Yeh Hai Chahatein: Adhuri Chahat ~ Rusha/Rajma Saransh SS

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In the vibrant heart of Chennai, two sisters and two brothers are bound by fate. Mahima and Rajeev's secret love faces societal power and family control, while fiery Preesha and reckless Rudraksh clash in chaos and chemistry-four lives intertwined by music, rebellion, and the quiet tragedies of forbidden love.

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Character Sketches Of The Main Characters

Sargun Kaur Luthra as Preesha Srinivasan

Preesha is yhm Ishita's niece, Vasudha and Gopal Krishnan's younger daughter

Smart, impulsive, and stubborn to the bone. A 12th-grade student with dreams of becoming a gynecologist. She carries responsibility like armor, always defending what she believes is right. Her arguments are fiery, her heart pure. When she meets Rudraksh, logic and emotion collide — and she hates that he makes her feel both.

Abrar Qazi as Rudraksh Khurana

A magnetic mix of charm and chaos

A magnetic mix of charm and chaos. With tousled hair, restless eyes, and a guitar always within reach, Rudraksh is a musician chasing meaning in noise. Quick to anger, quicker to regret. Beneath his sarcasm hides a bruised vulnerability — a boy desperate to prove he's more than his father's disappointment. His smile can disarm, his silence can wound.

Vidhaan Sharma as Saransh Srinivasan

A ten year old boy who is Rudraaksh's fraternal and Preesha's sororal nephew

A ten year old boy who is Rudraaksh's fraternal and Preesha's sororal nephew. He is the biological son of Rajeev and Mahima born out of wedlock. He is the adoptive son of Preesha and Rudraksh who take care of him like their own son.

Indraneil Sengupta as Rajeev Khurana

Composed, disciplined, and burdened by duty

Composed, disciplined, and burdened by duty. The elder Khurana son who manages the family empire without ever owning a piece of it. His eyes reveal weariness; his smile hides longing. Rajeev moves through life carefully, until Mahima teaches him to live with abandon. He's the calm before Rudraksh's storm — and the storm when pushed too far.

Aishwarya Khare as Mahima Srinivasan

Aishwarya Khare as Mahima Srinivasan

Graceful, poised, and soulful. A classical music singer whose voice holds serenity and sorrow in equal measure. She embodies strength wrapped in gentleness, the peace that draws Rajeev out of his walls. But beneath her composure lies quiet rebellion — a woman who will fight for love, not with swords, but with silence and conviction.


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About This Story

This fictionalized version of the Indian TV show Yeh Hai Chahatein brings together two lead couples. The first pair, Rudraksh and Preesha, draws inspiration from the English film Life as We Know It, while the second lead pair, Rajeev and Mahima, finds its emotional essence in the Korean drama 49 Days.

Preesha and her elder sister Mahima are like day and night—strikingly different in nature, yet incomplete without one another. Similarly, Rajeev and his younger brother Rudraksh reflect that same contrast and interdependence, their lives forever entwined by fate.

Chapter 1 (A Chance Encounter)

2014 – Kapaleeshwarar Temple, Mylapore, Chennai

Rajeev Khurana stood outside the towering gopuram of the ancient Kapaleeshwarar Temple, its carved pillars glowing in the afternoon light. He was on the phone with his father, trying to arrange the temple auditorium for Rudraksh's band rehearsal. But because of the Karthigai Deepam festival, the hall had already been reserved by Vasudha Srinivasan and her husband Gopalkrishnan for a classical-music concert.

Frustrated but still hopeful, Rajeev tried every contact he had in Chennai's cultural circles—but nothing worked.
"Papa, I tried my best to get the auditorium for Rudraksh's rehearsal, but—"

Before he could finish, Balraj's angry voice thundered through the receiver.
"You idiot! Good for nothing! I gave you one job—to fix the venue for Rudraksh's rehearsal—and even that you couldn't manage! Leave it!"

The call ended with a harsh click, leaving Rajeev gutted. He leaned against his car, blinking back tears. The scent of jasmine garlands and temple camphor drifted through the air.

Just then, a girl carrying a prasad thaal passed by with her friends. Dressed in a traditional Tamil Brahmin davani, she hurried forward—colliding straight into Rajeev. The thaal slipped, scattering coconut, kumkum, and sandal powder on the stone floor.

"Ayyo, Venkateshwara!" she gasped, lightly knocking her forehead in dismay.

Rajeev bent down to help collect the offerings, and their heads accidentally touched—sparking an unexpected eye-lock.
Time froze. Rajeev was mesmerized by the girl's serene beauty. Her friends giggled from behind; flustered, she scolded them in Tamil, "Vaayu moode!" (Shut up!)

