Ashlok & Sajan FS : Yeh Dooriyan(Chap 4 last part) - Page 6

Amazing update, loved it.

Amazing update, loved it.

well written update
awesome 👏 👏

Chapter 3

Samrat and Shlok went near Aditi "Why don't you tell Gunjan the truth and why didn't you tell us before?" Aditi became nervous "I told you na Shlok, the moment I came to know about Gunjan loosing her memory and she addressed me as sister ,I couldn't control myself and gave her a new identity of Shanaya and plus she was pregnant " Shlok gets a hint from her face that she is lying ,suddenly Gunjan comes Aditi "Di,tomorrow a boy is coming to see me for proposal .Di I am only doing this for the sake of my daughter Monaya and I am ready for it".

Aditi smiled and cupped her face " Yes Shanaya ,I know that's why I am getting you married ".Aditi raises her eye lashes and stares at Samrat and Shlok and Gunjan walks away.Samrat gritted angrily on Aditi " If you know that she wants to marry someone then you could have given her proposal to me .But looks like you doing it for a purpose " Gunjan calls Aditi and Aditi goes with her with her evil smile playing on her lips.

Samrat tells Shlok that they need to plan something so that they can get Aditi's plan fail,

Aastha hears their conversation and comes near Shlok "I feel shame on you Samrat, you are taking his help, who was before wanting to marry Aditi " Samrat goes near his sister "Choti listen choti" Aastha didn't listen and she left with her daughter Kavya .

Kavya cried "Mumma,why couldn't we stay for dinner, you know I am very hungry" Aastha hugged Kavya and wiped her tears "No beta,I thought of giving you a treat so I am taking you have in Mc Donald's you fav burger and French fries" Kavya became happy, Aastha hid her pain from her daughter.

Aastha takes Kavya to Mc Donalds and she becomes happy seeing her daughter playing in the play place of MC Donald's and she was surprised to see Shlok ,Shlok came near her "Why didn't you wait over there, you know that Monaya was feeling lonely without her friend" Aastha spatted at him angrily "She has other friends to,and I didn't wanted to stay over there for long for me to feel pain and lonely" Aastha sat with Kavya in another table and then Shlok cane and sat near her .Kavya became happy seeing Shlok "Uncle, I am happy that you are here"

Shlok cutely pulls her cheek "I am also my cute baby" Aastha stares at him angrily .

Flashback

After few days after the incident of loosing Gunjan, Aastha wanted to tell Shlok about her pregnancy but when he came home, Aastha found him drunk and he came closer to her "Shlok, did you drink?" Aastha brows knitted in confusion,she caught her nose with her fingers "Yes Aastha, so what if I drink?,Who are you to stop me ? Because of you I lost my sister, because I was with you ,I lost my sister "

Shlok pulls her hair and drags her to the bed "Ahh Shlok what are you doing ?" Aastha gets sacred ,fear runs down her spine ,Shlok ties her hand and her mouth .

Shlok throws her on the bed and goes on top of her ,Aastha smelled another women's him and plus lipstick ,he consummates with her ,giving her love bites, Aastha hissed in pain ,her abdomin pained her ,she feels pain in heart seeing her husband against her .

The next day

Shlok gets up and sees Aastha crying in front of him ,she is busy packing her bag "Shlok, I am leaving .Its better you forget me as I mean nothing to you and I am the reason because you lost your sister, so I deserve this " Shlok didn't knew what was happening and his head was spinning and he couldn't see anything as his vision was blurry he spoke in a low tone "Aastha... Aastha wait ...I love you Aastha" Aastha cried in pain, she remembered that yesterday night when her husband was with another women ,she cursed her fate for sleeping with her husband when he forced her.Aastha leaves and goes to stay with Samrat.

Shlok goes near Aditi "Aditi, what happened yesterday " Aditi cries out her fake tears "Shlok, you are asking me what happened? Instead you should be sorry for what you have done? I can't show my face to anyone cause you have ...?" Shlok wanted answers from her "Because I have ?" Aditi cries "You slept with with me when you were drunk "

Shlok was shocked "What seriously I did so ?" Aditi nodded her head in yes.Shlok went to Samrat's house and he found a lock on their door,he felt pain in his heart that his one mistake brought Aastha and him so far. He back to Aditi and he claimed that he is willing to do everything what she wants, and Aditi told him that she wants him to be his wife but Shlok disagrees as he wants Aastha to learn the truth that he hasn't done in a purpose.He wanted time for this and so did Aditi thought in her mind that she needs to get everything OK then only she ca n marry Shlok.Shlok looses all hope when Aastha doesn't return.

