Rajveer Naina - Sirf Tere Liye - LRL FF Pg 53 - Page 11

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: prerna1

I hate this abhi so manipulative
And somewhere naina too for ditching Raj although unconsciously
But I think this time Raj should have naina warning for not playing with his reputation at least...


Yes, unfortunately, in my story as in the show Naina has hurt Rajveer
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: yoginisahakari

WoW fantabulous

Ur story is day by day becoming interesting
Well what to say
Poor Raj uska selfless pyaar Naina kab samjhegi Aur us abhi kE fraud ko.
Bhagwan hi bachaye Naina ko.

Are par.bhagwan ne bhej diya hai Raj ko

Update soon


Waiting...


Naina will understand (and reciprocate) Raj's love in the near future 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: rajeeviansonai

Awesome update dear.thanks 4 pm


Thanks 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sonarajasingh

Loved the update...abhi is so sick...I hope naina starts releasing raj's love for her...


She will. Soon 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sonamiglesias

Superb update...loved every bit of it...abhi is really disgusting person...all he need is Naina's body n not her...thank god naina got her senses back...he deserved that slap


You are right. More than loving Naina, Abhi lust after her 🤢
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 11
Abhi's eyes were blazing.

Abhi: Naina how dare you? You slapped me for this man?

Naina: This man is the person I respect and trust most in the world. This man is my best friend. And I will never let anyone, not even you, malign our relationship.

You hear me, Abhi? You hear me?

Abhi: No one has ever slapped me Naina. No one. Thank your stars that I love you otherwise I would have ruined your life for what you just did to me! Ruined it.

Raj: ENOUGH ABHIMANYU. Stay away from us.

Raj and Naina went to their room. Naina was emotionally exhausted. Raj hugged her.
Raj(whispered): Forget any of this ever happened.

Abhimanyu was fuming in his room.

Abhimanyu (to himself): Both of you will pay for this. Pay for this dearly. And I had my plan all wrong. Raj is madly in love with Naina and it's almost impossible to get him to mistrust her. But Naina, she is impulsive and easy to influence. She is the weak link their relation. I have to target her.

Abhimanyu lay low for the next few months. On the other side, Naina, against Raj's advice went ahead and confronted Shalini.
Naina: What was your relation with my brother? Shalini I am asking you something. Fine don't say anything. But I know that you had a role to play in my bhaiya's death and I will make you pay for it! Pay for it dearly.

Shalini: You think I have a role to play in your brother's death?! Raj what is she saying? How can she say this?

Naina: I have searched your room and found many photos of Bhaiya, heard you talk about him, turn pale the moment his name comes up...

Shalini: That's how little you trusted me? Raj, you too?

Raj: Shalini... I...

Shalini: Fine I'll tell you, I was and continue to be in love with your brother? You hear me? He was the love of my life...

Naina was taken aback.

Raj: Shalini why didn't you say something?

Shalini: Because it was a one-sided love. He was in love with someone else. I never met her. But I am convinced that she was the reason behind Naveen's arrest and death.

Shalini had begun crying by now. Raj put his hands around her.

Raj: I am so sorry doc. Please forgive us.

Naina: Please forgive me Dr. Shalini... I made a huge mistake. Please forgive me. But please help us. For bhaiya's sake.

Shalini: I have never let this matter die. I tried investigating things on my own. And I am convinced i have cracked who that woman was. But i don't have enough proofs.

Raj: Tell us doc! Tell us now.

Shalini: It's Dr. Ritu Mishra.

Shalini narrated all her discoveries about Dr. Ritu Mishra. Her trapping Naveen. Trapping him. Ensuring he gets tortured and even killed in jail.

Naina and Raj were numbed. They had always suspected Dr. Ritu. But had never expected her betrayal to be so large. Naina was crying and had started breathing fast. Raj got worried about her. Shalini immediately rushed her to the infirmary and gave her an injection to calm her nerves down.

Shalini: She'll sleep for a few hours. Don't worry. She'll be fine.

Raj: Shalini. I am very sorry.. we..

Shalini: Don't be. I should have come to you guys much sooner. I just didn't know what to say. Naveen didn't love me. Only I lpved him.

Raj related to that emotion so closely. He gave her a sad smile.