"I'm so sorry, sir. I didn't see you coming," she said earnestly.
Rajeev smiled gently. "Please, it's fine. I wasn't looking either. So the fault's half mine."

Her eyes softened at his kindness, and she smiled before rejoining her friends. But after a few steps she turned back.
"If you don't mind, may I say something?"

Rajeev nodded, curious.

"I don't know what pain you're carrying, sir," she said softly, "but holding on too tightly only makes it hurt more. Sometimes the only way to heal is to let go... and notice the beauty still around you."

Her words struck him like sunlight after rain. She smiled once more and walked away, leaving him speechless.

Moments later, a sweet cascade of veena notes filled the air. Rajeev followed the sound to the temple auditorium—and froze. The same girl was now on stage, singing a Tamil kirtanam, a veena resting gracefully on her lap.

Their eyes met mid-performance; he gestured "superb." She blushed faintly and continued. After the concert, she was surrounded by family and devotees. Not wanting to intrude, he slipped away quietly. She noticed, her gaze lingering a moment longer than she meant it to.

The Next Morning

Rajeev returned to the temple early, bowed before Lord Shiva, and whispered, "God... maybe yesterday was the first and last time I'll see her. But please—just one more chance."

Right then, the temple bell rang. He turned—and there she was. Mahima Srinivasan.

Joy surged through him. "You don't look like a regular devotee," she teased. "So what brings you here today?"
Rajeev grinned. "And you don't look like someone who sings only for God. What brings you here again?"

They both laughed, conversation flowing easily. By the time they parted, a quiet bond had taken root.

Before leaving, Mahima asked playfully, "So, Rajeev—who's your best friend in the world?"
Without hesitation, he smiled. "My younger brother, Rudraksh. And yours?"
Mahima replied, "My younger sister, Preesha. I think when Rudraksh and Preesha meet, they'll become great friends—just like us."

Narrator:
And that was the moment Rusha's destiny was set into motion—even before they had ever met.

Meanwhile, elsewhere... Rudraksh meets Preesha

Inside Kapaleeshwarar Temple Auditorium, later that evening

While Rajeev and Mahima were discovering the quiet rhythm of something new, fate was scripting another meeting nearby—one far less graceful.

Rudraksh Khurana, a twenty-year-old aspiring musician with a guitar case slung over his back, stormed into the auditorium courtyard. His eyes were tired; his mind, restless. The same hall he'd booked for his first rehearsal had just hosted a classical concert—his dream slot gone.

"All my savings, wasted," he muttered. "And now some temple function hijacks it. Perfect."

Inside, Preesha Srinivasan—seventeen, still in her twelfth-standard uniform under a light dupatta—was helping her mother pack up after her sister Mahima's performance. She was humming "Kurai Ondrum Illai" when a sharp voice broke through.

"Excuse me!" Rudraksh snapped. "Who gave permission to hijack this hall? I was supposed to rehearse here today!"

Preesha turned, her brows knitting. "Hijack? This is Kapaleeshwarar Temple, not a rock café. Maybe check the schedule before assuming it's yours."

"I did book it," he shot back. "Your Karthigai festival wasn't listed. Some of us are trying to build a career, you know."

She folded her arms. "Some of us are trying to pray and pack up, not listen to tantrums. Maybe destiny didn't want your so-called 'career' to start here."

"Maybe destiny didn't ask you to give free lectures to strangers," he retorted.

"Then stop shouting. This is a temple, not your rehearsal garage."

He froze—her boldness caught him off-guard. No one had ever talked back to him like that, not even Rajeev.
"Unbelievable," he muttered, turning to leave.

"Finally," she murmured, bending to lift a veena box. But her dupatta snagged on his guitar case. She tugged it free, glaring. "Can't you watch where you're going?"

He smirked. "You walked into me. Typical."

"Typical boys—always think the world revolves around them."

"And typical girls—always think they're right."

She rolled her eyes. "Arrogant musician."
He grinned. "Bossy schoolgirl."

And with that, they stormed off in opposite directions—each convinced the other was impossible. Neither realized that this messy, loud argument was the beginning of something destiny had planned long before their first words.

Narrator:

Under the same sacred roof, two stories had begun. One in quiet devotion, the other in fiery discord.

At the Kapaleeshwarar Temple, love had taken two forms—one that soothed, one that challenged. Rajeev and Mahima had found harmony; Rudraksh and Preesha, dissonance.

