Ashlok & Sajan FS : Yeh Dooriyan(Chap 4 last part)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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A story on Aastha Shlok and Samrat Gunjan.This story i have written because my friend Jasmine insisted me long back ago to start something on Ashlok so here it goes .








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Posted: 9 years ago
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Gunjan ..." Samrat's voice screamed for his beloved, he kept screaming her name "Gunjan where are you". Aastha placed her hand on Samrat's shoulder " Bhaiya ,nothing will happen to Gunjan bhabhi ,please calm down ".

Samrat gazed at his sister emotionally " It's all because of your husband choti,if he wouldn't hold his sister hand she wouldn't have fallen in the jungle ".Aastha eyes were filled with tears " Your jejaji was trying to save me ,but he didn't knew that Gunjan babhi was in trouble and then when he got a false alarm of me in danger then he went back again to save his sister ,how could you say bad about your Jeeju ,he loves his sister like how you do?".

Samrat gets irritated and spoke in harsh way "But choti,Gunjan is not Shlok's real sister ,it is step sister and he never treated her like his own sister am I right Shlok ".Samrat gazed at Shlok angrily. Shlok tried to defend himself " Yes Samrat I know before I used never treat her like my real sister but when she was in danger I really felt that I need to fulfill my brother duty but I don't know how my hand slipped from her hand and I lost her ".

On the other hand Aditi ,who was in the den,gazing at Gunjan dead body and she told her men to take her to the hospital .Hahahaa,I thought of kidnapping Shlok's beloved Aastha but look what I got in my hand Shlok's sister,differences have become in between both the brother and sister Samrat and Aastha and now I need to separate my Shlok from that Aastha ,hahaha".

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Posted: 9 years ago
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loved the update... samrat worried for gunjan and blaming shlok...astha defending shlok...astha is samrats sister...and gunjan is shlok sister...please update soon...thank you for pm...love you ashlok...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow.. nice concept...
samrat & astha siblings...
shlok & gunjan step siblings...
inorder to save astha shlok belate in saving gunjan.. samrat thinks he did it purposely...
aditi was behind all this😲
she had tried to kill astha...😲
now she took gunjan away...😲
start soon...
thnks 4 d pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hai friend nice prologue yaar. Ur concept was also good new characters in ashloks story samrat and gunjan . Nice yaar. Waiting for ur updates.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow wonderful prologue loved it can't wait for the updates thank you for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for PM.😊
It was so Nice SS.😊
The Prologue was so Interesting.😊
The Banner was so Nice.😊
Please Continue soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
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Edited by PriyaCherry - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for the pm...
Nice and interesting start
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thx a lot 4 starting this.Gunjan lost in jungle.But shlok cud'nt save his sis tho at d time of danger he realized her importance.shlok was gunjan's step sus,so he never loved her?Oh!thats y samrat is blaming shlok.but good that aastha understands shlok's luv 4 gunjan.Aditi wanted 2 harm aastha 2 separate ashlok.but it was gunjan who became d victim.Hope she will not b able 2 separate Ashlok n SaJan get united.Samrat aastha ,Shlok Gunjan as siblings was unique.cant wait 2 read d real updates.update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing start..
Samrat n Astha r siblings while Ashlok n Gunjan r siblings..
Samrat blames Ashlok..

Aditi is the real culprit..

But what do u mean by Gunjan's DEAD BODY 😲

BOLO BOLO🤢

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