He took Naina to the room and let her sleep. A few minutes later he also fell asleep sitting next to Naina.
Naina got up a few hours later. She felt a shiver as she thought about Dr. Ritu. But then she looked up and saw Raj and felt safe again. He had gone to sleep sitting on the bed. She gently lowered him into a resting position and without much thought snuggled in his arms.

She thought about her brother. He had a woman like Shalini in love with her and yet he had fallen for Dr. Ritu. And then suddenly it struck her. Was her situation similar? She always believed that she had loved Abhi despit having a man like Raj in her life. She reflected on the 8 months of their marriage.

While Abhi made her feel inferior, Raj always made her feel good about herself.
While Abhi had often been forceful and rough with her, Raj had always been sensitive and gentle. They stayed in the same room, slept on the same bed, yet she never felt comfortable.

She ruffled his hair and looked at his innocent sleeping face. Was she falling in love with him? She wasn't sure. But she knew she felt safest when she was next to him.



Next morning she untangled hersled before Raj got up, She didn't want him to feel conscious. When Raj got up the first thing he did was to ask her how she was feeling?
Raj: I promise I'll make Ritu pay for this. If it's the last thing I ...

Naina: Shhh... Never say that. And make sure you are careful. She is an insane woman.

Raj went after Ritu with a vengeance. Using all his networks he managed to blow over her cover of being Dr. Ritu Mishra. She was actually Sarah and Dr. Ritu Mishra was a well crafted cover up.

Sarah: This is just the beginning Major. You'll never be able to prove anything!!! Never...

Sarah proved to be an impossible person to interrogate, even for Raj. He wasn;t able to break her up. Naina was getting desperate. Sarah had been under arrest for three months. She couldn't be held much longer. Her brother's innocence was too close.. And then she said the unthinkable.

Naina: Let's ask Abhimanyu for help! He is the best negotiator in the Indian military.

Raj was pained by the suggestion but he knew there was no one better than Abhi at interrogation.

When Naina and Raj went to Abhi, he was a perfect gentleman.
Abhi: Of course Naina.. Anything for you.. Naveen I mean.

Abhi interrogated her continuously for three days. He came out looking drained and exhausted. Naina looked at him with hopeful eyes. He smiled and nodded his head. He had managed to get a confession.

Naina ran towards him and hugged him

Abhimanyu (to himself): In the original Mahabharat, Abhimanyu had been trapped in the chakravyuh. But I will rewrite the story. This time I will trap Raj and Naina in the Chakravyuh. This is your first step in the trap Naina.

He smiled to himself and moved his hands hungrily over Naina;s back.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 12
Naina felt like a load off her life. Her brother found his way to the wall of fame. Her parents honor was restored. Life was perfect. She was in love with the man she had married, her best friend, her Raj.

But what would happen next? She had insisted that they annul the marriage the moment the mission got over. But she couldn't bear the thought of parting from Raj.

She had to confess her feelings to him, She felt goosebumps as she thought about becoming his wife in the real sense of the word.

She had to make this perfect. She planned for a week and finally told Raj one day
Naina: It's my best friend's wedding at Hotel Royal Palace today. Can you wear this and show up at 7 pm?

Raj who was distracted and worried, said yes absent-mindedly.

Naina couldn't hold her excitement the whole day. She had booked a hotel room for Raj and herself and had planned every detail on her own. She wanted this confession to be absolutely perfect and wanted to give Raj all the rights as a husband today!

Naina reached the hotel room and decorated it herself.



She was pleased with the results. She wanted this to be the day when she consummates her relation with Raj. She had already given her heart, mind and soul to Raj and today she wanted to give her body to him as well.

She had had a hard time choosing the right outfit. She wanted an outfit that would be simple and sexy. She got ready and looked at herself in the mirror shyly!




She looked at herself and blushed. She only wanted to Raj to see her like this. She was wearing a backless choli and a lowrise lehenga which displayed the beautiful curves of her mind. She closed her eyes and shuddered with excitement as she imagined Raj;'s gentle hands removing these clothes and making her his.

The clock struck 7 and there was no sign of Raj. His number was switched off. Time passed. 8pm. 9pm. 10pm.

Naina was beginning to panic. Finally she received a call from Raj who asked her to come to the jail where Sarah was kept. Sensing the distress in his voice, she changed immediately and rushed to find Raj and Abhimnayu both at the jail.

