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mili1987

@mili1987

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

👏Why did u stop here...

After long time i am reading ur os...

I will not say u r a fantastic or beautiful writer

Or one of d best writer...

I will just like to say...i am fan of your writeups

U r brilliant...u actually make swaron so lively

Dat i can start imagining shan n vrushi enacting it..👏...u can actually do better justice to the swaron story dan d original writers

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Sed_Dreamer

@Sed_Dreamer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

OH MY GOD Deep.., that is just sooo beautiful.. every word hit me like a thorn in my heart.. why did u stop.. wish you could update soon.. you poured their feelings on paper soo well.. wow am amazed... this is love .. and this ths passion you write with, Keep it up dear..😊

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vrushiiii

@vrushiiii

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

amazing os

wow..

well written..

please update soon..

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sanskruti marathe

@Sanskruti_tanha

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

u noe wat , people love ur work they appritiate u they build bridges in awesomeness of ur work , the get impressed wat i get is inspired , man i cry at tyms that wat would it take for me to reach that level . m moved every single tym i read ur works n moved in terms of brains n encouragement , creativity , flow , style n quality . i follow footsteps of my teachers n idols in terms of dance , like capturing n learning every move n i m kinda following u in the writting path , u r definately my shakti mohan in this case . peeps read ur works for immence pleasure i read it every tym to learn something new n attractive .

so this long shit is just to owe u a token of thanks for being the statue for this arjuna trying to capture the art wid every work of urs .

thanks .

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sanskruti marathe

@Sanskruti_tanha

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

logo ki tareef karna mere bass ki baat nahi hai , i feel less important so i go n try to learn more n more as much as possilble so that m too equally eligeble to capture a tareef , n dats wat i do everytym in every field . dont get me wrong but just trying to grasp n improve , analys n apply , u enrage me hard to give a better write up everytym i update . u will think i have lost it or gone nuts , YES ! i go nuts after reading such stuff , coz I WANNA WRITE LIKE DAT ! 😈

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Shweta

@addicted_love

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

It was a beautiful OS ! 😊
You have so beautify penned down the pain of both Swayam and Sharon 😊
And I likes the way both understood that they were wrong in some or the other way.. !
Waiting for the next part...

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Don't even know anymore

@Death_Memories

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

I am late again
Why am I such a Dhakkan
Sorry Deepu dii for being late I swear it was not intentional
Coming to the OS thank you for writing this dii
I think calling this piece awesome or whatever will be understatement as this one was beyond all of that...
The magic in your write ups is how you portray the feelings of your protagonists.Its like we looking into their heart itself and this quality is exactly what makes your works unique and beyond any words...
You said that it was long I disagree it was so beautiful that I just never wanted it to end but it did and it seemed to short to me.I wish the next one is even longer.I have said this before too that You are my inspiration I wish I could write like you or even 1% of this some day.Your write ups teach me so many things...
Thank you dii for being such a brilliant tutor,guru,mentor,teacher,inspiration...
I loved this one and I wish we get to see something like this in the show... It was painfully khoobsurat...
love you dii
-Harshita

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@TannuVsmSwaRon

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

You know as soon as I saw your PM I was actually dancing while sitting on my chair... 😆

I know I'm late but kya karu not that active on the forum at the moment 😔

Coming to the OS 😃

I just loved it 🤗

Yeh bhi koi bolne ki baat hai 😆

But on a serious note

Yaar it was just Brilliantly Awesome

Everytime the way you build up the emotions in a reader through simple words is just _______ (i'm not getting the right adjective to fill in the gap)

This one surely brimmed up my eyes

But yeh kya yaar aise point pe stop kar diya ke suspense se toh death hi ho jaye by God! 😆

Please aise mat karo yaar... Jaldi Jaldi update kar do!

Eagerly waiting to read ahead 😃

P.S Thanks for the PM 😊

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Kanchi..

@Kanchi..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Fantastic

Fabulous

Amazing

Luvd it

Dey way u hv shwn every emotions was jst fab

Amazingly written

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Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#50

amazing!!

it was so nice to read your work after such a long while!!

the way you have described the emotions is beautiful!!

thnks for the pm.

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