Ashlok & Sajan FS : Yeh Dooriyan(Chap 4 last part) - Page 8

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Priya_KABHI

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Posted: 9 years ago

Thanks for PM.😊

It was Awesome Ending.😊

Monaya part was so Cute.😊

Ashlok was so Lovely.😳

The Whole Fs was Amazingly explained.😊

The Pics were so Nice.😊

Please write like this.😊

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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

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vaishux

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Posted: 9 years ago

Superb update

Awesome ending

Thanks for the pm😊

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ameena671

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Posted: 9 years ago

wow wonderful update and ending loved it thank you for pm.

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Heatsha8176

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Posted: 9 years ago

lovely ending
Monaya saved the day
stopped her mum from marrying another man
exposed that bi*ch n her plot to all
n even reunited her parents n her aunt n uncle
both Samrat n shlok hapy to get their families back n get rid of that witch
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

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pakpearl

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Posted: 9 years ago

Choti...

Yeh Dooriyan was awesome...

I realized that Ashlok's behavior towards Aastha was not good ..

He blamed her for the crime she never committed..

Similarly,,

Samrat's attitude was also wrong..

He held Ashlok responsible for Gunjan's death..

Aditi was so cunning..

She kept my Gunjan with her like a prisoner in a jail..

Her obsession with Ashlok resulted in the gr8 loss n damage in two sweet couples' life...

mOnaya n Kavya r just adorable...

They made their parents reunite 😊😛😃

The reunion of The beautiful couples was just fantastic..

I loved ur FS ❤️

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ammykhan

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Posted: 9 years ago

Wow nice ending

Loved it

Thanks for the pm

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Linsie

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Posted: 9 years ago

lovely ending

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anumol

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Posted: 9 years ago

Nice story...
Loved it... Sorry for the late reply...

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