Ashlok & Sajan FS : Yeh Dooriyan(Chap 4 last part) - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
Amazing update
Loved it
Eagerly waiting for nxt update
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#62
Superb update
Love it
O god this aditi is too much
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Posted: 9 years ago
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aditi very mean...

nice update..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update, loved it.
Aditi is so evil, hope she gets her punishment.
Curious to know what happens next.
Continue soon, waiting for the next update.
Thanks for the PM dear.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update loved the ashlok part nicely written...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 4 (Last Part)



Aditi dressed up Gunjan and Gunjan was looking very beautiful. Gunjan took the tray and went outside to meet the man whom her alliance was fixed .Rahul gazed at the girl romatically and he smiled .


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Aditi's mom called Aditi inside "I don't know will you get of this house but please do so ,I don't want her anymore in my house, I know you were the one you kidnapped her and then by goons she triped and you saved her and gave her a new life because she forgot her memory and plus you played the girl who separated Shlok and Aastha by faking about sleeping with Shlok by making him drunk and not in his senses.But please make her get married soon "






Aditi smirks evily "Yes mama,I have brought this alliance specially for Gunjan to get her away from me and I get married to Shlok by convincing him as I know that Aastha doesn't want him in her life " .


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Monaya hears the conversation and she felt sad for her mother and fekt angry over Aditi for betraying her mother's trust. She went near her mother "Mama ,I want to speak to you .It's really important". Gunjan hesitated " No Monaya baby, can't you see for your mama a prince is come and Mama wants to meet him.I will speak to you my doll later ok ,till then go to your room and play." Monaya tried to grab Gunjan's attention but Gunjan wasn't ready to hear her as she knew that she might want her for some important work but just to give her accompany her little things.

Rahul smiled and said "Mom and Dad ,I ready to marry Shanaya and accept Monaya as my daughter and give her the father's love which she needs " Gunjan smiles and she nods her head in agreement saying yes for the marriage "I am ready for the marriage as you have my daughter as yours wholeheartedly is what I require". ,Monaya heard this and she thought it her mind that this can't happen.

Shlok and Samrat enter the house and Monaya jumped with joy " Wow my father came like a hero " she ran towards him and hugged him "Dad ,I am happy you are here to make mama yours " Samrat pecked her "How did you know i am your father" Shlok adhored seeing Samrat and Monaya bond,which reminded him about his and Kavya .He had tears in his eyes .




Rahul went near Samrat "Why is Monaya calling you father?,Aditi had told me that Monaya's father died before she was born!! Is it true?" Gunjan goes near Rahul "It's true that my husband died ,Monaya is faking that this is her father and this person is always behind me and I don't know why is he here " Hello Mr .why are you always behind me ,please stay away from me and my daughter, otherwise I will call the police ".

Monaya interrupted her " No mama,this is my father Samrat and he didn't die that Aditi aunty is just faking ,she always told you lies and plus mama she was the one who kidnapped you and who made you trip and loose your memory and she even used Shlok uncle and seperated Aastha aunty from him just to be with Shlok uncle and Mama your real name is Gunjan ".

Shanaya questioned Monaya " How did you came to know all these?" Monaya answered "I had overheard Aditi aunty and her mom's conversation". Gunjan corrected her " Very bad manners Monaya, you shouldnt head someone's conversation, though you cane to know about the truth but it's really bad " .Monaya says sorry to Gunjan and Gunjan smiles at her innocence.

Shlok and Samrat's blood boiled towards Aditi who was entering the hall with her mother and she was shocked to see Shlok and Samrat " Samrat and Shlok you guys? " Rahul answered instead of them "I am backing out from this marriage as Samrat deserves to be with his wife Gunjan".

Aditi tries to convince him " No Rahul please don't leave ,please she isn't Gunjan but Shanaya "




. Shlok goes near Aditi " We all know about that she is my Gunjan,my sister. How dare you to kidnap my sister and how dare you to give her pain and How dare you try to separate me from my Aastha by a fake night. I didn't expect this from you ,you used to me my best friend and that night I really thought I missed used our friendship but it was you who did so ,you are the reason for our distances. Distances between Samrat and Gunjan and distances between me and wife Aastha .Lekin abh yeh dooriyan Karan hogi,Kyunki hum abh ek hojaayenge and this time you can't separate us from reuniting ".




Samrat agreed on it " Because you it bitch, we both were away from our daughters and we both were away from our wifes and you deserve hell ".