Yet both were threads of the same melody—fated to intertwine.

Because sometimes the universe doesn't just write love stories—it composes them.

And in Chennai, 2014, that music had only just begun.

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Chapter 2 (Two Melodies, One Rain)

Five Months Later

Five months had passed since that monsoon morning at Kapaleeshwarar Temple. What had begun as a fleeting encounter between Rajeev Khurana and Mahima Srinivasan had now blossomed into something steady—something quietly luminous. Their meetings had grown from stolen glances to shared coffee breaks, from long drives along Marina Beach to hours spent talking about everything and nothing.

Rajeev, usually reserved and pragmatic, found himself smiling more often these days. Mahima, with her calm confidence, grounded him in ways he never expected. She had become his peace. And in turn, Rajeev had become the one person who truly saw her—not as the perfect elder daughter or responsible sister, but as a woman who longed to live and love freely.

For Rajeev and Mahima, time had become a melody—steady, unhurried, and unexpectedly comforting.

Rajeev still spent his days managing accounts and logistics at Khurana Enterprises, the business empire run by his father. Though he neither owned shares nor held any real authority, he carried out his duties with quiet dignity. Mahima, meanwhile, was beginning to make a name for herself as a young Carnatic vocalist. Between performances, temple concerts, and small sabhas, her life moved to the rhythm of raagas and ragamalikas.

Their worlds couldn't have been more different, yet their souls found sync in the simplest of ways—shared silences after long days, unspoken smiles across crowded rooms, and the comfort of knowing someone truly saw you.

That evening, as the sun melted into the Bay of Bengal, Mahima and Rajeev walked along the Marina promenade.

"Five months," she murmured. "Feels like five minutes."

"Or five lifetimes," he replied with a smile.

"Romantic and dramatic—that's quite a mix, Mr. Khurana."

"Blame fate," he said lightly. "It started at a temple. It has to be dramatic."

She laughed. He took her hand, and for a moment the world stilled.

Five months ago, they had crossed paths under temple bells. Tonight, they stood beneath an open sky, unaware of how deeply fate had already bound their stories together.

A Double Date

A week later, Rajeev had an idea.
"We should go out somewhere nice," he said over the phone. "But this time, not just the two of us."

Mahima raised a brow. "Oh?"

"Rudraksh's been locked in his room composing for days. He needs a break. And you keep saying Preesha's drowning in her board exam prep. Let's give the younger ones some air."

Mahima smiled, amused. "So... you're setting up your little brother and my little sister?"

Rajeev chuckled. "Not at all. Just four friends getting dinner. Strictly casual."

That Saturday evening, they met at La Magia Café in Alwarpet—a cozy corner joint known for soft jazz, the faint hum of conversation, and the smell of freshly baked pastries.

Mahima arrived first with Preesha, who looked distinctly unimpressed, adjusting the strap of her sling bag weighed down by textbooks.
"Akka, you said we were going for dinner, not a lecture," she muttered.

"It's just a small gathering. Relax, Pree."

Moments later, Rajeev walked in with Rudraksh—guitar case in hand, curls untamed, wearing his trademark lazy grin.

And then it happened.

Preesha froze mid-sip of water. Rudraksh blinked.
"You?" they exclaimed in unison.

Rajeev and Mahima exchanged confused glances.
"Wait—you two already know each other?" Rajeev asked.

"Oh, we know each other," Rudraksh said dryly. "She's the girl who accused me of disturbing the temple prayers."

"And he's the guy who thought music was louder than devotion," Preesha shot back.

Mahima bit her lip to hide a smile. "Well, this should be... peaceful."

They sat—Rajeev beside Mahima, Preesha opposite Rudraksh. For a few fleeting minutes, the air was calm. They spoke about Mahima's recent performance, Rajeev's work stress, and Rudraksh's small gigs at college cafés.

Then, just as the waiter placed the desserts, Preesha asked innocently, "So, Akka... how do you and Rajeev anna know each other?"

Mahima stiffened slightly. Rajeev cleared his throat.
"Uh, we've known each other through some cultural events," he said quickly. "You know—music circles, charity programs, that sort of thing."

"Right," Mahima added with a practiced smile. "We're... just good friends."

Rudraksh smirked, not quite buying it. "Just friends, huh? Rajeev usually avoids social events like the plague."

Rajeev shot him a warning look. "Don't start, Rudra."

Preesha frowned. "That's weird. You two seem really comfortable around each other."

Mahima reached for her glass, feigning nonchalance. "That's what happens when people share the same taste in music."

