in she is ready to do nothing to Prove her brother innocent for 3B for pic she goes to Bhargav's side. And shooting Raj.

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