Gunjan went near Aditi and she slapped her "How dare you to betray my trust, I trusted you with all my heart and respected you and you kidnapped me and misused me .All thanks to my daughter who brought out the truth, which I could i have not even known".




The police comes and arrests Aditi, Aditi tries to prove that she isn't wrong " Shanaya you are getting me wrong, these don't come under their words ,I am your sister, who gave you lots of love and never treated you badly not like Shlok ".

Gunjan supports Shlok " Though I haven't got my memory back,but I know Shlok Bhaiya won't do such things, he loves me not like you ,who didn't even let me go out of the house just because no one should see me ,that's isn't call love it's called to be in cage and now it's time for you to be in a cage ".

Aditi gets goes along with the police. Rahul came near Samrat " I am glad for you bro that you got your wife and kid back.Congrats " Samrat smiled "Thanks Rahul and thanks for supporting us ". Rahul smiled " Anytime bro ,I did this because it right. You guys need to get reunited and that bitch deserved to be in jail that's what I did in helping you guys cause this was the truth. "

Shlok and Samrat smiled .




Samrat went near Gunjan and she came running into his arms "Samrat, I am back with you ." she cried as her eyes moist with happiness as she hugged him and said and Samrat gazed upwards thinking now he is finally relived that he has got everything he wanted back ,Monaya came and hugged them "Mama and Papa I love you " Gunjan and Samrat smiled.

Samrat said to Gunjan "I am glad that inspite of you not getting your memory back, you accepted that you are my wife and this is my daughter." Gunjan smiled "I had to cause what you have lost I need to return it as I know I belong to you only thats why I have such a beautiful daughter,whether I get back my memory or not you will always be my husband" .Gunjan hugged Samrat back and Samrat sealed her with his kiss on her forehead.

Shlok felt happy seeing them reunited but similarly he felt sad of he being away from Aastha.

Gunjan,Samrat, Monaya and Shlok and go and meet Aastha and explain her the whole situation .Aastha eyes were moist "Really is this true that you didn't sleep with that women and never you were in love with her ?" Shlok nodded his head in agreement ,she didn't have words to express her happeniness "Gunjan I am glad you accepted my bro and my neice. Glad you escaped from the clutches of that bitch".




Aastha goes near Shlok " I am so sorry Shlok for misjudging you and giving you pain of being separated from your daughter.I really sorry, please forgive me Shlok ".




Shlok smiled and hugged his Aastha " You know what you are my Aastha you are my my faith that I had that I really be united with you again and today it's become true. And I know what you must have gone through and Aastha I love you so much and in love there is no word called sorry " Shlok and Aastha share a sweet emotional eye lock.

Kavya comes and hug them both and they smiled "come here my princess in your father's arms .I love you and missed you so much my princess" Shlok pulled his little daughter's cheeks and pecked her on her forehead and kissed Aastha on her cheeks.

Samrat said to Shlok "Shlok, let's click a family photo on this reunion celebration". They both click a family photo .

Both the couples started to dance on the song " Dehleez "








Kavya and Monaya felt happy seeing thier parents dancing with so happiness and with love .They both hugged each other "Sis we both did it" Kavya and Monaya said to each other.

The End

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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
lovely...
Aditi & her mom talking abt wat all aditi did to gunjan..
monaya listened all..
& felt bad for her mom..

rahul tells shanay he wil accept monaya as his...
monaya runs to samrat wen she seess him..
& calls him dad...
finally wen gunjan asks.. she reveals wat she heard...

Shlok, Samrat both r enraged...
finally aditi get's her due..

ashlok, gunjan-samrat together...
cutie pie monaya & kavya!!

nice ending..
thnks 4 d pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb update
loved it

beautiful ending
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved the ending👏
Thank you for the pm😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
In this ss monaya only exooaed aditi before gunjan, that shows her imo in this ss.its unique too as ivent read anything like this in any other ff, loved gunjan slaping aditi, perfet pic4that.tho I felt sad when gunjan insulted samrat in front of rahul I loved when gunjan acceoted samrat tho she didn't regain her memory. Rahul didnt turn negative n try 2 get gunjan.thats verygud.i hat characters turing obsessive lovers n creatinh probs in serials.sajan reunion was beautiful. Aditi arrested too.shlok becoming emotional thinking of kavya seeing sam with monaya was touchy.aastha understanding shloks innocence n apologizing n shlok's reply was written beautifully, ashlok pics were perfect 4 the scene.loved both couples dancing on dehleez title song.in this ss u have used othrr serial songs which I loved a lot

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