"Music," Rajeev echoed, forcing a chuckle. "Exactly."

The topic died, but not without leaving a hint of awkwardness in the air. Rudraksh and Preesha exchanged puzzled glances, each sensing something unspoken but shrugging it off as another one of the "adult mysteries" they didn't care to decode.

Then Rudraksh started absentmindedly tapping his spoon against his glass, humming a self-composed tune.

Preesha winced. "Can you not?"

He smirked. "Can you appreciate art for once?"

"That's noise, not art."

"Says the girl who thinks cutting open frogs counts as ambition."

Preesha slammed her glass down. "At least I'm doing something meaningful!"

"Yeah? Saving humanity one biology chapter at a time?"

Before Rajeev could intervene, Preesha reached across the table and tugged his curls.
"Ow—Preesha! Are you insane?"

"You started it!" she shot back.

"Kids!" Mahima half-laughed, half-panicked, pulling Preesha's hand away.

Rajeev sighed, rubbing his temples. "I should've known dinner diplomacy was a myth."

The café had gone quiet. A waiter hovered uncertainly, clutching a tray like a shield.

Finally, Mahima stood. "Okay, this is over. We're leaving before someone throws dessert."

They walked out—the elder pair apologetic, the younger two still shooting verbal daggers.

Outside, under the amber glow of Alwarpet's streetlights, Rajeev and Mahima exchanged a look that was part exasperation, part amusement.
"Well," Rajeev said dryly, "at least they didn't kill each other."

"Not yet," Mahima replied with a soft laugh.

Behind them, Rudraksh muttered, "She's impossible."

Preesha crossed her arms. "He's unbearable."

Their voices faded into the night—two storms clashing, unaware that fate had already begun to write them into the same melody.

The Apartment

That rain-soaked afternoon felt like an extension of everything Rajeev and Mahima had built over the past few months—a quiet, wordless understanding wrapped in affection. From whispered goodnights over the phone to unplanned coffee breaks between her rehearsals and his office hours, their connection had only deepened, becoming both a comfort and an escape.

Rajeev had been unusually excited that day. "I want to show you something," he said, his eyes gleaming with anticipation.

They drove to Adyar, and by the time they arrived, the sky had opened up. Drenched and breathless, they rushed into the building's covered porch.

"Ayyo, ammadi!" Mahima exclaimed, shivering slightly. "I'm soaked. Amma is going to scold me so badly—I'll definitely fall sick!"

Rajeev chuckled. "Don't worry, Mahima. You can dry off... in our flat."

Mahima froze. "Our flat?"

Rajeev smacked his forehead, half laughing. "I wanted it to be a surprise... but I guess now..."

He gently covered her eyes with his hands and led her forward. When she opened them, she saw the nameplate outside:

'Rajeev & Mahima'

Her eyes roamed the space in awe, fingers brushing across the nameplate. Inside, warmth bloomed in her chest as she wandered through the living room, the soft scent of sandalwood lingering in the air. On the bedside table sat a framed photograph of the two of them—smiling, caught in a candid moment from their temple visit a month ago.

She picked it up and held it close to her heart. "It's beautiful," she whispered.

Rajeev watched her silently from the doorway, his breath caught—not because of how she looked, but because of what she meant. She was everything he had ever wanted but never believed he deserved.

"Did you like the flat?" he asked softly.

Mahima turned, eyes gleaming with unshed tears, and nodded. "It's more than I ever dreamed of. You've given this... a place, a meaning. Us."

She walked toward him, emotions brimming. Without hesitation, she wrapped her arms around him and buried her face in his chest. He tensed at first—surprised—but the feel of her heartbeat against his made everything else melt away.

"Thank you," she murmured against his shirt. "For making me feel like I belong."

Rajeev's hands hesitated before rising to her back. He rested his chin against her damp hair, then gently tilted her face upward. Their eyes met—stormy, vulnerable, and full of yearning.

"I wanted to give you something that would last," he said. "Something you could call home."

Mahima's lips parted, not for words—but for breath. For closeness. For more.

Their kiss began softly—just a brush, just a question. But with each passing second, it deepened, turned deliberate. Mahima's fingers wove into Rajeev's wet hair. He pulled her closer, the tension of months of unspoken emotion bursting like the rain outside.

They moved in synchrony—as if they'd always known how.

Rajeev gently led her toward the bed, never breaking their gaze. Mahima followed, her trust complete. He slowly helped her out of the heavy outer layer of her saree—careful, reverent, as if undressing something sacred. She shivered—not from cold, but from the tenderness in his touch.