Raj: Naina, we have been interrogating Sarah further and it's clear that she was merely carrying out instructions. She isn't the mastermind.

Abhi: There's obviosly a major nexus at play. And we have a good idea who one of key players could be.

Raj: Shut up Abhimnayu! Not a word more.

Abhi: Naina I am convinced that the man behind all this is N.D. GEHLOT.

Raj: SHUT UP ABHI!!!!! LALA GEHLOT IS LIKE MY FATHER. HE WOULD NEVER DO THIS. EVEN WHEN I WENT TO HIM FOR NAVEEN'S CASE HE ONLY WANTED TO HELP.

Naina calmed Raj down. He cupped her face in his hands and looked at her pleadingly.

Raj: You believe me, don't you?

Naina: Of course I do Raj. But if we want to find the mastermind, and prove Lala Sahab's innocence we have to speak to him once,You see dont you?

Raj nodded.

Raj: Fine let's go to Delhi immediately.

Abhi: I will come too. raj this is about Naveen, Can we please put our differences aside?

On landing in Delhi, Raj and Naina went to Raj's flat while Abhi went to the palace his family owned in the outskirts of the city.

Raj was wrestless and couldn't sleep. Naina gently placed Raj's head in her lap and started massaging his back. He suddenly put his hands around Naina's waist and started crying.
Raj: He can't do this. He can't...

Naina: Shh.. She gently began kissing the tears of his face. Come here. Lie down next to me.

She held him closely and continued ruffling his har till he fell asleep hugging her.

Next day Raj went to Lala Gehlot's office and spent 6 hours there.

Naina and Abhi were in Raj's flat waiting for him. Raj came back with a smile on his face.

Raj: I was right. Lala Sahab has no role in this.

Naina: How do you know Raj?

Abhi: What cock and bull story has he fed you this time?

Raj: Abhi leave, you have no say in this matter.

After Abhi left, Raj kept convincing Naina telling her how Lala Sahab had sworn on their relation.

Naina: Raj, but did you ask him about the defence weapons deal? His stake in the company?

Raj: Naina, that man is my father. i am not going to interrgate him.

Naina: Raj let me investiage independently. he's your godfather and that...

Raj: You seem to be speaking Abhi's language.

Naina: Raj! Please let me just investigate neutrally.

Raj: Fine. But in that case leave this house.

Naina: Raj how can you say that...

Raj: Leave I said...

Naina had tears in her eyes. She packed and made her way out desperately trying to catch Raj's eyes. But Raj had his back to her!

Abhi was standing outside waiting for her.
Abhi: I knew it. Raj can never be rational...

Naina: Stop it! I need your help investigating Lala Gehlot but i won't hear a word against Raj.

Abhi: Come with me to my palace.

Naina, I'll find a hotel.

abHI: Naina, stop being stubborn, If we have to investigate LALA we need a safe place and there's no place safer than my palace in the city.

Reluctantly she agreed. Her mind was in a daze about what had just happened with Raj. She didn't even realize when she reached the palace.

Abhi: Naina this is the most beautiful room in the palace.



Naina barely looked at the room.

Naina: Thanks ABhimanyu. I am very tired. Can I...

Abhimanyu: Of course.

Naina closed the door behind Abhimanyu. She was restless and didn't get any sleep. She looked at Raj's photo and cried. She then took a couple of sleeping pills and finally fell asleep.

Some time later Abhimanyu entered the room. He knew she had taken sleeping pills and would be deep asleep. Her shoulders and arms were visible and her cleavage was visible. To abhimanyu's lust eyes she looked very tempting.


He carefully removed the blanket and snuggled next to her. He removed the strap of her shirt and began kissing her shoulder while massaging her stomach with the other hand.

Abhi (in an evil tone): You have deprived me of this sexy body for so many months. If I wanted, I could make you mine today. But that would be too easy.

You have already entered deep into this chakravyuh and soon you'll be completely trapped. Remember how you slapped me? Prince Abhimanyu? Very soon you will pay the price for this.

He gave her one last hungry kiss and walked away.

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Posted: 8 years ago
Too good what to say
Excellent

Cont soon
Waiting...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely updates.. Abhimanyu is damn evil and corrupt... I can't imagine that naina ever loved him... I just hope Rajveer comes to know about his plans before he do anything to naina...
Waiting for the next update
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