Flashback Ends

Aastha was leaving with Kavya and suddenly Aastha fell and Shlok caught her and they both shared an emotional eye lock, his eyes were fixed on his and his arms wrapped around her waist, Aastha tries to get out from his hold and she slaps him "How dare you touched me ?" Shlok gets angry and brings her towards her "I am your husband dammit and I have full rights on you "

Kavya was shocked "Kya aap mere Papa ho ?" Kavya's sweet voice spoke ,Shlok carried her in his arms "Yes I am your father" .

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Shanaya was thinking about Samrat, the man whom she danced with, she was thinking who that man can be ? She rubbed her hands on her shoulder as she was feeling cold and she walked towards her balcony and her eye balls rolled on to Samrat who was standing down, she wanted to teach him a lesson for coming to a girl's house so late in the night .

Shanaya goes down and she scolds at Samrat "How dare you come here and stare at a girl late night ,I will call the police " suddenly Samrat holds her hand and pinns her to the wall and covers her mouth with his hand "I just came to see how is Monaya and even you to? " Shanaya was trying hard to get rid of his hold ,fear ran down her spine as he came closer to her and his breath fanned her and he pecked her on cheeks and forehead .

Shanaya pushed him "How dare you come close to me .Who are you that you came to meet me and my daughter Monaya" .Samrat presses her hand tight and tells her the reason why he is coming here "Because you are my wife dammit and Monaya is my daughter, from past 6 years Aditi that bimbo kept me away from you ,she ruined our lives and now I won't let her to ruin it more "

Shanaya got angry "How dare you blame my sister ?,you don't have rights to blame my sister " Samrat cleared her doubt "She is not your sister, you have only one sibling and that is Shlok, he is your brother and your name is not Shanaya its Gunjan and Aditi even kept you away from Shlok as she doesn't want you to know who is Shlok to you ?" Shanaya couldn't believe it and she told him "I don't believe you and I don't want to see your face ,stay away from me and Monaya otherwise you will see the worst side of me " .

Shanaya was walking towards the door and Samrat voice stopped "Soon you will realize the bad side of Aditi"

Monaya sees this from top,she felt bad for Samrat uncle and Aditi who seen this from another window smirked evily seeing Shanaya supporting her .

Aditi is trying 2 get gunjan married 2 someone else in d name of monaya.so cunning she is.Gud that shlok samrat know her intentions n they decide 2 expose her.Shlok meeting aastha n kavya.from their conversation kavya doubted if he is her father n asked shlok.that was so cute.Shlok carrying her in his arms n saying that he is her father was so lovely.FB was very painful.Aastha was waiting 2 tell shlok abt her pregnancy.but b4 she cud tell him that like a beast he raped her in drunken state as he held her n samrat responsible 4 losing gunjan.so sad.aastha felt that there was another's woman's smell n lipstick on his shirt.Aastha left shlok bcz of what happened in d night.drunk shlok wasnt able 2 understand what was rly happening.so it was aditi who put her perfume n lipstick in shlok's shirt.she even made him believe that he slept with her.thats y he decided 2 look after her.but still he luvs only aastha he wanted 2 make her understand that all mishaps happened only bcz of his drunken state.so he did'nt marry aditi.that was nice.but aastha did'nt return n shlok cud'nt make her know d truth.guess tho shlok knows aditi's true colour still he doesnt know that he hasnt slept with her.plz make him know that soon.samrat followed gunjan n she misunderstood him n scolded him.he was daring enuf 2 kiss her n loved that without any dragging he revealed 2 her that he is her hus n monaya is his daughter n aditi fooled her.but d innocent gunjan did'nt believe it.like samrat said hope gunjan comes 2 know d truth soon.monaya who watched this felt bad 4 samrat being ignored by her mother.i hope monaya will do some innocent tantrums which will expose aditi in front of gunjan..

2day only i noticed that its a FS.I thought its a SS.FS means 4 shots or 5 shots?Did'nt expect it 2 get over so soon

Loved chapter 3 👏
Aditi is so evil, hope she gets punished 😡
Eager for the next part 😃
Thank you beforehand for the pm 😃

nice one
Samrat n Shlok confrontin Aditi even then she has gaul to continue with her plan to marry gunjan off
so that's why Shlok n Aastha split
she thought he cheated her when he was drunk ( im thinking Aditi staged it wonder if Shlok has realized this truth yet???)
then he forced her ...poor Astha
now shlok instead of winning her back is trying to force her to accept him again
hes even told his daughter hes her father
as for Samrat hes takin direct approach by telling gunjan truth but shes so twisted by that b***h Aditis lies shes not believing him
hoping Monaya helps her dad foil Aditis plan after all her mum is marrying for her sake
I so cant wait for that smirk to be slapped off of Aditis face
looking forward to seeing what happens next
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

Beautiful update thanks for the PM waiting for more

Loved this part...

wow wonderful update loved it can't wait for next part thank you for pm.