"Are you sure?" he asked, voice husky but soft.

Mahima cupped his face, eyes shimmering. "With you, I've never been more sure of anything."

What followed wasn't rushed, wasn't wild. It was quiet and intense—like a prayer whispered in the dark. They explored each other with reverence, speaking in touches and sighs. Every movement was a promise, every pause an offering. The world outside faded, the rain now just background music to their union.

For the first time, love was not just a word between them—it became something real. Felt. Lived. Breathed.

Later, as Mahima lay curled beside him, her head on his chest and his arms around her, neither of them said a word. They didn't need to.

In that stillness, in that warmth—they had said everything.

Narrator:

Fate has a strange way of drawing opposites together—sometimes through music, sometimes through mischief.
And as the sun rose over Chennai that morning, two love stories continued to tune themselves—one in quiet harmony, and the other in discord that might someday become melody.

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Chapter 3 (Sparks and Silences)

Next Morning — Srinivasan House, Mylapore

The morning sunlight filtered gently through the tall windows of the Srinivasan home, glinting off brass lamps and veena strings. The scent of filter coffee mingled with fresh jasmine. Mahima's mother, Vasudha, was busy arranging flowers for the puja, while Preesha sat at the dining table, textbooks spread open, trying to look focused.

She wasn't.

Her mind kept replaying the chaos at La Magia Café — Rudraksh's smug face, his ridiculous tapping, and the way he had yelped when she'd pulled his hair. Every time the memory surfaced, she alternated between guilt and satisfaction.

"Aiyyo," she muttered, slamming her pen down. "Why did I even lose my temper? He's not worth it."

Vasudha glanced over. "Hmm? What did you say, kanna?"

"Nothing, Amma," Preesha said quickly, flipping a page.

Just then, the doorbell rang. Vasudha, adjusting her pallu, went to open it. A young man stood outside, holding a neatly wrapped brown paper parcel — his expression somewhere between annoyance and hesitation.

"Good morning, ma'am," he said, forcing a polite smile. "Is Miss Mahima home?"

Preesha's head jerked up. That voice.

Oh no.

Before she could react, Vasudha smiled warmly. "Yes, yes, come in. You must be Rudraksh, Rajeev's brother? Mahima has told us about your music. Please sit, I'll call her."

Preesha sank lower in her chair, hoping he wouldn't notice her. No such luck.

The moment their eyes met, Rudraksh's grin widened — that infuriating, lazy grin she remembered all too well. "Well, well," he drawled, stepping in. "If it isn't the hair-pulling prodigy herself."

Preesha's jaw tightened. "And if it isn't the noise pollution specialist."

Vasudha blinked between them, confused but smiling politely. "You two know each other?"

Rudraksh shrugged. "Oh, you could say we have already made quite an impression on each other."

"Not the good kind," Preesha muttered.

Before their verbal sparring could escalate, Mahima appeared from her room, adjusting her dupatta. "Rudraksh! You came all the way here?"

"Yeah," he said, handing her the parcel. "You left your music notes in Rajeev's car. He panicked like Papa would if someone misplaced a business file."

Mahima smiled gratefully. "You're a sweetheart. Thank you."

Preesha scoffed under her breath. "Sweetheart? That's... debatable."

Rudraksh turned, arching a brow. "Something to say, Miss Biology?"

She met his gaze squarely. "Yes. Maybe next time, don't insult someone's dream in public."

His smirk faded just a little. "Oh, so you do remember."

Their eyes locked — irritation giving way to something quieter, stranger. A flicker of understanding passed between them before either could name it.

Mahima looked between them, amused. "You two sound like an old married couple already."

"Akka!" Preesha protested. "He started it!"

"Me?" Rudraksh said, feigning innocence. "You're the one with violent tendencies."

"Only when provoked!"

Vasudha laughed softly, shaking her head. "Enough, both of you. Sit and have coffee at least. This house could use some peace after all that music and argument last night."

Reluctantly, they obeyed. The next few minutes passed in stubborn silence. Preesha sipped her coffee, refusing to look his way. Rudraksh stirred his cup unnecessarily, pretending to be interested in the sugar crystals.

But every few seconds, one would glance at the other — accidentally — then look away too quickly.

When Rudraksh finally stood to leave, Mahima offered to walk him out. At the door, Preesha followed, arms crossed.

"By the way," Rudraksh said casually, turning toward her, "next time we meet, try not to assault me."

She shot back, "Next time, try not to deserve it."

He chuckled, tilting his head. "You're impossible."

"And you're intolerable."

"See? We agree on something," he said, flashing that maddening half-smile before stepping out into the sunlight.

Preesha stood at the doorway, watching him walk away — confused at why her heart was beating faster than it should.

Later That Evening — Rajeev and Mahima, Adyar

That evening, rain clouds gathered again over Adyar. Rajeev waited outside Mahima's small music studio, holding an umbrella. When she emerged, tired but glowing from rehearsal, he fell into step beside her.

"Did Rudraksh behave?" he asked with a knowing smile.

Mahima laughed. "He and Preesha can't be in the same room without arguing."

"Figures," Rajeev said. "They're too alike."

She looked up at him, surprised. "Alike?"

"Both stubborn. Both loud about what they believe in. And both impossible to ignore."

Mahima smiled, slipping her hand into his as they walked toward the car. "Maybe that's why destiny made them collide."

"Maybe," he murmured. "Like we did."

The first drops began to fall — light, rhythmic. Mahima tilted her face toward the rain, closing her eyes. Rajeev watched her silently, his heart full. He reached out, brushing a wet strand of hair from her cheek.

Under the drizzle, amidst the faint hum of temple bells from a nearby street, they stood together — the calm after chaos, the harmony to the morning's dissonance.

Fate, it seemed, had its own sense of music.

For every storm it brewed between Rudraksh and Preesha... it wrote a symphony for Rajeev and Mahima.

Rajeev and Mahima's Love Story – One Year Later

Rajeev and Mahima's love story had gradually deepened over the months. After their first night together, their bond evolved into a quiet rhythm of togetherness. Rajeev had bought a flat in Gurgaon, and the couple met there often—sharing meals, conversations, and quiet evenings that turned into passionate nights. Their relationship had taken the shape of a live-in arrangement, where they often fell asleep in each other's arms, wrapped in the warmth of love and desire.

As the months passed, their bond only grew stronger. One year into the relationship, Rajeev had transformed. The burden of his strained relationship with his father, Balraj, had lightened, and the ever-present shadow of loneliness had slowly lifted. Mahima had become his safe space, his light.

Rudraksh noticed the change. He often teased his elder brother about his sudden cheerfulness and glow, unaware that the reason behind it was someone he had already met. Rajeev, though close to Rudraksh, never revealed that Mahima—the graceful classical singer—was the woman who had brought that quiet light into his life. Similarly, Mahima, who shared almost everything with her younger sister Preesha, kept her relationship with Rajeev private. Preesha knew Rajeev as the courteous businessman who occasionally helped during temple events, but she had no idea he was the man her sister's heart belonged to. Both Rajeev and Mahima were waiting for the right moment—for the day love would no longer need to hide behind coincidence.

One Fine Morning – The Turning Point

It was a crisp morning. Rudraksh was getting ready for rehearsal. Rajeev, as always, had taken care of the venue bookings and was about to leave with him when Balraj called out sternly, “Rajeev, I need to speak to you. Now.”

Rudraksh tensed immediately. Their father’s tone always came with a storm. “I’ll wait for Bhai,” he offered cautiously.

“Don’t waste your time, you fool!” Balraj snapped. “I need to speak to Rajeev, not you. Go do your job!”

Rajeev exchanged a quiet glance with Rudraksh and gave him a subtle nod, urging him to leave. Reluctantly, Rudraksh walked out, worried.

Balraj summoned Rajeev to his office. Once inside, he closed the door and ensured they were alone.

“The way I’ve called you here privately,” Balraj began, “should already tell you how important this matter is.”

Rajeev sat down uneasily. “Yes, Papa? What’s the matter?”

Balraj leaned back in his chair. “To grow our business, I’ve sealed a deal with Mr. Niketan Singhania. As part of the agreement, you will marry his elder daughter, Ahana.”

The words struck Rajeev like a thunderbolt. He went pale, his breath catching as he gripped the chair for support. His heart pounded in disbelief.

Balraj noticed the panic in his son’s eyes and narrowed his gaze. “What? Do you have a problem with my decision?”

Rajeev struggled to speak. “Papa… I… I’m already in love—with someone else.”

Before he could utter another word, Balraj’s palm landed hard across his cheek.

“You dare object to me?!” Balraj roared, grabbing Rajeev by the collar. “How dare you challenge my decision? Do you think your feelings matter more than my empire?”

He shoved Rajeev away roughly. “Go. End it. Tell that girl you’re cutting all ties. You’re marrying Ahana. And if you even think of defying me again, you’ll see a version of me you won’t forget.”

