SwaRon OS :Need You Now ...(current track) last part pg- 14 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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First of all Deeps Di thanks for writing this OS. And double thanks for adding this song. U wudnt believe I ws listening to this song yesterday. And the nly people that came to mind listening to every word was SwaRon and this song is complete depiction of present SwaRon condition. Just with a difference in the seriel is that both are not thinking that "Need You Now".
Picture perfect memories scattered all around the floor-Isn't their life too scattered in pieces.
Reaching for the phone cuz I cnt fight it anymre.- I so wish Sharon to reach out to the phone and call him up.
And I wonder if I ever cross ur mind- Oh this is the case of bth of them.
For me it happens all the tym.
Its a quarter after 1 Im all alone and I need you now, Said I wudn't call but I lost all control and I need now, Nd I don knw how I wud witout I just need u now.- Just one time tell each other how much they need each other in lives. To live. To stay happy. Nd everything wl b allri8. But wen. I rly wish they do.
Im sry for blabbering so much about the song. The song increased the beauty of this brilliant OS. Background mein iske lyrics and deir ur beautiful potrayal. Brilliant. U are a master in emotional write ups and this was as usual brilliantly done. These two hurt souls and u have brilliant etched out whats goin on in their mind. Swayam's hurt condition. Where he was sad for shouting and yelling at Sharon and also hurt by the way the things have turned out. He misses them being together. Misses her. Miss the old sweet her. And Sharon. She is also as torn as him. Trying to gather the things that have blown into her happy life. Where now she and Swayam are not together. Nd just like him she misses him too. Miss being wit him. Miss dem being together. This OS has rich emotions. Brilliant work Di. Can't thank you enough for writing this for all of us. These OS made me happy even though its sad. I got to read the SwaRon I want to see. Thanks a lot. And once again. Brilliantly written.
-Uzma
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Oh yeah. Update next part soon. A emotional break down of both of them in front of each other is I guess on the way. :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Really a good one ...it was emotiinal ..wanna read it furthrr so plzz continue it fast n thnx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
res

unres

wao deeps di it was suparb ...

both pov is beautifully written . .

plzz update next part soon...

Edited by swaronlove001 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
as always awesomešŸ‘
really loved it..
Swayam pov n sharon pov both were emotional n beautifully written..
how i wish something like this happen in show also rather than their baseless fights :(
plz update next part soon.
n thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome os! You beuatifully penned down swayam and sharon's inner thoughts and feelings! Please update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
Hello! This is the first time comment from me in your recent works. Your sense of writing has always been authentic and to the heart. It has always been a realization-kind of feeling everytime I have read your updates. Now,in this work I don't know why only Swayam is blamed for this misunderstanding, I feel both are at fault afterall, Sharon also broke her part of the deal to keep their secrets private. She broke Swayam 's trust big time to hurt him that much, imagine that everything that goes on between 2 lovers is publizised than the bond looks awkward and ugly. Some moments are only for the lover's eyes and ears only. But Swayam was also supposed to think before he acted out of rage. This is not any critisim of any sort it is just what I feel, and it is just not because I am a guy supporting another guy. This is only views on the misunderstanding.
Your fanfic was the first one I read on swaron. It got me thinking on were my own mistakes lay and your fan fic opened answers for them. So your works are always memorable in my mind and your work(U and Me back to US) has been a friend at times of distress. So I eagerly wait for your update.
Pls update
P.S Unable to use smilies SORRY!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautifull..
Wow povs wer so wel described..update asap!
Thnx fr d pm!! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Yapee..
Super happy that sumthing from u again
Keep writing deep di

I hope u will continue soon.. patch up kaise karaoge janna
Hai mujhe :*
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
Awesome os deep.. I just hope show main aise understanding batayi hoti sharon aur swayam ki then so many problems and differences would never have crept up between them..
I loved the way you presented swayam and sharon's pov that is how they should have thought..šŸ‘šŸ¼.
Update the next part soon..

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