Ashlok & Sajan FS : Yeh Dooriyan(Chap 4 last part) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Love the start 👏
Although not familiar with the jodis eager to read more 😃
Thank you for the pm 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
interesting
Aditi the villain is wanting Ashlok
n is wanting to separate him from Astha n her brother
she has gunjans body does that mean she was reason for gunjans death or is she just making most of the situation
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Nice prologue.
Continue soon, waiting for the next update.
Thanks for the PM dear.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Superb dear...

Really loved it..
Please update soon
Thanks for PM..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
OMG did I actually read Gunjan's DEAD BODY 😕 No plz 😭
Overall good prologue but don't kill gunjan 😭 poor samrat 🤢 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
hey welcome yar..
first of all thanks for writing on ashlok...
good start...with nice concept n new characters...
waiting... for the story...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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HEYY DEAR THANKS ALOT FOR PMING... 😊
AND WILL SURE READ UR STORY WHENEVER I GETS TIME.. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice prologue dear
Thanks for the pm dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Nice prologue... I loved how you have blended the characters to relate to each other...
Gunjan's dead body? I hope she isn't dead and it's just Aditi's belief... Waiting eagerly for the next update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Nice dear ...
awaiting for the story to progress...

Loved your idea...
Aditi is villain here...

Waiting for next update...

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