Tears welled in Rajeev’s eyes, but he knew resistance would only make things worse. Trembling, he left the room. Once outside, he collapsed to his knees and broke down silently, devastated and powerless. His mother, Sharda, noticed him and hurried over.

“Rajeev, what happened?” she asked gently.

He quickly wiped his tears, forcing a smile. “Nothing, Ma. I’m fine.”

Without another word, he rushed out.

Narrator:

That morning at Mylapore had begun with laughter, arguments, and the shy rhythm of something unspoken between two strangers who refused to admit what stirred beneath their words. By nightfall, love and fate had already chosen their battlegrounds — weaving Rudraksh and Preesha's chaos into Rajeev and Mahima's calm. But destiny, like music, thrives on contrast — and soon, even the sweetest symphony would tremble under the weight of silence.

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Chapter 4 (The Storm Within)

That Evening — Mahima and Rajeev's Flat, Adyar

The rain had turned relentless, streaking down the windows in silver sheets. Inside, the small apartment glowed with the soft yellow of a single lamp. The faint scent of sandalwood and rain-soaked earth filled the air as she tuned her veena absent-mindedly, waiting.

She hadn't expected Rajeev so soon, but when the doorbell rang, her heart leapt. She wiped her hands on her dupatta and opened the door — only to freeze at the sight before her.

Rajeev stood drenched from head to toe, his eyes hollow with a kind of pain she'd never seen in him before. The rain clung to his shirt, outlining every tremor in his body, his lips pressed tight as if holding back a storm.

"Rajeev..." she whispered. "What happened?"

He didn't answer. He simply stepped inside, water dripping onto the floor, his silence heavier than any explanation. Mahima closed the door slowly behind him.

"Did something happen at home?" she asked again, her voice trembling slightly.

He looked at her then — eyes red, jaw clenched — and in that moment she saw it: the weight of something unbearable. Her heart squeezed.

"Rajeev, please talk to me," she said, taking a hesitant step closer.

He opened his mouth, then shut it again. Words failed. The echo of his father's command — End it. Forget her. — rang in his ears like a curse.

How could he say that to her? How could he destroy something so pure?

"I came to..." he started, his voice breaking. He looked away, unable to meet her gaze. "I came to tell you something, Mahima."

She waited, her pulse quickening with dread. "What is it?"

But before the words could escape him, his control shattered.

He closed the distance between them in a heartbeat, cupping her face in his trembling hands, his breath unsteady. "I can't," he murmured, almost to himself. "I can't lose you."

"Rajeev—" she began, but her protest was cut short as his lips met hers — desperate, searching, aching. It wasn't the gentle kiss of love they shared before; it was fire meeting rain. Pain, longing, and fear all collided as his hands traced the familiar path along her jaw and down her shoulders.

Mahima melted against him, feeling the storm in his touch. She didn't know what had broken him tonight, but she could feel it — in the way he clung to her as though letting go would destroy him. Her fingers curled into his soaked shirt, pulling him closer.

"Rajeev," she whispered against his lips, "tell me what's wrong."

He only shook his head, kissing her again — harder this time, his tears mingling with the rain still on his face. "Nothing," he whispered hoarsely. "Just... don't ask me tonight."

The veena strings vibrated softly as they stumbled back toward the couch, his hands tracing the curve of her back, her dupatta slipping soundlessly to the floor. The rhythm of the rain matched the pulse of their hearts — urgent, unrestrained.

In that moment, words were useless. What they couldn't say, their bodies confessed. Every touch, every breath, was a plea not to be separated by a world that wouldn't understand their love.

Hours later, the storm outside began to fade. Mahima sat wrapped in a soft throw by the window, her hair still damp, watching the rain slide down the glass like silver threads. Behind her, Rajeev sat on the couch, half in shadow, his shirt unbuttoned, eyes fixed on her as though afraid to blink and lose her.

Neither spoke. The silence between them felt fragile — like the pause between two notes of an unfinished song.

When Mahima finally turned, her eyes softened at the sight of him — the exhaustion, the turmoil — and she reached for his hand. He took it, pressing a kiss to her knuckles, lingering there as if it could erase the guilt gathering in his heart.

He knew he should have told her the truth. That tonight was supposed to be an ending, not another beginning.

But as her fingers tightened around his, he realized he couldn't. Not yet. Not when every part of him still ached for her warmth, her trust, her music.

Outside, the rain slowed to a whisper — as though the skies themselves understood the silence that followed passion. And somewhere in that quiet, fate shifted... setting into motion a chain of choices that neither Rajeev nor Mahima would ever be able to undo.

