Ashlok & Sajan FS : Yeh Dooriyan(Chap 4 last part)

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Awesome update!

Waiting for the confrontation...

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hiya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

awesome update..
loved it...
my cutie pie kavya...
love her so much..
missing her so much...
astha wearing blue dress...
monaya manages to bring shanaya to d party...
shanaya feels connection with samrat...
samrat is sure she is gunjan..
loved samrat-monaya moment...
loved shlok-kavya moment...😳😳
continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm..

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Lily30

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Loved chapter 2👏

So all came face to face and danced together and celebrated birthday😃

What will Shlok and Samrat do to Aditi, eager for the next part.

Thank you for the pm😃

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sunitikapoor

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Awesome update...

Loved Kavya and Ashlok's moments...Kavya is such a cutie pie...Aastha really felt good when Kavya insisted Samrat to dressed up for the other girls...she really wants him to move on...awww...so sweet. OK, so Aditi does not want Shanaya to attend the party and she is feared too. What about Shanaya...why she never questioned Aditi about this. Finally Samrat and Gunjan saw each other...but poor Samrat got scolding from Gunjan. That's a passionate dance done by Ashlok and Aastha. Loved the song, it matched the situation. Waiting for confrontation.

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Priya_KABHI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was so Nice Part.😊

The Whole Part is so Interesting.😊

I hope Ashlok and Sajan Clear their Misunderstanding.😊

Please Update Next Part soon.😊

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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

PriyaCherry.

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Tulishikha Biswas

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Superb update
Finally everything falling in place
Love it
Thanks for pm
Please continue soon

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Heatsha8176

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

oh goody goody
samrat has saw Shanaya n he now knows shes alive
n has seen his daughter
now he just has to prove to her who she is n who he is to her
as for shlok hes got a lot of pacifying n wooing to do with Astha
cant wait for net update to see shlok n samrat confronting Aditi
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin