Humko tumse pyar hai ~Rajveer Naina~ *completed* Last part on page 51 - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: rinku95

Superb, fantastic, marvelous updates
Rah and naina fight way too much but it's lovely
Continue soon



thanks alot dear... u know some thing different😉😉😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: RNgirl

Why u left us hanging...not fair.

Sorry for not giving regular comments.
Naina drunk was sooo sweet.
Alekh and Neelu...i feel sorry for Neelu, why does Alekh have to so um romantic.
Keep updating
love Misha



thanks a ton misha

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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
hi
the up is really good
so naina finally managed for the party
the party is quite well
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
thats awesome
omg naina got drunk
i guess ab sari pol khulegi
but you gave cliffy end
excited for next part
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: nilusoni

thats awesome

omg naina got drunk
i guess ab sari pol khulegi
but you gave cliffy end
excited for next part
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next part
continue soon



thank aton nilu
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***RN-Humko Tumse Pyar hai***
Part - 9

raj:- woh?? woh kya... ??

naina:- u know maine na tumhari baat suni jab tum apni us chulaid GF se baat kar rahe the... tab tum na kisi ayaan se baat kar rahe the to mujhe laga tum uske boy frnd ho aur mujhe laga ki tum gay ho...

raj:- kya ( raj naina ko shock ki wjah se chhod deta hai aur naina gir jati hai...)

naina:- ahhh... teri toh... sale...

raj:- kya kaha tumne gay... ( now naina gets up )

naina:- to kya hua tum aise baat hi kar rahe the ki main kya karti... mujhey aise laga to laga ( tabhi naina ki nazar ek ice cream trolly wale k upar padi... ) raj mujhey icecream khani hai...

raj:- kya tum pagal ho naina tumhe itani rat ko ice cream khanni hai... kabhi nahi...

naina:- raj mujhe khani hai to khani hai... warna main... ( wo ek pathathar utha kar us trolly wale ko marne jati hai ki raj pakad leta hai... )

raj:- are meri maa ruk main lekar aata hu... ( aur raj jakar naina ke liye ice cream lekar aata hai..) yeh lo aur thus lo... ( aur apna muh pher leta hai... naina ice cream kha rahi hai bilkul bachhe ki tarah aur phir raj ko dekhti hai )

naina:- kya hua raj... ( blinks her eyes and makes a puppy face ) kuchh problem hai...

raj ( shouts ):- ha hai... meri sabse badi problem tum ho jab handle nahi kar sakti to piya kyun... ( now naina throws the icecream and starts crying... ) a naina i m sorry... wo main gusse me tha... plzzz stop crying naina... naina plzzz... oh god ab kya karu... ( raj apna muh pher kar kuchh soch raha hai aur yahan naina ek baar me ghus jati hai... aur ek aur drink ki bottel lekar aati hai now raj turns... ) ab naina kaha gayi... ( now he looks at naina...) oh nooo... iske pass bottel kaha se aayi...

hmmm...hmmmhmmm lallalallalla laaa aaa...aaa

naina:
jara sa jhoom lu main...

raj:-
are na re na re na...

naina:-
jhara sa ghoom lu main...

raj:-
are na re na re na...

naina:-
aa tujhe choom lu main

raj:-
are na re baba na...

naina:-
main chali... banke hawan...

raj:-
rabba mere... mainu bachaaa...

( raj is totally shocked with these actions of naina...)

naina:
jara sa jhoom lu main...

raj:-
are na re na re na...

naina:-
jhara sa ghoom lu main...

raj:-
are na re na re na...

naina:-
aa tujhe choom lu main

raj:-
are na re baba na...

naina:-
main chali... banke hawan...

raj:-
rabba mere... mainu bachaaa...
( naina is totaly drunk and khud to nach rahi hai aur raj ke sath bhi jabardasti kar rahi hai)

naina:-
mausam yeh beyimaan... masti ka yeh samaan...
roko oh logon jameen pe girne laga aasmaan...
thumak- thumak ke jhulungi...
main udte gagan ko chhulungi...
main chali... banke hawan...
(now naina ek shop se ek dress pehen kar aati hai kind of sexy dress in red colour and dancing on the road like a baby)

raj:-
rabba mere... mainu bachaaa...

naina:-
jara sa jhoom lu main...

raj:-
are na re na re na...

naina:-
jhara sa ghoom lu main...

raj:-
are na re na re na...

naina:-
aa tujhe choom lu main...

raj:-
are na re baba naaa...
( raj is looking at this side of naina ek taraf use naina pe bahut gussa aa raha hai to dusri taraf wo use bahut cute lag rahi hai)

naina:-
thandi thandi pawan...jalta hai yeh badan...
jee chahta hai banan... lu tujhko apna sajan...
hua nahin yeh pehle kabhi... meri chaal badal gayi abhi abhi...
main chali... banke hawan...

raj:-
rabba mere... mainu bachaaa...
( now naina is seducing raj... on which raj also melting... but he controled but naina is continuesly drinking... to stop her he snatched the bottle... and drunk...)

naina:-
jara sa jhoom lu main...

raj:-
are na re na re na...

naina:-
jhara sa ghoom lu main...

raj:-
are na re na re na...

naina:-
aa tujhe choom lu main...

raj:-
are na re baba naaa...
( now raj also has some hangover )

raj:-
jati hain tu kahan... janemann jane jaan...
ladki hai tu khubsurat... ladka main naujawaan...
tuhe gale lagan lu aa... palkon me bitha lu aa...
ho gaya... mujhe nashaa...
( raj is trying to catch her and acting to love her )

naina:-
rabba mere... mainu bachaaa

raj:-
jara sa jhoom lu main...

naina:-
are na re na re na...

raj:-
jhara sa ghoom lu main...

naina:
are na re na re na...

raj:-
aa tujhe choom lu main...

naina:-
are na re baba naaa...

raj:-
ho gaya... mujhe nashaa...

naina:-
rabba mere... mainu bachaaa
...
...
naina is kind of behos ... raj also drunk but not that much... he was in his sence wo naina ko apni baahon me utha kar le jata hai... aur badi hi mushqil se naina k hostel me pahuchta hai... aur use uske bed par lita deta hai... par jaise hi wo bahar nikalne wala hota hai... use kuchh aahat sunai deti hai jis karan wo wahi naina ka hanth pakde hue baith jata hai... aur kab uski ankh lag gayi use pata hi nahi chala...

next morning...

sabse pehle sam ki ankh khuli to wo raj ko unke kamre me dekh kar hairan ho gayi... aur jis tarah raj naina ke bed me half leta hua tha aur naina ka hanth pakde hue tha... sam was taken a back... but she managed aur raj ko uthati hai...

sam:- raj... ( saking him ) raj... ( raj hadbada kar utha... )

raj:- ha kya hua... naina...

sam:- raj main naina nahi sam... aur ab to naina ka hanth chhod do... ( raj looks at his hands... aur hadbada kar naina ka hanth chhod deta hai... ) aur yeh batao ki tum yahan kya kar rahe ho...

raj:- sam wo actually kal jab tum sab aa gaye tab... ( raj told her every thing... except their dance )...

sam:- kya... itana sab kuchh ho gaya... thank god naina is fine... thanks alot raj... agar tum na hote to...

raj:- its ok sam...

sam:- waise raj... are u sure tum gay nahi ho...

raj( shocked ):- what do u mean... iska matalab naina ne tumhe bhi... is naina ki to...

sam:- ahh i mean... ha naina ne mujhe bataya tha aur ha sirf mujhe... but i m asking u this... bcz ek ladki completely drunk state me tumhare sath almost puri rat thi... aur tumne uska koi fayda nahi uthana chaha balki... use sahi salaamat yahan tak lekar aaye... jabki u hate naina?

raj (smiles and places 1 of his hand on sam's cheek):- u know what sam... main thoda different hun... aur ha who said this i hate naina... ya i dont like her that much just bcz of her bak bak... but main wo koi kaam kabhi nahi kar sakta... jise karne ki gawahi mera zameer mujhe na de... aur ha i m not that kind of guy... jo sirf ladkiyon ko usi nazar se hi dekh sakte hai... aur fayda uthate hai... aur mere liye kisi ladki bahari khubsurati se jyada uske man ki khubsurati mayne rakhti hai... agar naina meri sabse badi dushman bhi hoti na tab bhi main aisa kuchh karne ka uske baare me to kya kisi ke bhi bare me sapne me bhi nahi soch sakta... aur ha tell this dumbo( pointing towards naina)... &keep this in ur stupid mind... i m not a gay... i m only interested in girls... specially my dream girl... byee.. take care of her... ( and raj left )...

sam:- dream girl... ( she smiles and left to wash room idhar naina ne apni ankhein kholi jo bahut pehle jaag gayi thi... but raj k saamne natak kar rahi thi sone ka... wo uth kar apne bed par baithi.. aur use jo bhi thoda bahut yad aaya use yaad karke aur abhi jo raj ne sam se kaha use yad kark muskura rahi hai... tabhi sam bahar aayi) oh ta madam ji jaag gayi... nasha utara ya nahin... ( but naina is lost some where she sakes her ) naina kaha khoyi hai...

naina:- ha kya hua...??

sam:- kya hua yeh tu mujhse pooch rahi hai...

naina:- a i m fine sam dont worry...

sam:- wo to hogi hi... waise madam jo baat tune mujhse kahi thi wo kisi aur ko to nahi kahi na...

naina:- kaun si baat...??

sam:- yehi ki raj wohh hai...

naina:- are nahi nahi... kisi ko nahi kaha...

sam:- good... aur ab yeh sochna bhi mat for ur kind information... he is not a gay...

naina:- ha mujhe pata hai...

sam:- tujhey kaise pata...??

naina:- bas pata hai... tu bolti bahut hai... chal hat mujhe jana hai... (sam ko hata kar washroom ki taraf jane lagi ki sam ki awaz par mudi)

sam:- hey naina wo kal fresherball k liye kuchh shopping karni hai... aaj sunday hai chal na...

naina:- ha yar mujhe bhi karni hai... waise code kya hai...

sam:- red for girls and black for boys...

naina:- cool... chal achha main shalu se bhi puchh lungi...

sam:- ok... main mess ja rahi hun... ready ho kar aa jana sab wahi honge... ( naina left for washroom... while sam to mess )

in mess...

sabhi mess me baithe hai aur aalekh apna sir pakad kar baitha hai... aur sabhi us par has rahe hai aur apna breakfast bhi kar rahe hai...

shalu:- kya aalekh... tu bhi na... apni GF ko sambhal nahi sakta kya...

raj:- aur nahi to kya jab pyar kiya hai to use izhaar karna bhi seekh...

aalekh:- main use koi pyar vyar nahi karta... wo hi hai jo mere peeche padi hai... ( tabhi naina aayi... in casuals)

naina:- itana to hum sab ko pata hai ki tum use chahte ho par batate nahi...'

aalekh:- aisa kuchh nahi hai... aur kal usne apun ko itana pareshaan kiya jitana chadi thi sab utar gayi... aur tu to bol hi mat... mujhe solid yakeen hai ki tune bhi raj ko bahut pareshann kiya hoga... ( naina looks at raj... and all others too... )

raj:- are nahi nahi... kya bol raha hai aalekh naina ne aisa kuchh bhi nahi kiya... aur tu... akhiri baar bol raha hun kal tere sath mujhey sirf neelu chahiye samjha... (aur raj uth kar jane lagta hai... )

sam:- hey raj... wait.. actually ( then looks at naina) hum sab aaj shopping pe jane ka plan bana rahe the... if u want tum bhi chalo... ( naina looks at raj...)

raj:- sorry sam mujhe shopping bilkul pasand nahi hai... ( abd he left... and naina and sam both become sad)

aalekh:- are raj sun to... ( but he is gone ) kash naveen hota yahaan aaj...

huda:- kyun bhai... naveen kya ukhaad leta...

aalekh:- are apun ko bhi apne liye kapde lene hai... raj to kisi keemat pe nahi jayega... he hates shopping...

shalu:- so what... hum in sabke sath chalte hai... kyun naina...

naina:- ya sure...

huda:- to theek hai after lunch hum sab chalte hai... shalu tum major nair se...

shalu:- ya i will inform him... and dont worry aaj sunday hai aur kal fresher ball hai to he wont deny... ok chalo byee mujhe list banani hai... ( shalu jati hai aur naina uske peche gayi...)

naina: shalu... wo raj kyun nahi ja raha... use bhi to kapde...

shalu:- actually use shopping pasand nahi... naveen yahan hota to sayad wo chala bhi jata... par bina naveen k i dont think so ki wo jayega...

naina:- ok... actually... wo tumhare pass neelu ka no hoga kya... wo main use bhi bulana chahti hun...

shalu:-ha hai na ek minute mere room me hai main lakar deti hoon... aisa karo tum mere sath hi chalo main deti hoon...

raj room...

raj apne bed par baitha hai aur apni dairy likh raha tha...

kyun... aaj jab mere pass achha mauka tha main... use kuchh kyun nahi keh paya... aur uski himmat to dekho.. mujhe gay kaha usne par phir bhi maine use kuchh kyun nahi kaha... kal meri halat kharab kar di naina ne.. and i dont like her phir bhi kyun kiya maine aisa... oh god main ab naina ke bare me soch bhi kyun raha hoon... khair kal ball hai... mujhe uske sath jana hai... i really dont want to go with her... kyuki pata nahi kya hai usme jo main na chahte hue bhi uske hi bare me soch raha hun... raj pagal mat bas just forget her...

at mall...

sabhi mall me hai sirf raj nahi hai... huda aur aalekh mens section me hai aur naina ne neelu ko bhi bula liya hai... aur naina, neelu, shalu, aur sam... apni girls ki shopping me busy hai... par naina ko reh reh kar raj ki yad aa rahi hai... bas wo yahi soch rahi hai ki raj ko yeh dress pasand ayegi ya nahi... ab sabhi ki shopping bhi khatam ho gayi aur sabhi ab ek restraunt me baithe hai dinner k liye...

sam:- hey aaj kitana maja aaya na... kash raj bhi hota...

shalu:- ha agar raj aur naveen bhi hote to aur maza aata...

huda:- oye phoolan tujhe kya ho gaya hai... tu itani buzi buzi kyun hai...

naina:-nahi aisa kuchh nahi hai.. i m just tired...

neelu:- common naina just cheer up mana ki aaj tera hero yahan nahi hai but its ok yar... ab har jagah wo nahi ho sakta na...

naina( pretents to be unknown):- hero what do u mean kaun hero?

sam ( unknowingly):- raj aur kaun...

huda & naina...:- whattt...

end of part 9
plzzz do comment...
with love chandni...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
Wonderful part loved it
Rn masti and antics wow
Thanks for pm
Plz pm me for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
Fabulous
Both are thinking about each other
Thank for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#89
wow great part naina ne pee lii or raj ki band baja di great yr
bechare raj ko shock lag gaya jab naina ne usse gay kaha toh
hahaha...
how funny naina ne pee kr gana gaya wo bhi raj ke saath kya bt h
raj bhi na pura saath de raha h naina ka
bechara goud me utha kr hostel kat laya h naina ko or raat me uske pas he so gaya haath pakad kr wow...
sam ne kya solid najara dekha h
raj or naina saath saath
shopping pe raj nhi gya toh naina ka dil he nhi lag raha tha shopping me
or waha raj bhi naina ke bare me souch raha h
aag dono taraf barabar lagi h
jaldi he pyaar ki chigari jalegi
m toh ab fresher's ball ka wait kr rhi hu jaldi se ye dono saath aa jaye
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Reply for the part 6:-

Awesome one dear!!!!!! 👏 👏 Huda ka task bhi poora ho gaya but I didn't like that. par ab dekhna hai Naina Raj ko kaise mana pati hai for going it in Fresher's Ball.😉 😉 OMG wth Naina did!!!!! 😲 😲 She has done a blunder!!!!! 😲 😲 My poor Raj!!!!!
😔 😔

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