Next Morning — Khurana House

The sunlight crept through the half-drawn curtains of Khurana House, filtering across the marble floors like liquid gold. The mansion, usually alive with the hum of morning routines, felt strangely muted that day.

Rajeev sat at the dining table, staring at the untouched cup of coffee before him. His phone buzzed once — Mahima calling. He turned it face down.

Across the table, Rudraksh watched him quietly over the rim of his mug. There was something in Rajeev's silence that unsettled him — a heaviness that wasn't there before, a distance in his eyes that couldn't be explained by work or fatigue.

"Late night?" Rudraksh asked casually, breaking the stillness.

Rajeev's head lifted slightly. "Yeah," he said, his voice rough. "Just... couldn't sleep."

Rudraksh nodded but didn't look away. "You've been saying that a lot lately."

Rajeev tried to smile, but it faltered halfway. He reached for the coffee, realized his hand was shaking, and set it back down. "Work's been... complicated."

"Hmm," Rudraksh murmured, leaning back in his chair. "Complicated or confusing?"

Rajeev looked up sharply. For a second, Rudraksh caught something flicker in his brother's eyes — guilt, fear, maybe even longing — before Rajeev dropped his gaze again.

"Both," Rajeev muttered finally.

The air between them thickened with unspoken words. Rudraksh wanted to ask — Was it about Mahima? — but something in Rajeev's expression stopped him. Instead, he let the silence linger, studying him the way one studies a fracture line before it gives.

Across the hall, Mrs. Khurana's voice floated faintly from the veranda, scolding a servant about overwatered plants. Life went on around them, indifferent to the quiet storm brewing in Rajeev's chest.

When Rajeev finally rose from the table, Rudraksh said softly, "Bhai... whatever's eating you, talk before it eats you whole."

Rajeev paused at the doorway, his jaw tightening. "Some things," he said without turning, "can't be talked about."

And then he walked away — leaving Rudraksh staring after him, a sinking feeling in his gut that whatever secret his brother was carrying, it wasn't small.

Outside, the morning looked deceptively calm. But inside the Khurana House, the first cracks had begun to show — hairline fractures that no one yet noticed, but that would soon splinter everything.

Next Morning — Mahima and Rajeev's Flat, Adyar

The rain had stopped sometime before dawn, leaving behind a fragile silence. Mahima sat by the window, a cup of tea cooling beside her, her hair still loose and slightly damp. The city outside had resumed its rhythm — autos honking, vendors calling out — but inside the flat, the world felt strangely suspended.

Rajeev's absence was the first thing she noticed.

He had left before sunrise, without waking her. The bedsheet beside her had been cold when she reached out — just an imprint of his presence, faint and quickly fading.

Her eyes drifted to the veena resting in the corner, its strings silent. Last night's intensity still lingered in her body — the taste of rain, the warmth of his touch, the way his voice had broken when he said, "Don't ask me tonight."

But now, in the clear light of morning, that plea felt different.
Not tender. Not romantic.
Desperate.

She picked up her phone, scrolling to his name. Her thumb hovered over the call icon. She wanted to hear his voice, to ask what had really driven him here last night — what storm he was carrying inside. But something in her heart told her she wouldn't get an answer she was ready for.

Instead, she typed a short message: "Did you reach home?"
Then deleted it.

Mahima stood, pacing the small living room, trying to shake off the unease. Everything felt off — the silence, the faint scent of his cologne still clinging to her dupatta, the memory of the way he had looked at her before kissing her like it was both confession and farewell.

She closed her eyes for a moment, pressing a hand to her chest.
"He's hiding something," she whispered.

Her fingers brushed against the veena again — its smooth wood cool under her touch. She plucked a single note, soft and trembling, but it echoed too long in the empty room.

When her phone finally buzzed, her heart leapt — but it was only a student reminder for her evening class.

Mahima sighed and looked out at the sun breaking through the clouds. The day felt normal again. And yet, deep inside, she knew — something between them had changed irreversibly.

Outside, a lone drop of rain slid down the windowpane, tracing a path like the one her heart had begun to take — slow, uncertain, but inevitable.

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To be continued.

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Posted: 3 days ago
#7

Two couples and two stories. Both face their own ups and downs.

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Posted: 3 days ago
#8

Both couples have their own styles. One is calm and the other is fiery.

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Posted: 3 days ago
#9

Rajeev and Mahima have moved forward in their relationship. For the world, it is still unnamed.

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Posted: 3 days ago
#10

Rajeev has been ordered to marry someone else. What will he do?

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